Wonderful! I really liked these two and cared about their friendship. Loved the gentle humour, irony, editing, and use of monochrome and then colour! Loved the way the torn-up art came back at the end. He has his space now to put up the art he loves, but his companion has gone. That's life. I'll watch your films from now on!
At the beginning my thoughts were like: What is it? I can't understand the message. But now, I think I understand them, the situation but can't explain. I just feel...
this is so good! I loved every second of it. You can feel the love for your project through the screen. Your films are gems that I think the whole world deserves to see. Never stop, keep blossoming. :)
Superb film, I was totally absorbed from beginning to end! I'm a fan of black & white, so thanks for that! I also love how you brought in typical elements of day to day living, that a married couple might struggle to endure, such as one peeing while the other was cleaning his teeth! One asking the other to turn the reading light off when in bed, and conflicting taste in decor. The top-to-toe sleeping arrangement told us clearly that this is not a same sex relationship, just two friends trying to cohabit in a small space (with the kitchen in a cupboard) that's far from ideal, and probably on a low budget. I remember it well! 👌🙌
Great film Jasper! Really liked everything: the aspect ratio, Black and white with color glimpsed for effect, and the friendship and story were solid. Excited to see what you come up with in the future. Also wanted to say, after finding this engaging and liking the film, I decided to watch it on my tv's youtube app. Though I couldn't see it or about 1/3 of you work on there, like I do on my comp. Was able to screen mirror from my comp, but wanted to let you know. Your films are good enough for the big screen so not sure why it wasn't showing up!
I went to search up student short films to get inspiration for my own and this has made me equally inspired and motivated. Keep up the good work I’ve just found my new inspiration
great great great! From beginning to end, not only a captivating look, but also a captivating story! Love it. Great job very inspirational as a film student myself!
I thought this was very well done. By coincidence, Dina Washington's album used in this is one of my mother's favorite. The acting was talented, and the production and directing worked well, especially by the choice of using B/W most of the way through so that the nuance of color such as that last image of the reclaimed art work, represents a certain feeling. All in all, this is proof someone in Northhampton, Massachusetts has been really learning how to create a story in film.
Hey man, I just stumbled across this film, not sure how, I think You Tube suggested it. Anyway, I just wanted to congratulate you both on it. I thoroughly enjoyed, more so than some award winning shorts. I really enjoyed the cinematography and the editing of the film. I enjoyed the story too, I thought it was very relatable and I think it spoke to a higher truth about how people can lose their sense of individuality and self within a relationship. I particularly liked the shot towards the end of the head silhouetted against the window. Above all else I found the film to be inspiring, and that isn't often the case with some shorts. This one made you want to go out and just shoot a short film, which is ace. Keep up the good work, and I hope you manage to forge a career out of this, because you're skilled and talented enough to do so.
I really liked how you made the black and white style have purpose something instead of just being black and white for the sake of being black and white
Hey, I dont know If you Will read this but Im a Young student from Spain and my final work in college is going to be a short film Im making. So I was wondering If It would be posible to have an Interview with you to ask you for advice and to improve my work. Thank you!
Amazing film! One of the best films I’ve seen where everything hits, cinematography, sound, editing, etc. Great stuff guys! Keep doing great things! You just gained another subscriber!
Respectfully, this felt like 90% style, 10% substance - great Wes-Anderson-type still shots & filmmaking whilst also opting for the smart choice to use black and white colouring but the plot kinda doesn't really do too much & this was far from entertaining in any real impactful way.
Wow. Thank you random RUclips algorithm suggestion. What a terrific, engaging, well-crafted film. Fantastic!
awe :) thanks so much, means the world 🥰
Wonderful! I really liked these two and cared about their friendship. Loved the gentle humour, irony, editing, and use of monochrome and then colour! Loved the way the torn-up art came back at the end. He has his space now to put up the art he loves, but his companion has gone. That's life. I'll watch your films from now on!
please never stop making films
I agree
Outstanding! You packed more meaning into 11 minutes than in many professional full length films!
man i’ve been stuck for weeks with writing but your shorts have opened up so much for me thank you
I don’t get how you haven’t blown up! You guys are true geniuses. I LOVE your work so much.
There's something about that final image I can't explain. I just _felt_ it. For this I thank you, for a long time.
❤
A truly brilliant short film. It triggered so many memories of shared accommodation in my youth.
At the beginning my thoughts were like: What is it? I can't understand the message. But now, I think I understand them, the situation but can't explain. I just feel...
this is so good! I loved every second of it. You can feel the love for your project through the screen. Your films are gems that I think the whole world deserves to see. Never stop, keep blossoming. :)
Wow, just a masterful short film. Please don't ever stop making stuff. You both have such natural talent and the blocking was incredible.
Superb film, I was totally absorbed from beginning to end! I'm a fan of black & white, so thanks for that! I also love how you brought in typical elements of day to day living, that a married couple might struggle to endure, such as one peeing while the other was cleaning his teeth! One asking the other to turn the reading light off when in bed, and conflicting taste in decor. The top-to-toe sleeping arrangement told us clearly that this is not a same sex relationship, just two friends trying to cohabit in a small space (with the kitchen in a cupboard) that's far from ideal, and probably on a low budget. I remember it well! 👌🙌
Thank you so much for the kind words! So glad it resonated :)
Immaculate work! Love the storytelling style and the unsatisfying ending.
Great film Jasper! Really liked everything: the aspect ratio, Black and white with color glimpsed for effect, and the friendship and story were solid. Excited to see what you come up with in the future. Also wanted to say, after finding this engaging and liking the film, I decided to watch it on my tv's youtube app. Though I couldn't see it or about 1/3 of you work on there, like I do on my comp. Was able to screen mirror from my comp, but wanted to let you know. Your films are good enough for the big screen so not sure why it wasn't showing up!
you just spark my inner film soul that has been lost for years
Wow dude this was so cool to watch for a student short film! You definitely deserve more recognition!
I went to search up student short films to get inspiration for my own and this has made me equally inspired and motivated. Keep up the good work I’ve just found my new inspiration
Absolutely love this - your shots hold so much style and character! Love how you played with colour as well! Super cool x
Your stuff is so enjoyable to watch, thanks for making these
This is one of the best short films I’ve seen. Excellent work.
very cool framing! simple yet very satisfying.
Amazing film loved ur use of cinematography and black and white and the story was really solid keep up the amazing work uve earned a subscriber 🤟🏻🎬🎥
So good, i cant even under stand how did you keep the paste so well.
Fantastic....Great job!!!!
Really really good. I absolutely loved every second!
Good job, this is actually good
this is exceptionally well made, never stop.
great great great! From beginning to end, not only a captivating look, but also a captivating story! Love it. Great job very inspirational as a film student myself!
this is so unbelievably good damn
I love it! It's awesome.
Wow! Great story and amazing cinematography. Keep it up!
Looks great! Goodl luck in the festivals!
Great job, keep up the 🎥 work.
I thought this was very well done. By coincidence, Dina Washington's album used in this is one of my mother's favorite. The acting was talented, and the production and directing worked well, especially by the choice of using B/W most of the way through so that the nuance of color such as that last image of the reclaimed art work, represents a certain feeling. All in all, this is proof someone in Northhampton, Massachusetts has been really learning how to create a story in film.
Shot at 9:30 is way chill
Hey man, I just stumbled across this film, not sure how, I think You Tube suggested it. Anyway, I just wanted to congratulate you both on it. I thoroughly enjoyed, more so than some award winning shorts. I really enjoyed the cinematography and the editing of the film. I enjoyed the story too, I thought it was very relatable and I think it spoke to a higher truth about how people can lose their sense of individuality and self within a relationship. I particularly liked the shot towards the end of the head silhouetted against the window. Above all else I found the film to be inspiring, and that isn't often the case with some shorts. This one made you want to go out and just shoot a short film, which is ace. Keep up the good work, and I hope you manage to forge a career out of this, because you're skilled and talented enough to do so.
This means so much :) thank you!!
Unreal film! Love the aesthetic!
I really liked how you made the black and white style have purpose something instead of just being black and white for the sake of being black and white
Love the composition.
I know I'm a year late, but this is really good and you guys should be proud of yourselves
Hey, I dont know If you Will read this but Im a Young student from Spain and my final work in college is going to be a short film Im making. So I was wondering If It would be posible to have an Interview with you to ask you for advice and to improve my work. Thank you!
Love this film guys!
what camera did you guys use? looks stunning!
Oh i love this very much
🥰
Jarmusch would be proud
this is absolutely amazing
What a amazing job!❤🇧🇷
Hit the jackpot..!😅❤
This is incredible
This is great!
Loved it, 10/10 in every category!
This is amazing! We would love to acquire this for our site as well as commission original content from you.
love the two drips at the end!!
GREAT MOVIE
so calming
Terrific!
i really love it
did you put this into any short film circuits??
Your style likes Wes Anderson🔥💪
This looks real nice
This is so well done. You have real talent. Keep going
love, lvoe
💜💜💜
Amazing film! One of the best films I’ve seen where everything hits, cinematography, sound, editing, etc. Great stuff guys! Keep doing great things!
You just gained another subscriber!
Oh gosh :) thank you so much for this 🥰 made me smile
u got my like with the miners lamp
this is brilliant
supa dope
❤
fucking phenomenal
Film is filming.
what city is this, looks like a forlorn place.
Respectfully, this felt like 90% style, 10% substance - great Wes-Anderson-type still shots & filmmaking whilst also opting for the smart choice to use black and white colouring but the plot kinda doesn't really do too much & this was far from entertaining in any real impactful way.
very fair critiques! thanks for the input ❤
Your camera must be prety old, cause theres no colour. Is it broken?
10/10
You have a gift
lowkey copied 'Boy In the Corner Film'
Bet you rent is $2000 a month xD
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absolutely amazing, i love It!🥹🩷
𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐦𝐨𝐬𝐦 👊