Alien Girl Fainted After Watching the Human Snap His Broken Bones Back into Place |HFY| Sci-Fi Story

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  • Опубликовано: 31 янв 2025

Комментарии • 2

  • @hansbehrmann8152
    @hansbehrmann8152 5 дней назад

    I think this may need a serious rewrite---a little or rather quite disjointed, A good edit and checking would really help

  • @oddquad2010
    @oddquad2010 5 дней назад +1

    This tale is fragmented and a hot mess as the writing flails with at least
    two, maybe 😬 three separate stories.!! None complete.!😣😖😵😳😲. Avoid this one like the PLAGUE my Sci-fi friends🤗👍😯😧😮😬🖖👽🖖