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  • Опубликовано: 17 мар 2024
  • The Eternal Kingdom learns an important lesson about Humans, or, why the method of creating Cataphracts has dire strategic implications...
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Комментарии • 79

  • @blogusvox
    @blogusvox 3 месяца назад +24

    "How desperate do you think we are now?"
    It only meant one thing, a new project was started, different but better than the previous one; Cataphract 2.0

  • @TheLunacyofOurTimes
    @TheLunacyofOurTimes 3 месяца назад +22

    Finally. A reasonably coherent and good story. So much trash these days.

    • @ymmijx6061
      @ymmijx6061 3 месяца назад +3

      eh? it's pretty sci-fantasy

    • @CryptidsRoost
      @CryptidsRoost 27 дней назад +1

      That's because unless an author is listed, then the majority (not all) of them have been written by AI, usually ChatGPT. Giveaways are usually way too many plot holes, sections being repeated and many of the AI/TTS voiceover channels do this and they tend to be bone idol and not edit to the audio to remove the repeated sections. Some sections get repeated because they have asked ChatGPT to expand/give more detail in certain sections.
      I have found by reading many video comments that a lot of folks are not only getting pissed off with the voiceovers as many necessary inflections etc and not done by AI/TTS but the stories being written by AI too. They are either threatening to unsubscribe or have already done so. So unless these channels take note, they will not only lose subs but they could lose monetization as they will drop below the threshold for subscribers and total yearly watched hours.
      This is why I have started my own sci-fi narration channel and it will not be AI voices but the stories are written by actual authors too. This account is a horror/creepypasta narration channel. My new one is @InterstellarSciFiTales and the first few videos will be going live in the next few days.

    • @TheLunacyofOurTimes
      @TheLunacyofOurTimes 3 дня назад +1

      @@CryptidsRoost The best channels are those that with permission grab HFY stories from Reddit written by humans.
      I have a stable of my own writing I was thinking of posting. Real writing is to this AI writing as chess is to checkers.

    • @CryptidsRoost
      @CryptidsRoost День назад

      @@TheLunacyofOurTimes ​ I totally agree. I have been narrating reddit-based creepypasta horror stories for the last 4 years now, and recently started a 2nd channel in this niche (@InterstellarSciFiTales) and I only narrate human-written stories. I generally don't use AI/TTS on my second channel, apart from maybe secondary characters and not always then. AI/TTS is okay but way too many words gets mispronounced, plus it can't tell a story, with real feeling and emotion, like a human can.

  • @luckyrobinshomestead
    @luckyrobinshomestead 3 месяца назад +13

    I love one liner endings like this. What an excellent story.

    • @puffyclouds1485
      @puffyclouds1485 17 дней назад

      “The ones who run” is a really good one liner ending. Literally gave me chills

  • @npierce14
    @npierce14 3 месяца назад +15

    Shocked she was barefoot? Must have been the first time they met a white person from the south

  • @azurepulse1870
    @azurepulse1870 3 месяца назад +10

    Halo spartan program meets Gundam/ultraman

    • @jonnypena7651
      @jonnypena7651 2 месяца назад +3

      Evangelion program, the mech were biological

  • @Terran.Marine.2
    @Terran.Marine.2 3 месяца назад +10

    Somewhat reminds me of "Interview with a Vampire".

  • @jasonhunter3429
    @jasonhunter3429 3 месяца назад +10

    ooooh, it was a slow burn, but got there in the end!

  • @geofthompson3844
    @geofthompson3844 Месяц назад

    For the first half of this story I was so confused. I was close to skipping out. But then, it just grabbed hold of me and by the end I was totally invested. This is definitely one of the best stories so far. Well done 👏 😊

  • @Anh-qs5xz
    @Anh-qs5xz 3 месяца назад +6

    Great story ❤️ for the story and ❤️ for the narration

  • @brookhouse3041
    @brookhouse3041 3 месяца назад +4

    Jeez the author really put this out there 😂

  • @user-zy9vm4tc6m
    @user-zy9vm4tc6m 3 месяца назад +4

    I love this story ❤ very good story

  • @MacCoy
    @MacCoy 3 месяца назад +6

    they got cataphrucked.

  • @TheMishMosh
    @TheMishMosh 3 месяца назад +13

    Only thing I know, they are fucked.

  • @Kappa760
    @Kappa760 3 месяца назад +8

    This is good one ❤ i like it

  • @mechanicalbow
    @mechanicalbow 3 месяца назад +2

    Good story

  • @jrobertw1970
    @jrobertw1970 Месяц назад

    Ok I really enjoyed this one !!!!
    Please say that is something else by this author ?!?!?!

  • @Noah-zf6nf
    @Noah-zf6nf 3 месяца назад +8

    First 👌🏾
    A very good story .
    I like it .

  • @Oanh250
    @Oanh250 3 месяца назад +2

    Very good

  • @THEFRISKIESTDINGO
    @THEFRISKIESTDINGO 2 месяца назад +1

    Pre-Historic Man: Spear! Poke poke!
    Medieval Man: Smol spear, nock it in the bow, throw spear far.
    Modern Man: Even more smol spear, put them in the magazine, throw hundreds of tiny spears a minute.
    Future Man: Spear! IN SPACE! Poke poke!

  • @mothmagic1
    @mothmagic1 3 месяца назад +7

    This is a good one

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  3 месяца назад

      Thank you !

    • @17mindgate
      @17mindgate 3 месяца назад

      ​@IceFiction404 Quick question, are cataphracts the equivalent of... Spartans (Halo series)... Superman... or the Battleship supersoldiers (Uber series).

  • @CarlosSantos-kv9ip
    @CarlosSantos-kv9ip 3 месяца назад +2

    What was the point of the story to show how grateful people can be? This is like being upset with American GIs, because they left a mess at Normandy after D-Day.

  • @stephenstonge7968
    @stephenstonge7968 2 месяца назад +1

    27:21 They feed him tubas? 😂

  • @oshavlfarms7239
    @oshavlfarms7239 3 месяца назад +2

    Yay commercials ever 4 minutes

  • @mehere8-32
    @mehere8-32 3 месяца назад +6

    I enjoyed that. A curiosity Question, was it written by a person or an AI(zero intelligence)? cheers.

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  3 месяца назад +5

      This is the writer from reddit

    • @mehere8-32
      @mehere8-32 3 месяца назад +3

      Thank you. Cheers@@IceFiction404

  • @Jordy120
    @Jordy120 3 месяца назад +13

    Barefoot? That could only mean one thing...

    • @christopherburnham1612
      @christopherburnham1612 3 месяца назад +6

      Pregnant,😮😂😂😂

    • @Jordy120
      @Jordy120 3 месяца назад +3

      @@christopherburnham1612 Lol...nice try. Could be part of the answer though..

    • @Tipper16
      @Tipper16 3 месяца назад +2

      White girl

    • @user-xe9lw7iy8j
      @user-xe9lw7iy8j 3 месяца назад +1

      Bigfoot 😂

    • @Jordy120
      @Jordy120 3 месяца назад +5

      She's an Aussie!

  • @royporio634
    @royporio634 2 месяца назад +1

    Is there a part 2?

  • @AenesidemusOZ
    @AenesidemusOZ 3 месяца назад +2

    It's an intense story, but it is ruined by the TTS. The lack of human inflection ruins it. The TTS used is pretty good, but not that good.

    • @IceFiction404
      @IceFiction404  2 месяца назад +1

      I'm sorry....

    • @AenesidemusOZ
      @AenesidemusOZ 2 месяца назад

      @@IceFiction404 Nothing to be sorry for! It's a good story. This is just one that I (me, personally) would prefer a human to read. Quite often, modern TTS voices are fine for short stories.

  • @alonghorns
    @alonghorns 3 месяца назад +3

    great story and no part or idea was repeated. (thank you for that, not a waste of my time) because your story was so well told i subscribed. but i will unsubscribe if you start to waste my time with repeated lines or ideas

  • @brucerawlinson5839
    @brucerawlinson5839 3 месяца назад +6

    Teach your AI to pronounce words FFS

    • @alanjohnson2613
      @alanjohnson2613 2 месяца назад +1

      Why do you call a simple text to speech program AI

  • @edwardroche2480
    @edwardroche2480 2 месяца назад

    210 mini commercials and two damn much confusion in the story

  • @josephhoward2971
    @josephhoward2971 3 месяца назад +2

    Do you feel lucky, punk?
    Do you?
    ....

  • @varus113
    @varus113 2 месяца назад +1

    God in space🙄

  • @SGC511
    @SGC511 2 месяца назад +1

    I liked the girl instantly lol.

  • @ozymandias5257
    @ozymandias5257 3 месяца назад +3

    AI voice makes some pretty bad pronunciations.

  • @RansomMemoryAccess
    @RansomMemoryAccess 3 месяца назад +2

    Lost me from the onset. The human is described how a human would describe another human, not how an alien would.

  • @Helliconia54
    @Helliconia54 3 месяца назад +2

    great story, shitty AI

  • @brian-my7ym
    @brian-my7ym 2 месяца назад

    Okay, the story was good but the robo read is a mess. If you are going to use robo Reed, you have to use phonetics

  • @UnitedArmsOrganization
    @UnitedArmsOrganization 3 месяца назад +3

    I grew up with American Men. “Bikers” I would like to see American people as one people again, not a (fill in the blank) America
    American is One people One Country. How do we bring it back?
    Sci-fi people are usually among the brightest most intelligent people and the most ignored.
    I am just an old Fu#king biker who Loves his Country. Maybe some one is smarter than our politicians and has an answer.

  • @TheDurid1
    @TheDurid1 Месяц назад

    Why are you saying things like die-ed, happen-ed and other weird pronunciation? This doesn't sound like an AI.

  • @TheRealTimeline
    @TheRealTimeline 3 месяца назад +4

    My god, this story is a rambling mess

    • @phofire77
      @phofire77 3 месяца назад +1

      I don't think it's that bad but the reading has been better in other sources.

  • @thomaswakefield6889
    @thomaswakefield6889 3 месяца назад +2

    Geezus, my 5 year old daughter, can write a better sci-fi story than this garbage AI narrated blunder.

    • @jasonhunter3429
      @jasonhunter3429 3 месяца назад +8

      have her write it and post the link, this was pretty good, so look forward to it

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 3 месяца назад

      @jasonhunter3429 lmfao, this was good? You must be illiterate? Any moron who is too lazy to narrate a story with their own voice shouldn't be posting content and getting paid. With that said, anyone who uses AI to write a story with no clear outline distinction shouldn't be posting anything on social media. The fact that this story repeats things multiple times should tell people how badly written this is. Shitty pronunciations, changing AI voices multiple times while in the middle of pronouncing or mispronouncing a single word. Yea, you're illiterate

    • @Dave_of_Mordor
      @Dave_of_Mordor 3 месяца назад +2

      This was written by a person on Reddit. I can't even take your opinion seriously just because you thought an AI wrote this therefore it is bad. What a terrible way to judge something

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 3 месяца назад

      @@Dave_of_Mordor if you're that stupid that you can't tell the difference between a real writer telling a story and a fucking computer written story, then you need to go back to school. A 10 year old child can write a better story than some clown wanna be writer using an AI robot

    • @thomaswakefield6889
      @thomaswakefield6889 3 месяца назад

      @Dave_of_Mordor oh and just to inform you, that if you actually did some research, nearly 85% of stories on reddit were done using an AI story writing platform.

  • @thermal84
    @thermal84 3 месяца назад +1

    boring