''The Harrowing: A Quick Bus Ride into Hell'' | BEST OF NOSLEEP 2020
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- Опубликовано: 21 сен 2024
- ‘‘Another blast of heat assaulted him, hot enough to cause him to wince beneath the cover of his folded arms, and he shook his head weakly from side to side…’’
Today’s tale of the fantastical and the macabre all four parts of ‘The Harrowing: A Quick Bus Ride into Hell’, an original series by rebecca_rjwriter, submitted directly to me via my sub-r-ddit and narrated here for you all with the author’s express permission.
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Video footage was made by me with whatever Go Pro Camera it is that I own... I hope you found it to be a relaxing backdrop for today’s story!
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Gonna be perfectly honest: that unforgivable sin the priest mentioned was something way different than I expected.
Fantastic story, and you were the perfect narrator for it.
The most believable part is the deep connection between public transportation and hell. ;)
Dude, that must have been one of the most beautiful creepypastas i have heard. It doesn't even seem like creepypasta at this point. Very few stories leave me smiling.
Amazing. This one was awesome.
Now THIS was a good one about a visit to hell. It had an actual story with a builtup, climax and resolution, made intelligent twists and choices... Yes!
I never thought that I would appreciate a happy ending...but here we are.
I like that even Gadreel the angel of Undoing can feel remorse for his mistakes.
redemption, what an amazing concept. this was refreshing. i needed that. thank you.
Thank you Doc,very much 🖤
Docs always got the medicine 🖤
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To us Americans, you have an accent; you don't really have an accent, but bear with me. Your "accent" just adds to your stories. It's amazing.
This was an excellent story, and you read it very well!
I have now listened so many of your videos, I have to say it; you pull off reading very different stories. I have started to use your reading as a sleep aid. Your voice allows me to be tense (doing a task) or relaxed (going to sleep) depending on what I need.
I just wanted to say that you have become my favorite, among creepy story readers. 👍❤ Great job!
Wow!this was amazing! For a minute at the end I thought it was going to end in some sort of an infinity loop or something like that. Where in which the bus stop would be the beginning, and the cycle repeats because of what Hal told the priest. This was really good, had me on edge until the very end. When your voice outtro began, lol. This was truly great writing!! And a great narration, as usual, Doc! Lol, loved the way you did Amun's little scrawling voice!😆😆👍🏾👍🏾✌🏾🙏🏾 #Blessings #KeepUpTheGoodWork #Salute
I couldn’t have said it better myself! Writing was excellent, and the Doc narrated the story brilliantly! I agree, also that I thought it was going to be a paradoxical moment starting the whole nightmare over again. WELL DONE!
Yes but not a loop he would have not gone to hell
Fantastic story, amazing narration. NEED to hear more from this writer!!!! Well done!!
Thanks so much!! ❤️ This was my first of hopefully many more stories, and hopefully I’ll be lucky enough to have him narrate my work again! Such a rush!
Dr Creepen....you are So look GOOD!!!!! TY. for helping so many people dealing under shutdown and truly grieving this World tragedy!
"A Wave of Screeching Whales" made me back up 30 seconds. Lesson learned: no multitasking when the Dr is in.
Missed this last night because of the work thing. It does however mean i get the pleasure of enjoying it now. Gratitude my good Doctor Creepen.
A really engrossing story with a hopeful message. Was nice to listen to a story set in the worst place, and discover that the true villain is yet humanity again. But to also hear of the redemption of one leading to a redemption of others after undergoing a painful epiphany was thought provoking. An excellent reminder of unintended consequences and the guilt one can feel from their actions/ inactions.
It's A Odd Feeling to have A Smile on my Face and A Warm Snuggly feeling after one of your stories. I rather liked it 😊
Honestly... I'm so, so happy to be able to listen to a horror story that doesn't disparage or discredit Christianity. Now, most horror stories I listen to aren't really religious for the most part anyway, but a lot of the ones with religious themes will attack Christianity or twist and warp it into something evil (and they've done this with other religions too, I'm not singling anyone out necessarily). So it's really nice to be able to listen to something scary without feeling like one of the most important pillars of my life is being attacked. Anyway... this story was wonderful and it is going in my favorites. It was artfully written, plenty of twists and turns and ultimately, the ending was incredibly satisfying and left no real questions unanswered. At least not for me.
Enjoyed that. Satisfying ending. Excellent!
That was absolutely amazing. Thank you both!
That was a good story. I nodded off near the end, & had to finish it upon waking at 4:30am. Glad I awoke.
Epic indeed
Great choice!
Nice way to listen to while working on data backups. 👍
Really well written and satisfying.
This tale just keeps getting better. What a great tale thanks Doc
Im super Amped . Dr you have a way to make my day
wow, what a story! i dont need audible anymore, since i discovered this channel.
I absolutely hung on the edge of my seat expecting this entire nightmare to loop which would be a conceived notion of what hell would be. I enjoyed this story more than most I have listened and found it riveting and relieving at the end.
To the author, hat tip for a most enjoyable story. You definitely used the right emotional adjectives in the appropriate spots that caused the audience (reader/listener) to feel as if they were part of the scene. To the narrator, you have out done yourself with this story. I can tell you must have enjoyed narrating this one. You were spot on in tempo and voices. I bow deeply in appreciation to your efforts on this one Doc.
Very good, as usual
Wow, this one was incredible!!
You have once again provoke me to comment! Sincerely you have the most interesting stories! Thanks for sharing!
I'm a new addict to this amazing channel, what a voice and what an epic story that crossed my path just when my faith needed a plaster (band aid) I totally believe in a world of second chances, bad turned good is the best kind of bad! Thanks for taking away the darkness for me xxx
Good... this was indeed good.... really enjoy these existential crisis type of stories - well written and narrated. BRAVO 👏
This is one of those stories that makes you hesitate to click on another because you know it can not be topped. Brilliantly written and flawlessly narrated!
I'm half way in so far this is great. I love Hell, Demon and Lucifer stories. I would kill for a really long Zombie story though.
I have been listening to the 12 book series "All Dead" on Audible. You can get the entire series as a set for one credit and it is about 160 hours long. Great zombie story.
@@TheBeardofDOOM really that sounds great I've been listening to Mark Tufo books 1 series is Book of Riley and the other series slips my memory right now but its amazing I use a service called lobby its free all you need is a library card I called NY public library and got a card in about a week
@@TheBeardofDOOM def gonna check that out the whole series for 1 credit is excellent
@@theboothakarichierich8129 you should check out you will be afraid his channel has some of the best zombie stories and he writes them himself and they're awesome
@@theboothakarichierich8129 I too like the ones about the devil and demons
Yay!! I have my favorite drink!! And ready to listen💜💜💜
Little early in the day for that isn't it? Lol.
Nevermind, we're on lockdown so it's cool. LOL
@@bigcountrymountainman9740 It's never to early, if you haven't stopped mu wa ha ha ha.
@@mr.halloween3371 damn, I'm 40 years old now brother. I don't have it in me anymore. I just smoked weed and go to bed.
Really enjoyed this story! Great author. I hope we can hear more from them. Great narration as well!!!!
Also, man, that was amazing! I absolutely loved the ending.
This was a great story I really needed. Thanks for keeping our spirits up Doc!
Hiya doc its jenny and the cats as usual. We are stuffed into my new recliner with my cats. We have been watching conspiracy theories on RUclips then your notification came up so we grabbed our favorite drinks ready to listen 😸😸😸😸😸😸
It's always nice to get a update on the cats. Hope they're doing well.
@@kutrael5209 the cats are doing well and they are enjoying my new 3 piece suite i just hope they behave themselves and dont scratch it
@@cutenose38you got a new recliner?! 😂😂
@@daygoncornhole2395 yes the other one was so old it had it
@@cutenose38 oh thank God for that I was afraid that you will fall from it on your arse 😂😂
Sir ur voice is wonderful and soothing to listen to and ur a vary talented narrator of story telling well done friend heres to you Dr
Thank you for keeping me company on nights I can't sleep and keeping me sane in these trying times ❤️
Fantastic!
Thank you for that!
Great job!
You always raise my spirits when I’m feeling lost and down.
Thank you!
I love the word 'harrowing' as a noun. "Careful. There's a harrowing in that forest..." I don't even know what it is but I don't feel a compulsion to learn the meaning. All in a day's work for a man who loves to tell people vaguely sinister but incomprehensible statements to strangers.
It does give off the vibe of something awful and twisted! Stay sage and well!
Meat waud get the money see, meat waud gets the honeys he's ,drivin in his car something something far, ice on his fingers and his toes cuz hes a star!!!
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Meatwad make the money, see
Meatwad get the honies, G
Drivin' in my car, livin' like a star
Ice on my fingers and my toes
And I'm a Taurus
My name is...
Shake Zula, the mic rulah, the old schoolah
You wanna trip, I'll bring it to ya
Frylock and I'm on top
Rock you like a cop
Meatwad you're up next
With your knock-knock
Meatwad make the money, see
Meatwad get the honies, G
Drivin' in my car, livin' like a star
Ice on my fingers and my toes
And I'm a Taurus
Ha ha, check it, uh, check-check it, yeah
Cause we are the Aqua Teens
Make the homies say "ho" and the girlies wanna scream
Cause we are tha Aqua Teens
Make the homies say "ho" and the girlies wanna scream
Yeah
Aqua Teen Hunger Force
Number one in the hood, G
@JZT JZT, YES!!! hahaha I couldn't remember the whole lyrics lol. I used to have the cover of Mastadon doing the Aqua teen intro....I never knew he said and I'm a taurus...that sounds more like meat waud, remember the episode with DanZig, he scares me, does he ever put a shirt on?!
HEY!!! Can you make the blood run UP the walls?!!! 😈😎😇
Awesome work 👍👍👍
Thank you dear Doctor for the lovely story, but I have one favor to ask of you. Please pour youself a glass of bourbon for me, for I can't enjoy my favorite drink while I listen to your narration since im deployed
On this Memorial Day, let me say thank you for your service, from the bottom of my heart.
Thank you for your support Time Sucker and have a great memorial day
Semper fi brother or whateves 😂😂
@@daygoncornhole2395 listen here you damn crayon eater Im a God damn army hump window licking sob we say hooah lol thanks brother hope the Corp is treating yall well
@@adriandeshazo7291 sweet bejesus you scared the pants out of me when I saw the first part of your comment lol I honestly thought that I said something wrong LMAO 😂😂 I had just repeated what I have heard in the movies and seen in the comments before 😃😃
Kudos to you and Rebecca, Dr. Creepen. Outstanding story - thank you both.
What an excellent tale! Thanks Doc C....as per usual, stellar narration producing an immersive experience! Thank you so much for your solid consistent efforts! Hugs from New Mexico 💜
Wonderful storytelling. I actually have a friend who reminds me greatly of Amelia. She also dresses in black yet has a heart of gold
This story is fantastic! Excellent performance Doctor!
A new vid happy dance time perfect timing Doc it's bedtime thank you
Have a Creepen good night everyone
This was awesome, loved every second thanks Dr
Van Pasta! It's been too long my good man!! Been listening to you for at least four years and you never ever ever disappoint your audience. Please keep doing what your doing. It's important to all us creepy bastards
Freaking awesome Doc, was epic but well worth it😁
Thank you.
Excellent story and narration!
Ah good ol dr creepen. The only doctor to be on time for his appointments in history haha
I believe you have done this one before. I remember hearing this story but it was long ago so it was almost like hearing it again for the first time. Absolutely love this one! Thanks good doctor!!!!
Good.... this, was good. Totally epic!!
Thanks for the awesome read. Much love.❤️💗🥰
That was an amazing story!!! Wow. Well done 2 the author for this. Very well written loved it! And of course awesome narration By the Dr! Bravo guys
This is my new favorite creepy pasta! 💖
My all-time favorite stories are about trips to hell and back.
Fabulous story! Well written & wonderfully narrated as always! Hal’s decision was quite clever & interesting that without the accidental touch with Amon he would not have had the insight to come up with away to hopefully change the fate of all he felt responsible for! Well & artfully done. Still bouncing between the list of “most popular” & hitting the newer stories as they come as well. Perhaps soon I’ll be caught up & able to catch up with all your others as well! I took a detour to listen to the vigilante series as well as the Breech series to its current episode & well worth the detour! I’ve yet to peruse the Vatican series but may save that until I finish the most popular. Also VERY MUCH anticipating the next Werewolf story as that continues to be one of my favorites & I eagerly await its next parts. Thank you so much Dr & I continue to be SO thankful that I discovered your channel. All the best to you & yours!
Dr Creepn the story about the freemasons was really good is their a part 2 coming soon? Also great to see your channel is growing I have been listening to your stories back when you had 50k and it always hoped your channel would grow and get the credit it deserves keep up the good work!
There’s 2 vids of the freemasons on his channel. Not sure if there are more atm(:
The author wrote 10 Freemason stories, I've done all that have been written
I definitely enjoy this while working from home
Cheers Doc for always making the shift go quicker 😊🍻
Great story keep it up Doc
Tyvvm....what an amazing story. Your narration just drew me into this one!
Fabulous! Thank you darling Doctor 😘 !!!
I'll save this for breakfast tomorrow before I escape hell to go shopping, wait that's like jumping from the frying pan into the fire. Oh well I don't do stuff by half 😂. Thanks again good sir (Doffs hat)
Aru baku same here
Doffs Hat?
@Mathew Dixon, I'm mostly German...it think it means "hats off" but it might be dutch, im not going to google translate but I think I'm about right..like "hats off to you good doctor"means he liked it, like Bravo kinda.
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I'm gonna feel pretty stupid if it means like good job or some inside joke, but I already posted it so..............🤗
I love hearing the stories you read. They are always so interesting and you have a soothing calm voice that makes it even more enjoyable
Great timing once again Doc.
Great story Doc. I really enjoyed listening. 💜
As always Doc, great narrating and thanks to Rebbecca for a great story I really enjoyed.
Thank you so much!! ❤️ And yes-what a great narrator!
Need more hell stories.love all your work
This is a cut above the rest for me doctor! Thank you!!
One of the best yet Doc!
Thanks doc, another amazing take.
1 and a half hour to cover boring daily workday!
Hell yeah doc 👋 thanks 👍 I'm pouring my drink over ice right now
Thank you for everything man
As I've always said, I hit the like button even before I even listen to it.
Now I'll rewind so I don't miss anything 🤬🤬🤬
Amazing twist and super eventful story! Well done, since I would say he was a hero in the end and did think extremely careful before making a wish that would turn the fates of them all! Great ending
Your oratory skills enhance you tales as well as anyone out there. And it’s much appreciated all this extra work your doing for us in our troubled times. Cheers 🍻 to you!
This was a amazing story and another awesome job Doc 🍻
This is fantastic. You need to do more collabs Dr! I'd love to see you in more places :)
I'm Creepen on you Dr.
Gaaaayyyyy... Lol
Hey Dr. Creepen you should do some more cryptid stories!
That's a good story! Glad I waited for the whole thing. You did great Dr.
I don't understand why but the ending made me tear up..
Aahh stop following me..again and again I run into your stories, not remembering if it was me looking for you. 🤔
KEEP GOING DR.!!👍🏻 👍🏻
Your vids are awesome!
Greetings from Netherland
Keep em bro,
Or what I meant was keep em coming bro , gotta. Listen now because I been up all night
These are so amazing. You are incredibly talented. I put this on forget about about pandemic.
Actually, I don't think physical torture is even needed in hell. The person is already dead, so that person can't die again, meaning that there's no limit to how much pain a demon can magic onto the person with a snap of its fingers. It can be infinite.
But then that brings up the question do we still have are psyches? And if so are we still bound to likes like the Plato effect, I'll use myself as an example. I have several injurys that cause me great pain. Now while I'm on a lot of pain meds I've hit a Plato with them so I am at an odd head where the pain meds are a distraction while I am acutely aware of my pain. So I've learned to do everything while in this state and for the week when I run out of meds. Now with that being said. If I die and end up in the Cristian Hell instead of the arms of my beloved Heljá's arms, what's to say I can't learn to function and if that happens what's not to say I can't then learn demonic magic. Then I could become a prince of Hell.
@@mr.halloween3371 I think it'd be more likely that they'd shatter your psyche and then continue to make it even worse.
That was great. Thanks Doc
This was an amazing stories as always, also I just wanted to thank the Doc for entertaning us even during when he was sick. You sir are an inspiration and I raise a White Russian in your honor.
*clinks glass with you*I am having a non alcoholic 🍻 in Dr creepens honor hear hear
@@daygoncornhole2395 Sköl and I 100% Respect your choice of having a non alcoholic drink. I recommend Horcahata.
Finally out of quarantine here in a small county in Northern California. But everyone is wearing masks everywhere trying to be safe. Love your stories Dr. C! Thank you for getting me through the last 3 months!💜
That was quite a good yarn
My god that was amazing if there was any story of escaping hell this is the best there could be mastered
Have you worked in radio ? Love your voice. Wish we had you at our station !
Oh wow that was excellent! I tend to enjoy tales that give different outlooks on what Hell is like, some frighten me, some seem a little underwhelming. This story though focused more on salvation from the need to be prepared for it than the existence itself. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire story and especially the ending as I hoped it wouldn’t disappoint, and I was left happy😊 You’re one of the greats Dr. Creepen, and I sincerely appreciate your efforts to keep us all entertained. Hats off to you sir!
Yo more hell stories. Totally dope
Well now. That was a good one indeed. Thanks alot.