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Enjoying the story. I would appreciate it if you could take the time to check the spelling of the character’s names, Grimm should be grim, etc etc etc. Multiple spelling mistakes throughout the subtitles.

Not bad, but needed more romance peck on the cheeck doesn't cut it

Would have been better if the guy wasn't a whining douchecanoe

What happened to the rest of the story? It just getting really good and then puff, all done, lights go, time to go home...Where the heck is the rest of it? I want to know how it ends.

Stupid story, not worth your time.

is that a future of the world ? if it is ....thx no thx

is there a reason the picture does not even remotely (except of course the cold and snow) compare to the story?

A I makes a lousy story teller .

Sloppy! The typed verbiage does not match the audio.

Nice story. The narrating AI, however, is not worth its salt. Try using a human reader instead. The subtitles are also showing that some moronic speech-to-subtitles algorithm has been involved. Though the result fails to be positive. Suggestion: use the (thoroughly proff-read) text as source for the subtitles. And a human narrator. Then your uploads might earn a like.

Good story me likey

Ummm, just for old times sake, can we bring my ship to homeworld, give her some upgrades? Not that I'm planning to leave but I loved the old girl and I'm nostalgic about her... Finally subscribed.

There is no copyright on AI slop.

I know there are some nit picking crits here, which are factually correct but they do not really detract from the enjoyable core story. This is supposed to be sci-fi after all!!

NO , I got 4 minutes into this 2nd part of the story and it was like trying to run in quicksand , I am 70 Y.O. and have read better , poorly written comics that made more sense than this story does ! My life line is too short to waste on this crap !

Why didn’t LIAM grab the weapon from the fallen soldier as the guardian went after soldier #2 and help out the guardian , no , now he decides to run like a coward and rather than grab the child and throw her over his shoulder , no it’s easier to run and drag her through the jungle ! This writer needs to go back to school or at least reread the crap he has written !

The leopard comes back to save LIAM and rather than help the guardian or run 🏃‍♂️ for his life , this idiot wants a front row seat to the show , what a moron !

Every writer ABSOLUTELY NEEDS A PROOFREADER , to keep themselves from looking 👀 like an ABSOLUTE VALIDATED IDIOT !!!

AND THIS THUMBNAIL IS HUMM , A BALD ASS LIE ! SAYS THAT THE LEOPARD IS 6 FEET 🦶 TALL AT THE SHOULDER , BUT I ONLY SEE ABOUT 28 INCHES FROM BOTTOM OF FOOTPADS TO TIP OF SHOULDER , WHAT GIVES ?

This guy LIAM is just a little on the dense side , yes he acted fast to save the leopard , but he must have hit his head while in the water because he mind is slow as molasses at minus 60 degrees below zero ! Thankfully the leopard 🐆 thinks faster on its feet or the little girl 👧 would be a captive !!!

What the hell is all the dash crap ? I am hearing the word dash used in many of these stories without content or meaning

Lol, aliens meet SCP-XXXX

Risin' through the ranks. But is only a leutenant? The lowest level in the officers rank

We fight,we fight.. we FIGHT!!! For those who... Cannot. 😮😊

You can sniff the nature of these stories all too often. Not only are the plots all too similar, the construction is clearly from a template - rather like those endless sales pitches that launch so many dubious products, a reminder of the medicine men and their elixirs available at ridicuous prices. I've read too many of these things now, clearly helping to make money for someone. I'm not alone in my thoughts on this, there are others who see through it.

Is there more to this story, somewhere ?

A pox on 60s sci-fi shows for bringing the term "meteor showers" to TV, when in fact, there are no such things.

Good story, thanks for posting it. I really enjoyed the listen.

The storm troopers and tie fighter. Should have help.

Not a bad idea but seriously flawed - insert, gain intel and exit without detection - so no-one is going to notice their 'turrets' being being popped off?

I like this story❤

Tails and horns????..devil's and demons..this is the wrong place for humans..

Fair story, in desperate need of ruthless editing and proofreading. AI is still substandard. RB/IA Scale rating is 40/100 with an expectation that it could advance to over 50 / 100 with some oversight.

Good story thank you 😮😮😮😮❤

liked

😅leave her if she is that hateful.

@HFYLegends ....still haven't fixed the IA narrator

"Bond", "Bond", "Bond"..."Bo...oooring !!!"

Get the spelling sorted

I think this may need a serious rewrite---a little or rather quite disjointed, A good edit and checking would really help

This tale is fragmented and a hot mess as the writing flails with at least two, maybe 😬 three separate stories.!! None complete.!😣😖😵😳😲. Avoid this one like the PLAGUE my Sci-fi friends🤗👍😯😧😮😬🖖👽🖖

Uuummm...this video keeps switching between stories 😅

You don't need to go into the far futures or across the Galaxy to show kindness and mercy to "starving children." Just go to the streets of Manila, Mumbai, or Mexico city. There all around us, just open your eyes.

0.12 beautiful story, thank you.

Oh dear, a misleading title yet again.

"Every time you release a new video, I can't wait! The story at 4:00 was really impressive! 😲"

Great story thank you please send more, God bless you.😅😅😊😊😊😊❤

I like Ethen, he is real!

How many different ways can you spell Mizzix!!!!!!!! Come on AI, get your crap together, OR, maybe delegate a HUMAN to proofread the captions. The story is not too bad.

Great story thank you have a great day 😂😂😂😂😂😂❤❤