They never said they were beaten the humans probably won but just left the galaxy because they definitely suffered high casualties and needed time to regrow their forces
Suspect just about the entire body of work of this and the plethora of similar channels is entirely AI generated. They all follow the same nearly identical theme and look the same across the many channels.
This was a fun vid, i didnt expect Bradon Sandersen Level of writing, just a fun read, and this was fun. Please continue this story, you cant get better if you dont keep writing!
2:43 So after 40,000 years in the middle of ruins, the battery of the holographic pad was still working... Seriously? In comparison, 40,000 years ago we were in the Upper Paleolithic, we were living in a cave, we were Cro-Magnon...
I would just like to add something of a counterpoint or extension to this. For about 99.99999% of the time humans have existed, we had a single tool (a hammer stone). But once you get to the point where we have a second tool (basically what would become scrapers), the rate at which we develop new tools (and improve old ones) increases exponentially. A rate that has only ever increased. Almost every single tool ever developed (or improved), has been done so within living memory. Now, I might have missed it if there was a starting date stated. All I heard was that this is 40k years after the destruction of Earth, nothing about how far in the future that destruction is from where we are now. So there is an untold level of technological change, likely advancement given what is said about the power of Humanity, between now and whenever that destruction is supposed to occur. Also it seems like the place where they found that pad could have been from even later than the destruction of Earth and thus has the possibility of being even more advanced (though this is likely pushing it). edit: I doubt I need to say it but... If humanity was the bane of the galaxy or something to that effect, that would require a ludicrous amount of advancements over what we have today, beyond ludicrous. We went from the first powered flight to the first person walking on another world within the lifetime of a single person. Less than 65 years. Who knows what we will come up with in hundreds or thousands or even tens of thousands of yeas.
@@whyjnot420 Very good points. To truly have a Galactic Empire one almost certainly needs FTL technology for one thing and that is so far away that our leading theorists doubt it is even possible and the few who see possibilities in some of our nascent 'warp' technologies (most scientists see guys like Harold White as on the edge between science and pseudoscience) still speak of hundreds if not thousands of years of development being needed. And that's just one technology that would be needed as presumably many, possibly most races we'd encounter would have FTL too. Basically we'd have to probably be, a minimum a Kardashev type 3 civilization fighting a coalition of type 2 pluses.
@@remo27 You know, a fun (read: will drive you insane) answer to that problem (ftl) in the form of ignoring it is something that gets toyed with on occasions but I have only seen really get utilized well on a couple of occasions. The reason for why it isn't used well all that often is obvious as soon as the basic concept is uttered... the dreaded connected-alternate/multiverse idea. One of the major benefits I hardly ever see used, is using something like a combo of a multiverse + portals/teleportation. No travel since you are really in the same place, just a different universe/reality/whatever. I wonder how many writers (or attempted writers) have been slowly driven insane trying to get that kind of idea consistent with its whatever logic they had developed. As ZZ Top famously stated: I wouldn't touch it with a ten foot pole.
It's possible and plausable at the same time, i mean any civilization advanced enough could certainly make a perpetual energy cell/battery tbat never runs out of juice no matter how many mellenia it passes as long it's intact an in a working condition as long they have created a certain advanced sturdy alloy that doesn't degrade over time for its shell and an advanced material needed to store and generate energy. There are various sci-fi civilizations from books, films, and series that had the capability of these magnitude.
Ok so yeah, it's disjointed as hell and the plot holes are massive but it's only because the emperor wanted vengence for taking the 40k idea and declared exterminatus on the story itself.....the story did not have plot armor in a weird sense of irony.
Hot knife through butter was a bad analogy. It should have been some reference to something about how precise the human fleet was. Also, not really sure about the human fleet if Dante is the last of the humans. Lots more expository needed to prove that humans had evolved their ability of warfare to take down the Zithani.
Hot knife through butter? How would aliens know what butter is....... Dear God it all makes sense. Aliens didn't come to Earth just to steel our cows, The SOB's were after our butter. "0_o"
@the critics, i love sci-fi as much as u but really this a light short story (for free on youtube) I found this channel just a week ago and there are strong ones and funny ones and all of them made me listen to them till end.... Im just grateful in times of all that failure BS from Star Wars and Marvel to at least listen to good stories. And this story right here would have made a better script like the most mainstream movies. so yeah! i love it!!!^^ and i dont know why 88... just sayin as a german i hope it has a differnt meaning XD
I think it's time for your AI to pick up a book on words and how they are to be used and what their definitions are because if this was written by a human English-speaking writer they need to get out of the business. Come on you guys can do better than this!!
Man. Disjointed is right. A pleasant idea for a story, to be sure, but seriously in need of editing AND rewriting. It kind of reads like it was originally written with a human protagonist, then every instance of the word "human" was replaced with the name of an alien species. Hah, it actually reads like a poor quality AI job.
AI, you can tell by the repeated story lines, some word for word from well written stories and disjointed nature with the falling off of major characters and plot ideas.
It's a good story. Humans to the rescue. A few intuitive leaps were necessary. I don't like it all laid out neatly. It takes all the fun out of it. Thank you.
Some of these AI generated stories are decent. BUT this one is total crapola. It’s just a part of a story with no real ending. The Krel are worried about the humans returning and taking back their empire, but then rejoice when the humans return. The pirates don’t act like pirates at all. And naming the two biggest protagonists Zorgon and Zargan… well thats just bad story telling. And all in the name of just generating buttloads of crap stories to put on youtube for monetizations. Def not recommended.
Like all the missing parts that would explain what happened to the pirates, how Zarkon apparantly talked to Zarkon, and the "rocked by another blast" comments when the story jumps from dialog into the middle of a battle scene with no context?
Seriously disjointed. the humans would be the last thing needing discovered. WHATEVER beat them 40K years ago is the REAL menace.
They never said they were beaten the humans probably won but just left the galaxy because they definitely suffered high casualties and needed time to regrow their forces
Also what if what ever fought them before might have been multiple species forming an alliance to take on the humans
40,000 years...
FOR THE EMPEROR!
Zarkon.. AGAIN !!! Some serious Imagination on display here.
It's AI generated, so no true imagination at all
More plot holes than pot holes on a neglected ally in Portland Oregon.
Send this one back to the author.
Agreed.
That's a lot of holes!
LIke what? List them or you're just mad that an AI is telling you the story
@@Dave_of_Mordor Let me guess...you are in your teens.
@@lomotil3370 guess i hit the nail on the head with this one
Aliens, never have seen a human. “Wild goose chase”, “ knife through butter”. Oh?
Another great story!
this feels like it was written by an AI
Suspect just about the entire body of work of this and the plethora of similar channels is entirely AI generated. They all follow the same nearly identical theme and look the same across the many channels.
This does have a level that seems shallow and some others also.
This was a fun vid, i didnt expect Bradon Sandersen Level of writing, just a fun read, and this was fun. Please continue this story, you cant get better if you dont keep writing!
2:43 So after 40,000 years in the middle of ruins, the battery of the holographic pad was still working... Seriously?
In comparison, 40,000 years ago we were in the Upper Paleolithic, we were living in a cave, we were Cro-Magnon...
I would just like to add something of a counterpoint or extension to this. For about 99.99999% of the time humans have existed, we had a single tool (a hammer stone). But once you get to the point where we have a second tool (basically what would become scrapers), the rate at which we develop new tools (and improve old ones) increases exponentially. A rate that has only ever increased. Almost every single tool ever developed (or improved), has been done so within living memory.
Now, I might have missed it if there was a starting date stated. All I heard was that this is 40k years after the destruction of Earth, nothing about how far in the future that destruction is from where we are now. So there is an untold level of technological change, likely advancement given what is said about the power of Humanity, between now and whenever that destruction is supposed to occur. Also it seems like the place where they found that pad could have been from even later than the destruction of Earth and thus has the possibility of being even more advanced (though this is likely pushing it).
edit: I doubt I need to say it but... If humanity was the bane of the galaxy or something to that effect, that would require a ludicrous amount of advancements over what we have today, beyond ludicrous. We went from the first powered flight to the first person walking on another world within the lifetime of a single person. Less than 65 years. Who knows what we will come up with in hundreds or thousands or even tens of thousands of yeas.
@@whyjnot420 Very good points. To truly have a Galactic Empire one almost certainly needs FTL technology for one thing and that is so far away that our leading theorists doubt it is even possible and the few who see possibilities in some of our nascent 'warp' technologies (most scientists see guys like Harold White as on the edge between science and pseudoscience) still speak of hundreds if not thousands of years of development being needed. And that's just one technology that would be needed as presumably many, possibly most races we'd encounter would have FTL too. Basically we'd have to probably be, a minimum a Kardashev type 3 civilization fighting a coalition of type 2 pluses.
@@remo27 You know, a fun (read: will drive you insane) answer to that problem (ftl) in the form of ignoring it is something that gets toyed with on occasions but I have only seen really get utilized well on a couple of occasions. The reason for why it isn't used well all that often is obvious as soon as the basic concept is uttered... the dreaded connected-alternate/multiverse idea.
One of the major benefits I hardly ever see used, is using something like a combo of a multiverse + portals/teleportation. No travel since you are really in the same place, just a different universe/reality/whatever.
I wonder how many writers (or attempted writers) have been slowly driven insane trying to get that kind of idea consistent with its whatever logic they had developed.
As ZZ Top famously stated: I wouldn't touch it with a ten foot pole.
It's possible and plausable at the same time, i mean any civilization advanced enough could certainly make a perpetual energy cell/battery tbat never runs out of juice no matter how many mellenia it passes as long it's intact an in a working condition as long they have created a certain advanced sturdy alloy that doesn't degrade over time for its shell and an advanced material needed to store and generate energy. There are various sci-fi civilizations from books, films, and series that had the capability of these magnitude.
Ok so yeah, it's disjointed as hell and the plot holes are massive but it's only because the emperor wanted vengence for taking the 40k idea and declared exterminatus on the story itself.....the story did not have plot armor in a weird sense of irony.
I think I've finally had it with this channel.
"Like a hot knife through butter" I think I've heard that phrase a half dozen times already listening to these stories.
Hot knife through butter was a bad analogy. It should have been some reference to something about how precise the human fleet was. Also, not really sure about the human fleet if Dante is the last of the humans. Lots more expository needed to prove that humans had evolved their ability of warfare to take down the Zithani.
I like the thumbnail....that's about it.
Zarkon? Gimme a break
Hot knife through butter? How would aliens know what butter is....... Dear God it all makes sense.
Aliens didn't come to Earth just to steel our cows,
The SOB's were after our butter. "0_o"
This changes everything. Quick, get out the margarine! It's our only chance.
Sci-fi fans are brutal critiques.
Just keep writing ✍️
For the God Emperor!!
Zarkon? Are we forming Voltron in this one?
roboute guilliman is that you?
All of a sudden being shot at, no pirates?
Your story has more holes than my mother's swiss cheese!!!
O great,APPLE IPhone survived!
Inconsistencies and more Inconsistencies. Where's the Human Editing?
Man doing the helldiver emotes with a army, of helldivers behind him.
Zarkon......the Galaxys worst leader.
Zarkon, hearing this insult, slammed his scaly fist into the nearby console, which crumpled under the blow...
Got me with the 40k but had to stop listening
The Subtitles are going faster then the voice :P Around 10 minutes or so
cool hfy👍
How about 89❓☺️
#HUMANITYFIRST
88 trilion humens are gonna do a diffends.
Can we get a part 2 of this
Dude, there are so many holes in this story. Who's the idiot writer?
Ai of course and this guy is too lazy to autocorrect .
Would have been better if it weren't so disjointed 😢
Looks like the Emperor's plan failed in this story (props to anyone who gets the reference).
@the critics, i love sci-fi as much as u but really this a light short story (for free on youtube) I found this channel just a week ago and there are strong ones and funny ones and all of them made me listen to them till end.... Im just grateful in times of all that failure BS from Star Wars and Marvel to at least listen to good stories. And this story right here would have made a better script like the most mainstream movies. so yeah! i love it!!!^^
and i dont know why 88... just sayin as a german i hope it has a differnt meaning XD
14 times I agree.
Oh look ... In the last 30 secs the author makes a pro-Nazi plug to the audience (88).
Clickbait title.
Dang another non hfy story.
88 Great stories love them
I think it's time for your AI to pick up a book on words and how they are to be used and what their definitions are because if this was written by a human English-speaking writer they need to get out of the business. Come on you guys can do better than this!!
Man. Disjointed is right. A pleasant idea for a story, to be sure, but seriously in need of editing AND rewriting. It kind of reads like it was originally written with a human protagonist, then every instance of the word "human" was replaced with the name of an alien species.
Hah, it actually reads like a poor quality AI job.
How who is this
Anyone know where the image is from? It is very cool.
AI Generated I think but I don't know the source
👍 👍
What a Mess! Disjointed! Plot HOLES you could lose a star ship in!! More and more AI CRAP.
Yup.
Never mind a starship, you drive a space fleet through some of those holes.
Wow this was hot garbage..
No plot continuity.
Was this written by a child? Or worse, an AI?
AI, you can tell by the repeated story lines, some word for word from well written stories and disjointed nature with the falling off of major characters and plot ideas.
The story just doesn't make any sense at all.
Seems like some bad editing
Actually it is just proof of what happens when you trust AI with anything.
Keep writing these short stories I like them
This was AI written, stolen names, ideas, and whole sentences from actual good stories.
It's a good story. Humans to the rescue. A few intuitive leaps were necessary. I don't like it all laid out neatly. It takes all the fun out of it. Thank you.
Not sure about "fly through space".
Don't insult yourself with this A.I generated trash.
Nope, written by a 9 year old
Well this story has no coherence whatsoever ai at its worst
Some of these AI generated stories are decent. BUT this one is total crapola. It’s just a part of a story with no real ending. The Krel are worried about the humans returning and taking back their empire, but then rejoice when the humans return. The pirates don’t act like pirates at all. And naming the two biggest protagonists Zorgon and Zargan… well thats just bad story telling. And all in the name of just generating buttloads of crap stories to put on youtube for monetizations. Def not recommended.
That was some poorly written rubbish.
Great story as usual 88
AT8
88 nailed it
AI art has less than no value.
Somewhat disjointed.Obviously it was not proofread.
Shit
88. I want more of this story!!!
Like all the missing parts that would explain what happened to the pirates, how Zarkon apparantly talked to Zarkon, and the "rocked by another blast" comments when the story jumps from dialog into the middle of a battle scene with no context?
@@theutilizer AI story taking bits from a dozen stories written by humans and mashing them together, AI narrator. It's garbage Front to back.
Your story's are disjointed and they suck ! And that going in reverse sucks to !
trash
LOL This is terrible.
i wrote better as a 10 year old
What a waste of time.
What a wonderful story. Eighty-eight (88)