I made a pokemon story but teachers forced us, when i was in year 3 (2nd grade) pokemon was pretty big so we did a whole topic on it, at the end we had to write our own pokemon story and it was about a professor retiring and wanted me to catch the legendary but first find the master ball which was in the center of kalos. Then had to defeat team flare (it was almost the same as the actual pokemon x game i dont wanna explain more)
I liked this story. I'm glad it's made instead of unmade. Maybe it wasn't the best, but it was a step to improvement. I would love to see it rewritten some day, with a conclusion of course!
I used to make warrior-cats based books when I was 8 and they were hilarious but really bad worded and I lost a few of them. I still have the first one and i'm planning to rewrite it soon 😅.
Oh damn, this video just reminded me of a terrible Pokémon fanfiction I was writing when I was in 4th-5th grade. It was titled “Pendrorgon” (a combination of Flygon and Scolipede’s Japanese names), and the main character was a shiny Flygon who’s one of those “rejected by society” type characters because of his appearance (a lot of the Pokémon he was around weren’t shiny and just typical Pokémon). He decides to travel to Serene Village (one of the hub locations in Pokémon Super Mystery Dungeon, which was the main inspiration for the plot of the story), and he meets a shiny Scolipede who he quickly becomes friends with. Later on they meet a shiny Grovyle whose companion is a Swirlix who butts heads with the shiny Scolipede. The catch is, though, is that in the story, the shiny Grovyle says the Swirlix is his ancestor (which makes NO sense because Grovyle and Swirlix are nowhere near related or in the same egg group), which is why he’s been stealing food to feed him. I also planned on giving the shiny Scolipede a tragic backstory where he lost his family when his home was burned down by a Volcarona, but I didn’t get too far into the story before I eventually deleted it as I didn’t have the motivation to continue working on it anymore. My writing skills have improved considerably since the last few years, though, so if the motivation strikes me, I might do a complete rewrite of Pendrorgon someday.
I actually had a weird old AJ story I made when I was 7 or 8 called "Phantomask". It was written badly and there were 2 Arctic wolves named Max and Scaredy as the main characters and the villain was a big phantom called "Gijant"- I still have the book-
I was never a story type person. I made a looooot of art but if you try to find some stories I made you'd probably never find them! But I actually found one I made in the 5th grade about me have Wanda's powers from the Avengers. (cringe mode on)
I found a story I wrote years ago on red and purple construction paper…. It starred my plushies and Kung Fu Panda. Younger Pommy had issues. Current has possibly even more.
*inspiration intensifies* Also I made a comic book series back in 2017 when I was beginning ajpw! It’s a sort-of weird horror (but not rlly) story called murder mystery and the main characters were ember (my main look ember cutefella at the time) and droplet (a vaporeon). I made a vid about it Anyways I planned on making a story based off a Pokémon ripoff I made called Creageos, so it might have some inspiration from this
reminds me of how i wrote a whole like.. 24 chapter warrior cats story in my phone memos app when i was 13 i had older stories, but they're lost to time currently (unless i eventually find the notepad they were written in)
I've made so many cringeworthy stories in the past. When I first start DeviantArt, I wrote a Warrior Cat story about my warrior oc, which I ended up deleting the story before I finished it. And on my RUclips channel, I made one of those slideshow Eevee love stories, which I also deleted. 😭
I remember doing stuff like this when I was like 8-9! It’s was about fnaf 😅 and ofc it was those fnaf love stories foxy x mangle. I still remember them and I’m planning on recreating it, it’s really amazing seeing your improvement 😁
In third grade I devoted my entire year to writing a "Minecraft Story Mode" fanfiction of just me and my friends (we were animals) just in the plot of Minecraft story mode. I still work on it a bit, it's super fun trying to replicate how my old friends used to act. I copied most of chapter one from the game, but after that I went WILD, absolutely insane. And the best part? Up until like- page twenty or so all I used was "she said" or "petra said", it's so cool seeing how fast my writing style evolved within a week.
I feel much more self-consious about all those times I joined random shipping wars and all of those weird (USUALLY VERY CRINGE) stories and fantasies that I wrote. Thankyou Leamon Puppy. Speaking of cringe stories, I think I'm going to go read some.... and think of cringing memes.
Okay I feel a lot better knowing that I’m not the only one that writes down what to say in a video, I mean I do for skits and things like that but I was skeptical on whether or not people wrote down what to say during a talking video 🤣 happy to know I’m not alone!
Did anyone else knewst to trade pokemon cards at school? I remember when it got banned and i was so devastated 🥲🤧 At the time i was so obsessed so it was sad XD
I made a few drafts for cringy warrior cats fanfics. Y'know, OP main character, a bunch of filler, edgy antagonist who has no reason to hate protagonist, etc... *But we don't talk about that.*
Shinx acts like Rainbow Dash. I love Rainbow Dash, not like that, d-d-don't think of it like that. Also Episode 2? Alolan Vulpix acts like Fluttershy. I like how you got both of Fluttershy's personalities Assertive Fluttershy and Regular Fluttershy.
Shinx is rainbow dash I assume. Vulpix is fluttershy. Mew is I guess thats twilight sparkle? Zorua is rarity but sassy I guess xD Chimchar is apple jack i guesSsS I was gonna say Maril was pinkie pie but then I saw “TUrNs EVil” and was like: No No nO also maril isn’t in the friendship members so I can’t say that anyways 😎
I lnow aj makes mostly irl animals. They sometimes do fictional. Like what if they do pokemon collab? I can see it but idk about Game Freak and Wildworks because they are two different companies in two different countries. But it would be really cool if they made pokemon into aj because I am dying for Glaceon and Scorbunny in there.
Low-key wanna see this get finished XD I love just really bad stories like this written by kids because they’re so predictable and the grammer is so bad it makes them really good
I made a Pokémon story and its still going on. Me and my friend helped me. I rily like it. I cant spell much so i never rote it. BUT i remember most of the story, but mine is original in all ways
I WAS KELDIO, AND I LIKED. I love keldio lol, mah fav Pokémon Edit: My fav Pokémon are KELDIO, Zourak, Flareon, Luxray, and glameow (Sorry for my spelling)
You write better than me tbh bc i always use only one trait with no conflict chance basically but there is a conflict chance. Turns evil is like the negative version , ok sorry im a fiction nerd i should stop translating o-o
This is good though , better than when i first started making stories at 9 years old and now im.dying bc i used to be way more dramatic and like so many death, betrayals, i cant- i just dont wanna remember what i did ;-;-; now lets pretend i didnt write this and nothing happened
It literally says for Umbreon: “but is mostly just *joking around fun to be around*” so he has to joke to be around them?! 🤣 I’m kidding but it’s funny
I’m 11-12 rn and I write stories , I’ve already written 6 full stories with about 10 paragraphs in each. No not copied or about something dumb or a diary it’s stories abt other stuff lol
At first i thought you just thought all 11 year olds are stupid and such. But when i clicked i was plesently surprised that you perpouesly said "me" when i was eleven. Bc not all ppl grow at the same time, someone can be 20 but have a mental age of a 15 year old and swapped! And im happy you didn't say something along the lines of "we all be kinda irrisponcibe at the age of 11". We need more poeple that knoew and are able to realise that age doesen't exactly/always guarentee a persons ideas, logic etc. And if you did i tbh i prob whrite a rage comment lol. Im not gonna act like im sone kind of grown up person bc im not even close! Anyways, I'll be looking up more of your vids and i rly found this one interesting! Keep it up
You know when you are 7, and you’re writing a story and you think it’s cool and totally nOT cringe, and in a few years... Cringe. edit: also I was watching the video and Leamon was talking about crashing into our city” and then an ad pops up 😂
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I made a pokemon story but teachers forced us, when i was in year 3 (2nd grade) pokemon was pretty big so we did a whole topic on it, at the end we had to write our own pokemon story and it was about a professor retiring and wanted me to catch the legendary but first find the master ball which was in the center of kalos. Then had to defeat team flare (it was almost the same as the actual pokemon x game i dont wanna explain more)
Console is discontinued. Tell me more I want to know about Pokemon x.
@@oiadepitan wait its discontinued?😳 also theres alot of playthroighs online, i dont actually remember much about the game
@@Scaryajpw Oh. Ok! I'll check some out. And yes the 3DS is discontinued. :(
I used to make my little pony comics when I was like 6, and I look back on them and uh...
yeah.
I liked this story. I'm glad it's made instead of unmade. Maybe it wasn't the best, but it was a step to improvement. I would love to see it rewritten some day, with a conclusion of course!
I have a friend of mine that’s currently trying to rewrite the story haha
@@LeamonPuppy is she almost done? It’s been 3 months and I know it takes a long time to make a book
@@LeamonPuppy and what app do you use to draw on
@@LeamonPuppy I can't believe somebody's still working on this. I almost want a PMD rom hack with this story
“Ever remember something…”
That homework for 3 years ago that I never did .-.
I used to make warrior-cats based books when I was 8 and they were hilarious but really bad worded and I lost a few of them. I still have the first one and i'm planning to rewrite it soon 😅.
I've read all the books up to the darkest hour (I didn't read dawn of the clans) I've made oc's but never a story/book
Warrior cats scare me
I'm still making books. I'm young and if I ever read them when I'm older I'm probably going to think they're cringe.
I haven't read most of the warrior cats books. But but I've read two of them! (Not in order)
You know warriors??
Oh damn, this video just reminded me of a terrible Pokémon fanfiction I was writing when I was in 4th-5th grade. It was titled “Pendrorgon” (a combination of Flygon and Scolipede’s Japanese names), and the main character was a shiny Flygon who’s one of those “rejected by society” type characters because of his appearance (a lot of the Pokémon he was around weren’t shiny and just typical Pokémon). He decides to travel to Serene Village (one of the hub locations in Pokémon Super Mystery Dungeon, which was the main inspiration for the plot of the story), and he meets a shiny Scolipede who he quickly becomes friends with. Later on they meet a shiny Grovyle whose companion is a Swirlix who butts heads with the shiny Scolipede. The catch is, though, is that in the story, the shiny Grovyle says the Swirlix is his ancestor (which makes NO sense because Grovyle and Swirlix are nowhere near related or in the same egg group), which is why he’s been stealing food to feed him. I also planned on giving the shiny Scolipede a tragic backstory where he lost his family when his home was burned down by a Volcarona, but I didn’t get too far into the story before I eventually deleted it as I didn’t have the motivation to continue working on it anymore. My writing skills have improved considerably since the last few years, though, so if the motivation strikes me, I might do a complete rewrite of Pendrorgon someday.
That's really interesting, much more interesting than my old stories XD. You were born to be an excellent storyteller and animator!
You’re actually not alone, I did a Pokémon story In 2016 or 15
That’s cool
I actually had a weird old AJ story I made when I was 7 or 8 called "Phantomask". It was written badly and there were 2 Arctic wolves named Max and Scaredy as the main characters and the villain was a big phantom called "Gijant"- I still have the book-
This story inspired me to make my own version of it call "Pokemon, The Power of Friendship". Thanks for the inspiration Leamon!
I was never a story type person. I made a looooot of art but if you try to find some stories I made you'd probably never find them! But I actually found one I made in the 5th grade about me have Wanda's powers from the Avengers. (cringe mode on)
Oh I wanna be a author lol- I don’t get people who have no interest, no offence, I’m just never gotten it or understood it,
I found a story I wrote years ago on red and purple construction paper….
It starred my plushies and Kung Fu Panda.
Younger Pommy had issues.
Current has possibly even more.
*inspiration intensifies*
Also I made a comic book series back in 2017 when I was beginning ajpw!
It’s a sort-of weird horror (but not rlly) story called murder mystery and the main characters were ember (my main look ember cutefella at the time) and droplet (a vaporeon).
I made a vid about it
Anyways I planned on making a story based off a Pokémon ripoff I made called Creageos, so it might have some inspiration from this
I wonder if I have a story I wrote somewhere... Like I mean- I found my old drawings (4-6 year old) and I cringed alot
Wow
Relatable
Let me say a line of one of my comics
“Oh she got a horble bad bad bad bad bruze.”
That’s exactly how I wrote it
@@moved768 perfect grammar!
@@Enchantedtinyfriend ikr 😅 💀
congrats on 11k!
and nice vid :p
reminds me of how i wrote a whole like.. 24 chapter warrior cats story in my phone memos app when i was 13
i had older stories, but they're lost to time currently (unless i eventually find the notepad they were written in)
TWENTY FOUR CHAPTERS?!?
@@omoriplush8363 i was dedicated
@@MintleafCakes Fair
The number of times leamon puppy says "um" is astonishing-
Love the video!
Literally just me whenever I’m unscripted 😅
@@LeamonPuppy same tho 👍
I've made so many cringeworthy stories in the past. When I first start DeviantArt, I wrote a Warrior Cat story about my warrior oc, which I ended up deleting the story before I finished it.
And on my RUclips channel, I made one of those slideshow Eevee love stories, which I also deleted. 😭
IM DYING I LOVE HOW YOU COMPARED IT Ö MY LITTLE PONY
OOOOHH SHIP 6:22
Me: (dramatic laughing)
Me also: gose on Pokémon go and has a mewtwo and a mew
Me again: (screams)
I quit pokemon bye bye 👋
Earlllyyyy :DDD, and I’m here rn cringing at the spelling bc I’m around 11 years (not saying exactly) and my spelling isn’t too bad- *WHEEZE*
Yeah I was terrible at grammar 😂
I remember doing stuff like this when I was like 8-9! It’s was about fnaf 😅 and ofc it was those fnaf love stories foxy x mangle. I still remember them and I’m planning on recreating it, it’s really amazing seeing your improvement 😁
I used to write comics in second grade. I'm gonna look in my bookshelf for some and maybe post it online, wish me luck.
In third grade I devoted my entire year to writing a "Minecraft Story Mode" fanfiction of just me and my friends (we were animals) just in the plot of Minecraft story mode. I still work on it a bit, it's super fun trying to replicate how my old friends used to act. I copied most of chapter one from the game, but after that I went WILD, absolutely insane. And the best part? Up until like- page twenty or so all I used was "she said" or "petra said", it's so cool seeing how fast my writing style evolved within a week.
LOL! I made stupid Minecraft Story Mode fanfiction. I wish I could show, but I lost the original lol XD
I feel much more self-consious about all those times I joined random shipping wars and all of those weird (USUALLY VERY CRINGE) stories and fantasies that I wrote. Thankyou Leamon Puppy. Speaking of cringe stories, I think I'm going to go read some.... and think of cringing memes.
Okay I feel a lot better knowing that I’m not the only one that writes down what to say in a video, I mean I do for skits and things like that but I was skeptical on whether or not people wrote down what to say during a talking video 🤣 happy to know I’m not alone!
You forgot scripts?
@@Anaea ya haha
@@buggles7473 lol, we all do scripts (exept me, I just know what I will say in my head)
AAH I LOVE AJ AND POKEMON OMG BOTH TOGETHER PERFECT OMG OMG OMG!!!!
Same!!
Did anyone else knewst to trade pokemon cards at school?
I remember when it got banned and i was so devastated 🥲🤧
At the time i was so obsessed so it was sad XD
Great as always leamon
Looking at the introductions alone this has a better plot than my own series
I feel like every kid did this at some point lol
Yeah I did one lol
I made a few drafts for cringy warrior cats fanfics.
Y'know, OP main character, a bunch of filler, edgy antagonist who has no reason to hate protagonist, etc...
*But we don't talk about that.*
@@keyerii so just your typical warrior cats book
Nooo 😭. I used to roleplay with my Pokémon plushies, make them fight to the death then put bandaids on them
Shinx acts like Rainbow Dash.
I love Rainbow Dash, not like that, d-d-don't think of it like that.
Also Episode 2?
Alolan Vulpix acts like Fluttershy.
I like how you got both of Fluttershy's personalities Assertive Fluttershy and Regular Fluttershy.
Why are you stuttering thru text
Are you good-
it would be fun if you re-made this or made a sequel or something
The story is awesome!
It’s still better then me :3
Wow I am excited
Shinx is rainbow dash I assume.
Vulpix is fluttershy.
Mew is I guess thats twilight sparkle?
Zorua is rarity but sassy I guess xD
Chimchar is apple jack i guesSsS
I was gonna say Maril was pinkie pie but then I saw “TUrNs EVil” and was like: No No nO also maril isn’t in the friendship members so I can’t say that anyways 😎
10:54
Leamon laughing is so cute 🥺
When she said ship with mewtwo and mew I thought she said the bad s word at first-
It is better than my stuff. Really ouo
I lnow aj makes mostly irl animals. They sometimes do fictional. Like what if they do pokemon collab? I can see it but idk about Game Freak and Wildworks because they are two different companies in two different countries. But it would be really cool if they made pokemon into aj because I am dying for Glaceon and Scorbunny in there.
" *Knowlage* "
-Leamon when she was 11
14:49 *pulls out a picture of zorua to see the colors when its an easy to remember pallette*
this reminds me of an old warriors story i made when i was in 1st grade xD
I would honestly love for you to rewrite and finish this story!
LeamonPuppy: I’m rambling too much
*continues to ramble*
I’ve never heard u laugh before leamon, xd. I love ur laugh btw sorry this is sooo random lol
Oh god I just remembered an old Donatello x April fanfic I made as a kid as I came across this. I'm going to go dissolve now 💀
Why are some of the characters traits so similar to the actual pokemon anime lol
(And the fact she says alola into aloha makes me cry)
@Leamon Puppy What the speedpaints for?
Leamon: I konow you wanna get into the story but WAIT THERES MORE!
OMG MY DREAM ABOUTT AJ AAND POKEMON TOGETHER HAS COME TRUEEE!!!!!
Low-key wanna see this get finished XD I love just really bad stories like this written by kids because they’re so predictable and the grammer is so bad it makes them really good
Past Leamon used a LOT of "almost" lol
I still remember the nightmare i had prob like 3 or 4 years ago and i still remember it now
Your a great artist
I made a Pokémon story and its still going on. Me and my friend helped me. I rily like it. I cant spell much so i never rote it. BUT i remember most of the story, but mine is original in all ways
Even if this video was 3y ago :)
I WAS KELDIO, AND I LIKED. I love keldio lol, mah fav Pokémon
Edit: My fav Pokémon are KELDIO, Zourak, Flareon, Luxray, and glameow (Sorry for my spelling)
I mean ik this is old
But there was that animated series is wanted to make with friends, I sadly lost the script but it was unbelievably funny
What the heck I love it 😀
Umbreon s one of my favorite eveeloution there all so cool!
Ok... Uh this... Happens alot to alot of people and yeaaa uh.... I think i ever did this once and im.still panicked to this day
I love your voice so much 😊
You write better than me tbh bc i always use only one trait with no conflict chance basically but there is a conflict chance. Turns evil is like the negative version , ok sorry im a fiction nerd i should stop translating o-o
This is good though , better than when i first started making stories at 9 years old and now im.dying bc i used to be way more dramatic and like so many death, betrayals, i cant- i just dont wanna remember what i did ;-;-; now lets pretend i didnt write this and nothing happened
Mew is kind of mewtos parent u can say cause mewto was made from mew
Yay! Pokes!
It literally says for Umbreon: “but is mostly just *joking around fun to be around*” so he has to joke to be around them?! 🤣 I’m kidding but it’s funny
Heh this reminds me of my cringy story books I made when I was 7
OOOoOoOoOoOOoOoOhHHHhHHhHhHhH *VeRY iNtEtEsTiNg* ✨👄✨
Godbless♥⛅
Leamon, im eleven and this is better than my writing. Thats saying a lot
I’m 11-12 rn and I write stories , I’ve already written 6 full stories with about 10 paragraphs in each. No not copied or about something dumb or a diary it’s stories abt other stuff lol
Good thing people are not commenting get off of youtube. I see many kids on here and even my little brother. So yea im not against kids on youtube.
@@FarisDaUmbreonSame!
@@FarisDaUmbreon womp womp Lmfaooo I’m not watching anything innapropriate and wasnt, I’m 15 now.
HI LEAMOONNN
At first i thought you just thought all 11 year olds are stupid and such. But when i clicked i was plesently surprised that you perpouesly said "me" when i was eleven. Bc not all ppl grow at the same time, someone can be 20 but have a mental age of a 15 year old and swapped! And im happy you didn't say something along the lines of "we all be kinda irrisponcibe at the age of 11". We need more poeple that knoew and are able to realise that age doesen't exactly/always guarentee a persons ideas, logic etc. And if you did i tbh i prob whrite a rage comment lol. Im not gonna act like im sone kind of grown up person bc im not even close! Anyways, I'll be looking up more of your vids and i rly found this one interesting! Keep it up
why did when she talked about her bad righting when she was young it sounded like a grammerly ad xd
What program do you use for drawing
Procreate
@@LeamonPuppy thank you Leamon!
I think im dead after watching, lol
-catswampy-
Like your vulpix
When i was about seven (i am currentley 9) i made this wierd book about a dog and i look back on it and... yea
I have a story I've been continuously writing since.. fourth grade? The last 2 books are definitely better
😱 it’s still good XD
Lol I love Pokémon and animie
You know when you are 7, and you’re writing a story and you think it’s cool and totally nOT cringe, and in a few years...
Cringe.
edit: also I was watching the video and Leamon was talking about crashing into our city” and then an ad pops up 😂
Yo what’s up
Not much 😳
Not u commenting on your own video😩
well tbh i thought the blue cloud was puppers and the pink cat was fluffen from kittydog in the thumbnail so thats why i clicked-
I found my old crafts (K-1) it was kindergarten and I had library I did pig the pug book and Christmas version it is a drawing THE END
I love pokemon xd
…THE THUMBNAIL SCARED ME 😨
BRO I THOUGHT IT WAS BLUE C*M
@@FrizzyAJ FR THO ME TOO!!
I love sassy characters that's me
Knowladge- i used to spell it that.😊
cool!
I feel its almost must lol
Like your mew
Lol
And wait if u r 17 today and 11 in 2017? How old are u now?
that one eleven yr old in the comments: IT'S KNOWLEDGE NOT KNOELAGE
🎉11K🎉
My little Pokémon, my little Pokémon, ahhhhhhhh the cringe is on
I ship shinx and vulpix because yes
I said this before I finished watching HA 😎
When you said “Ship” I heard “sh**” 🗿💀