The Black Ship - Chapter 38 Part 2B - NOT FOR CHILDREN
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Soooooo to anyone still wondering, yes, this is a flashback. Including the final part. It is from Clara's POV. Hope everyone enjoyed this latest chapter! More to come!
Great job, loved it.
Well done
Brutal, "realistic" but messed up. I lost my care for Clara but I still love the story. She will make a great villain one day. Definitively not a simple character. I detect some khaleesi vibes from her.
@@stratometal These nobles killed billions of people of all ages through greed, incompetence, and callous disregard of law and their responsibilities to their subjects AND the principality as a whole, but Clara is a villain?
She absolutely lost her temper and has paid for it ever since, but her reaction was human and IMO justified.
Note also, however, the prince's standing order to Cynthia and Wyatt. If her brother gets assassinated...
May more come soon. Very well done.
Wow!!! Little Princess Clara went from mature teen to hardened adult very suddenly. Her explanation of what the nobility was supposed to do makes it clear that the nobility was supposed deserve the respect and obedience of the commoners instead of just demanding it. She earned her reputation with righteous fury.
Now we know why Cynthia wears red armor (originally wore black). . . the same reason deadpool wears a red outfit. You cannot see the blood.
I think of Spartans but Deadpool is funnier. Tea bag!
Well you can see blood on red armor but its much harder than black armor.
I actually thought this story couldn’t draw me in more than it already had, and then this chapter is released and proved me wrong . All I can say is WOW!!!! And give praise to the author.
Thank you for your comment, I was about to say just the same, with my own words.
You my friend, is perfectly right!
I can't wait for the next one's. I hope they don't stop until the end.
I think I just fell in love with Clara. 😀Clara the Reaper, Cynthia the Bloodrend and Wyatt the Devourer (of pastries but let's keep that a secret) are now loose on the galaxy. May the Gods have mercy on The False Regent since these three will show him none.
😂😂😂😂
They're a lethal combo
@@Thoridin58 Wyatt, master of the fainting couch. Wyatt the enigma for everyone else. No one knows how to treat him. Some of his other titles: Super spy. Woodshaft Ace. Commoner scum. Newbie Nob. Chess Anti-master. A Sniper who doesn't realize he's a sniper. Exterminator of Drazzan.
@@Davicus1
Don’t forget the compost king, cause he takes out the trash.
Fear the Glutton Duo indeed xD
Clara is genuinely the best fictional princess out there
This is what I think Princess Zelda is.
Well she for sure, she definitely isn’t a Disney Princess.
@@thomasohanlon1060 ROFL! You beat me to it.
Another reason to love Clara, the prince and their retinues. These are the actual nobility. Noble in action rather than title. Clara terrifies the nobility because she is willing to hold them responsable to the duties they have long forgotten. And her reputation is now a weapon she has no problem using as seen with the pirates. They did not question that she would execute the children if they didn't talk.
The reason things went well with Uriel Hoaks was that he treated Clara as an equal and not with fear. Once he decided that she was competent and began to openly negotiate with her he went on her nice list.
All the nobs at the "party" only saw Clara as a living landmine terrified of getting too close or she might go off and exterminate their houses. Thus demonstrating that they don't know their responsibilities to their people. Wyatt's proximity to Clara and Cynthia at the "party" has probably marked him as another weapon in Bloody Clara's arsenal. The mental image of the three of them standing there watching the tipsy honeytrap fall in front of them and not even twitch to do anything about it would feed right into their heartless reputation. If they knew nothing of Wyatt before, he's now seen as a bird of a feather with them and his headshot in the duel should make them just as nervous to interact with him as with Clara and Cynthia.
Am I the only person who sees we get two chapters in one day and deep in your soul you hear the Kool-Aid Man saying: "Oh Yeah!"
Almost a quote when I saw.
This was an amazing Chapter. I could almost feel Claras rage.
Can I just point out one little detail, 13 year old Cynthia went through enough nobles to give her black armour sufficient coverage to turn it red ... 13 Year Old, I have said previously she is at least as good as two Royal Marines, I think this just proved it
And now we know how the princess and her bodyguard got their reputations.
I figured it was an extreme event that got the ladies their names. I like Milkades even more. Great character development. Imagine the princes reaction. No wonder why the current prince trusts her so much and why she was a high value target.
For those that are offended by Clara's actions I will point out she was only 14 years old at the time and somewhat overwhelmed to learn that the families concerned had just effectively killed billions of men, women, children and babies and frankly didn't care. She basically lost her temper. Also why do you think that her brother the Prince gave Wyatt his orders to protect Clara from herself and did so in front of Cynthia after reminding Wyatt of his Oath that he would not harm the innocent, the Prince has given Wyatt the authority to stop Clara from harming the innocent should she ever get that upset again. A lot of trust for the Prince to be placing on a young man who was until very recently a commoner. Also we are getting this flashback just before they decide the fate of the Pirates who Wyatt hates almost as much as the Drazzan, that is surely no coincidence
I’ve been reading science fiction/ fantasy since the mid sixties,from Adam’s through Zelazny and I am ENJOYING this tale. Well done, well done indeed!
That escalated quickly….. :-)
@@georgebetar923 yes it did that was crazy
That’s what happens when decisions are reached and acted on out of emotions. Did you notice Redford was trying to get Claire and her emotions under control.
@thomasohanlon1060 yes I caught that too she got very emotional about it.
@@thomasohanlon1060 this is why the Prince gave Wyatt those particular orders in front of Cynthia, if Clara ever gets that angry again Wyatt actually has the Prince's authority to stop her. Just let that sink in for a moment, Clara has the authority to effectively order anyone's death by reason of the fact that she is a Princess of House Astor and Wyatt is the only person other than her older brother who can stop her, a man who was until recently a commoner, that is how much the Prince trusts Wyatt that he orders him to protect his younger sister from herself
Explains why Clara is not the usual stuck up blue blood
This needs to be made into a Mini-series. Where are Amazon and Apple when you need them!
They would ruin it
@@dirkadirka6056the expanse on Amazon was done very true to the books.
@@dirkadirka6056 Your probably right.
That was enough to get me to sit here. Quietly. For a while.
Have i already said how much i love this story? The way all those characters are developed, the way the whole universe is slowly but firmly being shown to us is just amazing and honestly, even beautiful.
I thought that story was about how the coup started, but wow, a Clara's backstory is actually immensely welcomed too.
I shall keep being loyal to house Astor and to the principality till this series end :)
@scifistories1977
YO'!!!! My head is spinning from these 2 episodes!!!!! Wow!!!! Clara is no joke. THE PRINCIPALITY has issues. It also raises a question on how Wyatt reacted to this tale???!! (Cold-blooded)
Wow, every time I listen to another episode of this story, I am left like a fiend for the next part!!!
I thank you for ALL your HARD WORK and making this RUclips sci-fi stories so entertaining!!!
Please if you are able on your next go round, release a double episode drop like this one!!! Until then I'll be enthusiastically waiting. (And probably will be reviewing the whole series AGAIN for like the 6th or 7th time!!!!) THANK YOU AGAIN!!!!++
Now I know that I'm not the only one!
Nop, you área not.😉
The character building of the black ship is top notch.
Amazing, just f... amazing.
Thank you to the Author amd thank you to the team that makes the audible version possible.
Well, it turns out that my theory of the black box was correct.
I didn't expect it to be a plague but atrocities in any event.
I still loved these two episodes.
We now know the reason for the nicknames, no more guessing.
No one knows how they would really react to the circumstances unless you were in that position at that time.
I liked how she told Wyatt what the true meaning of the term Nobles lead and commoners follow. It makes more since now.
I can't get enough of this series. Great job by all involved. Love it.
I love this story so much.
Wyatt Clara and the Prince all get what they've been looking for years to find. Wyatt gets friends, Clara gets someone to knit with and a private fighter pilot. And the Prince gets someone as bad as himself at chess. Cynthia? A knitting teacher?
Cynthia gets someone to help her knit and a friend as well
Oh that ending LOL
At first I thought you were a good author now Great. At my age and health I hope too live to the end of the Great story.
Great episode! These "flash backs" not only fill in missing info, but bring a lot of "color" to the story!
Well, this chapter certainly set the cat among the pigeons. I applaud the integrity of the author and the channel.
Well that was a lot of blood shedding but worth it cuse nobles can't lead a people if they no one to lead
So this is how Clara gets her rep.... you go girl, they fucking deserve it
Talk about FAFO, she brought it to a neverbefore seen level. I’m sure any at her houses doing shady shit got the message.
How did the babies and children of those noble houses deserve to be slaughtered? That's a sick mentality.
@@Exxperiment626
And that is what actually gave then their names. Now this is why she doesn’t react out of emotion, which is what that was when she was just 14.
What was that line from Clara? something like "kill them all, even the babies in the womb". Merrrick1588 you are a bad person for saying "they fucking deserved it". Clara is clearly a terrible person who holds groups responsible for the crimes of the few. A royal family is a family like any other, all be it with more incest. What is a race other than a large family with a lot of incest? This mentality of group blame is the driver of humanity's actions at its darkest moments.
Girl??? Think metamorphosis. Now lesser beings Tremble and Fear her wrath of retribution. Think Warrior Queen.
apparently i was right about clara's infamy
good chapter and i'm glad you came out with a part 2 so quickly
New chapter time woop
Now that was a chapter worth waiting for. Please please more like that. ❤❤😊😊😊👍👍👍👍
An certainly took us by surprise!
Thanks!
Andrew! You give too much, but I do appreciate it!
@@scifistories1977please let me know when the next chapter hits
This is the best story I think I've heard in many many years. Needs to be adapted into a film series
The filmmakers won't have it easy though. They would have to stay true to the story and raise the bar with their production and the bar is quite high already.
But it would be great to see the Black Ship on the screen!
I think there are too many things that they would have a hard time getting past the people that control what can and cannot be shown, the death of Wyatt's childhood friends, the brutal killings by 13 year old Cynthia, you can put those in a book and it adds to the background but putting them on film or a series is much harder to achieve, maybe an animated series, but these are already so long as an audio book you'd have to chop a lot out for a series
I love this story so much. Thank you so much❤❤❤❤
Just keeps getting better and better. Thank you.
Wow that was a good chapter and I would have done the same thing in her shoes sometimes you have to be evil to fight evil they should have asked for help they thought all commoners are just expendable and are trash she sees things differently and I agree with what she did
Another great chapter! One thing keep running through my mind. How does Wyatt’s family react to the march video when it is played. Lol.
THIS!
Kudos to the author for this epic saga. Just amazing writing.
Awesome. 👍👍
Because it had been a bit since I played Ch 37 I was a bit confused at what was going on. Once I got to the end I realized this was an explanation of why the princess was hated.
Hell yeh what a chapter !!! This is definitely in my top tens..
this story keeps getting better. its the best sifi story i have seen in years Thank you
this is like my drug. always want a hit of it.
Wow, you are really outdone yourself with three-part chapter. Truly, truly excellent story.
Great Serial Story ! Yet another twist/Ah Ha moment.
looking for the next one now............ ummmm just another 'are we there yet'
moment until the next one shows up.
That was an absolutely riveting chapter. I can't wait for the next episode absolutely well written.
Bravo bravo well done ! Thank you 🙂
Yes, great story! Just love it.
That disease sounds like super smallpox, let's hope nothing like that ever gets loose.
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hello everyone this story is amazing. we all should say thank you to the author and the admin on this site they deserve a big thank you and are support😀
I just through I would mention the new information we have been provided. Not sure but it could be relevant to the current coup attempt.
Who is Julius Astor and what relationship does he have with the Astors of current Principality. He founded the Erebian empire, that is interesting to me. They are always attacking the Principality.
No, Julius Astor was the founder of the Astorian Principality, not the Erebian Commonwealth.
@@ekhidna4 Ah Okay, I just misunderstood. My bad
and what, oh there is a Part 2B, hard way to grow, very good chapter, thank you and standing by for more.
I happened on this story by accident and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank the author and very high praise for the story. Not crazy about the AI reader. A human would be better. The story is great and I would love to have a book copy of it.
Thanks! Like so many others have mentioned this story is amazing. Many many thanks to you and the author
wow, thank you!
Based Clara - True leader of the Principality.
Damn. What a good chapter.
I just realised this whole chapter should have been before the pirates were captured
Yup flashback, I suspect we are getting that here before the fate of the Pirates and the Pirate kids are decided, don't forget that Wyatt wants to kill them all except the very youngest, because they were already killers, and it appeared that Clara didn't, I think there will be talks or even arguments between the two as to the fate of the Pirate children and I think we got this chapter to show just how brutal Clara has been in the past
Great story. I am looking forward to the rest of it.
FANTASTIC story, great leading characters I can't t get enough of this story. I have listened to it start to finish 3 times already and it gets better every time. This author is very talented. Please more keep the story coming.😃👍
Very interesting. The greed and disregard for life is unforgivable. Now we know why she has a sinister reputation. Her actions probably prevent loss of more lifes. The nobles deserved their fate. The story is very addicting.
'disregard for life is unforgivable' Meanwhile Clara just slaughtered innocent babies and children for a crime they didn't commit.
The hypocrisy is astonishing 😂.
Love live Duke Dremond!
He may be evil, but Clara is DEFINITELY evil.
@@Exxperiment626that’s what happens when you’re government runs on a medieval system, when the punishment of a house come it doesn’t just end with the current house hold, all future generations will have to suffer for it too.
@@Exxperiment626 That is just how noble systems work. The idea of nobility is what is evil, Clara's actions are a result of that. It is like calling a soldier evil for killing in war.
@@Exxperiment626 She is not evil she was a teenager who lost control after learning that these houses were responsible for billions of deaths, however this is why the Prince gave Wyatt orders to protect Clara from herself and did so in front of Cynthia, Wyatt will not let her harm anyone who is truly innocent so no more killing of babies and unborn, to be fair I think Clara knows she went just slightly too far, so Wyatt is really there just in case she is ever pushed to that sort of thing ever again. Oh and just let that sink in, Wyatt is the only person other than the Prince with the authority to tell her NO, that is how much the Prince trusts Wyatt, that he gives him the authority to protect her from herself, pretty good for a former commoner
If this isnt the new Star Wars.... Star Trek... Babylon 5 ,... I have lost any respect for those production agencies that have not picked up the author yet... this is gold.
They gonna make Cynthia black if they do.
@@diclicious9100 HAHA.. NO WAY they were KANGZ... Cynthia is a Noble.
Holy f, this was intense, love it
Dope
Oh lord... That was spicy... Had goosebumps almost through entire chapter. I adore Clara even more now. Again, amazing work.
Here's hoping there's some time to explore Wyatt's relationship with sugar lol. Bro is going crazy over juice, I love it.
Best story ever.
I can't wait for 39 and beyond.
It's out now!!
I already watched it. It just makes you want more.
@@scifistories1977 it just makes you want more.
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Wow!
Thanks
Thanks again! I'm glad you like it!
Who is the Author of this series? They need some major recognition this is amazing work. I can’t wait to find out more about their life’s and how they will carry on. The reunion with Wyatt and his parents is gonna be an amazing chapter lol
It is 10:00 p.m. Tuesday July 9th, the sixth day after the release of this chapter, thanks for your efforts. One must say though I believe there's still more to the story than has been told. By Claire's uncle's words both she and her brother are dangerous by themselves but when working together must not be underestimated. The Duke himself must be stopped has he is a marathon of a foreign power leading the principality into being at least a vassal state and at worst a crushed and subjugated territory of a foreign entity. Although I do believe let the smaller stealth ship needs to be repaired and sent to scout the planet what are the pox started as it may shed some light as to where the Black ships themselves are coming from. I will keep checking up for the next 2 days to see when 39 comes available.😂❤
No, not Clara the Reaper but, Clara The Hand of God, and Cynthia The Hand of Justice!
The hand of God will never order the killings of unborn Children in their mother's womb.
I hope we get chapter 39 today
Now that Clara and Cynthia have shown poor Wyatt both the carrot and the stick, let’s hope they are merciful upon their shiny new toy.
As time passes, wyatt looses his humanity and becomes a obedient dog of her.
His eye colour change similar to a Husky might just be the first indication of him turning into a loyal dog of Clara.
That is CRAZY. I loved this. I wish I had a good platform to share this on.
AH ! Now i understand the " Why is Clara 14 now ? " thing . This was a Recounting . A Terrible Incident .
Love it thank you!
But why the babies of those houses? They had nothing to do with it! 😞
If one member of the house is left living, they will make it their life’s work to seek revenge! More than likely in this universe
Few reasons. No one’s left to avenge. Power move to warn other houses. Reminds me of feudal Japan.
They didn't, but in a society that still acts like "noble blood" means anything, anyone with the same blood is guilty regardless of actual physical involvement.
This is a very typical response throughout all of human history. The reason to go that scorched earth is not revenge or justice. It is an object lesson. As Voltaire said "Pour encourager."
I lost all respect for Clara because of that. She's no different from the evil nobles that allowed the virus to grow.
Could the mystery man behind Lord Draymore be a survivor from Tusko Hulma's Family that Clara didn't exterminate??? 👍👍
That's certainly a possibility now that I think about it. Holy s#*t.
Damn, EkhidnaWrites get so high writing sometimes lol
Damn I had forgot it was her telling the story in past tense. Amazing as always
Oh you're good this is getting better all the time.
Holy fv¢k this chapter was sooooooooooooooooooooo freakin' good!!!
amaizing story ........ it have all what it needs !
Boom!! And now we know. This entire storyline is me addiction
I get a little excited when I see this story pops up on my feed. So good!!!
From the beginning this has been and is an excellent series. Thank you.
Another awesome chapter to a outstanding story
I love these chapters. 😂
I completely forgot we were in a flashback. My god, Clara is a beast! A glorious one.
Thank you 😊 what a great way to start a long holiday weekend ❤️🤍💙 the character development continues and we now know why Cynthia has Red Armor 😎.
I want more, MOREEEEEE 😭 this masterpiece will be a movie in 10-15 years and I will be waiting
Loving it!
Awesome now we know why