Paid Review: The Power Of Fear

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[@zachberry4742]

She’s starting to huuunch over like a hunchback 🤣😂 You got me w that one man 😸

[@aka_zenko]

The idea of not having a hook is baloney. There should be a hook anywhere from the first panel to page 5.

[@sebas8225]

Yeah flex a villain or a hero in the first 5 pages even if it's a past one it's better than nothing

[@aka_zenko]

@@sebas8225 That can be a hook. Also think of it like a mini tldr, a hook gives your reader a glimpse of what they are in for.
A cancan dancer flashing a little ankle before later kicking her whole leg.

[@aka_zenko]

I love the Junji Ito-ness of this one, Ito would probably push the twist further into the obsurd. But this was great!🎉

[@deshawn1995]

Hunch over like a hunchback 😂😂😂😂😂

[@ramadan7900]

psychological horror... amazing mr jones.

[@wisedragoncomics1359]

If there is a genre called psychological horror, this would be it. Very interesting.

[@CJ-uj6wt]

Yeah. It looks great. It's sad to know that AI will get to the point where we won't know if a human drew it or not.

[@Olafemi96]

If the story isn’t relatable, how could the consumer really enjoy it?

[@muzisensei3493]

@Olafemi96 exactly. Hunchbacks might be because their flag waving cousin put enough dopamine in it. But hey, that's a zombie for u.

[@dark_nightwing_xl2797]

Damn the artstyle

[@marlondavide9343]

A lot of people hate you and I understand why, but at the same time it just proves the point guys nowadays are soft no one likes the honest truth. I am training to be a pro wrestler and if you see the amount of soft little crybabies that attend you wouldn’t believe, these manga are just a reflection of modern day society bunch of people that live in a basement and create works of fiction with no substance. Not the case for this story just speaking in general. Anyway keep it up koffe but just know you are making a lot of enemies.

[@marlondavide9343]

@@JAF200-ut6gi one thing I’m not is a yes man, I fully agree sometimes koffe does too much, sometimes he insults without justification, I hate that tbh. But yeah trust me the guys in the class r using pronouns and being zesty as hell.

[@marlondavide9343]

@@JAF200-ut6gi ok so what u r telling me is that you believe in men being women and people being wolves etc I understand. You are a liberal at the end of the day I’m a Christian my points of view come from the bible

[@dark_nightwing_xl2797]

Keep cooking