to be honest, i was surfing through new undertalked rappers and i was really upset about how anyone comes with a song with no lyrics, no beats , no sense at all. But this song totally changed my perspective , i must say!! The beats, the lyrics, the rhyme scheme... AAH!! man Its fcking crazy. Loved it!!
@@Rajadityan u deserve it bro! keep posting songs like this , my friends are hustling too! i hope these types of songs make it to the sight of everyone
Not critisism but a fellow artist manager, i should write some perspective those points where it felt off or not in flow.. or didn't match the vibe There were some break outs, so make sure to go with linear flow or increasing flow. It's for a graph but, make your flow perfect. So here it is: Intro is grood, But "phok phok ke" and "tu thuk thuk ke" Sounded different, when you used same type of wording (rhyming) After that "chaatne ko aaye" this line is pretty good, but doesn't match the flow of the verse. "Jaise vivian divine mera bhai" Another good reference, but doesn't match the vibe/flow In next verse, "302 khyal dimaag main" "Thadpake" "Zinda jalaye" These words are out of control, like it's Full of energy, you tried best, however it's not perfect. Also after "kholu jaatayaain" you put "om namah shivay" in the video, but there is no audio clip in it Instead you started the next verse, which is "bolo sare, bolo sare" This is one of my fav, Om namah shivaay After that, in next verse, your lyrical skills are great, there no mistake. You did best. But in outro.. if it was in hindi, it would be cherry on top. But after hearing in english, which was intensionally off beat, was not good.
Hey mate , thanks for taking time to write it down i really appreciate this , i tottaly agree with uh , ill improve and try to match the vibe and flow thanks for pointing this out ❤ it really helped me knowing where i went wrong , i hope u will love my coming tracks in the future years ❤ stay along my friend , its just my beginning , we in for a long ride , ill try my best to satisfy uh ❤
to be honest, i was surfing through new undertalked rappers and i was really upset about how anyone comes with a song with no lyrics, no beats , no sense at all. But this song totally changed my perspective , i must say!!
The beats, the lyrics, the rhyme scheme... AAH!! man
Its fcking crazy. Loved it!!
Ahhhaaaaa !! U made my day !!!! 🫶❤️ , love you brother 🫂❤️
@@Rajadityan u deserve it bro! keep posting songs like this , my friends are hustling too! i hope these types of songs make it to the sight of everyone
@@furiousclutchers2005
Wait for my ep , u will love it 2025 ⌛️🙏🫶❤️🫂 , thank you so much for ur sweet words
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Flow was amazing love it ❤️🥵
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Lyrical player 🔥⚡
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TANDAV KARTHEY KHOLU JAATAYAAIN 🫀
Bolo saaare om nama shivaaya 🙏🔥🕉
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angar laga diye 😈
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Thanks ! ❤
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Not critisism but a fellow artist manager, i should write some perspective those points where it felt off or not in flow.. or didn't match the vibe
There were some break outs, so make sure to go with linear flow or increasing flow.
It's for a graph but, make your flow perfect.
So here it is:
Intro is grood,
But "phok phok ke" and "tu thuk thuk ke"
Sounded different, when you used same type of wording (rhyming)
After that "chaatne ko aaye" this line is pretty good, but doesn't match the flow of the verse.
"Jaise vivian divine mera bhai"
Another good reference, but doesn't match the vibe/flow
In next verse,
"302 khyal dimaag main"
"Thadpake"
"Zinda jalaye"
These words are out of control, like it's Full of energy, you tried best, however it's not perfect.
Also after "kholu jaatayaain" you put "om namah shivay" in the video, but there is no audio clip in it
Instead you started the next verse, which is "bolo sare, bolo sare"
This is one of my fav, Om namah shivaay
After that, in next verse, your lyrical skills are great, there no mistake.
You did best.
But in outro.. if it was in hindi, it would be cherry on top.
But after hearing in english, which was intensionally off beat, was not good.
Hey mate , thanks for taking time to write it down i really appreciate this , i tottaly agree with uh , ill improve and try to match the vibe and flow thanks for pointing this out ❤ it really helped me knowing where i went wrong , i hope u will love my coming tracks in the future years ❤ stay along my friend , its just my beginning , we in for a long ride , ill try my best to satisfy uh ❤