Dragon Ball AX: Universal Chaos Saga Episode 5 Part 1: The First Skirmish
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- Опубликовано: 5 фев 2025
- The AX warriors unite for a last line of defense to save their galaxy. This time, they will face the Buus - A family of five warriors, each of whom are more powerful than all the previous threats of the saga!
Vegeta seems to have acquired far more fighting ability than the rest of the group, but he fears he alone can't stop the Buus. Yet he's confident he can still clutch a victory. What is his plan? Find out.
Incredible that I'm still getting comments asking me when I plan to continue. I'll comment here.
I still think about this fanfic and how to finish it. My first saga was easy for me to start and finish in one fell swoop. I had a story that I really thought was worth telling and I had the entire thing in my head. I wanted the spirit of DBZ, with more saiyans intact, and a focus more on skill and strategy than typical DBZ.
I've struggled to find a story I really wanted to tell with the next saga. I think that has shown in how weak my plots have been for this saga. I figured out the story I wanted to tell about maybe a few years before I put this episode out? It's that I want to explore a DBZ world where power levels are completely irrelevant to the outcome of a fight. This episode of the saga will dive completely into that. I have a lot of ideas, and once I figure out a plot that I'm excited enough to bring to life, I'll make the next part of this episode.
Interesting. Keep in mind here
-You have the final battle with icer.
^ ( Traveling to his domain, killing possibly, his royal guard or something, and fighting him himself is possibly like 2 episodes.)
-Each buu could be one episode each? One single buu could have a backstory of his own, and a own personality. Your series has shown this isnt all about fights, the story triumphs the fights (imo) especially with previous episodes, to this day it kinda pisses me off the King had to die, that was like Turleses best friend lol
-There could be one enemy Icer himself has been saving for them? One enemy for all our fighters, in case of panic.
Overall what ive just listed is potential for 9 episodes, keep in mind I think your the only one who's thinking your series is dry. (Trust me I get that, ive been writing a story about an alternate DBZ style universe for the past 2 years, I have over 2000 pages of story just sitting in binders that to this day I'm still writing.)
Love the stuff man, your comment was thrilling to see.
Of course you're still getting requests to continue! Your content is truly remarkable, buddy, even with a few constructive criticisms people have given, haha. I'm really glad that you still think about it and what to do for it, that's such a relief to me and makes me so happy. Yeah, the plot that you came up with would have been easy to do, haha. It's still worth telling! Honestly. And how you made it different with skill levels and other aspects really had me hooked. It still does, heh. It's such a shame that you've been absent and for a time was without your former drive, my old friend. I've re-watched your videos many times over the years. I'm simply in love with the storyline you chose. I do hope you will be able to continue it soon. I really don't think your plots have been weak at all. In fact I believe I see some genius in it that could even be inspired by the new content of Dragon Ball Super. It's a long, lost feeling to not have more of what you can do around. One of these days, I hope you can catch up with me. I'm not sure if you remember, but back before RUclips and Google were unified, using my previous account, I'd messaged with you and discussed many details about your series with you. I questioned many things, you spoiled some epic plot points, you told me what Lord Icer's true power was, and I suggested that maybe you get the four Saiyans and a resurrected King Vegeta together as a way to create the Super Saiyan God, to find a way to defeat the worst of the Buus and who else Icer has up his sleeve. To make the Buus extra relevant as a great enemy, I also suggested that against the Saiyan God, Uub would be a member, and he would merge with the rest of the Buu family to become Majuub. That way you can still have an epic story where power levels don't matter and there can be only one way for them to surpass their limits. For that matter, perhaps the power of a God being needed against the Buu's or others can find inspiration from the DBZ Legends character Shallot eventually achieving his long-awaited goal of becoming a SSJ God and using that power to defeat Super Buu (Gohan absorbed). For one exciting idea you could still go with, I also suggested that the Saiyan God could, perhaps, be a different being like Yamoshi of ancient history who had this going on, something I'm happy to share again 'cause, frankly, I've missed you, as after all these years, you're one of my favorite people I've met through the net, and I hope you get back to me soon; peace, brother:
"The original Yamoshi was also very righteous in his heart, despite being a Saiyan, and he alongside his five comrades attempted to wipe out the evil of the past Saiyan race after starting a rebellion against them. He is cornered and becomes a Super Saiyan, but is still defeated as he runs out of energy. However, his spirit continued to search for a new savior: Super Saiyan God. As a Super Saiyan, Yamoshi is a fierce fighter, even for a Saiyan, which led to the legend of the Super Saiyan being destructive and violent. A Namekian elder sympathized with Yamoshi's spirit, and so recorded the information about him in the Namekian Book of Legends. They all existed long before Planet Vegeta was the Saiyan's planet. My version of Yamoshi would also be pure and righteous, and while he was a very different version of a Super Saiyan or anything like that as the God of Saiyans and God of Battle embodying all potential for a Saiyan (something which I can explain in a separate comment), he, too, fought the Evil Saiyans (like Cunber) that used to be in existence, only in his world there were also the bloodthirsty and demon-like Ancient Namekians along with the race of Icers, the Demonic Swordmasters, the Giants, and the Buu family that he had to take on. Eventually, after proving far too powerful to defeat and proving a danger to them, they pulled their powers and worked together with some Wizards in order to seal him away at the center of the Universe. However, his influence was simply too powerful, and it is likely that it is what led to there being one Legendary Super Saiyan in each galaxy. At the same time, the way seven very special warriors (Bardock, Turles, Kakarot, Piccolo, Vegeta, Fasha, and King Vegeta) came together as beings who would max out their limits and train their bodies to the point that they could not possibly become anymore powerful by finding their full power and potential and with six of them being specifically and particularly capable and special Saiyans (especially once Fasha finds her full power, too) makes it very likely that he even had an influence on fate itself, subtly setting events on a course that would lead to the most special Legendary Super Saiyan in the entire Universe, Kakarot, being able to become a Super Saiyan God, which would be necessary for their final battle at least against the Buu family if not others and would allow his spirit to influence Kakarot and impart certain knowledge to him. After that, Piccolo as an Ancient Namekian would then work with Kakarot to find a way to unseal him and allow him to roam free once more."
I know King Vegeta is currently dead unless if you choose to redo Episode 4 after all like you once spoke of, but you could always use Dabura or the Dragon Balls to revive him.
Or maybe even instead of being completely sealed away, an idea you could go with from both me and SSJ Broly here is that Lord Icer has Yamoshi locked away back at his palace and has a Time Breaker mask on him, keeping his power mostly sealed and forcing him to be under his control. Maybe another fighter Icer could have is also Demigra or Towa and they're using the Villainous Mode at the same time to keep Yamoshi further controlled, since he's so powerful and normally perhaps mind control like that wouldn't work on even a restrained divine being without something like a Time Breaker mask helping. Maybe he could be a secret fighter Icer is saving to sick on them and maybe freeing him could become one of their goals as a plot point, but simply trying to break his mask or something wouldn't be enough and they would still have to find a way to actually undo the seal, which would make for more of a journey and extend the story further. Maybe it takes them a while to even realize somehow that they have to turn Kakarot into a SSJ God as part of making the process happen, and maybe he doesn't actually get strong enough to help undo the seal until he masters that power in the form of SSJ God SSJ, a.k.a. SSJ Blue. And then you can still use your Super Kaiō-ken idea for him as Blue Kaiō-ken!! But take it to the next level, too, with him being able to break his limits further with it as seen during the Tournament of Power against Jiren when Vegeta also broke his limits to achieve Shinka and go from ×20 to ×100 as a godly version, which would reference Lord Slug! Or I mean, ×20 for LSSJ, ×100 for Blue. As for my idea with Majuub, that could come after the battles with each Buu would spaced out over 4-5 episodes, like what SSJ Broly had suggested. Actually, wow I feel dumb. I can't believe I didn't outright state this sooner, too. The power of six Saiyans coming together in Kakarot for SSJ God would be simply perfect against the power of all the Buu's coming together in Uub to make him Majuub, lol. I mean, duh, right? Balance and reflection and meeting each other on equal ground and all that. See? There's still plenty you can do, buddy.
Another idea could maybe be that Icer is the only one of his race who can transform further, being able to use the Ultimate Evolution/Golden Form state. But maybe he didn't have that power before and the danger of this new threat incited him to train, thus he developed that form recently. But maybe because it's so new, it would be incomplete, and he would only use it against SSJ God or SSJ Blue (KK?) Kakaort.
Came back during corona to rewatch your series. Can't believe it's already been 5 years.
The fact that you've worked on your fanfic since ten years ago is crazy. You'll always be looked at by me and my fellow (new generation) fanfic makers as a legend.
This, this right here, sums up some of my thoughts. His is one of the best alternate realities out there that exist among fans.
I'm glad you're back
i've been waiting 5 years for this episode
Holy hell, nice to see you're back and AX is better than ever. Can't wait for more.
I was just starting high school when you started making these, I'd spend hours watching in my old computer chair and my old ass desk top pc 😂 nostalgia man, you're a legend!
I remember watching the original fear of power videos as a kid
Damn son, was NOT expecting to see this in my subscription box when I got on youtube. Man... its been so long, I remember watching the FOP saga what, 9 years ago? I was in like the 3rd grade holy crap.I remember following the series and just being so impressed at how awesome it was. The story was awesome, like an actual dbz saga. The progression and characters were great and it looks like its gotten even better with the modding. Probably wont watch the whole thing tonight but will most def check it out tomorrow. I'm glad you added a synopsis but I'm feeling nostalgic. Might re watch the entire series before I fully watch this episode. Great work man, good to see you still trucking.
Holy shiiiiit I am so excited for this upload!!!! Thanks for deciding to continuing your amazing fanfic!!!!! It's one of the best fanfic in the entire dbz fanfics history!
Still haven't watched it though xD
Thank you so much!!!
Your fight scenes were always so unique and that's why I loved them they you always did your best to show the differences in your characters fighting style. Awesome job sprawllers, welcome back!
Welcome back. Love to see how you put the fights together so well. Not perfect but after all this time it'd be dumb to not expect some mistakes; I'm just glad to see the 'PL isn't everything' battles make a return.
hey good to hear from you! Yeah I've acquired a much more complex taste for fight choreography, but that also means my editing skills need to be even better than in my prime. I should be back at my prime in the next part and get beyond that in the part after.
Holy crap
1.glad to see your back was going my subscription box and noticed you uploaded a video a couple months late on my part
2.HOW DO YOU ONLY HAVE 1000subscribers like you put so much effort into these not like other channels that put 3minute videos just for views
3. Thank you again , so much nostalgia from watching this since I was 9.
+Rances 0ok I got my subscribers initially because I was uploading footage from Tenkaichis 2 and 3 when they were out in Japan and not in America. I was pretty decent at the games too which helped. I don't know if there's any real demand to see fanfics any more, and if there is, where to advertise.
Wow, it's great to see you're back. I remember watching your fanfiction back in 2008.
Well first and foremost, welcome back Sprawlers, it's been about 5 years now? Great episode, I like the fact that you added the synopsis for a refresher of your series, the strategy you're putting into the characters, how they fight and etc(Bardock's Prediction skill reminded me of a technique I had one of my characters in my series use). however, I think some of your fights could have came out better (mainly the upbeat tempo you had with your fights like back in Episode 1, 2, and etc), considering you're working with Modding as well as rustyness, it's understandable that your not just gonna get all your skills back. Aside from that, the multiple "blinking"(the quick and random flashes of black during the episode) and some dialogue stuff (this being the emoticon like ;) and etc), everything came out good and the way I see it, it also seemed like you were trying to put this out quickly.
People have gotten really good at criticism lately haha. Definitely a sign the fanfic making scene has matured quite a bit during all the years I've been inactive! Yeah I was trying to put this out a little quickly, I've spent so much time on preproduction stuff (my hours worked/length of video content ratio was by far the worst for this ep) that I wanted to wrap it up and start working on the next part, where actual stuff happens in the plot. I'll keep all those things in mind.
Still the best fanfic maker I've seen to date along with Shinnin, excellent job. Great to see you're still motivated to keep your series going. I think it's golden that you've incorporated mods to give it a more realistic flavor and feel to it. Keep up the work, job well done!
maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan i remember your videos from waaaaaaaaaaaay back i was in middle school this was like 2008 dude keep coming man!!
10 years later and i still come back to these videos. would love to have you back and making videos
Will still forever love this series
As will I, good sir.
Damn I'm so glad too have you back man loved your videos keep it up I'll be watching these
This Episode was Visually Appealing. It has been so long since I've seen something like this. I'm glad the first DBZ Fanfic Ever is here again. And thanks for the recap at the beginning. Great use of Mods and Editing. Though I'm not a huge fan of the dialogue boxes, it worked for the style. Great job as usual.
welcome back I love the usage of that yu yu hakasho sound track, (hiei vs yusuke i think) your story like always was stellar the fights were a bit off ..but it wasn't like i couldn't tell what you were trying to do though but i mean being gone for 5 years can do that to you. Keep it up
yeah, this episode took me a lot longer than I was expecting it to take. I spent way more time figuring out the modding, the video formats, the text formats, the portraits, etc, pretty much everything except the actual filming and fight editting itself. there's numerous small things I could've patched up, but I wanted to get this out so I can move onto the next part, where actually interesting stuff happens in the plot.
So this was more of you settling back in huh? well as far as an episode it was good those were the small things that i had issues with,i bet it did take time ...30 min+ episodes take alot anyways good luck
Dbzjojo (me) sends his regards, I am very happy to see you still pumping out the definite fanfiction for Dbz
Thank goodness you're still around! I've been wondering where you went for the longest time
Still alive! graduated in computer science recently and work has taken over my life.
good luck with the next part,Spral!
Have not watched this but I can't wait!!! one of the early fanfics I watched I always remember Spralwers and Jojo back then.
I miss Jojo tons. Too bad he's not active and all his stuff is down.
@@spralwers I never watched his stuff, what was it about and is there a way I can still check it out?
I didn't notice that you uploaded this a year ago. Good job. I don't watch fanfics anymore, but I am looking forward to see how this ends. A lot of the elements you have in this fanfic are better than most of what the manga and anime does. Have you considered writing original stories? Those would be interesting.
I have, and I've written several original stories when I was a kid. Later in life when I have more free time that's probably something I'll do.
+Spralwers Are you almost done with the next episode?
Yo Sprawlers, Dmansback here and I gotta say its been interesting watching this for many reasons, mainly that I didn't think we would get a continuation to this saga. The ability to add extra character models and transformation cut scenes helps the visual storytelling greatly especially with that Bardock model looking pretty polished. I get why you had the catch up at the beginning but perhaps that would of been better in a separate video as it was just as long as the episode itself. One thing I noticed throughout this though is your story telling isn't as refined as it used to be, it almost feels as if you were rushing through the dialogue to get to the fight scenes as quickly as possible, giving a ton of exposition in a way that didn't quite feel as natural as it could. The fight scenes didnt quite flow as well as they used to but to be fair this is a comeback after nearly 5 years and im sure everything will become more polished when you begin to get back into the rhythm again, overall great to see your still at it and cant wait to see the work you'l produce
+BadMango When I work on my next epsiode, I might have to ask you for clarification on some of these. This is terrific stuff to know.
Wow, what informative insight. Yes Spralwers, get all the help you can, man! :-)
Jesus Christ, you're still making this?! It's almost 10 years!
10. YEARS!
@Spralwers, still holding out hope for another episode. This series was one of the good ones! Hoping you'll find the time to get back to it, but totally understandable if you can't finish it. All the best man!
Good to see you back. My favorite part was when buu started to fight vegeta you did a really good job with the mods. Just gotta tighten up on editing the rest of the fights.
wanna know something funny? that mod battle between vegeta and buu wasn't originally supposed to be there. The fight was way shorter and I figured it needed to be made longer and better.
Also it seems like people are getting a better and better eye for clean fight editing. If I did this 5-7 years ago, I totally would've gotten away with it! Not that I wasn't planning on making my fights cleaner to begin with.
Lol yeah I mean I do fanfics, so I do a ton of re-editing when it comes to fights. Not sure if you have seen my series well I have two but one I stopped doing. The one that is currently being made is called Dragon Ball Galactic Chaos the first episode has been out for a while check it out it's called Dragon Ball Galactic Chaos The Beginnings of War.
CEV256 I'll check em out. Fanfic makers today have actually been good sources of inspiration!
Oh I forgot to mention the other one, the other one is called Dragon Ball Intertwined Fates. You're going to see a lot improvement from Fates to Chaos.
And thanks that actually means a lot.
+Spralwers we are you making more
I think I’m gonna rewatch this again
When they announced the create a fight mode for Sparking Zero I immediately thought of you. I make no demands, but I hope you use it to make something!
Never gonna happen, he’s done.
Simgr101, SoulSinatra, BadMango (Dmansback), NattyCat, and Gimfigle496, I hope you guys all see this, because I want to say, your constructive criticism and what you pointed out for the themes he had going for the series were pretty much spot-on and so insightful. I really hope Spralwers makes his come back and takes all of what you said to heart, because I feel he really deserves more recognition for his old talent that I have no doubt he can not only revitalize again, but improve and refine. Even if he's doubting himself, I want him to know there are others like me who haven't given up on him.
Sprawlers are you going to make the next episode quick or is it going to be another five years? Lol btw I love the series!!
+Beaux Blackburn Not another 5, but probably one. Other priorities have me by the balls right now
+Spralwers It's pretty much been a year.... No episode??
Haha sorry. Yeah it looks like its gonna be like another 5 years lmao
I know this isn’t the exact video I watched. But I remembered as a kid. I used to watch these type of fanfic videos. There were so many back then 😂. It’s a shame most of them either delete it or I forgot the name.
Hey Spralwers just wondering when an estimate for the next episode release date would be
Hey man , we used to chop it up on a messenger app or something back in the day. You had actually told me how you planned to end this story wise lol Don’t know if you remember but hope you been good man.
28:05
This reference is so dated, it's practically Prehistoric.
Nah, I'm just kidding. :P
Great to see the series is picking up again.
oh man another nostalgic trip remembering this form childhood, if you ever need help editing (for free) to finally see a part 2 im your guy.
One day part 2 will arrive. Hopefully
Patiently waiting on part 2. Had to wait 5 years for this part. I just hope its not going to have the same fate.
+MineCraftlife9914 Definitely won't be 5 years. I'm expecting around one.
+Spralwers one year?? a pretty long wait but I'm willing to do it. I check everyday for the next episode. I'm ready for greatness!
*****
Yeah I'm busy with other stuff for the time being. Thanks!
+Spralwers no problem, keep up the good work!
Wow your back it's been years since your last video
It's super interesting seen old Machinmas like this on youtube (i've seen like 6 diferent ones in the last week) had no idea they existed. I only ever seen the short lived one by DBZanto
If you think this is old, I've got machinima that go back to around 2006-2007
@@spralwers nice
This may have been 6 years ago but this is interesting.
how am i still watching this knowing it will never continue :vvvv
Is episode 6 coming yet
wish you finished this
Make episode 6
5 years and still waiting for the climax of this series
lol. someday I might find the motivation to finish this.
Spralwers dude please do it!!
Still waiting for the rest of the story bro
Any update regarding the next part? It's been a year man!!
I won't be working it on it for a long time. I haven't had the interest to keep it going amidst other stuff going on in my life.
That's such a shame, old friend. I've re-watched your videos many times over the years. I'm simply in love with the storyline you chose. I do hope you will be able to continue it soon. It's a long, lost feeling to not have more of what you can do around. One of these days, I hope you can catch up with me. I'm not sure if you remember, but back before RUclips and Google were unified, using my previous account, I'd messaged with you and discussed many details about your series with you. I questioned many things, you spoiled some epic plot points, you told me what Lord Icer's true power was, and I suggested that maybe you get the four Saiyans and a resurrected King Vegeta together as a way to create the Super Saiyan God, to find a way to defeat the worst of the Buus and who else Icer has up his sleeve. I also suggested that the Saiyan God could, perhaps, be a different being like Yamoshi of ancient history who everyone banned together to defeat and seal, and that had something to do with the Ancient Namekians. Frankly, I've missed you, and I hope you get back to me soon. After all these years, you're one of my favorite people I've met through the net. Peace, brother.
when this gonna come back? xd
It won't, the best creator's never finish sadly.
Hope you been good man!
Thanks! Trying to keep sane during these times. Hope you've been good as well
Had no idea you replied man 2 years later lol. I hope you’re still staying sane as am I. Life crazy bro. One day I hope you can continue this story, discovering this fanfic series as a kid/teenager really helped shaped my childhood. Keep safe homie.
would be cool if u had finished this
Perhaps one day he will, bud... We should all hope for it.
Is part two still coming?
Not for a long time I'm afraid. I haven't had the interest to keep it going amidst other stuff going on in my life.
+Spralwers dang. Sucks to hear. I wish the best for you and you life.
Still waiting on the next episode
Unfortunately, it's not coming until I find better ideas worth executing
That's such a shame, my old friend. Your ideas have always been so creative and amazing to me. It's utterly shocking to see you, of all people, be without ideas. I've re-watched your videos many times over the years. I'm simply in love with the storyline you chose. I do hope you will be able to continue it soon. It's a long, lost feeling to not have more of what you can do around. One of these days, I hope you can catch up with me. I'm not sure if you remember, but back before RUclips and Google were unified, using my previous account, I'd messaged with you and discussed many details about your series with you. I questioned many things, you spoiled some epic plot points, you told me what Lord Icer's true power was, and I suggested that maybe you get the four Saiyans and a resurrected King Vegeta together as a way to create the Super Saiyan God, to find a way to defeat the worst of the Buus and who else Icer has up his sleeve. I also suggested that the Saiyan God could, perhaps, be a different being like Yamoshi of ancient history who everyone banned together to defeat and seal, and that had something to do with the Ancient Namekians. Frankly, I've missed you, and I hope you get back to me soon. After all these years, you're one of my favorite people I've met through the net. Peace, brother.
Spawlers, do you play Dragon Ball Raging Blast 2 by any chance
+carvin7CHANNEL I used to, not anymore.
+Spralwers hey man is there gonna be anymore dbax or fop??
there will be, just not for a while. around a year. focused on getting good at competitive super smash bros at the moment
Hey man! Long time no see if you ever need any help with your fop series I'd love to help i know it would probably help since you seem to like taking time off but i would love to throw in some help if you need it!
its been 4-5 years since ive even bothered to see one of these where do i start. i kinda bailed on my own due to casting issues and just not finding any interest in it anymore however onto my review. Your editing is quicker passed now which is nice to see however it is rather choppy especially with those mod edits. The music didn't seem to fit at times like didn't feel necessary for it to be there but when it counted like in the fight scenes it was fine. There were a few grammar errors I noticed for one thing. It also seems like you ended up having your characters talk like their in some sort of rpg game or something like tanking endurance etc. That personally seemed odd instead where you started which was fighting style and in some cases the draw backs of those fighting styles. It just seemed very rpg like in how they were talking. I saw you tried to keep turles in character with his princess jokes but to me Vegeta wasn't inspiring his usual supremacist cocky attitude he normally showed. Another thing where we have Bardock who is normally a rather bitter character tease the others in this manner I'm not sure if it was ooc but it still sounded odd.
Overall I will say you need to shape up your plot a little and characterisations to be a bit more in character. Editing needs to be less choppy but I would still say rather decent for what this is
+Simgr101 This is amazing feedback. thank you so much. Especially with the "rpg" speak.
Spralwers no problem my man
mmm not what i expected..
"hype" "clutching"
Too much Project M, I see...
Did you end up going to Apex? I would have loved to meet you there.
Caught me red handed!
Nope. Not this year. I'm not sure the next national I'll head to. Maybe Shots Fired but the $30 venue is a bit off putting.
Spralwers*
Long live Budokai Tenkaichi 3
rip
Fuck please make 1 quick!
There's only so many times I can read "and just when all hope was lost" and other repeated text before I shut off the video. Work on the storytelling. A lot. You'll need to if you want this to be anything but what something some edgy kid on deviant-art would think up. Also, the meme shit needs to leave.
I flat out repeated several pieces of the text on purpose, but I do understand your overall concerns. Thanks for the criticism - I'll keep all that in mind when I'm working on the next parts!
Why would you do that on purpose? If you were doing it to be humorous, you telegraphed it extremely poorly and I only caught wind that it might be a joke instead of bad writing on the last one and I was still convinced it was poor writing.
Not necessarily to be humorous, but just to show just how consistently the cycle kept repeating itself. Yeah I was probably too far into my own head when I was writing that, there are better ways I could've communicated the same message.
Gimfigle496 You know his been doing this a lot longer than you think. This isn't his first time.
CEV256 Experience does not dictate skill.