Writing A Song In ONE HOUR (So sad I cry everytim)
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- Опубликовано: 10 сен 2024
- My lovely friend and not so lovely boss (that's right - give me a raise you prick!) RoomieOfficial wrote and recorded a song in under 1 hour.
This is my take on it!
Lyrics:
You thought that you
Could turn and still be alright
You thought that you
Could play and that we just might…
…Hit the bullseye in the midst of your soul
That I would whisper trying to stay in control
But you left right
Before we even had our first fight
(Ooooh Ooooh)
And now you’re lonely
(Ooooh Ooooh)
Thinking if only
(Ooooh Ooooh)
You wouldn’t left when
(Ooooh Ooooh)
When I needed you the most
When I needed you the
When I needed you the
When I needed you the
When I needed you the most
I saw that you
Were having fun the other night
Some kind of party
And you were dancing in the rim light
You hit the bullseye in the midst of my soul
I heard you whisper and I lost all control
’Cause you left right
Before we even had our first fight
Ooooh Ooooh)
And now you’re lonely
(Ooooh Ooooh)
Thinking if only
(Ooooh Ooooh)
You wouldn’t left when
(Ooooh Ooooh)
When I needed you the most
When I needed you the
When I needed you the
When I needed you the
When I needed you the most
You left me broken
Ooooh Ooooh)
And now you’re lonely
(Ooooh Ooooh)
Thinking if only
(Ooooh Ooooh)
You wouldn’t left when
(Ooooh Ooooh)
When I needed you the most
You left me
(When I needed you the)
You left me
(When I needed you the)
You left me
(When I needed you the)
You left me
When I needed you the most
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It all started with Rob Scallon who made a song in 60 min:
• Making a Song in an Hour
Then Andrew Huang stepped it up by making a song in 59 min:
• Making a song in 59 mi...
Finally Roomie responded with a song in 58 min:
• I Tried To Write A Hit...
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My favorite song that calls someone a ”ho” repeatedly 🏆
I CANNOT listen to this song without hearing that now XD
Was reading down the comments and read this. damn u got me hahahhaa
jonasthefrisk Same. That’s all I heard after he said that.
Joel berghult tjenare
also when he sings the "when i need you the most" the last word sounds like "moist"
Dang, that was beautiful!
Thanks man!
That was very beautiful. I listened to it while staring out my window at night, which was very relaxing! I'm a metalhead and thought that was good, so I tip my hat to you, sir!
Dang, everybody know that you're a better singer than roomie
Rob Scallon im gonna hang with my bros
RUclips has brought me here no doubt because of you Rob, & yet has skipped Roomies! 😂
Love how roomie is so supportive and calling his singing sexy all the time
Agreed
I love Jonas's voice so much... it's honestly so unique. I WANT MORE
For real more
Same
@@CherrrrBear I’m just checking in case I’m going crazy but do you remember Jonas singing his song “my deep thoughts” in one of roomies videos? I think they’ve deleted it and I can’t find it anywhere
SAME
"when I needed you the MOIST"
I was just about to comment this
Same!
Yuup
IM NOT THE ONLY ONE!
mowest!
"Soft kicks" and almost break the table playing it.
Lol FAX
This is better than most of the songs on the radio.
Liyah Harris Most songs on the radio are written in less.
Most are just rip offs and are not even worthy to be called music.
@@carvaiio writing ≠ making a song. Writing a song takes obviously way less time
*this is better than mo-est of the songs on the radio
@@nobiekenobi9849 BRO 💀
"YOU DON'T HAVE TIME TO VIBE" oh how the tables have turned lmaoooo
How the turn tables
Wht
blacie Rice did you see roomies vid?
ItsJRgaming yes
blacie Rice oh ok
Your voice sounds so good in this damn
7:48 "When I needed you the moe-est"
Pzychosis/Madjinn lmao
WE NEED THIS ON SPOTIFY!!
Also all I hear now I've read some of the comments is MOWEST
I agree!
Definitely
I know right! I didn't even read the comments and I definitely heard MOWEST it's kinda weird, but then again it was quite a good song.
Edit: Have a great day/night or have a great time sleeping! Sorry if I am very late to this video. I recently found Roomie and Jonas' channels. Sorry if I bothered you by apologizing. I am Canadian and we are sorta known for apologizing. I apologize a lot more than anyone else I know though. Sorry if I wrote a lot, I just like to write to people.
"plot twist: she's a psychopath" haha a familiar story. Dude is way too funny and talented to be the unseen editor.
I love how much the panic increases towards the end XD Really good song though!!
Also #GiveJonasARaise2k18! :P
I wasted sooooo much time in the beginning XD
This is dope.
Dope or nope
Yo! Love your videos, especially the ''study with me'' videos.
Wow. That was really inspiring. It was so beautiful. And in an hour. I really need to learn to loosen up in the studio. You are multi talented. I enjoy your editing as well. And you deserve more subs. Tell Rami I said to pimp your channel more. Applause to you sir. I appreciate you.
Jonas can you PLEASE upload this full song somewhere? It's so beautiful!
JONAS YOUR SINGING VOICE IS SO MESMERIZINGLY BEAUTIFUL
10:52 is when the song starts (timestamp for me bc I keep coming back)
That was honestly my favourite out of all the "An Hour or Under" challenges out of Rob, Andrew, Roomie, and you Jonas if you are reading this. Everyone had different approaches and different styles, but you manage to encapsulate a beautiful emotion in your song that was glorious to hear out loud in such a short and rushed time. Needless to say, you got one more subscriber right here, looking forward to more videos from you!
Right? I really like all the stuff Jonas makes.
"When I needed you the Mowest!" hahaha
In all seriousness though, this is arguably the best one of the four who did the challenge!
Thombee bee sorry don't know em and didn't know they competed. None of the other mentioned them either so im not sure if they really count as competitors in this little 'competition' 😊
You have a strong and soft voice at the same time. It sounds awesome!
This is the best of the "Song in one HOUR" songs I think.
Frankly speaking, like your voice much more than Roomies voice)))
Love you❤
Ліза Шевченко I have sent ninjas to your house. Do not struggle
RoomieOfficial you need to spend much money to punish me - Im so far away 😝
RoomieOfficial don't joke with ukrainians:)
Roomie, we have your ninjas, pay us the ransom.
Ukrainian girls.
Fuk off
I legit had no idea jonas sang like damn. I love his voice so awesome.
To be honest this is one of my favorite songs to listen to. Debating if I want to try a cover of it. Great job
Dan The GuitarMan I would 100% love if you’d cover it :D
@@jonasthefrisk he should have. I've trying to find this song. Its not on spotify. Where can i find this track. I wanna listen. Could u upload it on spotify?
You guys make a great duo, and I love your editing style!
I liked before the video even started because of "i cry everytim"
if there is other guy more underrated than roomie, its jonas
WTF HOW YOU ARE AN AMAZING SINGER!!!!!!!
Both u and Roomie have amazing voices that anyone would kill for! Honestly u sound better than most of the famous pop stars out their!
It would be so cool if this song was on Spotify, I really like it! (btw, this song is waay better than most of the songs on the radio, good job Jonas! :D)
M S when you realize most music on the radio sucks then your comment is no longer much of a compliment haha.
"When I need you the moist." 😂😂😂 I'm mad that I actually really liked that because he acted like it was garbage but I was hella vibeing. Well done, Jonas!
10:52
Song starts here for those who just wanna listen to his song enjoy. :3
Yeah I’m going to have to say that this is the best out of everyone’s hour song. Good shit dude.
That song sounds amazing for an hour creation I rate it 10/10
Oh my GOD! Jonas your voice is gorgeous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We've been deprived of your skills. SUBSCRIBED, NOTIFIED, COMMENTED, and now a STAN.
I can’t stop listening to piece where he says you left me broken. It’s just beautifull. Love your voice.
Bruh these two are so talented I can't even 😤👌
Dam dude you are soo good! Keep it up Legend!
I love the way Jonas uses his falcetto. It's so light and beautiful
That was pretty good. Jonas can sing pretty damn good! Would love to see someone write Jazz in an hour, lol. All those extended chords
The fact that we didn't get the refined version on Spotify is soooo sad! You left me broken!
I’d love to hear what this could turn into if you went back and spent the time doing all the things you wanted to. I think it’s a great song the way it is but am super curious what it would be with all the changes you talked about at the end!
Amazing. Both you and Roomie. I don’t normally like this type of songs but these two were exception, I can’t explain why. You are both such good singers.
Out of this competition, you have my vote (and you have yet to actually be name called in the challenge). Good stuff
Please upload a full version! The beat is so chill and your voice is so perfect!
And im so impressed with how much talented of a man you are!
Cant belive I just knew you as " Roomie's editor" (and that in itself is already a big thing, your editing is awesome)
I really would really love an album from you especially in this style. Please tell me you are writing music outside of these challenges on RUclips because I would pay to listen to a serious release.
I am actually hella impressed at how painful and well thought through this song is when you wrote it in an hour!!! It is really pretty and the melodies get you right in sad
#JonasIsABetterSingerThanRoomie
Jonas should be singing rob scallon's 60 min song...
Matthew Blocked & reported for cyberbullying 😭😭😭😭
RoomieOfficial #RoomieIsABetterCameramanThanJonas
Blocked & reported for cyberbullying 😭😭😭😭
Skill wise, No. But I really like the style Jonas has so I kinda have to agree
Love you Roomie but Jonas crushed you with his voice
Great track! It is super inspiring to see people making these 1 hour challenge videos. I tend to procrastinate so much it can take me 2 months to finish a song.
Jonas: this is such a self deprived sad song
Roomie: yea I like it :,>
“This is so much fun but it sucks” -Jonas
this is awesome.
keep singing, jonas!!
Holy crap Roomie upstaged. You gotta post more man your voice is amazing!
That was sooo good! Seriously, loved it!
Sad songs are my favorite.
Wow this is a pretty great song for just an hour. It just seems so stressful though XD
Beautiful song and beautifully sang! Nice Jonas
Jonas very quickly became my favorite part of Roomie's channel
So catchy.. and your voice going up softly sounds amazing. You should make this challenge a regular thing!
ACTUALLY LIKE RELEASE THIS AS A SONG ITS SO SAD
Ur gay
I can't believe I didn't know you were a musician! Roomie just referred to you as his BF and editor. If I hadn't seen the Roar cover I may never have known. You are SO UNDERRATED!!!!!
Okay is it bad that I think this is actually really good?!
No, because many agree with you. Amongst the 4 of them that did this challenge I'd say he won it hands down!
Why would that be bad?
Shade Sketch I really don't know just making sure I'm not weird by actually liking it, guess I'm not the only one lol
Only because Roomie might send assassins on you if you insinuate Jonas is better than him.
Pretty spicey my dood 👌 The second you sing BOOM accent gone and we get sorta and Ed Sheeren and a holy hooman
I like the finished song a lot. Such a funny and slightly stressful video :)
I feel like you had a good plan. Definitely killed it. I'm similar in making a quick plan (I dont write music) for anything I do.
I'm really glad you're back and are in a better place than ever! Keep being awesome! :D ♥️
I’m absolutely baffled by how much I love this, you did such a good job!! 😍
You and Ramen should sing together
They did and made an amazing cover of Skyfall
Who the hell is ramen
FredsterrV rami but asian
I usually eat ramen I don’t sing with it
I really enjoyed that!! Usually I'm a stickler for lyrics not being cheesy but I can totally forgive them when they're in this song. You're so talented!!!
FINALLY! I've been waiting forever for this xD.
This is BY FAR, WITHOUT A DOUBT, my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE one of these "made in under 1 hour" songs that I've heard so far (with Mary Spender's being a close 2nd, & that's including all 3 of Rob's songs, as well as Rommie's, Tyler of Music Is Win's, Andrew's, & of course Mary's). & I'm not biased, like I just saw Roomie for the 1st time tonight right before watching this vid so I never even knew this guy existed. But holy SHIT this is amazing! You're extremely skilled/talented & your voice is just so silky, yet dynamic! Keep up the great work, brotha! It's obvious that you've got music straight running through your veins!
jonas wins the 60 min song competition
I love their relationship. 😊😊😊
Sooo supportive of each other
Can you do another dad jokes video on roomie’s channel? I laughed my ass off it was awesome.
please make this downloadable!! I love this so much and so does my daughter. Your voice is amazing!
When roomies editor makes a better song than the other three combined
out of every hour song videos I've watched, this song is the best!!
This is so damn good!
Jon D Barker thanks man!
I’m back again listening to this bc it’s so good
Rhymnezone is life... Also, wow jonas is tall... Hitting his head on a lamp...
Why is it that this song is the simplest of all the challenges so far and yet it sounds the best? :O.
Did roomie edit your video now?
Filip Jovanovic probably not... It looked like he was too busy vibeing
Lolol Jonas edits Roomie's videos
This is so impressive to me... I know music is a different art medium whose structure becomes clear once you know how to use the tools, but I am pleasantly surprised anytime someone can come up with something unheard before. You did such an awesome job with this, Jonas! Hope you continue to make music (hopefully in a less stressful way)
I need this the mo-est.
He genuinely does such beautiful high notes vibrato tone everything
I love your sense of humor
Chase Dunkley my mom says I’m funny..
12:00 That break born no doubt from desperation and lack of time is super on point :) gj
Roomies video.. Jonas filming = 10 cuts.. Jonas video.. Roomie filming = 376 cuts.. XD
So basically.. that's why it took so long to get this vid out.. All of those Roomie mistakes had to be cut and edited out..
And Jonas has to do more of this :D
Roy Smits i wouldn’t Joel is worse or better than me at filming. We’re both equally bad at it haha. Both of our videos took a long time to edit but the biggest reason mine took so long is that i took some well needed time off from work. :D
Well.. who could blame you.. working for a gnome like that must be exhausting XD
lol
I would literally buy an album of yours! Me and my wife love your singing. I'm always rooting for you in your competitions with joel on his channel.
wow. this was the best one yet.
Holy fucking shit. This is actually really good for just one hour for the work. Your voice is so good though, just got into Roomie, and then I heard you sing in one of his old videos. Instant fan.
When I needed you the MOEST
This is like watching a basketball game you have already seen a million times five years later and yet it’s still so intense
I’ve been waiting for this!!!
I have listened to quite a few of these 1 hour songs, This is probably the best in my opinion.
When i needed u the moest
It did sound like that, but tbh I think it added a little something and just made it more.. wholesome.
so good for a 1 hour of work, + i can't stop jamming to it. your voice is a gift god bless you
please make more songs in this style you have a gift use it well
4:27 I heard _"You thought you could play without fire"_ and I'd keep it in my notes if you don't mind. 😁
5:05 'so' and 'control' could also work and would make for a more flexible lyric concept to work around. Near-rhymes work wonders in many great songs.
This song is better than most of the songs on TV in my opinion. Great job Jonas. Big fan