Yup. I've decided to bring them back. Joker's actions are not defining of me or my work, and I shouldn't deprive my audience of the things they enjoy because somebody I don't associate with did what they did. Enjoy.
I'm used to "Fingers coming from the inside of the phone, a hand is waiting 'til you're all alone. It pulls the strings and makes 'em ring, until your heart gets ripped up! Fingers coming from the inside of the phone, a hand is waiting 'til you're all alone. It pulls the strings and- pulls the strings- tell- me- what- you- BIG SHOT!" because I noticed that the original version has it timed so that that section and its equivalent in BIG SHOT are in exact sync and just kind of sang the BS lyrics to the tune of that part of BATW.
1:23 is that a reference to one of the unused battle dialogues? *You have come once again to this wonderful place. *Now tear off the mask beneath your face!
Man, you did NOT pull any punches for this one! Was worth the wait! P.S. If the lyrics about the wind and all that during the flashback were referencing "The wind is howling", I applaud you.
Asriel's references: 1:05 Reference to how in Undertale when Asriel became a soulless flower. 1:14 "Hopes and Dreams" 2:08 i think this line is vaguely similar to one from the UT tp Asriel's fight, "i can feel it, every time you die, your grip on this world slips away"
You know how Spamton theme called *BIG SHOT* well I don’t what type of gun Spamton would have But I think that it’s obvious what kind of gun Jevil would have, a revolver and he would definitely call it *world revolvering*
Holy God, this is really amazing, just like the Spamton dub, I like how you didn't make her a constant screaming goblin, she just sings camly how she is going to kill you. Also, I really love the "flashback" part, the echoes fit really well there. With that said, I really enjoyed this, you did an amazing work.
It sounds like you're trying not to wake up your parents in the other room. Your voice sounds surpressed and becomes flatter as a result. It might be worth finding a better place/time to record so you can go all out.
1:12 Won the wireless in '52 Awake and tuning in on you Didn't stop you coming through You were the first one Took the second symphony Rewritten technology Now I see I could do anything*
Lyrics are masterful! Only problem I have is, at the end, you say "do anything thing" instead of just stretching out the "anything" part and it completely throws me for a loop Would also perhaps work on your voice acting a bit, the quiet rasp doesn't really fit the chaotic force that is Junkil
This is definitely an improvement, but there is one thing you still need to improve on it is that you sound like you’re fake screaming, don’t be scared to put all your effort into your voice, don’t be scared to wake up your neighbors By the way I Hope for the best for you
Heh. Small victories I suppose. I've got contact with JunoSongs so, I've asked them for some advice that I'm gonna try to incorporate going forward but, I appreciate the honesty. All about improving.
Given how successful these were, I'd be foolish to not do more. However, currently I don't have any more AU covers planned, but if something comes up, yeah. Anything you wanted to suggest?
hi there i know you're probably not gonna see this but i love your lyrical covers so i was wondering if you could do immortal hydrangea and heaven says cause theyre pretty cool ok thanks
AMAZING lyrics. The only thing that's really holding it back in my opinion is your singing. Not trying to insult you, but the raspiness kind of hurts it and the you definitely need a lot more practice on the fast parts. Maybe if you get bigger you could potentially ask one of the big lyrical artists (Man on the Internet, Juno Song) for some tips? Hope this helps you!
*sigh* yeah, I see a lot of people make this point and I realize it's valid I just... I don't really know what to do about it. Thankfully though, I do actually have some connections to Juno so, I may reach out to them for advice. I've got the writing down... and I agree with you on the singing. Thank you for the honest critique.
@@dreayth sorry for butting in but it's about the singing thing it might be just me but i think part of the problem is that, in many cases, your voice sounds kinda... strained? like you want to scream the lyrics but have to keep the volume down so you resort to a half-whisper? maybe if that wasn't a problem your singing would improve? just a suggestion tho
Primarily a lack of vocal confidence. My voice has a long way to go, this is just a step along the way. I'd highly suggest checking out my latest cover of The Hearse Song, I consider it a vast improvement!
Okay, few things 1) I respect your opinion on these lyrics being bad, but I'd have to wholeheartedly disagree 2) There are no lyrics on the soundcloud, just a little preamble by Junkil. 3) If there were official lyrics, I wouldn't have used them, because the whole point of these covers is my artistic lyrical interpretation. If that's not your cup of tea, the door is right there. 👋
Okay. The lyrics to this are really good, you are going places my guy. But the singing for now at least is mediocre, and really raspy. Don't get me wrong: This is very much enjoyable, just saying there's a LOT of room for improval.
All in due time. I'm just grateful to be developing an audience willing to stick around and watch me improve. Considering looking into a vocal coach, since I'd really like to improve the experience overall. Thanks for the feedback!
It's really rare for Musical lyrics to be created for Au themes or fan games; so I do admire those who get out of their way for to add more to someone else's content that truly shows their appreciation for each other's work. Thankfully deltarune helped brought out their potential and content stacking that undertales AU had inspired, one of the good examples being Snowgrave Spamton giga. Overall I enjoyed this including the animatic in the middle that showed a glimpse of Jevil's backstory. 💜🖤🤍
![BIG BANG - LYRICAL COVER [Deltarune: Chapter Rewritten]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/XMTTBlmLtJQ/mqdefault.jpg)
![BATTLE AGAINST THE WORLD - [Deltarune: Chapter Rewritten]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/1tiUxhXnfW4/mqdefault.jpg)
Yup. I've decided to bring them back. Joker's actions are not defining of me or my work, and I shouldn't deprive my audience of the things they enjoy because somebody I don't associate with did what they did. Enjoy.
Imo this is your best work..
Just remove him from credits.
Why should that bastard cost you your hard work
what did the joker do? i must have missed it
@TheGoofyDevine I remember a post about something, but can't remember what even happened
@@TheGoofyDevine he was shitty person and he abbused members of the team
as far as i'm concerned joker didn't even make BATW.
he just tweaked it a little and slapped his name on it
What to say.... This AU is one of the most famous now apparently. It even got lyric videos
6k views. But in terms of deltarune au’s sure.
But salt route or chapter 1 weird route will take that spot
@@gamercentral2417 there is another puppet
@@gamercentral2417 ima be real ive never heard of chapter 1 weird route in my life
IMO salt route hella takes that spot
@@Lettucem3n BASED
@@clamdeity Chapter 1 weird route is a nice concept honestly
0:59 Jesus, I got shivers. Its scary and also sounds so weird having this motif have different lyrics...and I love it!
I'm used to "Fingers coming from the inside of the phone, a hand is waiting 'til you're all alone. It pulls the strings and makes 'em ring, until your heart gets ripped up! Fingers coming from the inside of the phone, a hand is waiting 'til you're all alone. It pulls the strings and- pulls the strings- tell- me- what- you- BIG SHOT!" because I noticed that the original version has it timed so that that section and its equivalent in BIG SHOT are in exact sync and just kind of sang the BS lyrics to the tune of that part of BATW.
Bruh that theme is the don’t forget not that part of big shot
1:23 is that a reference to one of the unused battle dialogues?
*You have come once again to this wonderful place.
*Now tear off the mask beneath your face!
I wasn’t really a fan of the voice for your previous lyrical cover for Junkil, but THIS VOICE works just perfectly!
Thank you!!! I tried to take some of the critiques I saw on the last two covers and improve upon it. I'm glad that's paying off!
Man, you did NOT pull any punches for this one! Was worth the wait!
P.S. If the lyrics about the wind and all that during the flashback were referencing "The wind is howling", I applaud you.
Spot on! I'm glad someone caught what I was referencing!
@@dreayth at 1:01 the rhythm turns into “there’s a light inside your soul” contrasting the darkness in your soul amazing work man
Asriel's references:
1:05 Reference to how in Undertale when Asriel became a soulless flower.
1:14 "Hopes and Dreams"
2:08 i think this line is vaguely similar to one from the UT tp Asriel's fight, "i can feel it, every time you die, your grip on this world slips away"
🗣️We are JUN(bac)KIL‼️🔥🔥
It's Scamptover
We're Jun(bac)kil
You know how Spamton
theme called *BIG SHOT*
well I don’t what type of gun
Spamton would have But
I think that it’s obvious
what kind of gun Jevil
would have, a revolver
and he would definitely
call it *world revolvering*
and THIS is why smaller youtubers (content creaters in general) are typically better.
passion, determinaition, and new ideas are on the table!
This voice fits the most
Wow dude! This is super well done, you've got some talent for writing these lyrics for sure.
Holy God, this is really amazing, just like the Spamton dub, I like how you didn't make her a constant screaming goblin, she just sings camly how she is going to kill you.
Also, I really love the "flashback" part, the echoes fit really well there.
With that said, I really enjoyed this, you did an amazing work.
Thank you so much Ramix... I'm glad it wasn't all for nothing.
@@dreayth "she"? 🤨
@@NL7206 pretty sure junkil is he/she/they might be wrong though
@@NL7206 Junkil is Non-Binary. Goes by He/She/They pronouns
@@NL7206 and due to them being in Undyne the Undying’s armor*, they go by “she.”
*like how Spamton’s in Mettaton’s NEO body.
JUNKIL turns down the lights.
It sounds like you're trying not to wake up your parents in the other room. Your voice sounds surpressed and becomes flatter as a result. It might be worth finding a better place/time to record so you can go all out.
Heh, I wish that were the case. Unfortunately, I've just got a naturally softspoken voice. These videos are me practicing to break that.
@@dreayth personally I think the voice works really well in the second part 👍
Logically
If Spamton = Mettaton NEO
Then
Jevil = Undyne the undying
They do undying tho
This would make a pretty interesting game ngl
This is amazing definitely the best you’ve made so far(not saying the others are bad their all great but this one was amazing)
With me you can do anything!
I can-youcan-wii-can
Do Anything!
Leave it up to Dreayth to make a banger of Rewritten Jevils boss fight!
didn't even finish watching it and can already say it was 100 percent worth the wait
I'm so incredibly grateful to hear that. Thank you!
Now this Is what I'm talking about !
a lot of improvment in the voice. Lyrics fantastic as always.
Oooooooh! This is quite nice!
Did quite a wonderful job on this one 👍
Didn’t even know this existed, looked it up, and now I love this au
this is my favorite with lyrics cover of attle against the world glad its ack i was questoning its existence
When I heard that voice, I have to think about it
WITH ME YOU CAN DO ANYTHING!! I CAN- YOU CAN- WE CAN DO ANYTHING!!
your voice definitely suits jevil/junkil better than any of your other roles
I CAN YOU CAN WE CAN DO ANYTHING
I only just noticed Gaster in the background
this. is. even. BETTER THAN ALL OF THEM COMBINED
I'm glad you found enjoyment in it!
clearly you were no sleuth
Holy crap that was quick, guess you can do anything!
The World is Spinning, Spinning !
literally thought this was jevil verison of battle against a true hero and not spamton's neo theme
but it still is a welcoming surprise
yknow the initial part sounded like jevil from the DR Ch1 weird route concept, like, 0:34 sounds like that stuff
Underatted fr
chaos CONTROL!!!!!!
1:12
Won the wireless in '52
Awake and tuning in on you
Didn't stop you coming through
You were the first one
Took the second symphony
Rewritten technology
Now I see
I could do anything*
I'm late but God THIS IS AMAZING!!
Seriously, i love it
yooo raw
Happy I could deliver. :>
Morse code on the cover art says:
CHAOS
FREEDOM
BATTLEAGAINSTTHEWORLD
TNTVALE
I CAN YOU CAN SING AGAINST THE WORLD!
Succumb to the worm
Amazing the vocie acting looks İMPRESİVE DUUDD ı think its kinda beter than the orginal junkil voice actor
JEVIL cackles incomprehensibly.
This is cool dude :D
The [incomprehensible caos] is saying: I can you can do anything
0:40 dark dark yet darker
huh
*Traped inside* gave me chills!
cool bro
1:10
BEFORE THEY >:(
DIIEE :D
hey hey
could you do a giga puddin cover?
WHAT IS GIGA PUDDING? I'VE NEVER HEARD OF THIS SONG AND I'VE BEEN REQUESTED OF IT LIKE 3 TIMES.
Apologies for the yelling, I'm rather confused.
@@dreayth it is Kris's theme from an AU called "The Other Puppet"
Lyrics are masterful! Only problem I have is, at the end, you say "do anything thing" instead of just stretching out the "anything" part and it completely throws me for a loop
Would also perhaps work on your voice acting a bit, the quiet rasp doesn't really fit the chaotic force that is Junkil
"FILLING YOU UP WITH HOLES-"
nexsus
Character! Good lycris! BEUTIFULL
Omega flowey and this are goooddsss
Actually the final part of this song also fits for the holy grail of persona 5
Is that …. Morse code ?
this is amazing wonderful and outstanding
This is definitely an improvement, but there is one thing you still need to improve on it is that you sound like you’re fake screaming, don’t be scared to put all your effort into your voice, don’t be scared to wake up your neighbors
By the way I Hope for the best for you
Heh. Small victories I suppose. I've got contact with JunoSongs so, I've asked them for some advice that I'm gonna try to incorporate going forward but, I appreciate the honesty. All about improving.
0:59
These lyrics are perfect
My guy, this is amazing! You planning on making anymore AU song lyric covers?
Given how successful these were, I'd be foolish to not do more. However, currently I don't have any more AU covers planned, but if something comes up, yeah. Anything you wanted to suggest?
@@dreayth Well, Dusttale could probably be interesting.
@@dreayth what about TheOtherPuppets giga kris theme?
@Dreatyh sorry for the but-in but my suggestion would be "M_tv.ogg" though, you'd have to ask for permission from sparks
@@dreayth Giga Pudding or Yo Buddy from The Other Puppet.
lowkey fire
yeaaaa. I like rhymes
Let’s fucking gooooo!
hi there i know you're probably not gonna see this but i love your lyrical covers so i was wondering if you could do immortal hydrangea and heaven says cause theyre pretty cool ok thanks
Make a 1 hour version please
AMAZING lyrics. The only thing that's really holding it back in my opinion is your singing. Not trying to insult you, but the raspiness kind of hurts it and the you definitely need a lot more practice on the fast parts. Maybe if you get bigger you could potentially ask one of the big lyrical artists (Man on the Internet, Juno Song) for some tips? Hope this helps you!
*sigh* yeah, I see a lot of people make this point and I realize it's valid I just... I don't really know what to do about it. Thankfully though, I do actually have some connections to Juno so, I may reach out to them for advice.
I've got the writing down... and I agree with you on the singing. Thank you for the honest critique.
@@dreayth np man
@@dreayth sorry for butting in but it's about the singing thing
it might be just me but i think part of the problem is that, in many cases, your voice sounds kinda... strained? like you want to scream the lyrics but have to keep the volume down so you resort to a half-whisper? maybe if that wasn't a problem your singing would improve?
just a suggestion tho
@@dreayth i personally think its a fun twist to the usual jevil voices
автор, это прекрасно :³
The lyrics are oddly familiar to fighting omega flower
i
I love this❤❤❤
I really liked it, but most of the song you seemed to be whispering that, although it sounds cool, it doesn't fit into some parts of the song
His name should have been "Scamill" or something like that.
Sounds cool but he's named junkil cuz junk email and Jevil, just like Spamton is named spamton because spam email and mettaton
@@vichotoro3358 that makes sense, but he feels more like a scam email from some sort of malware than anything else.
IS THAT JEVIL!?
it's junkil, basically jevil as spamton, in his special form, called redux
why does it sound like you're like, whisper singing or something?
Primarily a lack of vocal confidence.
My voice has a long way to go, this is just a step along the way. I'd highly suggest checking out my latest cover of The Hearse Song, I consider it a vast improvement!
There were official lyrics on SoundCloud. Also, I'm not joking when I say the lyrics are bad.
Okay, few things
1) I respect your opinion on these lyrics being bad, but I'd have to wholeheartedly disagree
2) There are no lyrics on the soundcloud, just a little preamble by Junkil.
3) If there were official lyrics, I wouldn't have used them, because the whole point of these covers is my artistic lyrical interpretation.
If that's not your cup of tea, the door is right there. 👋
@@dreayth ok u didn't need a whole explanation lol
@@Fake_Pep Sure I didn't *need* one.
But I wanted to make one. So there ya have it. ^-^
Asriel diss track
You could make them sound like they seem more motivated to kill the protag y’know?
Okay. The lyrics to this are really good, you are going places my guy. But the singing for now at least is mediocre, and really raspy. Don't get me wrong: This is very much enjoyable, just saying there's a LOT of room for improval.
All in due time. I'm just grateful to be developing an audience willing to stick around and watch me improve. Considering looking into a vocal coach, since I'd really like to improve the experience overall. Thanks for the feedback!
@@dreayth It's no problem, I'll appease the algorhythm gods for ya. Really wanna see where you go next.
angry boi
epic But do it with I can you can do anything
It's really rare for Musical lyrics to be created for Au themes or fan games; so I do admire those who get out of their way for to add more to someone else's content that truly shows their appreciation for each other's work. Thankfully deltarune helped brought out their potential and content stacking that undertales AU had inspired, one of the good examples being Snowgrave Spamton giga. Overall I enjoyed this including the animatic in the middle that showed a glimpse of Jevil's backstory. 💜🖤🤍
Did you remove my FACE?
Chica did you really think I was seriously keeping that bit in. In a joke video sure, but I put a lot of work into this. I wanted it to be serious.
@@dreaythIT WAS A FRAME, YOU LIED TO ME
awesome
thatwasfast
wait whats it from
You cann the voice of fizzoroli have
I don't think I could pull that voice off.
Эх.. Всё замечательно, но почему ты шепчешь, а не поёшь? :
Thank god I found out about Deltarune early and will be able to keep up with the AU's :)
Gravebuster Junkil Music: