The Armor That Rejected Every Alien, Until It Found a Human | HFY Story

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  • Опубликовано: 28 янв 2025

Комментарии • 93

  • @patrickwest2288
    @patrickwest2288 Месяц назад +12

    Wow, this was a really good story. Thank you. I just subscribed.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for subscribing!

  • @ferrelallan9575
    @ferrelallan9575 Месяц назад +35

    Moral of the story: "Quit Touching That, OH! GREAT!"

    • @ferrelallan9575
      @ferrelallan9575 Месяц назад +7

      I only touched it once, Really!!!

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +4

      I only touched it once!

    • @dennisveatch8155
      @dennisveatch8155 Месяц назад

      ​@@outtaworld
      Shave your palms and no one will know.

  • @darylSKYTZOwillis
    @darylSKYTZOwillis Месяц назад +6

    Finally a storyline based on human pride and aggression, but one of strength of character and reasoning. This caricature has many adventures and growth to yet explore. I can’t wait 🙂

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +2

      Glad you enjoyed it, more coming soon 😊

  • @EleneriPenneth
    @EleneriPenneth Месяц назад +12

    Am I the only one who breathed a sigh of relief when the politicians were passed over? Aegis Prime really is discerning!

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      You’re definitely not alone! Aegis Prime knew exactly what it was doing-dodging politicians like a pro.

  • @simply4est
    @simply4est Месяц назад +4

    Great story, thanks!

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Glad you enjoyed it! It's always a pleasure to hear from fellow HFY fans.

  • @swoesteban5570
    @swoesteban5570 Месяц назад +5

    "A picture is worth a thousand words"
    So many other stories spend 10 minutes, or better, telling you what everybody looked like, several times.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      True! Sometimes a well-placed image or a few concise words say it all. No need for endless descriptions when the story can do the heavy lifting!

  • @justintrussell7739
    @justintrussell7739 Месяц назад +6

    That was a great little story

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the kind words!

  • @firstdefense3789
    @firstdefense3789 Месяц назад +5

    Awesome story 😊!

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! 😊

  • @MrBlackace66
    @MrBlackace66 Месяц назад +2

    Excellent story.😊😊😊😊😊

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Glad you enjoyed the ride! 😊

  • @pohjoisenvanhus
    @pohjoisenvanhus Месяц назад +21

    For some reason this reminds me of Guyver.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +6

      Absolutely, it does have some strong Guyver vibes! The symbiotic armor, the transformation, and the deep connection between the host and the suit-it’s that perfect mix of biological-meets-mechanical with a hefty dose of heroism. Aegis Prime could easily stand alongside Guyver as another legendary protector in the galaxy!

    • @NevynDarkstar
      @NevynDarkstar Месяц назад

      Though, the Guyver unit was far less picky

    • @scottiefutch6073
      @scottiefutch6073 Месяц назад

      @@NevynDarkstar True, but a human putting it on was enough to terrify the Creators since they lost all control over them and they gained obscene levels of power. Their own fault for creating a super soldier base species for war. Ah. Humanity.

  • @PeteCasey-i4m
    @PeteCasey-i4m 2 дня назад +1

    After a headache inducing out of focus screen, I found out 2 things. First, that was a great, seemingly original story. 👍 And the second, this site's closed captioning sucks out loud.😞 Otherwise great!!

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  2 часа назад

      Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed the story, and apologies for the subtitling issue - I'll try to do better next time!

  • @Dragonwolf77
    @Dragonwolf77 Месяц назад +3

    This will make a great movie..

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Absolutely, this has blockbuster written all over it!

  • @reubencarter3004
    @reubencarter3004 Месяц назад +40

    It's Iron Man and Nova reimagined. I shall call the armor Jarvis instead of Egis Prime.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +5

      They will run if they hear the name Jarvis.

  • @ScienceNotFaith
    @ScienceNotFaith Месяц назад +5

    What's the power source for the suit?

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Interesting theory! Maybe the suit’s power source is symbiotic-drawing just enough from the host to function without causing harm. Or maybe… it’s a darker trade-off than anyone realizes. 👀

  • @SciFiworld774
    @SciFiworld774 Месяц назад +1

    Well it very interesting story. Good work

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! 😊

  • @Flightdevildoc
    @Flightdevildoc Месяц назад +12

    Great story but the end could have been better, such as mentioning what happened to James? Instead may I suggest an alternate add on and end. At the time before the war, humans were not considered equals despite being members of the council (almost discrimated). So, based on the story of Aegis Prime built in the past, and its requirements for a host that were indeed humans or many of humanity qualities, then the Zentharis could have built more Aegis Primes. Then James would have asked Earth to joint the fight and some humans to become host as protectors of the galaxy as the ancient builders intended, a new Aegis Prime Galactic Guardians, which would have demonstrated that humans might have not been advanced but they were a great ally that will stand and die if necessary to protect the innocent. The final chapter would have been about how humans became respected as the species that was needed (like a puzzle) for galactic peace and then to mention what happened to James, the 1st Aegis Prime host, now married with a Zenthari, and one of his children, becoming a new host of his Aegis Prime, serving to keep the peace, as his father did before him, because as you know evil never rests. That would have been a great end, in my opinion. 😊

    • @MGower4465
      @MGower4465 Месяц назад +3

      Not every story wrals up with a neat bow. Since the end nentions James sleaks to the armor one last time, either he fou d a way to detach himself when things were at peace, or he died of old age a prisoner of the armor. The latter is rather grim, I choose the former.
      James, as a diplomat, remained as the linchpin of the coalition, and as he aged, a search for a replacement as the armor's symbiosis partner was undertaken, and the resulting partner was trained by James personally. Every 10 years, a new partner was found, trained by the predecessor. The coalition formed a contingent of guards to bith guard the partner, and to be the partner's squadmates, so the job did not get isolating and lonely. Once retired from the job, each ond, like James, enjoyed notoriety for a time, like a sports star who retired after a long career on the field or court. Each waz grateful the next war did not start on his, her, or its watch, and built a sexpcond career smoothing over minor conflicts around known space, doing everything possible to ensure tge shccessor had the same chance at gratitude.
      Aegis Prime itself spent much time both surveilling the scientists all through space, and in thought, devising new defenses and new weapons. If it ever needed to fight again, the opponent would have adapted to Prime's abilities. Prime needed to adapt as well. Its partner would have to learn, just as James had that first time. But Aegis Prime did not resent teaching the old skills to new minds. It kept the new ideas to itself, having learned too many organics were fearful, and would be terrified to knoe Aegis Prime was developing weapons all by itself.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +2

      That’s a fantastic alternate ending-turning humanity’s struggle for respect into a cornerstone for galactic unity. James leading the charge as the first Aegis Prime host and inspiring Earth to join the fight adds emotional depth and stakes. The idea of humans becoming the key to peace, with James passing the mantle to his child, gives it a legacy vibe that perfectly balances hope and heroism. Definitely a satisfying conclusion-and you're right, evil never rests! 😊

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +2

      That’s a beautifully layered continuation, blending practicality with a touch of bittersweet realism. The idea of James stepping back and mentoring the next generation of hosts ensures his legacy while preventing Aegis Prime from becoming a grim prison. The cycle of training new partners and forming a support system shows humanity’s adaptability and commitment to avoiding isolation-a very human touch.
      Aegis Prime evolving quietly, preparing for threats while keeping its innovations secret, adds a fascinating tension. It respects its role but also understands the fragility of trust with organics. It’s a perfect balance of hope, pragmatism, and the ever-present edge of potential conflict. Honestly, this could be its own anthology of stories, tracing the lives of each partner and the ever-adapting Aegis Prime.

    • @vukkulvar9769
      @vukkulvar9769 Месяц назад +1

      Initially I thought the AI in the armor had computed the likely futures and settled on picking a human not because they're special, but because it would have resulted in the best compromise between likelihood and benefits even beyond the current conflict. By dragging humans into the conflict, it would have unforeseeable consequences for the members of the involved species. The mutual hardship would have brought friendship between the alien specie and humanity, which would help in post-war prosperity.
      The alien specie being unsuited for conflict due to their long lasting peace, they would have instead excelled at handling the logistics, supplying the war effort, and handling artillery while holding the backline on the battlefield. While humanity would take the lead on the war tactics and going frontline, equipped and protected by alien tech. Both races would help each other in tangential ways: the alien would have their peace time mindset preserved by being on the periphery of the battlefield, the human by being external to the conflict would not act on their worst instincts. And having both tempered, it would end up with the enemy being neutralized in a manner that would minimize enmity so that peace may remain possible after the war, instead of ending with a ceasefire with the enemy licking their wound and retreating to recover and wage war again which would end with terribly more losses on all sides and a societal shift into the alien society to a military dictatorship.

  • @johnmoore8016
    @johnmoore8016 Месяц назад +2

    Good story good over come evil and all that good rot. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Thanks! Sometimes a good ol’ classic “good triumphs over evil” tale hits just right.

  • @JeronWhite
    @JeronWhite Месяц назад +3

    This is a.good stroy

  • @jenksify
    @jenksify 22 дня назад +2

    Great story, but you need to work on the subtitles. Many names and words had so many different spellings that if someone deaf was trying to follow the story they would be lost.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  12 дней назад

      You’re right, the subtitles need some work-thanks for the feedback! I’ll definitely be more careful with spelling in future videos.

    • @jenksify
      @jenksify 12 дней назад

      @@outtaworld Thank you for responding and like i said great story.

  • @christophera.davisdavis6842
    @christophera.davisdavis6842 Месяц назад +3

    X-O man of war like story on a galatic scale. Cool, LOL

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Totally! X-O Manowar vibes but cranked up to galactic proportions-ancient tech, unstoppable power, and a story that spans the stars. It’s like taking everything awesome about X-O and giving it a massive cosmic upgrade. Cool, indeed!

  • @iamstrix
    @iamstrix Месяц назад +3

    So, it's X-O Man-O-War

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Exactly-X-O Manowar, but with a cosmic twist!

  • @garveywilliams9985
    @garveywilliams9985 Месяц назад +2

    This reminds me of Spectre Man, earth base defender.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Totally! It’s got those classic Spectreman vibes-an Earth defender with a cosmic edge!

  • @Zetsumei22
    @Zetsumei22 Месяц назад +3

    Well since it is alien in origin....kind of like Ultraman.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Exactly-alien origin, legendary power, and a mysterious purpose. Definitely has those Ultraman vibes, but with its own twist. Aegis Prime could be the next iconic guardian!

  • @randallporter1404
    @randallporter1404 Месяц назад +5

    1:30 The problem with AI is it speaks what it's given and if that script isn't written well, then the speech reflects that. So how does the Channel creator explain the lazy subtitles? "Zenith Koreans?"

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Fair point! Bad input equals bad output, and those subtitles definitely slipped through the cracks. "Zenith Koreans" was not the vibe-thanks for catching that! We’ll do better.

  • @tylerboone6584
    @tylerboone6584 Месяц назад +3

    And, to this very day, Aegis Prime awaits another who is worthy. And, while considered dormant, the armor stays ever vigilant. Its silence being more to keep the Zenthari and others calm than for any failing in the armor. Aegis enjoyed the peace, at least as much as any sentient machine could. And to keep himself busy, he began to read everything he could find from every library in the galaxy he could access. Even idle, Aegis had enough data to last him thousands of years. He was content.
    And when the time came. he was more than ready to resume his duties. And, during those years of "inactivity", he had found the one he was waiting for.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +5

      That's absolutely the future for Aegis Prime. Imagine the moment the armor finally activates again-a quiet hum building to a deafening roar, ancient glyphs glowing to life as Aegis announces, with perfect timing and a hint of dry wit, “Took you long enough. I’ve read every book in existence, and I’ve had centuries to plan for this. Let’s get to work.”

  • @Mltemple8333
    @Mltemple8333 Месяц назад +5

    Guessing it was meant to be Aegis Prime?

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Yes it is.

    • @seanmalloy7249
      @seanmalloy7249 18 дней назад

      And the speech-to-text gaffes, like "T-Rex" for what I hear as 'Tyrax', and "Cindric" for 'Syndrex'...

  • @lynneclark5313
    @lynneclark5313 Месяц назад +4

    Interesting story, too bad the spelling does not match the quality of the story. "..the galaxy prepared for another invasion"?? the GALAXY wasn't be invaded, only 1 planet was.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Thanks for pointing that out-seems like the wording didn’t match the scope. We’ll tighten it up to reflect the story’s actual scale. Appreciate the feedback!

    • @lynneclark5313
      @lynneclark5313 Месяц назад

      @@outtaworld Thanks!

  • @avmelidor
    @avmelidor Месяц назад +1

    It is Molinar. They were not worthy

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Exactly-Molinar doesn’t settle for anything less than the worthy.

  • @randallporter1404
    @randallporter1404 Месяц назад +3

    7:42 James wondered how he was gonna pee and poop. Should he poop his pants? How will he shave (his balls) and cut his hair.

    • @ronsindric4241
      @ronsindric4241 Месяц назад +2

      Maybe the chosen person's air biscuits and poo fuel the Egis ?

  • @Jimmyfisher121
    @Jimmyfisher121 Месяц назад +2

    I enjoyed this story but remember not every story has to have a moral code built in, humans are an imperfect species but not for the better, just look at what we have done to each other and our planet, we have not become the protectors but the destroyers, a few hundred million good people who do nothing to help and defend this planet are nothing against the forces who are willing to destroy the wildlife, the marine environment, the very air we breath, and because we will not control our childbirth rate we are well over the 8 Billion humans, we need to expand to other planets and yet very few are willing to work at doing this, where has the explorer's spirit gone, we have our chance still but we all must look inwards and choose death and destruction, or life and exploration, the reason nothing gets done could be the leaders of every country wants to be in control of everything even the elites believe they have the answers, for they can buy the greatest minds of our time, yet they forget we are all flawed humans and must all be involved in the future every single thinking person must make the final choice, yes I know this would lead to the death of billions of humans and it wouldn't work we need people like Elon Musk and all of his incredible people but we need so much more if all the countries joined and made the future happen it would not just be the moon and Mars we would go to but could build homes for everyone, I believe the dinosaurs had the same choice, but chose the wrong path, will we do the same. Jim from Scotland

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Jim, your comment is both thought-provoking and sobering. You’re absolutely right that humanity often seems caught between its potential for greatness and its tendency toward self-destruction. The environmental damage we’ve inflicted and the lack of collective action are staggering reminders of our imperfections, but I think there’s still hope.
      Exploration and innovation are indeed vital, without them, we stagnate. But perhaps the spirit of exploration hasn’t disappeared entirely; it’s just buried under layers of short-term priorities and systemic inertia. Visionaries like Musk are a start, but as you said, it will take a global effort to truly make a difference. That means not just a handful of brilliant minds or powerful leaders, but everyday people recognizing their role in shaping the future.
      Your point about the dinosaurs is an apt metaphor, whether by choice or circumstance, they didn’t adapt. But we have the awareness and tools to do better. It’s daunting, yes, but small changes at individual levels can ripple into larger movements. Let’s hope we can channel that explorer's spirit you mentioned-not just to escape our problems, but to build a future where humanity thrives without leaving destruction in its wake.

  • @hippiehillape
    @hippiehillape Месяц назад +2

    Jimmy Carter 🤣

  • @MoxieMike66
    @MoxieMike66 Месяц назад +1

    Getting "Guyver" vibes here.....

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Definitely has those *Guyver* vibes-bio-armor, epic battles, and a touch of mystery! 🤖🔥

  • @seanshaw5164
    @seanshaw5164 Месяц назад +2

    Can anyone say ‘Ironman’??…

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Shh, don’t let the Galactic Council hear you-they banned the "word" centuries ago!

  • @stock_movie1875
    @stock_movie1875 Месяц назад +1

    He became a Kamen Rider

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Exactly-Kamen Rider vibes all the way!

  • @afnDavid
    @afnDavid Месяц назад +3

    The humans in these stories have a very poorly compensated inferiority complex.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Maybe it’s not an inferiority complex-just humanity turning chaos and stubbornness into a superpower. If aliens think we’re weak, they’ve got no idea what happens when we lean into our unpredictability. Underdogs always hit hardest.

  • @netgod3com-FUYouTube
    @netgod3com-FUYouTube Месяц назад +3

    Fix the damned captions of do not include them.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Got it, our bad! We’ll fix the captions or leave them out next time. Thanks for the feedback!

  • @originaljigglypuff
    @originaljigglypuff Месяц назад +2

    Awful AI writing and awful AI narration. Hard pass.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Sorry to hear it. We’ll keep striving to improve, thanks for the feedback. 😊

  • @murphymmc
    @murphymmc Месяц назад +1

    This story was more than a little bland in it's "action" depiction. A typical blathering on of ideologies, alien arrogance, the usual quest for power. The creation of the AI power armor had potential but the story bogged down with the petty squabbles of politicians pretending to be altruistic. The idea that one guy in a newly devised combat suit that had a mind of its own turning the tide of a galactic war was too Captain America-ish and unoriginal. The battle scenes and accomplishments lacked any real detail. All in all, pretty mundane and nap inducing.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Appreciate the detailed feedback! It sounds like the story didn’t hit the mark for you, especially in terms of action and originality. We’ll take this as a push to level up the intensity, deepen the battle scenes, and bring fresh twists to the table. Thanks for sharing your thoughts-it’s always helpful! 😊

  • @stevenfranklin7060
    @stevenfranklin7060 Месяц назад +1

    boring ai trash

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Sorry to hear it didn’t hit the mark! We’ll keep striving to do better-feedback like this helps.

  • @ronsindric4241
    @ronsindric4241 Месяц назад +2

    A so - so predictable tale with absolutely awful AI Speaking. The empty and pedestrian nature of the story hints that this was probably written by a computerized piece of software on a machine running DOS v1.0 on a 4004 CPU and 2 bytes of memory ! Ooooooooo! Wonder what would have been produced with using a TRS-80 MODEL 1 with a gigantic 8 bytes of memory 🤪

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад +1

      Thanks for the feedback, I will consider it for the next story.

    • @ronsindric4241
      @ronsindric4241 Месяц назад +1

      @@outtaworld Sorry for the caustic and vitriolic response. Call me grouchy. Chalk it up to friends being wounded in a combat zone and one who was KIA. There are some flickers of possibilities in this that can be developed. Take care. Good Luck. Happy Holidays.

  • @markjaywest
    @markjaywest Месяц назад +1

    If your going to have sub titles embeded then at least make them the same as what the narrator is saying.

    • @outtaworld
      @outtaworld  Месяц назад

      Apologies for the mix-up! We rushed it, but the subtitles are now fixed. You can enjoy our latest stories with everything in sync. Thanks for your patience! 😊