I feel you want to emphasize the specialty of your wine. But most of readers donot know the process to make wine. So i think, firstly it is more important to inform the method to make, the History of wine, career to win contest,and etc. I hope your effort making progress!
I feel you want to emphasize the specialty of your wine. But most of readers donot know the process to make wine. So i think, firstly it is more important to inform the method to make, the History of wine, career to win contest,and etc.
I hope your effort making progress!