I love that I can just throw certain aspects of this to the wayside and just enjoy the story. If I start to think about it too much, I think, "Yeah right. They would have just evaporated us from space." but then I just let go and go along for the ride and enjoy the beautifully crafted story and the message behind it. Bravo.
This is One of the better stories I've listened to thus I was more than willing to listen to it a Second time. As good as this story is it was made better by using what i believe were human narrators, not AI. I agree with another commenter the visual effects were superior to what is normal. MORE STORIES LIKE THIS,PLEASE.
Nah, some of the pronunciations were totally off, even with the variations of pronunciation that make English and American dialects so different, the pronunciation of certain words just didn't fit either form of the English language, it did have at least some part of the narration that was most definitely AI generated but, I feel it has been a much better narration than I have come to expect from AI.
You can tell it was AI. There is one part where it talks about the humans unleashing their weapons upon the enemy, but instead of saying "unleashed" the word pronounced is "unlessed."
For some the rage sinks deep. For others the melancholy of loss leaves a deep bare scar. But seeing the end of this shows the exquisite surgical procedure of attacking the government, not its people.
It shows all sides of humanity. The kindness towards friends and the total annihilation of a race in revenge for an atrocity commited over 40 years ago
Enjoyed the story👍 THE ABSOLUTE BEST being that there wasn't any repetitive sentences and paragraphs... Bravo, please keep this stile and know you earned my subscription!!!
"Power assisted arms allowed them to rip off the limbs of the wraiths and even beat them with it one case. " "Stop hitting yourself! Stop hitting yourself!!"
@@rut8455 I was reacting to the “getting” part. AI generated art made channels like this possible with easily accessible art and TTS voice over. I don’t consider them particularly impressive, it’s just an easily accessible standard that pretty much anyone can do.
Good story. Annoying voices though. Do like Stargate Atlantis being referenced though! I think everyone who likes that series instantly knew the reference xD
Dunno if it will do it but i already know the ones that betrayed humanity are really hopeing humans are now gone hell yeah it happened amazing by far a great end i just love the purposefull panick made just the only parital thing i find kinda sad is techically they destroyed sol so why no eye for an eye
Well written and well told. It is refreshing to listen to a story that isn't all about how humanity is either all forgiving or the most powerful be all that ends all force in the galaxy without having any actual substance to them. All the other stories just praise how benevolent humanity is for 20+ mins. This story actually had thoughtful ideas and creativity used to create a saga where humanity rose from near extinction to, with the help from many other races, fight and rebuild. I also really enjoyed the references to other sci-fi giants such as Stargate Atlantis, Star Trek, Star Wars, Battlestar Galactica, and Warhammer 40000!
I greatly appreciate the time, effort and smartly executed imagination it took to make this fantastic story. Your description of the weapons on the combat mechs was simple yet it gathered up a SciFi guy like myself imagination of what (Some Might Agree) Our hero, the Master Chief's body armour should've advanced by now. Beginning the story with the storytelling to the young hatchlings and then advancing to what the humans were currently doing was perfect. I appreciate you and all who may have had a thought and hand to contribute to this story. It was time well spent. I think that someone should have been violently FUBAR for the betrayal at the end. Some of us require that satisfaction who might have survived those long years of Recovery Refining & Revenge. Anyway, who, what, when and where... Godspeed♾️To You And Yours
I have to tell you I love the movements of the end or the rather the animation that was included in the story and a story was very good. I mean very very good.❤! And I hope to hear more in the future.
Those "Wraith" sounds more like Genestealers from 40K. ;) 4 arms, claws, carapace, scaled forehead and rear jointed legs... that's a Genestealer allright.
Um, the mass of a moon would be in 'orbit', so breaking it up would just make a bunch of bits in orbit. If its a moon then its own gravity would keep it together . at its orbit there would be no drag so a moon break up would only affect those on the moon. Basically no gravitational changes or impacts on planet
This story isn't realistic about human nature or strategic planning. For such low numbers reproduction would've been paramount before revenge. Young women in combat at low population is absurd.
You weren't listening properly then. They had a population of 1 million after the the destruction of earth and other colonies. But had 5 million by the time they had their first battle against the wraiths. So they had increased their number by 4 million. Considering that they would have had many old people and kids amongst that 1 million, they must have bred quite a lot. And they were doing it for the purpose of revenge not survival. So every man and women capable of fighting would have.
@@geofthompson3844 If you think 4 million is a safe population level with which to undertake intergalactic revenge; then we'll agree to disagree. I still think women of reproductive age in direct combat at low population levels is not strategically wise.
@@JesusRodriguez-zy3wjThe situation demanded it, it was either revenge or wait for the enemy to return and finish them off. The hail mary play, high risk high reward.
@rexdeusest6308 Well, you, ^&*(%&&*((Y%^ son of a &%(*(*)_+; there should have been a comma between "though " and "well done" in your response. I enjoy not just Godzilla but even Gamera movies. Not the most realistic of stuff, so yeah, perhaps my critico-meter needs an oiling.
Okay, that advanced body armor sounds super cool! But what the heck do you do once you get all that armor and ordnance stuff in place and powered up; and suddenly you’ve got that inevitable urge to go to the bathroom?! Oh…? Any of you tactical geniuses stop to think about that little inconvenience when designing this suit of armor? And don’t cop the standard answer…, “Oh, I’m sure they have internal waste removal system installed.” Think that through for a moment… What invasive bio-mechanical mechanisms would have to be functioning within the lower confines of this armored suit to properly accommodate successfully completing and cleaning up after a simple call of nature?! And what a nightmare if it ever malfunctioned!!
This story has a good enough foundation to actually become more than what it is if the writer(s) go that route... interesting enough to keep listening as is...
Ok the writer of the black ship stories is named wyatt or someone who is dear to hims name because it seems each blackship stories main or important characters have the name! Lol either a soldier or knight banneret.
I like sci fi stories more more than this one the story is good, more like like a copy of the original who really made this story. Sci fi story! Rock on
The person who wrote this has never been in the military. They know nothing of how military behave with each other, how battles proceed, or how information is useful during a combat. It is a child's interpretation of combat.
Okay, that advanced body armor sounds super cool! Sure…. But what the heck do you do once you get all that armor and ordnance stuff in place and powered up; and suddenly you’ve got that inevitable urge to go to the bathroom?! Oh…? Any of you tactical geniuses stop to think about that little inconvenience when designing this suit of armor? And don’t cop the standard answer…, “Oh, I’m sure they have internal waste removal system installed.” Think that through for a moment… What uncomfortably invasive bio-mechanical mechanisms would have to be functioning within the lower confines of this armored suit to properly accommodate successfully completing and cleaning up after a simple call of nature while wearing this sealed up armored protection system ?! And what a nightmare if it ever malfunctioned!! Wow!
Have listened to a few stories now. Just a thought. Don't keep using this same sentence " for every one we destroyed (insert number here) takes its place"... have heard it over and over
Admiral Tanaka of the west texas tanaka'a.... (and I am sorry if I misspelled the name I suck at spelling thanks dyslexia!) But seriously the ai voice chosen gives a Japanese sounding name a southern twang voice. I just found that very funny.
Guns need to be within spec at all times. When parts are out up spec, guns jam more often than not. Im sure the gun were knocked out of spec by getting hit or the ship getting hit and torqued the guns causing them to become damaged
Even with AI and live narrators you take a very good story and turn it into a humdrum, yawn fest. Does anyone know how to tell a story? Parts that are supposed to convey urgency sounds like boredom.
Well terrible from the get go... where do these stories come from are these published??? Do the authors chk comments.. if ya do am not just being harsh for no reason.. so am trying to rewrite opening sentences to elaborate.. an i am no writer but. Quagly or watever pressed his hand into his knee slowly lowering his bulk onto the cool stone of the garden bench. He did so with a almost inaudible groan. The blue sun of the watever planets sun peeked out from behind a whispy pink purple cloud.. and for a breif moment the rays warmed his leathery hide? And he felt half of his 100 cycles.. almost as young as he was when the large statue casting its shadow onto the grass b4 him, was erected. This is still clunky cause i dont know whats really going on with your story / characters.. but i think you get me Show me its a different planet using the sun tell me the stone feels cold make it all real..
I love that I can just throw certain aspects of this to the wayside and just enjoy the story. If I start to think about it too much, I think, "Yeah right. They would have just evaporated us from space." but then I just let go and go along for the ride and enjoy the beautifully crafted story and the message behind it. Bravo.
Great story .
Hopefully there will be more good series in the near future.
I agree, great story.Good voice actors keep upcoming.Appreciate it
I love this. We may lose a battle, but we will win the war.
We hope when we really take to the Stars, we have half this much care and integrity.
This is One of the better stories I've listened to thus I was more than willing to listen to it a Second time. As good as this story is it was made better by using what i believe were human narrators, not AI. I agree with another commenter the visual effects were superior to what is normal. MORE STORIES LIKE THIS,PLEASE.
Nah, some of the pronunciations were totally off, even with the variations of pronunciation that make English and American dialects so different, the pronunciation of certain words just didn't fit either form of the English language, it did have at least some part of the narration that was most definitely AI generated but, I feel it has been a much better narration than I have come to expect from AI.
You can tell it was AI. There is one part where it talks about the humans unleashing their weapons upon the enemy, but instead of saying "unleashed" the word pronounced is "unlessed."
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Amongst others yes!
I kinda like the tv show Stargate: Atlantis reference in the story. Being a sci-fi nerd myself I really enjoyed watching it.
I agree
If you want to wipe out a planet just throw big rocks at it
I Glad you like it
Wraith was not stargate but another one but can’t remember the name
The race were in stargate atlantis
Hi i just found your channel today. It's so good I can't stop watching.
Thank you for upload
For some the rage sinks deep.
For others the melancholy of loss leaves a deep bare scar.
But seeing the end of this shows the exquisite surgical procedure of attacking the government, not its people.
Occasionally a story stays with me I'm compelled to hear it again this is one such story this is the second time through
It shows all sides of humanity. The kindness towards friends and the total annihilation of a race in revenge for an atrocity commited over 40 years ago
Awesome story, but very sad for Earth and our colonies.
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Enjoyed the story👍
THE ABSOLUTE BEST being that there wasn't any repetitive sentences and paragraphs...
Bravo, please keep this stile and know you earned my subscription!!!
My guess is their moon was in a decling orbit and was eventually ripped apart by tidal forces. Our moon are slowly pulling away from us though.
"Power assisted arms allowed them to rip off the limbs of the wraiths and even beat them with it one case. "
"Stop hitting yourself! Stop hitting yourself!!"
"Battlestations... let's phk em up!" lmao
Kithranke are this universe's Wookies apparently. They have similar reactions to being called liars.
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Man these visuals are getting good, damb, nice
I agree . I Hope there are more of it . This don’t enough
I’m pretty sure they’re AI generated
@@Menuki does that make them not good? or is there another reason you pointed out the obvious?
@@rut8455 I was reacting to the “getting” part. AI generated art made channels like this possible with easily accessible art and TTS voice over.
I don’t consider them particularly impressive, it’s just an easily accessible standard that pretty much anyone can do.
@@Menuki a, that's a pretty good pasta, my mistake for thinking you would say something particularly impressive, I shouldn't have gotten my hopes up
Good story. Annoying voices though. Do like Stargate Atlantis being referenced though! I think everyone who likes that series instantly knew the reference xD
That really would be a safe place for them - one in the last stages of terraforming.
What a great story. I wasn't ready for the deaths so close to heart
Dunno if it will do it but i already know the ones that betrayed humanity are really hopeing humans are now gone hell yeah it happened amazing by far a great end i just love the purposefull panick made just the only parital thing i find kinda sad is techically they destroyed sol so why no eye for an eye
Bc it make the world blind or something
We want to be better than our enemy's less we become them.
🤔 This would make an excellent movie .
The AI feverdream was a trip 😂!
This is one of my favorite stories
Well written and well told. It is refreshing to listen to a story that isn't all about how humanity is either all forgiving or the most powerful be all that ends all force in the galaxy without having any actual substance to them. All the other stories just praise how benevolent humanity is for 20+ mins. This story actually had thoughtful ideas and creativity used to create a saga where humanity rose from near extinction to, with the help from many other races, fight and rebuild.
I also really enjoyed the references to other sci-fi giants such as Stargate Atlantis, Star Trek, Star Wars, Battlestar Galactica, and Warhammer 40000!
I greatly appreciate the time, effort and smartly executed imagination it took to make this fantastic story.
Your description of the weapons on the combat mechs was simple yet it gathered up a SciFi guy like myself imagination of what
(Some Might Agree)
Our hero, the
Master Chief's
body armour should've advanced by now.
Beginning the story with the storytelling to the young hatchlings and then advancing to what the humans were currently doing was perfect.
I appreciate you and all who may have had a thought and hand to contribute to this story. It was time well spent.
I think that someone should have been violently FUBAR for the betrayal at the end. Some of us require that satisfaction who might have survived those long years of
Recovery
Refining &
Revenge.
Anyway, who, what, when and where...
Godspeed♾️To You And Yours
An hour and a half. I love this length ❤
Nice power armor designs loved the built in sword would have grand and very useful in fallout enjoyed the video :)
Great Story , loved it no repeat perfect !!!
Best phrase in this is the very last one! And an absulute Must realization we need today ❤🎉
the variety of voices makes this even more good 💯
This would make an amazing movie. Really great story, thanks 😁👍
very well told and narrated…
Glad you like it
Have you tuned in to VideoGPT yet? It's the under-the-radar gem transforming video storytelling.
I have to tell you I love the movements of the end or the rather the animation that was included in the story and a story was very good. I mean very very good.❤! And I hope to hear more in the future.
I like this story!! Cool, more like that!!👍👍
Good sir 🎉
Love this story so much. I demand for more. And thank you author
Those "Wraith" sounds more like Genestealers from 40K. ;)
4 arms, claws, carapace, scaled forehead and rear jointed legs... that's a Genestealer allright.
Personally, I like the voices. 😊
Awesome story.
YES. 😀. Thank you SO much. At Last, this is without , the best of all, moving stories, thanks again. Ming W A , AUS,
Without what?
Funny how Sgt gets spoken in its full form (Sargent) yet Cpl gets spelt in its abbrevited form C p l rather than spoken full form (Corporal)
Cool SciFi story👍👍👍
Good story and narration. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for the upload
Don't get me wrong. Very good story.. just had an issue or two with few things ...
Um, the mass of a moon would be in 'orbit', so breaking it up would just make a bunch of bits in orbit. If its a moon then its own gravity would keep it together . at its orbit there would be no drag so a moon break up would only affect those on the moon. Basically no gravitational changes or impacts on planet
Assume explosive fragmentation.
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Sorry but the odd camp sounding commander really got me laughing
GREAT STORY i really love these stories , the narraters are so great, thank you thank you .
This story isn't realistic about human nature or strategic planning. For such low numbers reproduction would've been paramount before revenge. Young women in combat at low population is absurd.
You weren't listening properly then. They had a population of 1 million after the the destruction of earth and other colonies. But had 5 million by the time they had their first battle against the wraiths. So they had increased their number by 4 million. Considering that they would have had many old people and kids amongst that 1 million, they must have bred quite a lot. And they were doing it for the purpose of revenge not survival. So every man and women capable of fighting would have.
@@geofthompson3844 If you think 4 million is a safe population level with which to undertake intergalactic revenge; then we'll agree to disagree. I still think women of reproductive age in direct combat at low population levels is not strategically wise.
@@JesusRodriguez-zy3wjThe situation demanded it, it was either revenge or wait for the enemy to return and finish them off.
The hail mary play, high risk high reward.
@rexdeusest6308 The more fantastical the story, the more believable the psychology needs to be.
@rexdeusest6308 Well, you, ^&*(%&&*((Y%^ son of a &%(*(*)_+; there should have been a comma between "though " and "well done" in your response. I enjoy not just Godzilla but even Gamera movies. Not the most realistic of stuff, so yeah, perhaps my critico-meter needs an oiling.
Okay, that advanced body armor sounds super cool!
But what the heck do you do once you get all that armor and ordnance stuff in place and powered up; and suddenly you’ve got that inevitable urge to go to the bathroom?!
Oh…? Any of you tactical geniuses stop to think about that little inconvenience when designing this suit of armor? And don’t cop the standard answer…, “Oh, I’m sure they have internal waste removal system installed.” Think that through for a moment… What invasive bio-mechanical mechanisms would have to be functioning within the lower confines of this armored suit to properly accommodate successfully completing and cleaning up after a simple call of nature?!
And what a nightmare if it ever malfunctioned!!
Man does this make me want to play some Halo😂
Sounded like a southern commander. HooYaa
This story has a good enough foundation to actually become more than what it is if the writer(s) go that route... interesting enough to keep listening as is...
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With so many ships... They could have stopped the big pieces from colliding with Quarthen prime...
Noice!
OK thanks ...
Now this is something
Slow is smooth, smooth is fast
"Look at those 'Old Bastards' go"
Ok the writer of the black ship stories is named wyatt or someone who is dear to hims name because it seems each blackship stories main or important characters have the name! Lol either a soldier or knight banneret.
I like sci fi stories more more than this one the story is good, more like like a copy of the original who really made this story. Sci fi story! Rock on
Love it!
The person who wrote this has never been in the military. They know nothing of how military behave with each other, how battles proceed, or how information is useful during a combat. It is a child's interpretation of combat.
It’s funny how politically correct these stories are. Female? Check. Person of color? Check.
Pretty decent for an AI.
Thank you!
I think only the voices are AI generated, not the story. :)
Okay, that advanced body armor sounds super cool! Sure….
But what the heck do you do once you get all that armor and ordnance stuff in place and powered up; and suddenly you’ve got that inevitable urge to go to the bathroom?!
Oh…? Any of you tactical geniuses stop to think about that little inconvenience when designing this suit of armor?
And don’t cop the standard answer…, “Oh, I’m sure they have internal waste removal system installed.”
Think that through for a moment… What uncomfortably invasive bio-mechanical mechanisms would have to be functioning within the lower confines of this armored suit to properly accommodate successfully completing and cleaning up after a simple call of nature while wearing this sealed up armored protection system ?!
And what a nightmare if it ever malfunctioned!! Wow!
Very good story
that’s a rare one getting my name
Star troopers!!
1:21:12 so the wraith never tried anything but to fight? No communication but surrender and die?
If only you said "Welcome to the Suck" instead. That would'v been so damn awesome xD
Have listened to a few stories now. Just a thought. Don't keep using this same sentence " for every one we destroyed (insert number here) takes its place"... have heard it over and over
There was no Ai narration I really appreciate that! The human voice is just leagues better.
When a human swears bloody revenge be they man, beast or god they will know the true meaning of fear
John Wick protocol much?
Sorry but the actual sounds.. sound... 80's game .. other than that- golden
Is there a continuarion of this story?
I'm mythological.
I think I heard this one before, but on another channel. Do you know who the author is?
Author in description
Not the whole .. the parts where more than 2 voices
38:27 look at deen cheeks.
Admiral Tanaka of the west texas tanaka'a.... (and I am sorry if I misspelled the name I suck at spelling thanks dyslexia!) But seriously the ai voice chosen gives a Japanese sounding name a southern twang voice. I just found that very funny.
Gofack 😂😂😂😂😂 whats his sire name ? Yurslf , so his name is Gofack Yurslf . His colleague is Galfack Indazz .
Wait a teacher that is actually older then space dust!😮😂😅😂😮😂😅
Was Yazzie's name Robert?
And sorry to say to ... Gun Jams??? what is that? Some idiotix gun do that but generally... jamming is like getting hit by .. welll aliens.
Guns jam all the time what are you talking about, even military weaponry malfunctions.
Guns need to be within spec at all times. When parts are out up spec, guns jam more often than not. Im sure the gun were knocked out of spec by getting hit or the ship getting hit and torqued the guns causing them to become damaged
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The reader made a great story sound like stale soda.
Even with AI and live narrators you take a very good story and turn it into a humdrum, yawn fest. Does anyone know how to tell a story? Parts that are supposed to convey urgency sounds like boredom.
First in last out. Scouts out!
Well terrible from the get go... where do these stories come from are these published??? Do the authors chk comments.. if ya do am not just being harsh for no reason.. so am trying to rewrite opening sentences to elaborate.. an i am no writer but.
Quagly or watever pressed his hand into his knee slowly lowering his bulk onto the cool stone of the garden bench. He did so with a almost inaudible groan. The blue sun of the watever planets sun peeked out from behind a whispy pink purple cloud.. and for a breif moment the rays warmed his leathery hide? And he felt half of his 100 cycles.. almost as young as he was when the large statue casting its shadow onto the grass b4 him, was erected.
This is still clunky cause i dont know whats really going on with your story / characters.. but i think you get me
Show me its a different planet using the sun tell me the stone feels cold make it all real..
could be a good movie..
Knowing the species almost gets eliminated, should humans still have gone to war, for the reason in the story scenario? Yay or nay?
I understand that is called power armor, but the way that it’s described and how it’s made up, it’s much more similar to the Mjolnir armour from halo
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Metric survived. 😥
Oh yeah. Gvak. Lol
Honestly u say for everyone killed 3 or 10 or how ever many more took there place gets massively repetitive n kills story