Good story. Only one major problem aside from the obvious AI issues: having all of this start 50,000 years ago makes no sense, because there is no way we would have the ability to understand alien technology back then, no way we could have fought it, and no way we could possibly be mistaken for being primitive, because there is no way we would NOT use that technology to improve ourselves. The better way to have written this would have been to start this just under 100 years ago in the 1950s. Then it would be plausible that we COULD have done all of that. Otherwise, good story! I like seeing things purely from the aliens’ perspective for once, and I like that for once the aliens have purely peaceful intentions. Well done! P.s. one other issue, though not a big one: it makes no sense that humanity, which this story very thoroughly establishes is xenophobic to the point of not even responding to to any diplomatic ovetures, would suddenly invite the aliens in. That would be like me turning to a neighbour who has tried repeatedly to break into my house and murder me and saying “you’ve been trying to kill me for years now and have given me absolutely no reason to trust you…but now you’re dressing like me and mimicking me so come on in!”
The premise of the story is wonderful, but the development is horrible, yes we understand 50000 of preparation and we also understand the development and preparation, but it doesn't go beyond that. There could be peculiarities
What a sad and pathetic story. Unity was flushed. Everybody only fends for themselves thinking they will be stronger. Strength comes when people unite not the opposite. And the humans become defensive paranoids😢.
Well, based on the story, before the council was formed, alien civilizations had invaded other places. Seems the council was naively believing that advanced civilizations would be automatically peaceful.
Absolutely terrible txt messages narration. 👎. Your IA is DOA. Doesn’t give this story a chance. Maybe drop the human names for the aliens??😂😂😂😂😂 continuity. After all that still think your top5 writer here👍
Can't have an AI written story without grim determination
At least the aliens had good old American names 😂👍
Normally these stories are good, but the text msg replies is so baaaaad, this AI can't read it properly
They all suck bring back real human readers (actors)
Agreed! I don't even try.
50000 years, but just decided to do all that in a year or so?
Exactly, 50,000 years 27 attempts of extinction and you finally take control of your own solar system
Exactly, 50,000 years 27 times against extinction and now in 1 year you start to control your solar system. Helooooo
The humans sent a message and it is only three words. For the emperor.
The voice has several seizures.
Nightmare fuel.
The AI 's voice is better suited for reading children's bedtime stories 😴😴😴
Good story. Only one major problem aside from the obvious AI issues: having all of this start 50,000 years ago makes no sense, because there is no way we would have the ability to understand alien technology back then, no way we could have fought it, and no way we could possibly be mistaken for being primitive, because there is no way we would NOT use that technology to improve ourselves. The better way to have written this would have been to start this just under 100 years ago in the 1950s. Then it would be plausible that we COULD have done all of that.
Otherwise, good story! I like seeing things purely from the aliens’ perspective for once, and I like that for once the aliens have purely peaceful intentions. Well done!
P.s. one other issue, though not a big one: it makes no sense that humanity, which this story very thoroughly establishes is xenophobic to the point of not even responding to to any diplomatic ovetures, would suddenly invite the aliens in. That would be like me turning to a neighbour who has tried repeatedly to break into my house and murder me and saying “you’ve been trying to kill me for years now and have given me absolutely no reason to trust you…but now you’re dressing like me and mimicking me so come on in!”
This story was kinda depressing 😕 😂. I totally understand it, but it's like the anti federation 😂.
The humans did finally send a two word sentence: Hei Hilde
Good story thank you ❤❤
The premise of the story is wonderful, but the development is horrible, yes we understand 50000 of preparation and we also understand the development and preparation, but it doesn't go beyond that. There could be peculiarities
Level 2 self-driving
this is really sad
The story might be nice and original, but there is no way to judge that with that bad AI reading. Downvote and terminated at a quarter.
We can't even coordinate against over fishing.
Silly and self-destructive norms are the outcome.
i'd say very good story, wasn't as bad as the b*tchers seem to think everyone has to have something to get them out of bed most days.
please re upload with a better ai please
Or do the narration yourself and forget the stupid AI voice-over.
So instead of just leaving Earth alone you keep harassing folks. That doesn't sound overly friendly to me.
Story was crap who would want to live in a galaxy that hates for no reason
Well that is bleak. Did the President of the NRA write this or some defense contractor.
i really like HFY Stories, but this one transports a completly wrong message.
What a sad and pathetic story. Unity was flushed. Everybody only fends for themselves thinking they will be stronger. Strength comes when people unite not the opposite. And the humans become defensive paranoids😢.
Well, based on the story, before the council was formed, alien civilizations had invaded other places. Seems the council was naively believing that advanced civilizations would be automatically peaceful.
Absolutely terrible txt messages narration. 👎. Your IA is DOA. Doesn’t give this story a chance. Maybe drop the human names for the aliens??😂😂😂😂😂 continuity. After all that still think your top5 writer here👍
AI FAIL STORY
Lame