The Eternal Kingdom learns an important lesson about Humans | HFY | A SciFi Full Story

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  • Опубликовано: 8 янв 2025

Комментарии • 83

  • @blogusvox
    @blogusvox 9 месяцев назад +27

    "How desperate do you think we are now?"
    It only meant one thing, a new project was started, different but better than the previous one; Cataphract 2.0

  • @cxrasher8472
    @cxrasher8472 9 дней назад

    One of the best short sci/fi stories I've come across in more years than I want to count, in spite of the AI narration.
    I've come back to listen to it several times, and shared it to friends.
    It would have been so much better with a female narrating Elizabeth's voice.

  • @TheLunacyofOurTimes
    @TheLunacyofOurTimes 9 месяцев назад +24

    Finally. A reasonably coherent and good story. So much trash these days.

    • @ymmijx6061
      @ymmijx6061 9 месяцев назад +4

      eh? it's pretty sci-fantasy

    • @CryptidsRoost
      @CryptidsRoost 7 месяцев назад +1

      That's because unless an author is listed, then the majority (not all) of them have been written by AI, usually ChatGPT. Giveaways are usually way too many plot holes, sections being repeated and many of the AI/TTS voiceover channels do this and they tend to be bone idol and not edit to the audio to remove the repeated sections. Some sections get repeated because they have asked ChatGPT to expand/give more detail in certain sections.
      I have found by reading many video comments that a lot of folks are not only getting pissed off with the voiceovers as many necessary inflections etc and not done by AI/TTS but the stories being written by AI too. They are either threatening to unsubscribe or have already done so. So unless these channels take note, they will not only lose subs but they could lose monetization as they will drop below the threshold for subscribers and total yearly watched hours.
      This is why I have started my own sci-fi narration channel and it will not be AI voices but the stories are written by actual authors too. This account is a horror/creepypasta narration channel. My new one is @InterstellarSciFiTales and the first few videos will be going live in the next few days.

    • @TheLunacyofOurTimes
      @TheLunacyofOurTimes 6 месяцев назад +1

      @@CryptidsRoost The best channels are those that with permission grab HFY stories from Reddit written by humans.
      I have a stable of my own writing I was thinking of posting. Real writing is to this AI writing as chess is to checkers.

    • @CryptidsRoost
      @CryptidsRoost 6 месяцев назад +1

      @@TheLunacyofOurTimes ​ I totally agree. I have been narrating reddit-based creepypasta horror stories for the last 4 years now, and recently started a 2nd channel in this niche (@InterstellarSciFiTales) and I only narrate human-written stories. I generally don't use AI/TTS on my second channel, apart from maybe secondary characters and not always then. AI/TTS is okay but way too many words gets mispronounced, plus it can't tell a story, with real feeling and emotion, like a human can.

    • @TheLunacyofOurTimes
      @TheLunacyofOurTimes 6 месяцев назад +1

      @@CryptidsRoost Sigh. I am half tempted to start putting up some of my own human written stories to be a small glimmer among so much garbage and copy pasted nonsense.
      Tell you what Cryptid. keep me in mind, I have many decades of actual writing and thinking behind my belt.
      They keep calling it AI. I just think of it as some of the embarrassing stuff I might have written when I was 8 years old.

  • @luckyrobinshomestead
    @luckyrobinshomestead 9 месяцев назад +13

    I love one liner endings like this. What an excellent story.

    • @puffyclouds1485
      @puffyclouds1485 7 месяцев назад

      “The ones who run” is a really good one liner ending. Literally gave me chills

  • @geofthompson3844
    @geofthompson3844 7 месяцев назад +1

    For the first half of this story I was so confused. I was close to skipping out. But then, it just grabbed hold of me and by the end I was totally invested. This is definitely one of the best stories so far. Well done 👏 😊

  • @jasonhunter3429
    @jasonhunter3429 9 месяцев назад +11

    ooooh, it was a slow burn, but got there in the end!

  • @THEFRISKIESTDINGO
    @THEFRISKIESTDINGO 9 месяцев назад +3

    Pre-Historic Man: Spear! Poke poke!
    Medieval Man: Smol spear, nock it in the bow, throw spear far.
    Modern Man: Even more smol spear, put them in the magazine, throw hundreds of tiny spears a minute.
    Future Man: Spear! IN SPACE! Poke poke!

  • @Anh-qs5xz
    @Anh-qs5xz 9 месяцев назад +6

    Great story ❤️ for the story and ❤️ for the narration

  • @Terran.Marine.2
    @Terran.Marine.2 9 месяцев назад +10

    Somewhat reminds me of "Interview with a Vampire".

  • @NguyễnAnh-w9x
    @NguyễnAnh-w9x 9 месяцев назад +4

    I love this story ❤ very good story

  • @npierce14
    @npierce14 9 месяцев назад +15

    Shocked she was barefoot? Must have been the first time they met a white person from the south

  • @Kappa760
    @Kappa760 9 месяцев назад +9

    This is good one ❤ i like it

  • @Noah-zf6nf
    @Noah-zf6nf 9 месяцев назад +8

    First 👌🏾
    A very good story .
    I like it .

  • @jrobertw1970
    @jrobertw1970 8 месяцев назад +2

    Ok I really enjoyed this one !!!!
    Please say that is something else by this author ?!?!?!

  • @rusco1948
    @rusco1948 3 месяца назад +1

    GOOD STORY

  • @Brookhouse3041
    @Brookhouse3041 9 месяцев назад +5

    Jeez the author really put this out there 😂

  • @azurepulse1870
    @azurepulse1870 9 месяцев назад +11

    Halo spartan program meets Gundam/ultraman

    • @jonnypena7651
      @jonnypena7651 9 месяцев назад +3

      Evangelion program, the mech were biological

  • @mothmagic1
    @mothmagic1 9 месяцев назад +7

    This is a good one

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  9 месяцев назад

      Thank you !

    • @17mindgate
      @17mindgate 9 месяцев назад

      ​@IceFiction404 Quick question, are cataphracts the equivalent of... Spartans (Halo series)... Superman... or the Battleship supersoldiers (Uber series).

  • @mechanicalbow
    @mechanicalbow 9 месяцев назад +3

    Good story

  • @Oanh250
    @Oanh250 9 месяцев назад +2

    Very good

  • @stephenstonge7968
    @stephenstonge7968 9 месяцев назад +1

    27:21 They feed him tubas? 😂

  • @royporio634
    @royporio634 9 месяцев назад +3

    Is there a part 2?

  • @Jordy120
    @Jordy120 9 месяцев назад +13

    Barefoot? That could only mean one thing...

    • @christopherburnham1612
      @christopherburnham1612 9 месяцев назад +6

      Pregnant,😮😂😂😂

    • @Jordy120
      @Jordy120 9 месяцев назад +3

      @@christopherburnham1612 Lol...nice try. Could be part of the answer though..

    • @Tipper16
      @Tipper16 9 месяцев назад +2

      White girl

    • @PuNani-k7z
      @PuNani-k7z 9 месяцев назад +1

      Bigfoot 😂

    • @Jordy120
      @Jordy120 9 месяцев назад +5

      She's an Aussie!

  • @TheMishMosh
    @TheMishMosh 9 месяцев назад +14

    Only thing I know, they are fucked.

  • @MacCoy
    @MacCoy 9 месяцев назад +6

    they got cataphrucked.

  • @CarlosSantos-kv9ip
    @CarlosSantos-kv9ip 9 месяцев назад +2

    What was the point of the story to show how grateful people can be? This is like being upset with American GIs, because they left a mess at Normandy after D-Day.

  • @oshavlfarms7239
    @oshavlfarms7239 9 месяцев назад +2

    Yay commercials ever 4 minutes

  • @mehere8-32
    @mehere8-32 9 месяцев назад +6

    I enjoyed that. A curiosity Question, was it written by a person or an AI(zero intelligence)? cheers.

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  9 месяцев назад +8

      This is the writer from reddit

    • @mehere8-32
      @mehere8-32 9 месяцев назад +3

      Thank you. Cheers@@IceFiction404

  • @PeterLGଈ
    @PeterLGଈ 9 месяцев назад +2

    It's an intense story, but it is ruined by the TTS. The lack of human inflection ruins it. The TTS used is pretty good, but not that good.

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  9 месяцев назад +1

      I'm sorry....

    • @PeterLGଈ
      @PeterLGଈ 9 месяцев назад +1

      @@IceFiction404 Nothing to be sorry for! It's a good story. This is just one that I (me, personally) would prefer a human to read. Quite often, modern TTS voices are fine for short stories.

  • @brian-my7ym
    @brian-my7ym 8 месяцев назад +1

    Okay, the story was good but the robo read is a mess. If you are going to use robo Reed, you have to use phonetics

  • @alonghorns
    @alonghorns 9 месяцев назад +3

    great story and no part or idea was repeated. (thank you for that, not a waste of my time) because your story was so well told i subscribed. but i will unsubscribe if you start to waste my time with repeated lines or ideas

  • @UnitedArmsOrganization
    @UnitedArmsOrganization 9 месяцев назад +3

    I grew up with American Men. “Bikers” I would like to see American people as one people again, not a (fill in the blank) America
    American is One people One Country. How do we bring it back?
    Sci-fi people are usually among the brightest most intelligent people and the most ignored.
    I am just an old Fu#king biker who Loves his Country. Maybe some one is smarter than our politicians and has an answer.

  • @brucerawlinson5839
    @brucerawlinson5839 9 месяцев назад +6

    Teach your AI to pronounce words FFS

    • @alanjohnson2613
      @alanjohnson2613 9 месяцев назад +1

      Why do you call a simple text to speech program AI

  • @RansomMemoryAccess
    @RansomMemoryAccess 9 месяцев назад +2

    Lost me from the onset. The human is described how a human would describe another human, not how an alien would.

  • @josephhoward2971
    @josephhoward2971 9 месяцев назад +2

    Do you feel lucky, punk?
    Do you?
    ....

  • @edwardroche2480
    @edwardroche2480 8 месяцев назад

    210 mini commercials and two damn much confusion in the story

  • @SGC511
    @SGC511 9 месяцев назад +2

    I liked the girl instantly lol.

  • @varus113
    @varus113 8 месяцев назад +1

    God in space🙄

  • @ozymandias5257
    @ozymandias5257 9 месяцев назад +4

    AI voice makes some pretty bad pronunciations.

  • @Helliconia54
    @Helliconia54 9 месяцев назад +3

    great story, shitty AI

  • @TheDurid1
    @TheDurid1 8 месяцев назад

    Why are you saying things like die-ed, happen-ed and other weird pronunciation? This doesn't sound like an AI.

  • @TheRealTimeline
    @TheRealTimeline 9 месяцев назад +4

    My god, this story is a rambling mess

    • @phofire77
      @phofire77 9 месяцев назад +2

      I don't think it's that bad but the reading has been better in other sources.

  • @thomaswakefield6889
    @thomaswakefield6889 9 месяцев назад +2

    Geezus, my 5 year old daughter, can write a better sci-fi story than this garbage AI narrated blunder.

    • @jasonhunter3429
      @jasonhunter3429 9 месяцев назад +11

      have her write it and post the link, this was pretty good, so look forward to it

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 9 месяцев назад

      @jasonhunter3429 lmfao, this was good? You must be illiterate? Any moron who is too lazy to narrate a story with their own voice shouldn't be posting content and getting paid. With that said, anyone who uses AI to write a story with no clear outline distinction shouldn't be posting anything on social media. The fact that this story repeats things multiple times should tell people how badly written this is. Shitty pronunciations, changing AI voices multiple times while in the middle of pronouncing or mispronouncing a single word. Yea, you're illiterate

    • @Dave_of_Mordor
      @Dave_of_Mordor 9 месяцев назад +3

      This was written by a person on Reddit. I can't even take your opinion seriously just because you thought an AI wrote this therefore it is bad. What a terrible way to judge something

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 9 месяцев назад

      @@Dave_of_Mordor if you're that stupid that you can't tell the difference between a real writer telling a story and a fucking computer written story, then you need to go back to school. A 10 year old child can write a better story than some clown wanna be writer using an AI robot

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 9 месяцев назад

      @Dave_of_Mordor oh and just to inform you, that if you actually did some research, nearly 85% of stories on reddit were done using an AI story writing platform.

  • @thermal84
    @thermal84 9 месяцев назад +1

    boring