finish draft 0 with me || cozy writing vlog 004

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  • Опубликовано: 22 окт 2024

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  • @AriBPK
    @AriBPK  3 месяца назад +3

    how have your nanowrimo projects been going? I hope you enjoyed this cozy vlog! 💕

  • @bookishsyd6077
    @bookishsyd6077 2 месяца назад

    First off, congrats on finishing your dialog draft, that’s so exciting! I had never heard of one before you, but it sounds super interesting. Writing on,y the dialog, who said it and how, and maybe a few sentences of scene description in between sounds like a fantastic way to not get bogged down in excessive detail and just get to the core of a story.
    I’m editing my mystery/thriller novel right now, using a truly impressive amount of color-coded index cards, post-its, and page flags, lol. I put them all on a tri fold poster board instead of on the wall or floor because seeing it 24/7 will make me want to work on it all the time, which isn’t great for me. This way, I fold it away and so I literally can’t work on it until I open it again. That, plus only doing it for like three or four thirty-minute sprints at a time before a longer break has really helped me not get burnt out. I’m actually excited to edit, which has never happened.
    Your dialog draft is totally a draft! Every draft of a story improves it, there’s no ‘oh, it’s just a [insert type of draft]’.
    I also have a hard time with blurbs. I am so long winded in general, plus I just get so excited about the story I end up including major spoilers when I try to write one. I have to learn to majorly pare back and be mysterious, lol.
    (I also love all your adorable mugs.)
    Congrats on finishing the draft again 🎉 and thanks for the video!

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  2 месяца назад

      thank you so much! I love your comments and I love hearing about your project! I found the dialogue draft to be so helpful, I totally recommend it if you have the time or interest -- I can also make a video to get a bit more into the technicalities of how I did it, if that seems interesting?
      and oh my goodness, that sounds like such a project with all of the index cards and post its but it's so smart to put it on a trifold board! It sounds like what you're doing is really working, especially if you're excited to edit! ❤
      I'm going to work on a blurb video next, so I hope it'll be helpful if you, like me, find blurbs to be torture 😂 you'll have to let me know! and I LOVE collecting mugs -- they are my absolute favorite ❤ thank you so much for watching and commenting!

  • @mikwrites
    @mikwrites 3 месяца назад +4

    CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!! that is so exciting that you finished the draft!!! I love the idea of a dialogue draft - Definitely feeling like I need to implement that :) definitely celebrate this win! 💗

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 месяца назад

      thank you, Mik! I'm so happy and all thanks to yours and Becca's stream last night -- I love a dialogue draft! I'm happy to chat about it if you're thinking of doing one 💕

  • @suuyupotato3670
    @suuyupotato3670 Месяц назад

    this vlog was so cute and calming! lots of love to you and cooper 🤍🤍☕️☕️

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 дня назад

      thank you so much 💗

  • @beccatobar
    @beccatobar 2 месяца назад

    OH MY GOODNESS! so proud to say i was there in spirit when you finished the draft! what a huge accomplishment. also can i just say the title of your book is so good -- It's so fresh and original.

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  2 месяца назад

      that live sprint was so fun! and thanks so much becca ❤ i really appreciate it!

  • @TaylorAnnWright
    @TaylorAnnWright 2 месяца назад

    Just found your channel 💖
    Congratulations on finishing your 0 draft!!! 🎉🍾🎈
    (Also absolutely love the vibes in this vlog 👏🏼✨)

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 дня назад +1

      thank you so much Taylor 💗

  • @AnnaRobbinsWrites
    @AnnaRobbinsWrites 3 месяца назад

    Congratulations on finishing your dialogue draft!! Woohoo! I also loved all of your cohosts 🐶🐾

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 месяца назад

      thank you so much! it's such a good feeling, gotta hold onto it until I'm sure draft 1 starts kicking my butt 😂they say thank you haha🐶

  • @CodyTheWriter
    @CodyTheWriter 3 месяца назад

    Congrats on finishing this draft! You have been killing it this month and I’m so proud of you! Can’t wait to watch as this story continues to morph into its final form! 😊

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 месяца назад

      thank you so much, Cody! ❤

  • @isabellajuanitalyn
    @isabellajuanitalyn 2 месяца назад

    You're always inspiring me to write!

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 дня назад +1

      thank you so much 💗

  • @heyyitssj
    @heyyitssj 2 месяца назад

    New subscriber here! Love your vlog 💕 congrats on finishing strong 🎉

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  2 месяца назад +1

      welcome to the channel -- thank you so much for watching and subscribing, it means so much 💗 and thank you so much, hopefully more revision and drafting content to come!

  • @mirandatheauthor
    @mirandatheauthor 2 месяца назад

    huge congrats!!! 💛💛💛 that is super exciting!! my nanowrimo project is slow going lol. at this point, i keep repeating to myself "progress is progress". i'm hopeful for the day i can also say i finished draft zero (^''':

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  2 месяца назад +1

      thank you, Miranda! slow and steady, it's still progress and you're doing great ❤ I know you'll be saying that you're done with draft 0 before you know it!

  • @BeeHawthorne
    @BeeHawthorne 3 месяца назад

    Congrats on finishing the draft!! Your cohosts really need to start pulling their weight tho, they can't skate by on their cuteness forever 🐶💕

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  2 месяца назад +1

      thank you so much, Bee! I know...they should get jobs 😂 they really do need to pull their weight around here

  • @kumaramit4
    @kumaramit4 20 дней назад

    I subscribed your channel 👍❤

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 дня назад

      thank you so much! 💗

  • @naomiparker2502
    @naomiparker2502 27 дней назад

    When you do 0 drafts do you do mostly dialogue and action tags(barely description or introspection)? I feel like that's my strategy.

    • @AriBPK
      @AriBPK  3 дня назад

      yes! sometimes I will insert a description if it comes to me vividly, but a lot of the time it's super bare bones