''I Became Immortal but not of Free Will'' | VERY BEST OF DR CREEPEN’S VAULT 2019 [EXCLUSIVE STORY]

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  • Опубликовано: 24 мар 2019
  • Today’s wonderful story is ‘I Became Immortal, but Not of Free Will’, an original work by Divine Demon 0, kindly shared directly with me for the express purpose of having me exclusively narrate it here for you all.
    www.r-ddit.com/user/divinedemon0
    Background music by me (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
    / dr-creepen
    / dr-creepen-vol-2
    Other music used is credited to the wonderful The Dark Somnium (intro) and the fantastic Tanner Stokes (end credits). The music is used here with their express permission.
    Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
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Комментарии • 878

  • @CaseyGray58
    @CaseyGray58 5 лет назад +212

    This was easily one of the best stories I’ve ever heard. I will legitimately pay someone to make a book out of this. I was so engulfed in your narration Doc, perfection.

    • @kari7403
      @kari7403 5 лет назад +6

      I'd happily pitch in for a book. This is something uniquely different and new.

    • @olollolo9474
      @olollolo9474 5 лет назад +3

      Me three

    • @joshuacunningham1192
      @joshuacunningham1192 5 лет назад +1

      The movie Legion is pretty similar and I assume the movie is probably based on a book or comic.

    • @dragonwolfsilver
      @dragonwolfsilver 4 года назад +2

      If a patreon is ever made for this right here, a link would be appreciated. As i would happily pay for it.

    • @dankone3
      @dankone3 2 года назад +2

      @@kari7403 what are you willing to put out?
      I mean how much? I’m down to write a book for you if you put out - I mean pay out!

  • @DrCreepen
    @DrCreepen  5 лет назад +343

    Hi everyone. sorry I can't stay around for when this goes live, but it's midnight here in Istanbul and I have to get up for work tomorrow!

    • @noahholliday9761
      @noahholliday9761 5 лет назад +7

      Pleasant dreams in Istanbul! It's only 5pm here on the east coast of the U.S. but I'm ready to hit the sack myself!

    • @MadameRaven1
      @MadameRaven1 5 лет назад +4

      Sleep tight! 😉

    • @robynewilliams-heller1816
      @robynewilliams-heller1816 5 лет назад +3

      💋Surreal Dreams My Good Doctor.

    • @officersully2740
      @officersully2740 5 лет назад +2

      Thank you for the videos... You really help me and my wife

    • @spookysworld
      @spookysworld 5 лет назад +4

      That was a fantastic story. I truly enjoyed it. Thank you. Have a great night.

  • @werewally3156
    @werewally3156 5 лет назад +403

    Dude this one was great! Needs to become a series. Totally.

    • @scarecrowa.k.a.syxx_fawx
      @scarecrowa.k.a.syxx_fawx 5 лет назад +21

      I second that!

    • @missinnissin291
      @missinnissin291 5 лет назад +15

      Third

    • @sirderp1109
      @sirderp1109 5 лет назад +9

      Fourth

    • @s0hlless
      @s0hlless 5 лет назад +12

      idk because he will just be killing normal bad guys. i dont think he should have killed lucifer so easily. they could have used killing lucifer as a multi part series. then have the MC on the run because angels in heaven coming to kill him because he is getting too strong and could potentially rival gods power. then bring back titans, other gods, and other monsters. so basically it becomes the show supernatural except he would have powers unlike the winchesters since they are just regular humans. but even then he already killed lucifer so who could actually go toe to toe with him.

    • @thecookinestkid401
      @thecookinestkid401 5 лет назад +2

      @@s0hlless YEAH!

  • @GeoCreepypasta
    @GeoCreepypasta 5 лет назад +39

    What the... Listening to this story forced my mind to imagine everything like some kind of movie with superb special effects :) Great story!

    • @Duke549
      @Duke549 Год назад

      For real!!

    • @mendagy
      @mendagy 11 месяцев назад

      That's what storytelling is all about! If your audience is in the thick of things, just hanging on your every word, then you're doing an awesome job!!!❤

  • @ForeverKnight666
    @ForeverKnight666 5 лет назад +270

    can there be more STORES like this I really like them

    • @thecookinestkid401
      @thecookinestkid401 5 лет назад +6

      There is one: it's called the Maximum Ride series by James Patterson! XDDDD
      No seriously, read those books. They're great and should have been movies or a series a long time ago.

    • @dumbass3427
      @dumbass3427 5 лет назад +5

      Of course you wear a Fedora

    • @chantielanderson4103
      @chantielanderson4103 5 лет назад +4

      I've never found a *store* like this before 😂🤣bwahahahahaha

    • @PandaIC
      @PandaIC 5 лет назад +2

      The Cookinest Kid there is a maximum ride movie it sucks tho and everything is wrong

    • @nohomo4168
      @nohomo4168 5 лет назад +2

      Jay Smith my name is Jayden Smith this is low key scary

  • @robertyoung1317
    @robertyoung1317 5 лет назад +15

    Absolutely astounding birth of an angel story Doctor.

  • @Zed-Corps
    @Zed-Corps 5 лет назад +130

    There needs to be a part 2

    • @prodshoruda
      @prodshoruda 5 лет назад +3

      Zedrick Jaramillo i hear you! :)

    • @thecookinestkid401
      @thecookinestkid401 5 лет назад +7

      And part 3, part 4, part 5 (a few hours later) ...and a part 99 and part 100!

    • @BluePaw89
      @BluePaw89 5 лет назад +6

      i agree, i want more of this one!

    • @thecookinestkid401
      @thecookinestkid401 5 лет назад +12

      @@BluePaw89 Not just more, I want to see it in anime form!

    • @BluePaw89
      @BluePaw89 5 лет назад +4

      @@thecookinestkid401 OMG YES!

  • @rokibeeskiroodroki9018
    @rokibeeskiroodroki9018 5 лет назад +108

    Edgiest of edgefests right here

    • @fuckYTIDontWantToUseMyRealName
      @fuckYTIDontWantToUseMyRealName 5 лет назад +13

      I was about to say something similar. This is weeaboo fantasy spunk.

    • @KarlAndArma4ever
      @KarlAndArma4ever 5 лет назад +7

      Yup! Pure indulgent fantasy.

    • @radioseal37
      @radioseal37 3 года назад +3

      @@KarlAndArma4ever honestly i like stories like these, just people straight up enjoying themselves n what theyre writin

    • @KarlAndArma4ever
      @KarlAndArma4ever 3 года назад +3

      @@radioseal37 Nothing wrong with that! Indulgent fantasies are an enduring writing convention for a reason. It's just this particular style got a bit uh...not frustrating, but it stopped holding me after a little while.

    • @isaivilchis5921
      @isaivilchis5921 3 года назад +3

      Yeah, I didn't want to say anything cuz I don't like being a party pupr but its quite cringy... the premise was interesting though. Best wishes to the author

  • @negisohma
    @negisohma 5 лет назад +12

    Wow, I write about Angel's and demons, I'd love more of these. I had to back the video up several times to relisten to parts of it. Thank you for sharing this with us!

  • @mapuche2262
    @mapuche2262 5 лет назад +29

    What a Gary Stu the main character was lol.

    • @ADarnSmore
      @ADarnSmore 4 года назад +5

      yeah sounds like this was written by a 12 year old

    • @cdevil9488
      @cdevil9488 3 года назад +2

      That's "Marty Stu."

  • @RobCrowley85
    @RobCrowley85 5 лет назад +6

    His angel name should have been Gorgonzola or Pepper Jack, given the cheese factor.

    • @gerardmourits8709
      @gerardmourits8709 5 лет назад +4

      Definitely stilton.
      The king of all cheeses

    • @RobCrowley85
      @RobCrowley85 5 лет назад +4

      @@gerardmourits8709 Lord of Stiltonia, the Cheesemaster General 😛

  • @wyvern0m3g42
    @wyvern0m3g42 5 лет назад +5

    Gotta love those power fantasy stories where the main character's name is the same as yours. What an experience. lol

    • @loaknight8876
      @loaknight8876 4 года назад +2

      Yeah when daughter was little & I watched babylon 5 and ambassador delenn name would be said she'd run over and say mommy mommy I'm on tv lolz

    • @wyvern0m3g42
      @wyvern0m3g42 4 года назад +2

      @@loaknight8876 Aww, how cute. Reminds me of when I'd do something similar when I was little. Guess I never outgrew it.

  • @tiffanybenefield1980
    @tiffanybenefield1980 5 лет назад +10

    Thank you Doctor Creepen for sharing 43:30 of your heavenly angelic musical voice today. Sorry I didn't make it to the premier, but was busy at the time. I hope you have a wonderful day and night.

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      Sending Love ❤️... Tiffany... Are you single ❤️😊🥰

  • @trainyourdog7351
    @trainyourdog7351 5 лет назад +4

    Its 4:30 here in hot ass Florida. And im ready doc!

  • @AgeraXXX
    @AgeraXXX 5 лет назад +62

    Woah I'm definitely listening to this tonight sounds super interesting

    • @DNTMEE
      @DNTMEE 4 года назад +1

      The shills for this stuff are so easy to spot.

  • @donky20032003
    @donky20032003 5 лет назад +11

    Absolutely loved this story wish there was more like this

  • @erichelliott1686
    @erichelliott1686 4 года назад +1

    This is definitely one of my favs well played mate

  • @lobstrocity5534
    @lobstrocity5534 5 лет назад +22

    Thank you Doc. You'll never know what you mean to my wife and I. You lull us to sleep nearly every night and take us away from the mundane. 🍻

  • @ladyfaeryj5108
    @ladyfaeryj5108 5 лет назад +16

    Sad that I missed the premiere, but FANTASTIC story! I really love the alternative religion stories!

  • @EE-sg4cu
    @EE-sg4cu 5 лет назад +23

    And i was going to hit the hay early for school tomorrow. My inevitable F is on you daddy creepen.

    • @AgeraXXX
      @AgeraXXX 5 лет назад +2

      Creepen = A's

  • @guysmiley5550
    @guysmiley5550 5 лет назад +17

    No problem doc.have a great night and get some rest we'll be here.another top notch video.Thank you sir.

  • @robynewilliams-heller1816
    @robynewilliams-heller1816 5 лет назад +7

    Perfect 👌 For a Rainy, Dreary
    New England's Evening.

  • @angelaricks5379
    @angelaricks5379 5 лет назад +43

    This story is very interesting and you did a fantastic job on it! Thank you very much.

  • @troylauga4512
    @troylauga4512 5 лет назад +9

    Ahh, just what the Dr. Ordered. I'll be waiting
    Thanks Doc.

  • @danielgoetz7821
    @danielgoetz7821 5 лет назад +6

    This one I saved into my favorite play list. You've really out done yourself.
    Great job and excellent story.

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 4 года назад +1

    Now that was AWESOME! I easily could’ve listened to another hour before he’d killed the devil. Love the Angel and demon stories, they can give hope. So well written and as always expertly narrated! Until next time Dr.....☠️

  • @Umbra_Ossamagi
    @Umbra_Ossamagi 5 лет назад +1

    OMG I love this story so much your narration made it all the better, one of my favorite narrators!

  • @Sethxz
    @Sethxz 5 лет назад +4

    This is a *fantastic* story. I could see this being the synopsis to one hell of a book series.

  • @luciuscreeps7494
    @luciuscreeps7494 5 лет назад +6

    Dude I don't know how I haven't heard of you before but big props. I listen to many different narrators and You by far are one of the best I've heard in awhile might be sticking around for a while

  • @shadowreaper6775
    @shadowreaper6775 5 лет назад +5

    I feel like this story could have been more enthralling with extra detail added to it, like using simile for the portal to heaven, and using more abstract and vivid description to describe heaven. It would have played better on the angel portion too if his perception changed when he started to get darker. With that being said it was still a great story

  • @acedianihil8208
    @acedianihil8208 5 лет назад +11

    Vampire the masquerade 2 is actually happening, you like this story, youll like that setting too

  • @cellard00r60
    @cellard00r60 5 лет назад +4

    Absolutely fantastic story and I sincerely hope the author will do a continuation. Your narration as always was perfection. You are my very favorite and I can't get enough. Thank you for your lovely work. Until next time, xoxo

  • @sissyblackwidowspider7529
    @sissyblackwidowspider7529 5 лет назад +7

    Thanks Doc. I had been asking you for A vampire story for a while. Thank you 💕👍PS best Vampire story ever!!!

  • @joshuaingram1441
    @joshuaingram1441 5 лет назад +18

    Amazing work and if you have any military paranormal videos please bust them out. Keep up the amazing work . I love listening on my way home everyday toand from work

  • @gerardmourits8709
    @gerardmourits8709 5 лет назад +66

    This is spawn movie levels of cheesy dialogue
    All the mc needs now is a big red flowing cape
    Then this pasta would be certified stilton

    • @austink-p1685
      @austink-p1685 5 лет назад +7

      Tho is more like a fanfic role playing as a creepypasta.

  • @waynepreston5637
    @waynepreston5637 5 лет назад +2

    Thank you Dr Creepen.

  • @invisibleiis536
    @invisibleiis536 5 лет назад +4

    DAMN!
    That’s an Uber awesome one I just loved it 👏🏽

  • @Ishmari
    @Ishmari 5 лет назад +1

    This was my favorite story so far!
    Keep up the good work Dr Creepen, your channel is one of my all time favorites!!

  • @juliehobbs665
    @juliehobbs665 2 года назад +1

    Excellent story! I would love to hear more from this author in this intriguing universe!

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      Sending Love ❤️... Julie, Are you single ❤️🥰😊

  • @osvaldoesquivel2859
    @osvaldoesquivel2859 5 лет назад +1

    This was a great tale. I wish it was true this place should be purified to make it a paradise here as well

  • @Outcast_Family
    @Outcast_Family 5 лет назад +1

    PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY

  • @stevewinstanley1233
    @stevewinstanley1233 5 лет назад

    Absolutely amazing!!! We need more of this.

  • @flirtishatennent1411
    @flirtishatennent1411 5 лет назад +2

    A bit speechless on that one, Doctor...😏

  • @leetatum5306
    @leetatum5306 5 лет назад +1

    Bloody brilliant mate!!!

  • @nevasoba5953
    @nevasoba5953 5 лет назад +4

    Another epic story narrated by Dr creepen Van pasta

  • @fyrwyrm5630
    @fyrwyrm5630 3 года назад

    Absolutely one of the best short stories. Enjoy everything you do.

  • @NoBody-zb3so
    @NoBody-zb3so 5 лет назад +7

    I rather enjoyed this whacked out story. Really enjoyed. I will probably listen to it a second time.

  • @johndalziel4226
    @johndalziel4226 5 лет назад +3

    Thank you again my friend brilliant stiry

  • @kathall6422
    @kathall6422 5 лет назад +1

    This was awesomesauce. Thanks 4 being and doing what u do 2 keep us entertained. Love sent from us from Lindsay, Ontario, Canada.

  • @tommyboy8745
    @tommyboy8745 5 лет назад +11

    Awesome story one of my instant favorites. I listened to it while driving home from work and sat in my driveway for like 10 minutes until it was over lol

  • @Danthehorse
    @Danthehorse 3 года назад

    I love the nature of heaven and hell type stories. It worked because the writer just went with the idea in a simple, focused way.

  • @Adam-118
    @Adam-118 5 лет назад +1

    Thank you. One of my favorites.

  • @zoomincomix9759
    @zoomincomix9759 5 лет назад

    I am so glad you are still posting.

  • @frontallobe3937
    @frontallobe3937 5 лет назад

    Yes!!! I've been Waiting on this today

  • @jamesytgaming5237
    @jamesytgaming5237 5 лет назад +4

    OMG! this is one of the most exciting stories ever.. I wish there will be more of this, a part 2, 3, 4 and so on. Thank you Dr creepen. You are the best. 😍 😍 😍

  • @biggzr4946
    @biggzr4946 4 года назад +1

    I kept waiting for you to say "DETECTIVE"🤣😂

  • @Gunsforall76
    @Gunsforall76 5 лет назад +2

    Wow! Great job on this story! Absolutely love your work! Keep up the magnificence!

  • @brianmitchell8477
    @brianmitchell8477 5 лет назад +1

    Fantastic sir!

  • @ultrpimp
    @ultrpimp 5 лет назад

    That was one of my favorite you have read so far!! Great job...thank you!

  • @drubrown311
    @drubrown311 5 лет назад

    Honestly this was probably one of my favorite ideas that I’ve listen to.

  • @MetelAdict
    @MetelAdict 5 лет назад

    I really appreciate that you are doing the longer stories. I get why the other horror readers don't, but it's still appreciated.

    • @guysmiley5550
      @guysmiley5550 5 лет назад +1

      Everyone knows that you can't top the Dr when it comes to story time! Even with short stories.👍👍🍸🍺

  • @KimchiYeo
    @KimchiYeo 5 лет назад +21

    Now this should be made into a series,amazing story.

  • @aprillong8325
    @aprillong8325 5 лет назад +2

    Wonderful story. Honestly 1of my favorites Iv ever heard on RUclips. Ur narration was awesome. 💜

  • @storm-luciolivier636
    @storm-luciolivier636 5 лет назад +2

    Awesome as per usual, thanks babe... xx

  • @LordBitememan
    @LordBitememan 5 лет назад +1

    Well that story was simply divine. ;)

  • @harshahall9774
    @harshahall9774 Год назад

    hats off to the writer and a standing ovation to the Doctor!

  • @alexskywalker5478
    @alexskywalker5478 5 лет назад

    This was amazing ahhh

  • @Ceresdeath
    @Ceresdeath 5 лет назад +11

    Omg 😍 ur story's are part of my nights enjoying my fav drink as I listen

  • @mikebarker2106
    @mikebarker2106 3 года назад +1

    That was one of the best pasta or story I have heard in a long time and you told it so well, keep it up

  • @dylanmorris7357
    @dylanmorris7357 5 лет назад +2

    Love listening to these premieres Doc.

  • @colorfulalchemy9764
    @colorfulalchemy9764 Год назад +1

    this story was amazing, insanely immersive and descriptive

  • @tnjrcfl1
    @tnjrcfl1 5 лет назад +1

    Good one Dr.... odd and interesting. Really liked it

  • @jasonmcclure711
    @jasonmcclure711 5 лет назад

    This is awesome!! I hope this becomes a series !

  • @1712Afterlife
    @1712Afterlife 5 лет назад

    Absolutely beautiful great story.

  • @Velthur74
    @Velthur74 10 месяцев назад

    That was just wonderful! Thank you

  • @jeremeygloyd2894
    @jeremeygloyd2894 5 лет назад

    Great story! Loved the twist at the end! Keep up the Amazing work my friend!

  • @joshadkins4120
    @joshadkins4120 5 лет назад +3

    It seems as if you were made for this one Doc. That was BRILLIANT!!
    TGIDC!!!! :D

  • @jackiealpeter4993
    @jackiealpeter4993 5 лет назад

    Sorry I missed the premiere. I hope to make it to on e where you are able to participate,time difference permitting. Unusual story; to me,it had the feel of a comic book superhero origin. (I'm a geek of long standing.) Thanks for giving it your usual elegant treatment,Doc. Lord willing, I will be here Wednesday ready and waiting to listen!

    • @nickadams1519
      @nickadams1519 Год назад

      Sending Love ❤️... Jackie, Are you single ❤️😊🥰

  • @makocapone6400
    @makocapone6400 5 лет назад

    AMAZING STORY!! Loved it

  • @Memnoch67
    @Memnoch67 5 лет назад

    Awesome story! Really liked this one.

  • @richardgmolina7682
    @richardgmolina7682 5 лет назад +1

    Great one WOW keep up the good work

  • @serialghost4972
    @serialghost4972 5 лет назад

    That was AMAZING!!!! Thoroughly THOROUGHLY ENJOYED THAT ! Awesome !!!!

  • @redsnow1973
    @redsnow1973 5 лет назад +3

    This would be a great tv show...love your stories!!! Keep it up!!!😍😍😍

  • @madamlt5758
    @madamlt5758 5 лет назад +3

    This story gave me goosebumps at times! It was really good! I love listening to all of the stories you read 👍

  • @trpppletrouble6357
    @trpppletrouble6357 5 лет назад

    ‘Call me Appolio’ Damn your narration fit the story amazingly doc💗

  • @dominick584
    @dominick584 5 лет назад +2

    that was amazing wow i loved that one i think its my favorite EVER im into religion so this was oh my god i cant get over it...

  • @keekeehawke2920
    @keekeehawke2920 5 лет назад

    Very enjoyable video of Michael. Thank you Doctor.

  • @theqgene826
    @theqgene826 5 лет назад

    The plot is amazing. Bravo!

  • @aholuthedistinguishedgentl929
    @aholuthedistinguishedgentl929 5 лет назад

    Oh hell yeah. I love these.

  • @reginaldweaver904
    @reginaldweaver904 5 лет назад

    Oh hell yes!!! Another incredible story.

  • @claymerpepwheeler7940
    @claymerpepwheeler7940 5 лет назад +1

    This is too good Dr

  • @xxJETSETxx
    @xxJETSETxx 5 лет назад +2

    Are we entirely sure this was "/r/Dr.Creepen's Vault" and not "/r/iamverybadass"? I can't remember reading Gary Stus of this level since I was in middle school. Lots of potential, here, but also, just... wow. It's like *every* 14 year old's first attempt at a dark chapter story.

  • @madreverbowski6104
    @madreverbowski6104 5 лет назад +9

    Hopefully; YOUR evening is as wonderful as you've made mine!😍👍😎💖 Dream well; Doctor!😌... Longest- most anticipated 19 mins of my life here , Doc!😬👀👀

  • @Brownvillarats
    @Brownvillarats 5 лет назад

    Wow...this was a good one! Thanks Doc!!!!

  • @TopNotch361
    @TopNotch361 5 лет назад +13

    “I Can’t Wait To Listen To This Am Exited”😁❤️❤️❤️

    • @omniXenderman
      @omniXenderman 5 лет назад +1

      This would have been better as a series but still great story

  • @robertlewis4244
    @robertlewis4244 5 лет назад

    This is the best story I've heard
    Wonderful narration 😀

  • @evergreenfantasy3940
    @evergreenfantasy3940 5 лет назад +1

    EXTREMELY ENTERTAINING MORE LIKE THIS PLS😍

  • @williamfawkes8379
    @williamfawkes8379 5 лет назад +1

    Glorious story.

  • @Sam-pg9sr
    @Sam-pg9sr 5 лет назад +21

    I have a feeling that the MC is the author’s self insert mary stu.

  • @SoggSoggster
    @SoggSoggster 5 лет назад +1

    I love the voice, a mix between British and something I cannot put my finger on