"Every precaution had been taken." Except, you know, using a manned submersible rather than an ROV. If it were an ROV, the Argonaut getting crushed like an empty can is an expensive bill rather than an expensive bill and several funerals.
Omg. You know I LOOVVVEEEE an aquatic horror story. I saw this on my commute to work and got so excited. Finally at work. Time to get this bad boy playing.
Good evening Dr.C. I love the water stories. ❤Thank you for sharing your talents and time. Your voice is truly amazing and to me it is medicine ❤. Have a blessed day or night.
Imagine you're a primordial deep sea snake and one day you encounter the largest and weirdest crab you've ever seen. You are rather curious and intelligent, so you swim to investigate. Is it food? Is it dangerous? You engage with it a little, defend your territory from that a__hole fish and follow the creature to find out where it comes from. Turns out it's from space.
DAVID MORNINGWAY HERE on another account. Your putting out some REALLY good stories lately!!! Has me wondering what kind of masterpiece you have cooking NEXT 😈😎😇
Damn that one cool surname, like it’s perfect for a morning tv show host, coffee producer, bulb creator or a doctor curing insomniacs. Dunno why but all I can think of is Max Power working at the power plant xD
All right my man, gotta drop a comment since I reactivated acct on my stupid phone(ps4 won't let me comment). Are you the best narrator? Nope! You stand head and shoulders above all but one as a STORYTELLER, which is a league or two above narrators. Many can read a story, few can tell one. Its gonna take forever to go through and like the years of videos I've watched. By all but curing my insomnia, you have helped me, and my marriage, more than you know. There are no words to properly convey my gratitude.
I'm not a Dr but I am an Ellison and considering my son and I are one of very few that I know of it's really cool to hear a story with a main character with the last name. Regardless another good story from the best narrator out here. Hope to hear some stuff for Halloween, as always thanks Doc.
I remember I used to always listen to these stories in my grandmas room. Now that she’s gone, these stories are very comforting to me. Thanks for them🙏🏿
If I may offer a bit of constructive criticism, I feel as if the sequence of events were a bit off in that the climactic event where the Leviathan completely destroys an entire fleet of attack submarines occurs at the end of the second act. Then immediately afterwards, the protagonists meet a military commander who states they need to go back to study the Leviathan, this after he just lost dozens of submarines and the lives of thousands of sailors. Its as if he just said ,"Meh," and the loss of half of America's attack submarine fleet is forgotten. (Also, colonel is not a naval rank. The fleet commander would likely have been an admiral.) It just wouldn't make sense to commit such a large force before knowing exactly what they were facing. Hindsight being 20/20, it might have been better to have the protagonists be coerced by the military to go go back down, interact with the Leviathan, then come back to the surface and report the magnitude of the Leviathan to the military commander. Then, because military commanders are complete knuckleheads, he disregards the findings of the scientists and commits his fleet of submarines to attack. The fleet still gets destroyed, but at least the sequence of events makes better sense. Just my two cents worth. Cheers! T_D
Definitely one of the best underwater sea creature creepypastas I’ve ever heard and it kept me enthralled throughout the entire story! Not an easy or normal task for one of these types of tales. They’re often too cookie cutter and just like the last one. For some reason this one held my attention. So I give a wholehearted thanks to the author, and of course a huge thanks to the Dr, Dr Creepen for his dedication to our entertainment! So much invested in these stories and I make sure I do all I can to absorb each moment of each one. Dr you are Number One! ☝️, please keep them coming!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I feel You, imagine not knowing You have such fear and buying subnautica like “it’s gonna be the best adventure” then shitting Yourself each time You go 400+ m deep… though I believe exposure therapy worked on me to a point But then there are warpers and these things terrify me to no end xd
@@Mr.Isquierdo oh lord, I have just checked it, looks equally interesting and terrifying. I guess I need to desensitize myself a bit more before I’ll try it xD
Into the abyss they went. Back out of the abyss they came. Scarred, Terrified. The sub was tiny, Barely big enough for 3. What happened?. From the captain it came silent but oh so deadly. Sorry couldn't resist a fart joke.
I wish I never played subnautica and either discovered that I have thalassophobia or gained it during playing it. Even though there is no music in the background I hear reaper leviathan hunting my sorry 455
What? Noooooooo! You can't just cut me off like that! I was so immersed. That was great! I love the leviathan and it's calculating intelligence, the SCP organization angle, the caution of the scientists and their reactions, the general's personality, everything about this story. I hope this author continues the story. I feel like so much has just gotten started, and there is room for tons of world building within the universe.
Doc you're so incomprehensibly much better than every other creepypasta/narration channel is not even a contest. Seriously man thank you so much for all the extra effort. One piece of advice, do more sea monster content. Your voice is tailor made for stories about the deep abyss. You're the futhermuckin MAN Doc. I get mords wixed up no cause for alarm. Cheers!
I was waiting for the team to return to meet the creature. while in the creature's presence, someone on the submersible notices a device either in or on the craft and realizes that it's a small nuclear weapon. END of STORY
Too many repeated segments of description. The bit about the eye was overdone after the third repetition of it. The very first chapter has lines almost repeated to the point where I had to scroll back and see if it was a double pasted error. Each part is a repeat of the same sequence. Dive down, monster breaks stuff, get followed coming up, be shocked that you have to go back, but still comply. Rinse & repeat 5 times. Concept is decent, but the writer needs more practice on story structure, and a thesaurus.
Narration was great but this story sucked. We are scientists that were hired to explore the bottom of the ocean. While getting to the bottom of the ocean we discovered a giant sea creature. After observing the creature, we decided it wasn't the safest idea to continue observing the creature. For some reason, the fact that we were hired to travel to the bottom of the ocean to collect "samples" is far too lucrative to even consider not traveling to the bottom of the ocean when a massive aggressive creature exists there. We discover that the military "also knows about this groundbreaking discovery..." and we witness them getting destroyed observing/confronting the creature. The military then tells us we have to help them neutralize this creature... This would maybe be "creepy" if the military was responsible for the creature or if there was no way out of the water or something but I was in agreement with the majority of the crew when they said this shit is too fucked up. My disbelief was unsuspended when, the same crew who witnessed, and felt, the fucked up shit, had to resign themselves to descending again? Any normal person would never have gotten back into the sub. Maybe the author didn't stress the "importance" or "scientific significance" of completing the expedition but based on the characters and their words, there was no tangible reason why that crew would agree to continue to put themselves in that level of danger. Sure, you won't get that pay day but that is all you sacrifice in an effort to preserve your life.
@@UpsideDownCanoe Hmmm, that was a deeply insightful critique of my comment. I love the way you refuted my points one after the other, bringing powerful counter arguments and examples to support your carefully considered case. Bravo. Slow hand clap.
"And then... I saw it." "and then... we saw it." "and then... I saw it" "razor sharp teeth" Where do people keep learning these horrible, amateurish tropes and that annoying Pronoun Game? Not to mention the pretentious Victorian style of writing, trying to emulate Lovecraft. Seriously, is there someone out there with "Put all of these in your story to make it da best!"? I'm all for encouraging aspiring authors, but the bad writing habits in the creepypasta scene keep passing around like STDs at a truck stop.
Thank you for you input, and you're 100% right, I am new to writing, but I'm sorry that what I wrote is not within your taste. Also, maybe wear protection at the truck stop?
I love how tone dead you really are especially making zero points. Just here hating because this video brought joy to everyone but your effeminate self. Why not you make your own channel Grammar Nazi? Let's see you do so we can roast you for your whack ideas. Smh Loser
It's not "what" is written, but "how." The premise and story are fine. It's the mechanical details I'm talking about. It's a gripe I have, because I ised to write collegiately, but had to stop due to carpal tunnel. I want aspiring authors to succeed, but seeing those overised writing tropes in 90% of stories is akin to biting aluminum foil.
"Every precaution had been taken."
Except, you know, using a manned submersible rather than an ROV. If it were an ROV, the Argonaut getting crushed like an empty can is an expensive bill rather than an expensive bill and several funerals.
Gosh this is exciting. So many ways to go with it. Mainly down though.
Love the sea & all it's mystery - it's great to get a wonderful story told by one of the best narrators around.❤❤
Thank you so much!
Omg. You know I LOOVVVEEEE an aquatic horror story. I saw this on my commute to work and got so excited. Finally at work. Time to get this bad boy playing.
Good evening Dr.C. I love the water stories. ❤Thank you for sharing your talents and time. Your voice is truly amazing and to me it is medicine ❤. Have a blessed day or night.
Thanks for listening :)
I always love the deepsea stories, I hope this author makes more!
Man nothing beats the deep deep ocean trenches - gigantism run rampart there for some species. Scary stuff lol!
Yeah, it's a fertile breeding ground for horror, along with the isolation.
This was a great story tonight. I do love ocean stories. The visual tonight was beautiful and soothing. Superb narration. Thank you very much 🤗🌟🫶❤️
Thanks for listening as always!
Really hope the Author of this story continues writing it. It was fascinating ❤❤❤❤.
I hope so!
Same. This was soooo good. I hope they don’t cliff Hang us. Because I want these guys to now just work with anex like the scp world
Imagine you're a primordial deep sea snake and one day you encounter the largest and weirdest crab you've ever seen. You are rather curious and intelligent, so you swim to investigate. Is it food? Is it dangerous?
You engage with it a little, defend your territory from that a__hole fish and follow the creature to find out where it comes from. Turns out it's from space.
Made my day xD
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M.😊xmajewski
❤❤❤ Thankyou Dr. Just what I was hoping for! You're a total diamond 🔹 ❤❤❤
OMG 😲 titan submarine implosion 😮
DAVID MORNINGWAY HERE on another account. Your putting out some REALLY good stories lately!!! Has me wondering what kind of masterpiece you have cooking NEXT 😈😎😇
Damn that one cool surname, like it’s perfect for a morning tv show host, coffee producer, bulb creator or a doctor curing insomniacs. Dunno why but all I can think of is Max Power working at the power plant xD
I hope they help the creature or leave him alone. Really good story tonight, thank you.
I hope so too
Agreed.
Great story Doc,absolutely terrifying!!!
Glad you enjoyed it
Masterpiece! ❤
😮😮😮😮😮😮😮... REALLY GOOD story doctor. Hopefully there will be more...
Excellent, a conclusion would be great!
All right my man, gotta drop a comment since I reactivated acct on my stupid phone(ps4 won't let me comment). Are you the best narrator? Nope! You stand head and shoulders above all but one as a STORYTELLER, which is a league or two above narrators. Many can read a story, few can tell one. Its gonna take forever to go through and like the years of videos I've watched. By all but curing my insomnia, you have helped me, and my marriage, more than you know. There are no words to properly convey my gratitude.
I'm not a Dr but I am an Ellison and considering my son and I are one of very few that I know of it's really cool to hear a story with a main character with the last name. Regardless another good story from the best narrator out here. Hope to hear some stuff for Halloween, as always thanks Doc.
My neighbors were Ellisons growing up in Scottsdale. Mr. Ellison built airplanes in his garage.
Wonderful!
Deep sea stories are ripe with possibilities...
Dive deep doc...
I remember I used to always listen to these stories in my grandmas room. Now that she’s gone, these stories are very comforting to me. Thanks for them🙏🏿
Amazing story that needs a part two! Well read by the Master once again.
Please do more sea/deep ocean stories
Oh I definitely second that (judging from the comment section, I’m not the only one)
Wow , amazing story🥰
Thanks. Great story well told.
Hell yeah! Number 4!! This is the first time I've ever been less than 10
Dr. 💜
After diddy it sound’s slightly terrifying
If I may offer a bit of constructive criticism, I feel as if the sequence of events were a bit off in that the climactic event where the Leviathan completely destroys an entire fleet of attack submarines occurs at the end of the second act. Then immediately afterwards, the protagonists meet a military commander who states they need to go back to study the Leviathan, this after he just lost dozens of submarines and the lives of thousands of sailors. Its as if he just said ,"Meh," and the loss of half of America's attack submarine fleet is forgotten. (Also, colonel is not a naval rank. The fleet commander would likely have been an admiral.) It just wouldn't make sense to commit such a large force before knowing exactly what they were facing. Hindsight being 20/20, it might have been better to have the protagonists be coerced by the military to go go back down, interact with the Leviathan, then come back to the surface and report the magnitude of the Leviathan to the military commander. Then, because military commanders are complete knuckleheads, he disregards the findings of the scientists and commits his fleet of submarines to attack. The fleet still gets destroyed, but at least the sequence of events makes better sense. Just my two cents worth. Cheers! T_D
Are you by chance a member of r/DrCreepensVault?
@Bitter_Decision_4960-f7g is that a spec ops unit?
@@fox19delta21the Anomalous Neutralization and Examination eXpedition or ANEX is a shadow organization.
Yesssssss
NO shadow organization would have shared any details about its previous containment missions. Specially with civilians. Nope!
That sounds great, thank you my dear Doc 💜🖤💜
You are so welcome
Yes, please continue 😮😮😮😮😮
🖤very cool 🖤
Thanks Doc!
Thank you for more marine horror, good Dr ! 🐙🦑
More to come!
Cheers doc
This was awesome!! I love aquatic horror stories. This might be why I have thalassophobia. 😂
This tale just shows, when you go into the ocean, you are no longer at the top of the food chain.
That was a great story
A creature that Big I'd Leave it Alone.
Every ledgion has a Bit of truth to it.
Thank you.
Uno 😎💖
🔝 Doc
Very good, very NI-IIICE.!! 👍 👍 😁 😁
Nyc here to relax ❤❤
Well done
Definitely one of the best underwater sea creature creepypastas I’ve ever heard and it kept me enthralled throughout the entire story! Not an easy or normal task for one of these types of tales. They’re often too cookie cutter and just like the last one. For some reason this one held my attention. So I give a wholehearted thanks to the author, and of course a huge thanks to the Dr, Dr Creepen for his dedication to our entertainment! So much invested in these stories and I make sure I do all I can to absorb each moment of each one. Dr you are Number One! ☝️, please keep them coming!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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That haunting moment the scientists realize they are the D-Class
The ocean is one of my biggest fears
I feel You, imagine not knowing You have such fear and buying subnautica like “it’s gonna be the best adventure” then shitting Yourself each time You go 400+ m deep… though I believe exposure therapy worked on me to a point
But then there are warpers and these things terrify me to no end xd
@mxmajewski I played Soma without knowing it was in the ocean :(
@@Mr.Isquierdo oh lord, I have just checked it, looks equally interesting and terrifying. I guess I need to desensitize myself a bit more before I’ll try it xD
Goodnight 2:17 am
Listening again lol
Into the abyss they went.
Back out of the abyss they came.
Scarred, Terrified.
The sub was tiny, Barely big enough for 3.
What happened?.
From the captain it came silent but oh so deadly.
Sorry couldn't resist a fart joke.
I wish I never played subnautica and either discovered that I have thalassophobia or gained it during playing it. Even though there is no music in the background I hear reaper leviathan hunting my sorry 455
What? Noooooooo! You can't just cut me off like that! I was so immersed.
That was great! I love the leviathan and it's calculating intelligence, the SCP organization angle, the caution of the scientists and their reactions, the general's personality, everything about this story. I hope this author continues the story. I feel like so much has just gotten started, and there is room for tons of world building within the universe.
😎👍
Sup doc
Find the leviathan Chronicles!!!!
They take me back. Did they ever finish it?
Rooting for the creature here, he’s a cool guy
The Creepy Doctor… 💀😆 This guy has to be in the top 3
Personally I like the end rambles
Thanx Doc
Most welcome!
I don’t want them to kill it….
Big Boy just wanted to see what new metal fish would do.
👍
Hate the stories that end with a 'to be continued' vibe.
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Other than that, decent story, excellent narration.
Sweet Dreams A I monster.
Doc you're so incomprehensibly much better than every other creepypasta/narration channel is not even a contest. Seriously man thank you so much for all the extra effort. One piece of advice, do more sea monster content. Your voice is tailor made for stories about the deep abyss. You're the futhermuckin MAN Doc. I get mords wixed up no cause for alarm. Cheers!
💪🏻💀👍🏻
I was waiting for the team to return to meet the creature. while in the creature's presence, someone on the submersible notices a device either in or on the craft and realizes that it's a small nuclear weapon. END of STORY
Colonel David Keith?
Guess who's back?
Back again?
Abyssal horror from the depths. 🦑 🐙 🦈 🦀
Back again.
30:32 my ass! No job is worth dying over. Wouldn’t get me back in that sub let alone water deeper than 3 feet
It ended 😮 Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
The Global Occult Coalition?
Too many repeated segments of description. The bit about the eye was overdone after the third repetition of it. The very first chapter has lines almost repeated to the point where I had to scroll back and see if it was a double pasted error. Each part is a repeat of the same sequence. Dive down, monster breaks stuff, get followed coming up, be shocked that you have to go back, but still comply. Rinse & repeat 5 times. Concept is decent, but the writer needs more practice on story structure, and a thesaurus.
Most of there stories are so amateur. I rarely listen any more.
Narration was great but this story sucked.
We are scientists that were hired to explore the bottom of the ocean. While getting to the bottom of the ocean we discovered a giant sea creature. After observing the creature, we decided it wasn't the safest idea to continue observing the creature. For some reason, the fact that we were hired to travel to the bottom of the ocean to collect "samples" is far too lucrative to even consider not traveling to the bottom of the ocean when a massive aggressive creature exists there.
We discover that the military "also knows about this groundbreaking discovery..." and we witness them getting destroyed observing/confronting the creature. The military then tells us we have to help them neutralize this creature...
This would maybe be "creepy" if the military was responsible for the creature or if there was no way out of the water or something but I was in agreement with the majority of the crew when they said this shit is too fucked up. My disbelief was unsuspended when, the same crew who witnessed, and felt, the fucked up shit, had to resign themselves to descending again?
Any normal person would never have gotten back into the sub. Maybe the author didn't stress the "importance" or "scientific significance" of completing the expedition but based on the characters and their words, there was no tangible reason why that crew would agree to continue to put themselves in that level of danger. Sure, you won't get that pay day but that is all you sacrifice in an effort to preserve your life.
Well that got silly. It's a shame the author went with the military conspiracy angle. Also, it was just a bad rewrite of SCP3000.
Want a napkin?
@@UpsideDownCanoe Hmmm, that was a deeply insightful critique of my comment. I love the way you refuted my points one after the other, bringing powerful counter arguments and examples to support your carefully considered case. Bravo. Slow hand clap.
@Martial-Mat i aint reading all that yap
@@UpsideDownCanoe Dumb huh?
@Martial-Mat here, you dropped your fedora good sir.
Like listening to paint dry....
@@theldun1 well that’s a unique hobby, also a genuine question, do You really dislike Yourself this much to listen/watch sth You don’t enjoy?
"And then... I saw it." "and then... we saw it." "and then... I saw it" "razor sharp teeth" Where do people keep learning these horrible, amateurish tropes and that annoying Pronoun Game? Not to mention the pretentious Victorian style of writing, trying to emulate Lovecraft. Seriously, is there someone out there with "Put all of these in your story to make it da best!"? I'm all for encouraging aspiring authors, but the bad writing habits in the creepypasta scene keep passing around like STDs at a truck stop.
Thank you for you input, and you're 100% right, I am new to writing, but I'm sorry that what I wrote is not within your taste. Also, maybe wear protection at the truck stop?
I love how tone dead you really are especially making zero points. Just here hating because this video brought joy to everyone but your effeminate self. Why not you make your own channel Grammar Nazi? Let's see you do so we can roast you for your whack ideas. Smh Loser
It's not "what" is written, but "how." The premise and story are fine. It's the mechanical details I'm talking about. It's a gripe I have, because I ised to write collegiately, but had to stop due to carpal tunnel. I want aspiring authors to succeed, but seeing those overised writing tropes in 90% of stories is akin to biting aluminum foil.
Under the sea no one can hear you scream….