[Blue Archive] Kiryuu Kikyou Relationship Story 1 (ENG Sub)

First time doing something like this.
1:02 should be "we have to use any means necessary." instead of "we have to do whatever it takes."
for consistency (This is my fault for not realizing this sooner).
The translation might still be rough, and still having some flaws as i have a difficult time finding the right contexts, meanings and proper grammar (even with helps from my friends).
Momotalk section was edited from scratch, because I forgot to record the momotalk when I read her story on my account, leading to unable to extract the entire animation and sensei's quotes. Of course, with the power of editing, this issue is no longer a concern thing.
TL: MoonLightOri
(Correcting translation: farios and CAD)
Typeset & Edit: MoonLightOri
Game: Blue Archive
I will continue doing fan translation until the last Kikyou relationship story. Any help for correcting the translation would be appreciated.
桐生キキョウ
#bluearchive #ブルアカ #ブルーアーカイブ

[@MoonLightOri]

The next episode is now out:
ruclips.net/video/f0ACsvzBoSs/видео.html
1:02 should be "we have to use any means necessary." instead of "we have to do whatever it takes." for consistency (This is my fault for not realizing this sooner).

[@Kindi001]

finally now i can know the context of the need possesion cat Kikkyou vs Kazusa Cat

[@dimasnaufaltangahu1457]

Majima-Sensei: Finally, i can go out with your daughter, Kiryuu-chan~.
Kiryuu Kazuma: You better watch yourself! I'll beat you up if you do anything weird to my daughter, Majima-Sensei!

[@McCaroni_Sup]

Meanwhile Haruka and Haruka...

[@McCaroni_Sup]

Meanwhile Haruka and Haruka...

[@Hanzs_74]

Thank you for the translation, looking forward to the rest.

[@dr.doctor4878]

Sensei rizz is so strong that he charmed her in their first meeting. I could never😭

[@Arrinura-A]

I love the effort you put on the editing. I'm not the best at giving feedback but here's what I have in mind.
0:04 and 1:17 - Remember to capitalize "I".
3:17 - I feel like since she's speaking to Sensei directly, it's better to go with "You don't need to worry about it." instead of referring Sensei in third person.
6:28 - "Besides" instead of "beside", and no need for capitalizing after the ellipsis unless the sentence starts with an ellipsis. I also recommend adding a space after it.
7:08 - “loss for words” instead of “loss of words”.
Apologies if these sound nitpicky but for how good this is, the minor improvements can help make this look a lot more professional. Anyways, thank you so much for the translation and please take your time!

[@MoonLightOri]

Thank for your comment.
Of course, there are some flaw on my translation, most because i didn't have much time to check the errors before doing the editing.
But i will make sure the next ep and after won't have these apparent flaws anymore. (That if, i have time)

[@soulbrax1732]

Good Job, Ori 👍

[@brightside2210]

From teacher to handyman😂

[@RaqueteQuizumba]

hey man what the hell is this
we need the rest ASAP

[@MoonLightOri]

For the past few days I've been quite a bit busy with College, but I can finally continue to work on Story 2 on tomorrow. So hopefully the video will be delivered before Thursday.
Update: Delayed up to Friday because I have to deal with Kaiten Great Raid in Global.

[@ShayYuichi]

Do you plan to do Renge and Yukari's as well?

[@MoonLightOri]

I can't do them atm since I don't have them in my JP account.
Already thinking of taking a break after done Kikyou Story 4 so I guess no for me.

[@ShayYuichi]

@@MoonLightOri understandable