Thanks for listening! Yeah, I was thinking what if The Little Mermaid had a more elaborate worldbuilding and underwater adventures mixed with a darker twist and a little mystery 😆
You're most welcome, and thanks for subscribing and sharing such a precious and beautiful memory with me. Did your father post his mermaid stories online?
I love the concept of this book. You have done a pretty good job in telling the story and inviting us into the world you have created. I do feel though you have missed a few opportunities to deepen the connection and make the story a bit more dramatic. It’s a bit like watching the story through a window, kind of once removed. Marina doesn’t seem to react strongly enough to all that is revealed to her. I wouldn’t stop screaming and throwing stuff for one second, but we are all different. Thank you very much for sharing all your hard work with us.
Thank for the elaborate feedback, Jennifer 🙂 I totally understand what you said because I feel that way too. This was actually the first book in the Princess League series, and I was focusing a bit too much on the main plot events instead of the development. After this book, I wrote The Hidden Princess and chose to go a little more in depth into the character development and immersion of the story. You may wish to check out The Hidden Princess if you haven't already. Thank you for your support and inspiring words!
@@MiraCrest-gi7bv Thank you for replying to my comment, I was hesitant about making it as your writing is part of your soul and it must be terribly hard to hear criticism. I am very glad weren’t hurt and took it the way I meant it. I could never write, I don’t have the skill, discipline, or energy to do that huge amount of work, and I admire you enormously. I most definitely will read your other books with enjoyment
@@jennifermcdonald5432 You're most welcome! The biggest realization and improvement often come from the most honest criticism. So, I always appreciate that kind of feedback. Thank you and I hope you will enjoy my other books 😁
It's human-narrated, but I understand if it sounds like AI. I will seek to improve for future books. You may wish to check out The Hidden Princess, as that was done by another narrator, and it was done after reviewing this narration. Thanks for your feedback!
Hi, thanks for the support and your honest feedback. I have received a few similar feedback that the ending wasn't desired. As the story of Marina and Dominic will continue in later books after the individual princess' origin story (Book 5 being the final one), the ending in this book is not conclusive.
The Silent Princess kept me listening. I thought it was another little mermaid story. I was pleasantly surprised that it wasn’t.
Thanks for listening! Yeah, I was thinking what if The Little Mermaid had a more elaborate worldbuilding and underwater adventures mixed with a darker twist and a little mystery 😆
Beautiful book remind me of my late father's stories about mermaids thank you for sharing I enjoyed the book so much so that I subscribed
You're most welcome, and thanks for subscribing and sharing such a precious and beautiful memory with me. Did your father post his mermaid stories online?
I love, love, love this amazing book thank you🎉😊🎉
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@@1touchcleaning303 It's my pleasure to be able to share this story with you! 🙂I'm really happy you enjoyed it!
Thanks for uploading your book. 🎉
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If you enjoyed this audiobook, pls leave a comment, Like, and Subscribe! Thanks for listening!
I love the concept of this book. You have done a pretty good job in telling the story and inviting us into the world you have created. I do feel though you have missed a few opportunities to deepen the connection and make the story a bit more dramatic. It’s a bit like watching the story through a window, kind of once removed. Marina doesn’t seem to react strongly enough to all that is revealed to her. I wouldn’t stop screaming and throwing stuff for one second, but we are all different. Thank you very much for sharing all your hard work with us.
Thank for the elaborate feedback, Jennifer 🙂 I totally understand what you said because I feel that way too. This was actually the first book in the Princess League series, and I was focusing a bit too much on the main plot events instead of the development.
After this book, I wrote The Hidden Princess and chose to go a little more in depth into the character development and immersion of the story. You may wish to check out The Hidden Princess if you haven't already. Thank you for your support and inspiring words!
@@MiraCrest-gi7bv Thank you for replying to my comment, I was hesitant about making it as your writing is part of your soul and it must be terribly hard to hear criticism. I am very glad weren’t hurt and took it the way I meant it. I could never write, I don’t have the skill, discipline, or energy to do that huge amount of work, and I admire you enormously. I most definitely will read your other books with enjoyment
@@jennifermcdonald5432 You're most welcome! The biggest realization and improvement often come from the most honest criticism. So, I always appreciate that kind of feedback. Thank you and I hope you will enjoy my other books 😁
Thank you for the book! Great narration!
You're most welcome! Thanks for listening 😁
Great work, keep it up
Thank you very much for listening and your kind words 🙂
Great book so far ❤
Thank you! I hope you will enjoy the rest of it 😁
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Loved it.
Thank you so much for listening and for your feedback!
Bookmark 1:25:00
Wonderful book! Narration was nice though it would have been even better with a male voice.😊
Thank you very much for listening and sharing your thoughts! 😁
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Thank you for the love!
AI??? Can't do it. Might've liked a live read, but I i don't know
It's human-narrated, but I understand if it sounds like AI. I will seek to improve for future books. You may wish to check out The Hidden Princess, as that was done by another narrator, and it was done after reviewing this narration. Thanks for your feedback!
Loved the book but not the ending.
Hi, thanks for the support and your honest feedback. I have received a few similar feedback that the ending wasn't desired. As the story of Marina and Dominic will continue in later books after the individual princess' origin story (Book 5 being the final one), the ending in this book is not conclusive.
@@MiraCrest-gi7bv So looking forward to it. Thank you.
@@judycoffey4661 You're most welcome!
@@judycoffey4661You're most welcome!