I Found an Abandoned City Hidden Deep in The Hills of The Appalachian Rust Belt | CREEPYPASTA

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  • Опубликовано: 3 дек 2024

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  • @TheStuartofCosby
    @TheStuartofCosby Месяц назад +39

    As an Apappachlian myself in the rural sticks of backwoods Tennessee. Love hearing these Masterpieces. Thanks, as always. Good, Dr

    • @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551
      @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551 Месяц назад +4

      Im from Queens NYC and I love hearing them is there really all the Magick and occult stuff etc

    • @TheStuartofCosby
      @TheStuartofCosby Месяц назад +3

      @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551 Don't really know about the Magic part. Tho I do believe that dark magic is the Demons
      At play. As for the occult thing most definitely a thing around here. Bunch of men women and even a few children. Hold service in the woods at dark naked as the day they where born. Maybe on a special occasion, sacrifice a chicken or 3.
      Don't know about your part of the country. Though i can for a while say that they are things that go bump in the mountains at nite around here.

    • @FloridaMan0561
      @FloridaMan0561 Месяц назад +1

      An

    • @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551
      @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551 Месяц назад +2

      We dont have mountains in my neighborhood But A lot of Guns use to go Bump in the night lol I'm from Howard Beach Jamaica Queens The Italian section home to many old cosa nostra like John Gotti, 40 blocks south is south side where 50 cent and them come from.... I love stories from your mountains:)​@@TheStuartofCosby

    • @durere
      @durere Месяц назад +3

      If you're into Appalachian stuff, I recommend you go check out Stygian Sagas. He writes his own stories, most of them connected, and most set in rural Appalachia. Also has a great voice.
      Not to mention he's a great damn writer, in my opinion well above 90% of his peers.
      *Sorry Dr. for plugging another channel, but I have a compulsion of spreading word of good sht.

  • @genus.species3362
    @genus.species3362 Месяц назад +12

    I was feeling nostalgic this halloween, so i decided to start revising a lot of the old creepypasta narrators that i enjoyed and helped me sleep over the last decade.
    And your channel probably got to me the most lol, the introduction at the beginning with the music took me straight back to 2018 when i discovered this channel and similar ones like NaturesTemper.
    Glad to see you're still going strong after all these years.

  • @Emily-dq6dl
    @Emily-dq6dl Месяц назад +11

    This was 100% AI written. No part of it made sense and multiple parts directly contradicted each other. A small working class town with a population of 234,000 that had nothing to do for fun but had a mall, movie theater, and bowling alley! It read like 9 different horror stories smushed together. That’s AI.

  • @johannageisel5390
    @johannageisel5390 Месяц назад +18

    This was a little all over the place, but the unexplainable is part of the horror genre, so I will not complain too hard.

    • @Linda-rs5qt
      @Linda-rs5qt Месяц назад +2

      I agree! To be honest I found it hard to get through it. A mall in the hills of Appalachia ??? Wha?!! It’s only because Dr Creepen is reading it that I’m powering through it as he makes everything sound great!! lol

    • @WhitneyDahlin
      @WhitneyDahlin 29 дней назад

      ​@@Linda-rs5qt because its an AI story unfortunately. This had a lot of potential as an idea.

    • @Linda-rs5qt
      @Linda-rs5qt 28 дней назад +1

      @@WhitneyDahlin no way?? Really?? I want to avoid ai stuff to give actual writers more power to keep writing

  • @AlexKenas
    @AlexKenas Месяц назад +24

    I am currently listening in a run down cabin by the light of a small fire as I drink hot coffee from an enameled percolator with some bourbon flavored cake as strange creatures prowl around in the forest during a downpour of heavy rain.

  • @markportwood4045
    @markportwood4045 Месяц назад +15

    A small “working town” with no bars and not much to do, of 234’000 people?!! 🤨

    • @jamesrogers1554
      @jamesrogers1554 Месяц назад +6

      I notice that too. It would be the 3rd largest in the state. It’s terribly written in that regard alone. I turned it off immediately after they said that.

    • @trickgoblin
      @trickgoblin Месяц назад +3

      Double that and you’ve got the full population of my whole country.

    • @askme8592
      @askme8592 25 дней назад

      You've apparently never heard of dry towns 😂😂😂

    • @jamesrogers1554
      @jamesrogers1554 25 дней назад +1

      @ Bud, you completely missed the point.

  • @bryanfish1260
    @bryanfish1260 Месяц назад +3

    As a listener I appreciate this. As a Kentuckian I find this awful.

  • @jayblack7495
    @jayblack7495 Месяц назад +2

    Ever since The Meat Locusts, I realized something...
    No day/night is complete without "Creepen."
    As always, thank you sir!

  • @adriennepyle7625
    @adriennepyle7625 Месяц назад +4

    This one was kind of a letdown for me. It was all over the place, and the main character very quickly just accepted the situation and became suddenly convinced he could free this town of whatever is going on? I don't know........ something missing in this one. It's a shame because I'm from Upstate South Carolina, and the Appalachain Mountains are a beloved area full of so much lore and very true, spiritually terrifying legends and rules you always follow. Real deal ancient stuff. Was once part of the Scottish highlands on pangea and one of the oldest mountain chains in the world.

    • @queenofthejungle4511
      @queenofthejungle4511 Месяц назад +1

      I thought the same. He was like, oh I'm in a time loop. Ok I'll just kill the guy. Then the evidence of what wad going on jusy happened to be right there. But no one else 40 years ago realized how easy it would be to stop it.

  • @Nyctonaut
    @Nyctonaut Месяц назад +2

    Huh, once he got to the town, it did feel a little Silent Hill, huh?

  • @gretchenkiley6615
    @gretchenkiley6615 Месяц назад +4

    Thank you so much, Dr. Creepen, the bird shaped giant thing is reminiscent of the Mothman 🫣

  • @TheBo0m
    @TheBo0m Месяц назад +4

    This story has a weird flow, or lack thereof. Very disjointed and it's strange how the protagonist keeps flip flopping between wanting to escape the town and "putting an end to the madness." It felt like someone took several horror stories that already exist, put them in a stack, shuffled it up, and transcribed it without any thought to how everything fit together. Not a well thought out story at all in my opinion, but you did a wonderful job narrating as always.

  • @StoicDreamWatch
    @StoicDreamWatch Месяц назад +2

    Apple at'cha? Or Apple ay'sha? Either way, looking forward to listening to this one!

  • @kayi9236
    @kayi9236 Месяц назад +1

    Thank you dear Dr Creepen, enjoyed this story and your narration as always!

  • @vickischmeltz7934
    @vickischmeltz7934 Месяц назад +7

    Good evening Dr.C. Absolutely splendid story . Thank you ❤❤❤❤.

  • @jasonroberts4470
    @jasonroberts4470 Месяц назад +3

    Thank you for posting on the Eve Halloween 🎃

  • @Troy-yq7yt
    @Troy-yq7yt Месяц назад +1

    That's Why you are supposed to have Pistol, knife, Shotgun, Rifle and Bear Spray

  • @RAThatFNGirlChicago
    @RAThatFNGirlChicago Месяц назад +1

    Damn decent Doc❤❤❤❤

  • @desertbluffs7113
    @desertbluffs7113 Месяц назад +8

    Big fan of your stories,but you have struck gold with this one, really struck a
    Chord with me ! Thanks

  • @Acetyl53
    @Acetyl53 Месяц назад +3

    This one is very "Twin Peaks".

  • @carolduvall111
    @carolduvall111 Месяц назад +1

    3:54 the road way on the video caused me to get that what's wrong with this picture feeling, then it dawned on me...its not in North America😊❤

  • @jamesrogers1554
    @jamesrogers1554 Месяц назад +6

    “Backwoods city”….of nearly a quarter of a million people in Kentucky? You lost me right there. That would be the 3rd largest city in the state and we are to believe it just “disappeared?” No, that’s just terrible writing.
    Doc I love your narration but wish you paid more attention to the quality of the stories you choose.

    • @DeepFleeceheart
      @DeepFleeceheart Месяц назад +1

      Smirk and shake your head at the silly detail, then rewrite in your head like i do.

  • @dominickk5293
    @dominickk5293 Месяц назад +2

    Chuck Woolery, the host of Love Connection, was also a mayor?

  • @allisonbarr7068
    @allisonbarr7068 Месяц назад +1

    I wish someone would tell a story about northern Appalachian mountains, specifically New Hampshire, but the mountains go all the way to Canada. I love these stories, thank you!

  • @annettew5740
    @annettew5740 Месяц назад +2

    Hey Doc! Its 11:50pm, lights are off and I'm snuggled in and ready to listen. I'd like to tell that I really appreciate you, especially on these sleepless nights! Happy Halloween everyone!🤗💜🕷👻🎃

  • @MrsCaranAmy
    @MrsCaranAmy Месяц назад +2

    That was a suspenseful story tonight. I enjoyed the exploration of the little town. Amazing narration as always. An early Happy Halloween 🎃 and Goodnight ❤️🤗🌟

  • @debbieadkins9566
    @debbieadkins9566 Месяц назад +2

    Ok I absolutely love your story telling. I’ve paused it to say this. Don’t want to be a big spoiler but I’m from Boyd Co. I went to Boyd Co. high school in the 80’s. The country school mascot was and still is a lion. Near by high school and the biggest rival is Ashland and their mascot is tomcats. There isn’t a tunnel entrance to Boyd Co. football field. There is in Ashland. The only mall near Boyd Co in the 80’s was in Huntington WV. A 20 minute drive from Boyd Co. This story never happened. I’ve never heard of the town this story is about. There were no bars in the 80’s because the whole county was dry. You couldn’t buy alcohol anywhere. There was a VFW bar for veterans and you had to have a membership to go. And membership was by invitation only. I’m not mad I’m looking forward to listening. I’m proud of where I’m from even if it was so backwards thinking back in the 80’s. A good place to grow up. I don’t live there now and haven’t for 30 years. I did own the house I grew up in until a few years ago. I hated to sale my Kentucky home. But I was never going back to live there and renting it out from states away was too much. Charlie Mansion lived there before he went California. His mom lived and died in Boyd Co. Charlie Mansion’s 1/2 brother was asst football coach back in the 80’s for Boyd Co. It was a strange place and strange things did happen around the area but not this story. It doesn’t really matter I understand. There are plenty of true stories to tell about this area. I just wonder why or how the writer chose this area. Brings back a lot of memories. Don’t mean to ruin the story but did want to put some facts in. Ok I’ve got to listen now. Thanks for what you do.❤

    • @FearGrounds
      @FearGrounds Месяц назад +2

      The pronunciation being different from what you're used to, you are intimately familiar with Poage Landing, I'm sure

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Месяц назад +2

    8:04 Chuck Woolery was the actual Mayor?? 😂😂😂 idk if many of you remember him from the ‘80s but he was a game show host back then.
    44:08 Damn! And he knew all of this back in 1986? Now that’s a prophet! He saw it coming wayyyy before any of us even had the guts to admit that it’s already happened! I’ll give the guy credit for that. Killing might not have been the best decision but he definitely told them some hard truths.

  • @lidiyaheyheyhey3387
    @lidiyaheyheyhey3387 Месяц назад +2

    Good one , thanks . ❤❤❤❤

  • @dustinmannel3071
    @dustinmannel3071 Месяц назад +3

    Oh my God I have a fishing cabin only an hour away from this location!😂😂

  • @duchessofdarkness27
    @duchessofdarkness27 Месяц назад +2

    Great video 💜

  • @dontcrymasha
    @dontcrymasha Месяц назад +1

    Interesting story, beautifully narrated! Thank you Doc very much!

  • @lorddemonoss3945
    @lorddemonoss3945 20 дней назад +1

    I'm gonna pass on this.

  • @taylorfain6957
    @taylorfain6957 Месяц назад +1

    I’m so excited for a nice mountain story

  • @kellyholmes4554
    @kellyholmes4554 Месяц назад +1

    ❤❤❤ Needed this more than usual tonight! Thankyou Dr. for always being there for us! Now to chill out....ahh ❤❤❤

  • @Meniscus6
    @Meniscus6 Месяц назад +2

    Seems like somone liked silent hill an fatal frame one night in wellston.

  • @GWMarshallinva
    @GWMarshallinva Месяц назад +2

    RIP Armco

  • @SleepyLeeeee
    @SleepyLeeeee Месяц назад +3

    Ahh but you are assuming the town is a literal one Dr. Creepen. It sort of reminds me of that RUclipsr mall one you just finished recently, except this one is figurative. I may be wrong (I usually am 🤣).

  • @TaeYun-o2y
    @TaeYun-o2y Месяц назад +1

    Thanks Doc!

  • @Cat_festation
    @Cat_festation Месяц назад +1

    Perfect this evening before Halloween 🎃

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch 25 дней назад

    Thank you Dr Creepen for the awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as usual. Definitely made my morning.🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @sirspikey
    @sirspikey Месяц назад +3

    well read as always but must say the story was not that good, f.ex. some feelings/reactions of the character didn't make any sense, the story failed to build any real excitement or tension, suspension.

  • @pax_aurum_nightlord
    @pax_aurum_nightlord Месяц назад +3

    This was an interesting story. Reminds me of "On a Hill" "Dead Mall" and other stories you recently read. speaking of, when is your next story coming?

  • @24HSTORIES
    @24HSTORIES Месяц назад

    a meaningful story that I am sitting near the cabin with a cup of coffee enjoying, the space here is also suitable for the story

  • @StickySyrupEverywhere
    @StickySyrupEverywhere Месяц назад +1

    Hmm. I'm not that far from Poage right now. As described, that is. Could probably be there before midnight.

    • @jasonroberts4470
      @jasonroberts4470 Месяц назад

      Don't go you don't want to be tomorrow's hot

  • @winstonwins1096
    @winstonwins1096 Месяц назад +1

    It started off good then it just lost me. The writing was good I just didn't find the protagonist believable at all.

  • @CKlegion7272
    @CKlegion7272 12 дней назад

    Great job.
    Greetings from Netherland

  • @aibheissilva2461
    @aibheissilva2461 Месяц назад +1

    Woooeeee!!!! Another great one read by everyone's favourite, smooth-talking, hypnotic sounding Doc Creepen. 👏💖😶‍🌫️👀

  • @devinvaldesalice7427
    @devinvaldesalice7427 Месяц назад +1

    Is that how all British people pronounce "clerk"?
    .....because it's wrong!

  • @RonaldLivingston-n2d
    @RonaldLivingston-n2d Месяц назад +1

    A city or a town 🤔

  • @OliversWorld333
    @OliversWorld333 26 дней назад

    DAVID MORNINGWAY HERE, great story doc 😈😎😇

  • @Thisisnotadreamhaha
    @Thisisnotadreamhaha Месяц назад

    Thanks!

  • @Robert-j6w5v
    @Robert-j6w5v Месяц назад +5

    I farted

  • @ronway7280
    @ronway7280 26 дней назад

    If you go to the midwestern United States, you will see many towns that are simply abandoned and untouched for decades. Same with the rural eastern US. Not quite as big as this town, but not all are tiny either.

  • @Hengebobs
    @Hengebobs 28 дней назад +1

    Author of this one is a little too into alliteration...

  • @avmelidor
    @avmelidor 14 дней назад

    If that happened to me. I would never take pictures again

  • @breannashell3799
    @breannashell3799 23 дня назад

    The background music used always reminds me of Diablo 3 music.

  • @jeffsites7351
    @jeffsites7351 22 дня назад

    Being from Ashland Ky. The blue ribbon lanes was up and running 4 years ago, and tourn down 2 years ago.. this is complete bull shit...

  • @benstrbich8813
    @benstrbich8813 Месяц назад +3

    A mayor doesn’t have the power to declare a state of emergency and/or order national guard troops in.

    • @Edgycoo
      @Edgycoo Месяц назад +2

      This mayor did so the obviously can.

  • @EdgyShooter
    @EdgyShooter Месяц назад

    I love your narration, but seriously no one saw the guy and he didn't run towards them, just casually sat back down on the bench?

  • @joshwagner5992
    @joshwagner5992 Месяц назад +1

    Kronkrete

  • @khtauhidislam7505
    @khtauhidislam7505 Месяц назад +1

  • @avmelidor
    @avmelidor 14 дней назад

    Nor have anything to do with that place again

  • @Andrew-if3sd
    @Andrew-if3sd 26 дней назад

    15:35

  • @James-m3o5x
    @James-m3o5x Месяц назад +1

    ⭐ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍🏻🎃

  • @sharonallen5176
    @sharonallen5176 Месяц назад

    😄I live in Portsmouth, but in England . WOOP WOOP

  • @cowboykiller9734
    @cowboykiller9734 26 дней назад

    Mothman?

  • @jaggercarter9183
    @jaggercarter9183 29 дней назад

    Guys it’s a story let you imagination wonder a little

  • @kristinacable
    @kristinacable Месяц назад

  • @debrapoirier4435
    @debrapoirier4435 Месяц назад

    🖤whoa🖤

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 Месяц назад +1

    Ok an interesting story no doubt, although I did find it hard to follow the line, as it seemed to skip around a bit. What really struck me as strange was the last picture quote. Forever. What does that mean? I’m at a total loss for meaning for this one guys and gals, so if anyone out there can explain it to me I’d be grateful! The great Dr did an outstanding job with this, no surprise there! So I thank him again for his work and dedication to bring us quality well delivered stories and even if they sometimes fall short as our expectations aren’t fully met, it’s never the fault of Dr Creepen! He is the supreme ruler of CreepyPasta narration! All shall bow down before his greatness!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🫡🫡