I know there are some nit picking crits here, which are factually correct but they do not really detract from the enjoyable core story. This is supposed to be sci-fi after all!!
not to bad but need to work on spelling the main female characters name spelled the same instead of 3 or different spellings of the same name. Also where the heck did the black box come from. Fragmented. A bio company would not need some box or records they would simply take her apart and study her.
Another 'story' with a demented narration AI and moronic speech-to-subtitles algorithm. Use a human narrator instead. The use of those substandard computer 'aids' more displays the author's wish to conform to his/her percieved public norms. Most viewers would prefer a bare text to read instead of this ... F minus.
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Another story with the main character of Ethan
I know there are some nit picking crits here, which are factually correct but they do not really detract from the enjoyable core story. This is supposed to be sci-fi after all!!
Didn't understand the 'Black box' of her DNA, but a nice story.
not to bad but need to work on spelling the main female characters name spelled the same instead of 3 or different spellings of the same name. Also where the heck did the black box come from. Fragmented. A bio company would not need some box or records they would simply take her apart and study her.
Another 'story' with a demented narration AI and moronic speech-to-subtitles algorithm. Use a human narrator instead. The use of those substandard computer 'aids' more displays the author's wish to conform to his/her percieved public norms. Most viewers would prefer a bare text to read instead of this ...
F minus.