-ERROR (English Cover)【Will Stetson】「niki」

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  • Опубликовано: 5 июл 2019
  • A song about rejecting the end.
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    Credits:
    Original: niki ( • ERROR / niki feat.Lily )
    Vocals/Mix: Will Stetson
    Lyrics/Sub: David Toth
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    Lyrics:
    Can you see, my wretched tears?
    Burning in these eyes now clear
    All life’s vivid colors are blurring
    Tell me exactly what you’re leaving behind
    I call your name as I fall from life
    The blue and red and white all are
    Blurring with the light and I
    Shout within this world that is muted
    Tell me exactly what you are looking for
    I chase your shadow, collapsing more
    Give me the end these tears have bore
    Tell me, am I breaking down?
    All I am is broken now!
    Even so I want to keep
    On breathing, I’m breathing
    Hey tell me if I just saw you
    Like the dreams I have in my solitude
    My words now can’t even reach you
    -ERROR
    On a distant day, empty
    Tender light had shone warmly
    Flooding all the sky with its color
    Tell me exactly what is the choice you made
    Tears fill my eyes as I lie in wait
    The consciousness that floats on by
    Slowly starts to leave and I
    Blur away completely to nothing
    Tell me exactly what you’re comparing to
    It’s sad, but I can’t recall it’s hue
    When will this life go cold and mute?
    Tell me, am I still the same?
    Nothing left of me remains!
    Even so I want to keep
    On breathing, I’m breathing
    Hey tell me am I just dreaming?
    Is this time the last we are meeting?
    My words are silent yet weeping
    -ERROR
    Even if I give away
    Even if I lose some day
    Even if my memories fade
    I’d still wish the same
    I continue restlessly
    Kill the error killing me
    Laughing out so des-per-ate-ly
    -ERROR
    Tell me, am I breaking down?
    Do you know what’s broken now?
    Even so the tears I cry
    Are hurting, I’m hurting
    Hey tell me did my words reach you?
    That last song I sang in my solitude
    The colored words that I gave you
    Are gone and are blurring my eyes are burning
    Tell me, am I breaking down?
    All I am is broken now!
    Even so I want to keep
    On breathing, just breathing
    Hey tell me if I just saw you
    Like the dreams I have in my solitude.
    My words now can’t even reach you
    -ERROR
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Комментарии • 259

  • @willstetson
    @willstetson  5 лет назад +1554

    if niki sees this ily

    • @anggatd
      @anggatd 5 лет назад +45

      This is my second favourite vocaloid song dude. Thank you so much

    • @Deuxtaquia
      @Deuxtaquia 5 лет назад +23

      @@anggatd what's your first?

    • @anggatd
      @anggatd 5 лет назад +42

      @@Deuxtaquia he already make a cover of it tho.
      PinocchioP - I'm glad you're evil too

    • @Link-Link
      @Link-Link Год назад +3

      Ily too

  • @HanSooyoung_YuriDiAristel
    @HanSooyoung_YuriDiAristel 2 года назад +351

    Reading Omniscient reader's viewpoint -epilogue is perfect with this Song. It elevates the emetion of yours and makes you cry cause of how accurate it is for the story.

    • @MariiCarmillia
      @MariiCarmillia Год назад +54

      Ah yes... The one story that healed and destroyed us....

    • @yukinacarmillia7085
      @yukinacarmillia7085 Год назад +1

      @@MariiCarmillia Damn masochist. You're everywhere

    • @Ace_of_club
      @Ace_of_club Год назад +42

      The pain of knowing that i will probably never find another person who has read this novel is saddening . It's not popular in my region .

    • @uhhhno5121
      @uhhhno5121 Год назад +16

      A question for people who has read the novel, what's your opinion on the webtoon adaptation?

    • @Ace_of_club
      @Ace_of_club Год назад +27

      @@uhhhno5121 it's good . Sometimes they have changed the plot due to ethical reasons
      Eg - the Korean Japanese hatred stereotype but they substituted it rather nicely .

  • @kirinajeanneenoi
    @kirinajeanneenoi 2 года назад +67

    love this, I came from ORV spoiler video.

    • @gh0st.y.571
      @gh0st.y.571 2 года назад +4

      Same

    • @N.Chakravorty_life1190
      @N.Chakravorty_life1190 2 года назад +1

      Same

    • @oplam1864
      @oplam1864 2 года назад +4

      Me too, it's so good that I can't stop watching it

    • @aliyagcioglu5014
      @aliyagcioglu5014 5 месяцев назад

      same

    • @apersonkazoo
      @apersonkazoo Месяц назад +1

      I finished it on the 23rd I will never forget that day. May 23rd. I finished Orv. And now I feel empty with nothing to read.

  • @wigglegrr6037
    @wigglegrr6037 5 лет назад +604

    if will stetson sees this ily

  • @kirancitra4387
    @kirancitra4387 5 лет назад +512

    This is why I love Vocaloid fandom. They will never die.

    • @donnycorn3086
      @donnycorn3086 3 года назад +29

      I came from a Vtuber called Tokoyami Towa. She sang this song in 2020 and I swam down the stream of time to find this beautiful song.
      So that means I am not from a Vocaloid community, but may I share the praises I give for this beautiful song.

    • @user-zf1xj9xm6x
      @user-zf1xj9xm6x 3 года назад +12

      @@donnycorn3086 of course
      for me, I actually came from utaites like Alfakyun singing this song

    • @njmaso6001
      @njmaso6001 3 года назад +13

      @@donnycorn3086 Same, I also came from Towa Sama

  • @derpyfailz572
    @derpyfailz572 5 лет назад +543

    after scouring youtube for good vocaloid dubs for what feels like years, only now does youtube recomened decide to grace me with this man and his music...

  • @territoryxdeath3614
    @territoryxdeath3614 2 года назад +9

    ORV has brought me here
    I regret nothing.

  • @wetsama9920
    @wetsama9920 4 года назад +255

    I’m too hyped for a Japanese Vtuber, Tokoyami Towa’s 3D debut and cover that I returned here to listen.

  • @Mesonly
    @Mesonly 4 года назад +322

    The lyrics and singing are tighttttt 🔥🔥🔥 Thank you for making such a great cover!!!

    • @nerdcouch8192
      @nerdcouch8192 4 года назад +3

      Yeah, he can super easily hit those notes. For him its
      Super easy, barely an inconvenience!

  • @stormoftara
    @stormoftara 5 лет назад +465

    I'm stunned. I can't even put into words how beautiful this is! Your voice is so powerful. Thank you!

  • @hatestherain
    @hatestherain 2 года назад +19

    here from the orv animatic!!

  • @Omniracle
    @Omniracle 5 лет назад +291

    I am interested to see how Will reaches those notes.
    Edit: Will is a god. Will bless.

  • @JavaTP
    @JavaTP 5 лет назад +16

    holy FUCK this cover gives me life
    this is inhuman?? ??? this is magical this is actually my new favourite thing, i'm going to listen to this for two weeks straight and then cry when my family tells me to listen to something else because this is LIFECHANGING

  • @badkitty73
    @badkitty73 4 месяца назад +3

    Fun fact: if you imagine your favourite character singing this song when his mother died then it’s becomes even more heartbreaking

  • @Akumo69
    @Akumo69 2 года назад +17

    I remember despite being a little bashful about how I love vocaloid, I sang this song at my school in my music class a few months and everyone loved it surprisingly. I was so relieved because I've always loved your covers and wanted to express it in some way

  • @GranchioGranchio
    @GranchioGranchio 5 лет назад +170

    I'm so so so happy.
    This is my favourite song ever, and your voice is beautiful, so it's a wonderful combo.
    This song has a really deep meaning to me, I listened to this when my best friends started ignoring me, I listened to this when my crush rejected me, I listened to this when everything fell apart, and it gave me the strength to go on. I learnt to accept things, to reject toxic people, that if something goes lost it doesn't always need to return. I learnt to accept myself, to accept people, I learnt that life has more to offer. I learnt to live.
    Sorry, I got carried away haha.
    Thank you for making this.

  • @MythicalNine
    @MythicalNine 5 лет назад +165

    First kagepro and Kenshi Yonezu and now THIS? That's it, I'm turning on the bell feature. Love your work Will!

    • @ryexanuri7604
      @ryexanuri7604 5 лет назад +12

      It wasn’t on already? S h a m e .

    • @MythicalNine
      @MythicalNine 5 лет назад +13

      @@ryexanuri7604 I very rarely use it because it tends to clutter up and become too much for me, and so I only use it on a few channels that I really really like and want to stay updated on. So I only meant it as a compliment ^^

    • @RaikiPau
      @RaikiPau 3 года назад +4

      @@MythicalNine Ahahaha, they were just being sarcastic and/or they were just joking. x'D

  • @PapiRex302
    @PapiRex302 4 месяца назад +2

    This song should be put on spotify needa be on playlist

  • @lowenmoonlight382
    @lowenmoonlight382 5 лет назад +68

    ... Okay i cried a little. There was so much in this voice, this song, these lyrics...
    Thank you, this was awesome.

    • @donnycorn3086
      @donnycorn3086 3 года назад +3

      Agree. This is what music should have been like.

  • @Un_prønøunceable
    @Un_prønøunceable 3 года назад +15

    The first thought I had when I saw the title just-
    -Error Sans-
    I’m sorry

  • @YT_TomaVocals
    @YT_TomaVocals 5 лет назад +56

    this is a refreshing blast to the past. Love it!!

  • @dominoesappfeathatsunemiku
    @dominoesappfeathatsunemiku 4 года назад +25

    I usually like posting joke comments and rarely post "serious" comments, but oh my God! So much raw emotion, I almost cried! You, my friend, are A M A Z I N G and deserve the world! I felt this song, if that makes sense. If you see this, know that you just gained a subscriber.

  • @Astral52_
    @Astral52_ 4 года назад +26

    I've been going back and forth between 2 UTAU versions of this song, memorized the pitches of the "ERROR" then came here and when I heard it...it doesn't match the high pitch of course but it hits the spot of strength it delivers. Dude you did an amazing job. Congrats

  • @Chief12314
    @Chief12314 2 года назад +7

    This is one of those songs that I both love and hate because if I pay attention to the lyrics it can bring me to tears, your cover especially.

  • @Kmfdmsucks
    @Kmfdmsucks 2 года назад +6

    This is the first song to ever make me cry on the first listen

  • @narrenitsuwaru8052
    @narrenitsuwaru8052 5 лет назад +88

    When my recommendations finally start working, I’m two hours early. On the bright side, I’m two hours early.

  • @lyanasyahirah3803
    @lyanasyahirah3803 2 года назад +20

    I really appreciate this cover, because it really speaks the words I can't say and the feelings I hardly could comprehend. It helped me cry my pain away, even for a little. It made me feel a bit of closure to myself. Even if it's just a song, a cover, it spoke more of what I could ever from my years of living. Thank you.

  • @Link-Link
    @Link-Link Год назад +4

    Amazing cover. I like to interpret this song as someone trying to scream and explain all of his/her emotions but no one can hear

  • @vincentbaskerville9697
    @vincentbaskerville9697 5 лет назад +20

    I remember this was my favourite Vocaloid song years ago (still is), but wow. This is by far my highest ranking English cover for this. This is amazing!

  • @Kazutamieeee
    @Kazutamieeee 5 лет назад +47

    a classic. idc if u don't see this but ily omg.

  • @The_Unknown_Wanderer
    @The_Unknown_Wanderer 5 лет назад +10

    Wow this one hits hard. It's so powerful. It's sung fantastically too.

  • @completelygonegone
    @completelygonegone 5 лет назад +11

    This hurts and I’m crying. I love your voice. Rn your one of my favorite cover artists

  • @opportunity4967
    @opportunity4967 4 года назад +10

    Your singing is really emotional and heartbreaking😭
    This epic cover is so underrated! I will listen to this forever, I swear.

  • @paolaarriaga7441
    @paolaarriaga7441 5 лет назад +19

    Davids lyrics are always phenomenal! You two never cease to amaze me!

  • @freedomreigns8611
    @freedomreigns8611 Год назад +3

    I first heard Towa's cover of this. Then the original. Fell in love with this song instantly. Then I found this in a pv of my favorite light novel and I literally cried because the meaning of the song is just so melancholic. I love this so much.

  • @TheMangaanimefreak
    @TheMangaanimefreak 2 года назад +3

    A friend sent this to me recently and just…The words, and the absolute pure *raw-ness* are so beautifully painful. It’s hurts so much to listen to this, in the best possible way.

  • @lace3094
    @lace3094 5 лет назад +46

    That was fantastic!~
    I never have found English lyrics, that I liked for this song until now.
    I think I would lose it if you did +Reverse as well
    Please keep up the amazing work!~

  • @user-oy4vv7on9s
    @user-oy4vv7on9s 4 года назад +7

    i like this cover

  • @z.l.1134
    @z.l.1134 5 лет назад +12

    I'm nearly crying typing this. Thank you so much, I love this song so much.

  • @Ella-vu8bp
    @Ella-vu8bp 5 лет назад +6

    An oldie but goodie! This song was part of my childhood and I've yet to hear its English version. Thanks for the wonderful cover!

  • @bhmanima814
    @bhmanima814 4 года назад +16

    As someone who thinks logically, I have fallen for someone who I can never be with. My emotions are a mistake and are tricking me into believing in this lie.

    • @donnycorn3086
      @donnycorn3086 3 года назад +3

      There is no lie. Logic is sometimes fixed thinking. Emotions are not mistakes.
      No, they are not.
      Music was written for what the creator had thought about, and what emotion does it convey is the most crucial to a song. And as you can feel, the song here was to tell us something to us, not by audible words, but by an organized mess of vibrating air. That's how logical music is.
      What I want to say is, music conveys the emotion that then communicates with our brain to give us the message, not the words. And we are smart enough to actually understand what it is, even though it's not visible, or even audible.
      Logically, forces were also the same thing, after all; no sound, no sights, it's just there, doing its work.
      You thought you have fallen for someone you can never be with, and the truth is, we all did. We came from the same place and will end up in the same state of matter. Even when this miracle called "Life" separated us into different mindsets, we are still here around you. A part of you is a part of me, no matter how small, it's still there.
      It's just that you can't see or hear it, doesn't mean it does not exist.

  • @Inuyasha7543341
    @Inuyasha7543341 3 года назад +3

    Annnnddd, im crying. This is so good, and just hurts while making me feel better.

  • @ZeldaNerd137
    @ZeldaNerd137 4 года назад +4

    i feel like all ive ever wanted was a good cover of this song, how have i just found it now T T this is perfect and beautiful!!

  • @30minutegrammarlecture73
    @30minutegrammarlecture73 3 года назад +25

    I have to say... This is one of your best works so far, in my opinion. It's raw, beautiful, and each note is free, yet chained down and restrained. Very few of your other covers or works quite manage to rival and compare to this one. I can't wait to hear more of your covers (or songs)! All of them are still truly impressive! Thank you for singing :)

  • @wilsonso5784
    @wilsonso5784 5 лет назад +5

    Beautiful... Truly, beautiful.

  • @VuVHO
    @VuVHO 5 лет назад +3

    Error is such a lovely song. Glad to hear this cover, it's great

  • @moldymushroompizza
    @moldymushroompizza Год назад +1

    This has always been my favorite Vocaloid song. There are tears falling down my face. Thank you, sir.

  • @Cronatransfemenbyfluxocdbpdism
    @Cronatransfemenbyfluxocdbpdism 2 года назад +4

    What a beautiful cover! so much emotions...

  • @RandomPerson-ks3ql
    @RandomPerson-ks3ql 5 лет назад +4

    This is great! Your covers are always so good!

  • @mil-2287
    @mil-2287 2 года назад +4

    This is awesome

  • @tristanmcg808
    @tristanmcg808 5 лет назад +28

    Will your voice is amazing bro every song I hear makes me feel so alive! I also love how you break down the words in your description. in every song I listen to, I look for them at the start of the song and reflect on them at the end. I’m literally at the beach rn but saw this pop up on my notifications and was like gotta go
    From a fan
    Ps keep up your streak, and btw SUB TO HIM IF YOU DIDN’T he’s underrated

    • @tristanmcg808
      @tristanmcg808 5 лет назад +2

      Also take into consideration “dark night” by Eve English cover

  • @puka6723
    @puka6723 3 года назад +4

    This is absolutely amazing

  • @somegem6344
    @somegem6344 4 года назад +4

    Now this, this is perfection

  • @sunshine-uj5vl
    @sunshine-uj5vl 5 лет назад

    and i thought i couldnt love you and your work any more, this (and everything else you cover) is absolutely amazing!

  • @hotaruishere2133
    @hotaruishere2133 5 лет назад +2

    HIS HIGH NOTES IN THE CHORUS WERE GORGEOUS!!!!!!!!!

  • @morpherthewolf6755
    @morpherthewolf6755 5 лет назад +6

    This is incredibly beautiful. Amazing job!
    Now I’d love to see a cover of Leia from you someday, I think you’d do a great job of that too

  • @clnne
    @clnne 4 года назад +4

    feelings are existing and i have to give credit where credit is due, this was amazing.

  • @lyrainvisa6880
    @lyrainvisa6880 3 месяца назад +1

    I wish this was on Spotify

  • @hoggster9980
    @hoggster9980 5 лет назад +7

    Wait.... You actually did it. My god i love you man!

  • @moonieland
    @moonieland 4 года назад +6

    Different lyrics than I'm used to but DAMN it is still so powerful

  • @ThirdyMeowy
    @ThirdyMeowy Год назад +1

    This was my very first song of yours. I still love it to this day! I remember almost crying when I first heard it.

  • @piskor3978
    @piskor3978 5 лет назад +2

    Man, I'm everytime i listen to this cover, more i realise u need much more attention, God, u r amazing.

  • @lokiteal7177
    @lokiteal7177 4 года назад +4

    Your voice is amazing, Thank you for this cover. KEEP GOING!

  • @Rein377
    @Rein377 3 года назад +2

    This gives me big Poe from Altered Carbon vibes. Beautiful, simply beautiful, now excuse me wheile I go cry

  • @reinna1511
    @reinna1511 3 года назад +2

    this is so darn goodddd, i remember of my liking pop-punk era 😰

  • @ModernAegis
    @ModernAegis 5 месяцев назад +1

    Will Stetson doing the Try Not To Add Adjectives Challenge
    (Difficulty: Impossible)

  • @hq_mil
    @hq_mil 2 года назад +2

    i love this-

  • @yuumeko
    @yuumeko 3 года назад +2

    Oh wow, this is a hard song but you really owned it. The passion and the lyrics really touched me!

  • @stanbellwood991
    @stanbellwood991 5 лет назад +2

    I KEEP LISTENING TO THIS- 10/10 COVER.

  • @_dazai_soukoku
    @_dazai_soukoku 2 года назад +3

    ooh i watche your cover on omniscient readers viewpoint pmv

  • @ablynn_thegalewinds
    @ablynn_thegalewinds 5 лет назад +3

    GOOD JOB MAN I WAS IN LIVE CHAT THE WHOLE TIME AND ILY

  • @SeraphOfTheStone
    @SeraphOfTheStone 5 лет назад +1

    Just, wow! Amazing! ♥️

  • @dawn9850
    @dawn9850 5 лет назад

    So beautiful

  • @davis9736
    @davis9736 20 дней назад

    Amazing

  • @kanra_yepitme
    @kanra_yepitme 5 лет назад

    This is so amazing and moving i luv

  • @cale9253
    @cale9253 Год назад +1

    Necesito este cover en Spotify 😭😭😭

  • @_hirioa
    @_hirioa 5 лет назад

    WILL THIS IS SO GOOD AAA THANK YOU 💕

  • @kara6228
    @kara6228 5 лет назад

    This is gold👌💕

  • @TheZaix12
    @TheZaix12 5 лет назад +2

    i like this song a lot thank you c:

  • @dragonotakukip
    @dragonotakukip Год назад +1

    Wish it was on Spotify it's so fuckin good 😭

  • @nnaa111
    @nnaa111 3 года назад

    This is beatiful

  • @leoy3894
    @leoy3894 5 лет назад +10

    hey man your versions of these songs are really inspiring me to make some art pieces, can I upload a speeddrawing video with your version of otome dissection as background music?

  • @dinab4444
    @dinab4444 5 лет назад +2

    I LOVE THIS!!!!!

  • @nekomaru4548
    @nekomaru4548 Год назад

    Dang thanks for this dude, it hits so freaking hard

  • @Silver.0.13
    @Silver.0.13 9 месяцев назад

    Omg this cover is so goood!

  • @angellibbyra7873
    @angellibbyra7873 Год назад

    IVE BEEN TRYING TO FIND THIS SPOTIFY JUST TO FIND OUT IT ISNT THERE. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

  • @HalHoneyy
    @HalHoneyy 5 лет назад +4

    I was honestly ecstatic to you covered this because your voice is so lovely and expressive!! I really teared up several times listening to this. It’s incredibly meaningful to me, and your voice just amped up how powerful it is. ;w;
    I dunno if you’ll see or respond to this, but I’ve really been wanting to post song covers for about 5 years now. Despite encouragement from friends, I really struggle with going back and forth about if I’ll be “good enough.” Singing and music are what I’m most passionate about, but I really lack the confidence to take the first step. Do you have any advice or words of wisdom??
    Thank you for blessing us with your uploads! Keep up the great work and take care of yourself 💖

  • @swiishyirl3607
    @swiishyirl3607 5 лет назад +2

    Ok. This is epic

  • @waserof
    @waserof 5 лет назад

    THIS SLAPS

  • @eris06
    @eris06 4 года назад

    I have to be honest, I only listen to usually japanese covers haha. I decided to confess that you're the only one i listen to when it comes to the english cover, cause its so dang good :')

  • @nanni2894
    @nanni2894 5 лет назад

    I love it~

  • @ryoukirishima3656
    @ryoukirishima3656 5 лет назад

    Wow amazing!

  • @Optimusclover
    @Optimusclover 10 месяцев назад

    omggg so cool

  • @user-ty8go9uu7c
    @user-ty8go9uu7c 4 года назад

    すきです

  • @tendou_haruka-chan8896
    @tendou_haruka-chan8896 2 года назад

    I love it

  •  4 года назад +2

    I love this cover so much. The lyrics just make me cry. Tell me am I breaking down? Am I still the same? Love it! ❤

  • @jinggu.
    @jinggu. 3 года назад +1

    and then i cried

  • @yaoik
    @yaoik 5 лет назад +21

    Will you please do a cover of Tokyo ghetto by Eve? and yes - I love your voice!

  • @catboyhole
    @catboyhole 4 года назад

    wonderful work :")

  • @morluck8629
    @morluck8629 6 месяцев назад +3

    Слезы на глазах моих
    Дымкой затянули мир,
    Размывая все его краски.
    Что же на память ты оставляешь мне?
    Прервет дыханье простой ответ.
    Как на палитре, все пестрит,
    И мой исступленный крик
    Громко прозвучит из под маски.
    Где же мечта минувших бесследно дней?
    Мне надоело бежать за ней.
    Как низко я посмею пасть?
    Можно ли меня спасти?
    Я разбился на куски!
    Но о смерти вовсе не мечтаю… мечтаю…
    Ты не заметить не можешь:
    Те слова, которые ты сказал,
    Во снах покой мой тревожат… Провал!
    День далекий помню я,
    И небес сияние,
    Что так прочно врезалось в память.
    Жалко, цена у выбора высока…
    От слез смешались в одно цвета.
    Я растворяюсь медленно:
    Скоро тело бренное
    Связь с реальным миром утратит.
    Сколько бы параллелей не проводил,
    Забыть об этом не хватит сил.
    Как низко я посмею пасть?
    С изувеченной душой…
    Безнадежен случай мой!
    Но о смерти вовсе не мечтаю… мечтаю…
    Во снах моих быстротечных
    Те слова, которые ты сказал,
    Меня преследуют вечно… Провал!
    |Как же низко не смею пасть?|
    |Ведь разбился н на куски|
    |Как же низко не смею пасть?|
    |Ведь разбился н на куски|
    Чем-то жертвовать за нас,
    Быть со мною в трудный час,
    Не бояться колких фраз -
    Слишком тяжело?
    Бесконечны промахи,
    Знаешь, а не проще ли
    Нам перечеркнуть наш плохой финал?
    Причинить мне боль решил?
    А достаточно ли сил?
    Только слезы по лицу стекают… стекают…
    Не верю я, что не слышишь
    Как дрожит надломленный голос мой,
    Неся прощальную песню…
    Все краски давно смешались вместе!
    Можно ли меня спасти?
    Я разбился на куски!
    Но о смерти вовсе не мечтаю… мечтаю…
    Ты не заметить не можешь:
    Те слова, которые ты сказал,
    Во снах покой мой тревожат… Провал!