That research explains a lot to me. When I was 5 years old I was told I had the intelligence of a 10 year old. When I was 10 I was told I had the intelligence of a 10 year old. Thirty years on, I still have the intelligence of a 10 year old. Some things never change...
One brainstorming technique I’ve been using my whole life is “20 Answers.” You basically pose a question and then brainstorm around 10 answers to start. They can range from straightforward and logical to utterly silly and ridiculous. (If you easily get over 10 without breaking a sweat, then maybe the question is too open-ended. OTOH, if you find it impossible to come up with 5-6, even after sleeping on it, then the question might be too specific.) Once you get to around 10, review those answers and twist/distort them to make new answers, even to the point of being completely contrarian. Somewhere along the line, the perfect answer is bound to jump out. This has gotten me out of many a jam, from debugging computer code, to social relationships, to writing. Here’s a recent question I posed to myself: “To illustrate just how evil the Big Bad Enchantress is, an early scene could show her torturing a good guy. Why?” 1. He done her wrong in the past and she wants revenge, torturing him to death. 2. Actually, killing is too good for him; she means to break him, instead. 3. It’s an interrogation for strategic or tactical info. 4. She thinks he’s an impostor, a shapeshifter, or some other kind of doppelganger, and she is trying to get him to reveal himself. 5. She respects him in a creepy sort of way and she desperately needs confirmation of his approval to justify her actions. 6. Committing torture is just to prove a point to her associates (peers or underlings) to keep them in line. 7. She wants to test his resolve, and perhaps turn him to the dark side. 8. It’s a ritual sacrifice to a demon. 9. No reason at all, just a purely random act of violence. It’s what evil enchantresses do. And then the permutations kick in… 10. He done her wrong in the past, but it was by proxy and he is unaware that it happened. 11. She mistakenly believes that he done her wrong in the past, but it wasn’t him at all. 12. She’s committing the torture reluctantly. A partner, peer, or superior is putting her up to it. 13. Her need to torture is the result of a self-inflicted curse. 14. Her need to torture is the only way she can release pent-up negative energies that would otherwise eat her alive. 15. Her need to torture is a Dorian Gray fountain-of-youth ritual. 16. It’s a reverse interrogation. She’s actually spilling the beans to the "victim" by the questions she asks. (Maybe this variation shows up in a future scene, once we’ve established her penchant for interrogation through torture.) 17. She needs to break him for a tactical reason other than intelligence gathering such as to brainwash him. 18. … or to ruin his psychic powers. 19. … or to burden his loved ones and take them out of the game. I’m liking how that last one - taking his loved ones out of the game - might fit in to my story. The reverse interrogation also looks like fun, but that necessitates establishing the first scene as a standard interrogation. OTOH, the loved one aspect could be thrown in at the end of the first scene as an afterthought. Hmmm, definitely enough to work with. I first learned of this technique as a software engineering student. I was helping a family friend generate some reports for his photography business. He wanted a summary on page one, but the report generator program I had available couldn’t do two passes. It could only print a summary at the end. So I posed my question, “How do I print the summary page first?” I brainstormed a good 15 possible answers, all of which seemed inelegant and overkill. Then I got contrarian and my 16th answer was “I don’t.” My ultimate solution, therefore, was to print the summary page at the end as usual and tell my friend to simply move the last sheet to the front before mailing it off. Doh! Sometimes that blinding flash of the obvious takes a while to arrive.
Abbie!! I know everyone says this but HOW do you have the most perfect timing??? 😭 I’ve been so frustrated with writing lately because I’m just so bored with all the old ideas I had. I’ve been a subscriber for years and you have been one of my main inspirations and teachers all along! I recommend you to every writer I talk with. You’re a blessing, and a lovely soul. Thank you! 🥹💕 (btw I love your background! always so clean, tidy, and colorful.)
@elizabethgracw9092 when that happens step away and turn off your mind and just let it come. You may end up trashing lot of it but you getting words down.
Having a child-like mindset is so beneficial in so many creative practices. When I'm feeling like this, I love listening to music that reminds me of my story or characters and just thinking deeply about it to get some ideas out. The music helps me to be less judgemental of my ideas and lets my mind truly wander (and I allow myself to get distracted) because it feels like I'm just having fun rather than strictly writing - not that the writing isn't fun, rather it adds an extra layer of excitement.
I’m finding music is a huge benefit to my thought process but only certain music. For instance I listened to Abbie’s immersive writing video with the cottage by the sea setting. The music instantly became the soundtrack for a scene in my sequence list. As I listened to the music the scene I envisioned changed to one in which the male protagonist is composing a song inspired by the woman he is falling in love with. She walks in and hears it It starts a conversation that leads to a specific revelation about the male protagonist that proves to be something the female protagonist can connect with. She’s being wooed but is fighting it per her internal conflict’s orders 😂. But the events of this scene get another chunk of that wall to crumble away. I will of course have the immersive video on when I write that scene! It’s just one more reason for me to thank Abbie 😉💯
At the risk of George Lucas coming after me, I now refer to you as Abbie-Wan! You truly are that mentor that beginners like me need! Thank you for all you do. Your success is much deserved. Something I’ve been exploring recently is “summoning” my story the very second I start to wake up in the morning. I find that for about half an hour while in that barely awake state, my creativity feeds me ideas, solutions to plotting and even dialogue. It’s tricky to remember it all without coming awake enough to write it down. But as I inevitably shift more and more into the waking brain wave state, I go ahead and reach for my pad and pen. I’m happy to say I’m nowhere near bored. This is all still so brand new and exciting for me. Your guidance and the way you approach story has made a huge impression on me. I’ve always loved writing but never actually tried to write a comprehensive work before - only random “pants-ed” stand- alone scenes 😂😂 I’m not sure if I’ll ever try to publish. I’m writing for ME first. Then we’ll see. I lost my Dad a year and almost five months ago. Maybe I’m writing now a little for him too. It will be the realization of a long neglected dream to complete a novel. He was always my biggest cheerleader for anything I did. It’s amazing how I’ll write something for my protagonist but then I’ll realize a parallel with my own life’s journey. I’ve found that the ability to write creatively is the gift that keeps on giving every time I sit down to unwrap it and put fingertips to keys. Focusing on writing a full blown “proper” novel has been a healing process. The structure along with the detailed explanations you give made it all suddenly seem possible for ME to achieve! I guess the saying is true that when the student is ready, the master will appear. That would be you, Abbie-Wan 😂. Please don’t ever stop sharing yourself with the world. YOU MATTER to a whole lot of people like me who needed that inspirational spark to get them off the sidelines and realize it’s never too late to humor your dreams. Continued success to you AND your sister! You both rock!
Some other things I think sometimes that could help: ⭐ "Remember that story you enjoyed so much but that specific part could've been so much better?" Do it for your story; ⭐ Think of a character you love, the best things about them and how fun it would be if you could put this character in your story. Change the character's name and appearance and now you can put them in your story; ⭐ Brainstorm for something outside of your story and then imagine bringing it to your story. Ex: As a Pokémon fan I made a creativity exercise of creating titles for Pokémon movies for not so special pokémon. There are Pokémon movies called "Zoroark: Master of Illusions" and "Volcanion and the Mechanical Marvel". There's a pokémon family that seems to be kinda slow-thinking and oblivious, they're not considered special enough for a movie, but if they were, there could be a movie called "Slowbro and the Oblivion Island". If I ever bring the concept of an oblivion island to my story, part of my joy for pokémon would come along.
I love your guideline, it is very wise and cool. Maybe this could help me, what other tips do you have? I am struggling with my story because I am confused about the part where Abbie said to make a list of our addictive, attractive qualities that we see in our favourite stories. Would you mind explaining it to me please? It would be much appreciated.
Yes! Release your inner child. We've been taught to lock up the child inside. It also helps with self healing, releasing that inner child. It reminds us to stop and look at the world with wonder; ya know, instead of focusing on all the negative and problems all the time.
Interesting research and it makes so much sense. When I was 10 years old, I could write a whole story without much thought. Now at 41, I struggle just writing a story outline. Therefore, great advice Abbie. So basically, I should go back (mentally) about 30-35 years! 😂😂
My granddaughter came up with a sequel to Snow White when she was 6 that I wrote down for her because if Disney ever stops being stupid she can sell it to them for millions
In seconds grade we had to write a story about something that happened to us, I forgot what the story I wrote was about but I know that my teacher thought it was amazing and told the whole class. I’m in sixth now and that story was better written than anything I could do now
My favorite "5-year-old" thinkers who knew how to be truly unique and out-of-the-box: -- L. Frank Baum (The Oz Books) -- Sid Krofft (various really wildly imaginative children's TV shows) -- Roald Dahl (Willy Wonka, Matilda, et. al.) -- Lee Minoff and Al Brodax (Chief Screenwriters for "Yellow Submarine") -- Norton Juster (The Phantom Tollbooth) What wouldn't I give to be as free and uninhibited in my creativity as they are!
My favorite why to brainstorm ideas is to watch shows and movies. Sometimes when I watch a show or movie and I love the trip or plot point so much I get a spark of Genius asking myself, “What if I put something like that into my story?” Abbie once again thanks for your help! Due to life and college I felt a bit unmoderated and down to write my fan-fiction. I always think of ideas but noticed myself say, “That been done before that not original!!!” And it make me feel kinda down. But thanks to you and your writing genius I go it back! I Hugh of ideas I never though before and plots i never even concerned. Thanks for your help! I hope you have a great day writing friend! 😁
For me, sometimes a story idea can come about by messing with words and their meanings. Example: I got stuck on the word "origins" so much that "oranges" didn't sound normal anymore. I ended up with a poem 😊
I am all for fairytale retellings, and I have good ideas: -A retelling of Little Red Riding Hood in which the female protagonist is the huntress older sister of Little Red, and the ‘Big Bad Wolf’ is actually a shapeshifter. -A Cinderella story set after the happily ever after and told in the POV of the older stepsister, who finds her own true love. -A Snow White retelling where Snow White actually dies and her younger half-sister suddenly becomes the heir to the throne. -A dark fantasy thriller anime rendition of Snow White, and the story begins at its climax: the crown princess falls into a coma after being poisoned; the evil queen is betrayed by her own son, the grand duke; the grand duke becomes the regent, taking advantage of his older sister’s out-of-commission state. The grand duke actually brings the female MC into his world via the magic mirror, and the story cuts to hours before this happens. -A Cinderella story where Cinderella is secretly a super rich duchess, the fairy godmother is her witty, sassy great-grandmother, and her Prince Charming is actually her personal gardener and her secret arranged fiancé who owns a horticultural empire. -A crossover of Little Red Riding Hood and The Old Woman in the Woods. Little Red is a young baroness who inherits the old wagon of her deceased grandmother, who she discovers has been practicing eldritch magic. -A Cinderella story in which the Cinderella character goes to the ball and avoids the prince only to catch the eye of the villain.
The spinoff idea is excellent, and something that I decided to do around two years ago. It resulted in a trilogy. The first book (prequel) ended up being from the POV of my original protagonist's mother. The 2nd and 3rd books are the original series. Turning out really interesting that way.
I'm a teen writer and I have been having trouble with my writing. I'm just not feeling the spark when I write it, but I have recently subscribed to your channel and I have been improving a lot! You are the best Abbie! Thank you so much!
I once mixed an idea of a fantasy world from middle ages with scenes from a draft I've written that took place in the modern world, and boom it couldn't be better, they fitted together way more than I could have imagined and each one of them became essential for the progress of the other one, this was one of my favorite story ideas that I've came up with
Some of these points are things I'm trying right now, (Combining story Ideas, add different characters). One thing I love to do to get ideas is listen to music from my favorite movies and games that I grew up with and use them to think of scenarios that would happen in my story and when I was younger I could come up with some crazy things while doing that. (I.e. I came up with a disasterous battle/planetary invasion sequence that takes place in my story with music from the soundtrack from Titanic of all things.) I really miss those days sometimes.
I've another video suggestion. But firstly, Abbie this was really helpful. Thank you so much for going beyond conventional video ideas and helping us with questions we can't really describe. So, the suggestion is, please make a video regarding how to stay organized in the initial process. I've had many ideas come to me as I start working, sometimes it's a scene, sometimes a charcter, sometimes I think I want to add another POV. As I move ahead in process. I start rewriting these scenes. Changing the dialogues and settings etc. And sometimes I'll have 4 versions of the same scene. And then it gets overwhelming. The thing is I can't think linearly for a story, and I've observed most writers don't. And so, I don't use one document to write but use notes to write bits and pieces of ideas as they come to me. The problem is I can't find a way to organize them. I know you're a master organizer. Please guide us how we can stay organised with just systems, like tagging or labeling on Google Notes. Something that everyone can use and not just a software like Scrivener. Something purely on strategic planning and management that can save our lives. Hope you'll make a video on it. And thanks always for making us Rock on.🤘
I've brainstormed ideas and scenes inspirations with chatGPT for the last few days and it probably saved me weeks if not months of work at the library. Such a useful tool. (Not planning on copy/pasting AI descriptions; it's not great prose; you still have to write the story. But as an inspiration for ideas, it works very well. Not flawless (in a long chat, it can confuse characters and plotlines), but overall, so useful to find inspiration. Basically, you tell chat GPT your story ideas and ask it to help you come up with more ideas for scenes or ways to develop them, and to brainstorm backstories and personalities for the characters.
I'm vehemently against AI, due to the possibilities of it stealing the arts away from us, so when I tried using ChatGPT to brainstorm some ideas for a scene I admit I felt conflicted. I got weird, cringy scenes first time I used it, safe to say I did not take on any of those ideas. Today I tried it for a short speech since I truly had no idea how to start one, and surprisingly I got good results I could get inspired by. I'm still wary of this new technology, if it wasn't hurting artists by money-hungry sharks I wouldn't have such opinion about it, AI Can be used for inspiration, but only ethically, I don't want future humans to become soulless robots while the actual machines are creating fulfilling works.
My suggestions: Before writing, drink water and walk around a bit. It will help trust me. Make something random up! Just draw a sweet potato with a face and a dark past or something and you may begin to add its elements to your story Don’t be afraid to write relaxed scenes. If you can’t think of any crazy things to do with your book then maybe that’s because you should make a quiet scene, a scene that may add a new detail to your characters.
I was wondering, how do you make a list of tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up to the wee hours of the morning reading. Can you please explain how to do that?
THANK YOU! Abbie, this was amazing! I love seeing how this all plays out. I can get way too critical of my ideas and scold myself "Don't do it, it's a trope" "You can't have the MC be in pain, ppl won't like it" "No one likes reading a sensitive character voice" etc. This opened my eyes to see that I can actually ENJOY my story. I can write the parts that I would want to read over and over again just for the sensation of reading them! Thanks! I used these ideas to actually start with creating a story idea, and I am STOKED for this project! I've fallen in love with the ideas I have! You're a lifesaver!!!
Every time I feel like I'm in a writing rut, watching any of your videos motivates me. You are my inspiration, Abbie. The professional quality of your videos, your photos, and your books--I aspire to be just as good as you on all these fronts. Thank you for being amazing
Back when I was a kid, I used to write stories in literal paper, like you cannot edit or anything but from start to end my book looks amazing even though my wrist would hurt from writing for hours. Now that I am typing I still can' find that joy and satisfaction my younger self had. I mean my younger self was really good at writing theological thrillers and amazing genuine characters with actual flaws. Just a few grammar and spelling mistakes and now! I feel like I had disappointed my childhoodself and became an awful writer. Thank You, Abbie! You are such a lifesaver❤❤❤❤
I'm jealous of the way you think and can articulate your thoughts. I have an entire reference page from your videos. Having ADHD and severe processing issues due to a brain injury, my memory has me questioning all that I do. I will finish my novel even it takes a year! I hope the crying, quitting, restarting, and screaming in the mirror pays off. Having these tropes as a reference point has really helped - off course written down or they would be forgotten minutes later. -
Excellent advice. I've used a technique related to this for a while. I've always called it "twisting," and what it involves in coming up with a story, plain or extravagant, and then once I've figured out most of the details I take one detail and change it in a significant way. Not like changing the main character's hair color, but often it's switching a heroic character to a villain, although it doesn't have to be that and shouldn't always be the same thing. Maybe instead of a character losing their mother at a young age they instead are involved in a horrific accident. The main point of it is to change that one detail and nothing else. What this does is make a story that isn't pre-planned or that fits nicely, and it raises a bunch of questions that I have to figure out the answers to. It takes me out of my box of comfort and makes me think about the story in a very different way. More details may change as I go along, but it's important to start with just one detail, and it may take a few attempts to find the right detail. This began after I had discovery written a couple of chapters for a novel. My heroes were brothers, and they were tasked with helping stop some mysterious creatures who had been invading the kingdom. One of the brothers immediately volunteered but the other did not and asked what was in it for them. Then the creatures attacked and the second brother came around, but as I analyzed that sequence I couldn't figure out why the second brother refused at first. I thought of him as equally heroic to the first brother, but my subconscious had brought about the refusal, as mild as it may have been. Then it hit me: he wasn't supposed to be a hero, but rather a villain. I kept the sequence of events the same, at least at first, and tried to figure out why he would do these things if he were the bad guy (the creatures were separate villains from him) and that led to a remarkable mental exercise that became a much richer and less cliched story for me. Lately I have discovered a writing prompt aid called the Story Engine, a set of cards with various prompts in various categories that a person can combine to formulate the basis of a plotline. While I wouldn't say this is essential since the decks cost money, it's a very useful tool. More interesting to me is that each square shaped card has multiple entries, either two or four depending on the type of card it is, that can be rotated if you don't like the one that's right-side up upon dealing. Of course, you can draw new cards if you can't make those fit, but I follow a different method. I draw what comes out of the shuffled decks, randomly determine the rotation, and go with it. This leads to some rather ridiculous combinations, especially if you use the various booster packs for different genres, but I try to make it work anyway. If something doesn't fit the genre, I replace it with something that would be roughly equivalent but that would actually work in the genre (a golem instead of a robot, for example), or if I've drawn a rather underwhelming sequence I change the boring prompts to something that's basically the same but not as dull as the original in order to spice it up a bit, or draw additional cards to add to it. I feel it is important to keep the prompt random so it's not conforming to my pre-conceived ideas and tastes but forces me into a mindset of figuring out how to make it work. It may be radically different from what I had in mind at first, but like the discovery writing example above it is likely to vastly improve the idea. It can also, of course, be used to augment an existing idea.
Private schools do it, too. "Forget about creating anything yourself. Just shut that part of you off and learn to analyze what others have created." Took me almostv40 years to get back to that part of myself.
Hi from Tasmania, Australia. I LOVE you Abbie. I know that sounds creepy - what I mean is I love your content. I see you as my own writing coach. Your videos are (in my opinion) the BEST on the net. Thank you for your warm, encouraging style and for being so generous with your tools and tips. Watching your content makes me feel happy and inspired. Thank you, lovely human.
My brainstorming comes from journaling my life, both retrospective and current. I love this week's video. I should be proud of myself for thinking of some of these same concepts. One thing that rebooted my writing (besides your amazing energy!) was thinking "how would I make this a movie?" A friend helping edit the first draft of my first book told me it read like a diary. I thought, of course it does. It's a story. I decided a screenplay would start the story in the middle and flashback to critical earlier scenes. I'm currently re-writing it with that perspective. It's a challenge to work old scenes into flashbacks and I will drop some earlier scenes, which will help cut some weight. But then I'm already thinking about new scenes to write. My energy is sparked!
So it wasn’t my imagination! I really did come up with more stories when I was younger! Thanks for the great advice Abbie. Not just in this video, but in all of them. You’re a lifesaver!!!
Abbie, I can't tell you how much this video means to me. The book I've been trying writing for 3 years now is just sorta getting.... eh. I'm not excited about it anymore. I feel like I've lost a part of my identity because I'm not writing anymore. This has finally made my creative wheels turn again! Thank you.
*Change/add a POV:* My book I'm writing started off with 53 named characters chasing one demon, and I've added POVs from all of them (some much more than others). Currently, 22 are still alive, three of which definitely won't make it to the end. *Spin-off:* I am hoping that I can make a spin-off with the surviving characters (both good and bad). *Turn it upside-down:* The MC dies and the villain lives. *Make it a retelling:* I have future plans to do that with a story or two by the Brothers Grimm. *Changing the genre:* I have had ideas for that with 'Disney Classic' stories. *Combining stories:* I would like to; however, my current story is a division of the story I originally wanted to tell. (A world & pantheon origins, a Romanesque civilization collapse, and pursing a demon. The demon was originally going to be involved in all three aspects.) *Changing the theme:* The current book's theme is 'Actions have Consequences,' both good and bad. *Favorite brainstorming:* Reading older books (Phantom of the Opera, The Three Musketeers, Great Expectations, H.P. Lovecraft, Elric of Melnibone) and historical books (military history, slavery world-wide, tribal and individuals).
16:13 First of all, great video Abbie✨️ As always, you make my Wednesdays that much brighter😊 Second, it sucks because I have so many ideas and stories. There's hardly a day that goes by where I haven't written or edited something, but I have NO ONE to share any of it with! Something I'm passionate about that no one in my life cares for. I'm not joking. My mother only reads/believes in only one book and strongly dislikes anything fantasy or sci-fi (which I enjoy most) (She's told me multiple times that she's waiting for the day I toss all my books in a fire, but whatever) My father, siblings, cousins, aunts and uncles, and grandparents (minus my Ouma, but she only reads Afrikaans books) would all rather do anything else BUT READ! I am the artistic black sheep in a family filled with business and numbers people, gamers and social media crazies, sporty people, cooking and baking enthusiasts, and simple living folk. (That last one is my grandparents, and I really enjoy when I get a whole week to visit them. Surrounded by nature. Being woken up by Cocky-Boy the rooster and the hens, and having to fetch the eggs. Sighing in relief that the dogs haven't caught and killed any of the dassies. Coffee and tea ANY TIME of the day. Nearly completely cut off from the digital world. Sitting by the fire, knitting or reading, playing board or card games - my Oupa always says the funniest and often crude things when he's losing... or winning. Hiking, going down to the dam. Adding new additions to the house by hand. The gardening. The fresh air and the sounds of birds and goats and cows and chickens and dogs and the odd horse and sometimes frogs and of course you don't hear the cats but they're there. It's all just... an absolute delight.) Anyway, I also have no friends, but even the social circles I occasionally interact with share the same opinions on fiction as my mother. So... 🥲 Once again, Abbie, thank you so much for the advice🙏🏼✨️
Hello Abbie! I started watching almost all of your videos a few days ago. Thank you so much on inspiring me to become a better writer. It’s so hard to find advice without a teacher(bc I’m homeschooled lol). So everytime I do my LA, I watch one of your videos as if you are my teacher. Thank you for helping be a better writer
I have been stuck with my story for ages, never too happy with how it went even if I liked it. Watching your video gave me ideas and I started writing on it again after years. I changed where the story starts, made it a bit darker and now ideas are flowing and I am finally excited about my story again!
I am half way through this video and one of my favorites so far! Sooooo much confirmation, I want to cry for joy! I am traveling through airport from a funeral right now and I want to prepare myself to get out of a slump! Thank you so much! When you cannot put a name on something and you been having these feelings, turn on an Abbie video! #rockon
I often notice that when I get bored with a story, it's because the characters and the plot don't fit. I once abandoned completely a novel because I got so frustrated with it: I was cramming too much into it, writing too many contrived coincidences, etc. Then I saw that the characters were fine, I was just trying too hard to give them a plot to act in. When I took them outside the story, thought a bit about what they'd do and what would happen to them in other circumstances, I wrote far more easily.
*Watching this as an autistic person who's special interest in writing* There's a lot of characters I made when I was younger I'm starting to tap back into since they've gone all over the place in terms of development, it's interesting using my kid ideas back then and trying to mould and shape them to fit with what I have now.
13:37 I’ve used this technique a lot. I call it recycling story bits. Like how I wanted to write Disney retellings in the contemporary genre, but later switched to fantasy. Or more recently, where I used an old idea of characters and their arcs (but with no plot)+ two beloved side characters and a theme (but still no overarching plot)= a loved cast of main characters and arcs but still no plot….(hopefully I can come up with something using these tips!). Loved the vid, Abbie!
My fav tropes - Epic fantasy - Dragons - Mentor death - Family issues - Found family - Sunshine character with tragic past - Political intrigue - Heist plots - Medieval balls with drama - Moral ambiguity - Enemies-to-friends arc - Comic relief sassy duo
The perfect trigger for brainstorming and getting rid of writers block. Best of all its free. Thanks a lot. Adding it to my walktime playlist to hear repeatedly ,for inspiration.
I have never written anything anything not even at school. But if I were to brainstorm I would use a a3 size paper filled with ideas in bubbles lists and doodles.
My brainstorming method is soaking in my environment and imagining the possible fictional stories I could tell in it, this helps if you're not yet experienced with world building as the world comes pre-built and you can change it to your taste
Talk about niche favorite troupes... I live in the world of fanfiction, as many who have read through my comments may know. So mine are probably different than others: - Sick fics. All of them. Anything soft. Sick character not wanting help? Comforter over doing it? Comforter asserting themself? Sick character being overly needy or worried about being a burden? There's like so many forms of angst. It's such a stupid lil troupe, but it's one of my favorites. - Overworking troupe. Where the character overworks so they have something to be proud of, or so that others can be proud of them. The character overworks because they want to be strong. They don't want people to perceive them as weak. Maybe there's actual physical danger if they take a break, so they push themself to the limit. Again, I've done this one too many times to count. - Sleep deprivation... very similar to overworking. Also very fun if the character values sleep, but just physically cannot sleep (due to anxiety or something similar). Another one, is overworking to sleep deprivation, to which Comforter must come save the day for their sleepy friend. - Sibling-like dynamics. - Guy and girls being JUST FRIENDS. - Angst where a character feels all alone and misunderstood. Bonus points if they actually are treated poorly and aren't just overreacting and petty. - Banter, that sometimes is there just to dance around a topic. Deep, difficult, awkward conversations that are lightened up by banter because none of the characters in the conversation want to address the situation. So many more I could mention if I thought about it enough. These are just the cliffnotes. Now to add them all to one single story... :) I'm squealing at the idea of inserting all these into one story ngl. It's just so fluffy
My main book series that I’m working on is going to be from separate points of view of other important figures in the story. My planned books are “The Mage” “The Healer” “The King” And “The Thief” And they’re from the respective POVs in each book. “The Mage” is from the POV of Yuen Vigil, the Mage.
I like to lay in a hot tub, hopefully alone where it's quiet, close my eyes and pretend I'm in a theater. I imagine seeing the perfect movie I would love to see and the ideas start to come to me. It always seems to work.
OKAY, I'm just gonna spill it. YOU'RE SO BEAUTIFUL. I REALLY LOVE YOUR CONTENT, ESPECIALLY THE WAY YOU HELPED ME EVER SINCE THE START!! GOD BLESS YOU, ABBIE!!!
Oooo! I feel this topic. I've started books that I eventually decided I didn't want to write. I don't mind scrapping it all and going back to the drawing board to brainstorm the ideas that I DO want to write. My latest book came out of this process. Too good. Thank you, Abbie!
This was so awesome! I resonated with all of it! A way I brainstorm is to listen to music and movies in my favorite genre's or trying a new song or tv show/movie ...then insparation just falls to me💕
you always amaze me! the way you always link psychology to writing is immensely mesmerizing. You are a genius, Abbie. I consider you, my official Writing coach, you saved my writing life when I just entered this fantastic world. always Rock on!!!
Abbie, you are the best!!! Thanks so much for this video! It helped me amazingly and I couldn't stop the ideas from flowing in my head after watching your video, thanks again!!!
ABBIE! You don't know how much this has helped me oh my god. Like- Literally just had breakthroughs with two of my stories which had left me in a rut for so many years now. They're the ones most precious to me because I started them when I was way younger. They've evolved a lot over the years, and most of that evolution is thanks to all of your great writing advices. I have followed you for a quite long while now, but this video in particular worked wonders for me. Reminds me of that documentary we watched in our art class about the importance of bringing out our inner child in the pursuit of something creative. I think everything's coming together now 😭 Thank you so much! All the love 💛
Practice change: my favourite way is simply to change up my walking route to my favourite café, or to go shopping or to visit a friend on a regular basis. I can deliberately zig zag up and down the Supermarket aisles as I shop - never tracing the same route each visit. Sometimes, as I set out, a random house or resident cat or sunny street pops up in my thoughts so I detour to go past them on my way - that very often results in unexpected but delightful and fruitful meetings with people.
When I brain storm I go to the park with at least one notebook and sit on the swings. I close my eyes and just act like I'm in my book watching diffrent things happen. Every time without fail for me I get this new and crazy Idea! ❤
I was wondering, how would you make a list of your favourite tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up till the wee hours of the morning reading, can you please explain how to do this?
What I find hilarious is that I've done most of these prompts on my own before. ^^ One of my recent problem stories was resolved by changing it from third to first person. The story just flowed after that. :) My 20+ year struggle of trying to make two hot tempered, independent and stubborn characters fall in love was resolved last year by tweaking the MC's perspective just a little. She made an allowance to accept help, therefore making an ally and... need I say more? ;)
I was wondering, how do you make a list of your favourite tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up till the wee hours of the morning reading, can you please explain how to do this please?
Dude, I had literally given up on my most recent story ages ago and this video brought my motivation back out of nowhere and made me realize just how many more things are on the table than I had ever realized. Tysm for this!!! Also, the part about almost all of people losing their creative genius by the time they were thirty literally had me in tears 😭
Thank you for making writing fun. ❤ I’ve always wanted to write a book, but would freeze up once I got to the laptop. Your videos have truly helped. Your course on Scrivener was amazing too.
This video was perfect for me. I'm writing three different stories right now. One of them, I've been writing for five years and I love it beyond belief and the other two are kind of in the background and I don't care about them as much. When I saw this video, I realized that I had done ALL of these things for the story that I've been writing for five years. (I started writing that story when I was only eight years old!) And so I realized that all I have to do is do that again for my two other stories to make them exciting and fun! Thank you Abbie! You are a life saver! 😄
I am writing a new book but the most challenging thing is these characters have a rare condition. I've researched it and there is not too much information to find on the internet about this condition. There isn't too much information on how to treat this condition. Why do you think I should do to continue writing about this condition? I know a person who has this condition that's what gave me the idea to write this book.
That's a good motivating encouragements to tell yourself to write!:) And you can also think about these rare conditions that doesn't have any treatments, but treat the characters as human. Imagine the time when some people who suffered in depression had a few supportive family members and friends/lover when the whole world turned against them after knowing what illness they were suffering from. Neglected from society and scrutinized, saying they are problematic. How did the family who constantly deal with people with rare conditions, treat them? Obviously some days were frustrating and felt guilty of burdening others or behaving poor to that person who is suffering mentally or physically. It's the growth of the relationship and understanding that would make the relationship between these two people worthy and beautiful. I think you can gain some more information about the relationship between Van Gogh with his older brother and sister-in-law.
You possibly have _written yourself into a corner_ ( 😉) if it's so extremely rare that you cannot find information on it. On the flip side, you could emphasize the 'mystery of the unknown.' Is the cough/vomiting/fever/etc. related to the condition or just a cough/food poisoning/24-bug/etc.? I'm presuming you're using instances from this person's own life as well, but you could find stories of other people who had rare conditions (mental or physical) and look at all the misdiagnoses that came up on the journey. (Simple example, but I watched a story about a woman who had like a 40-80 pound tumor growing in her stomach and her doctors initially thought she was simply obese and needed to eat less.)
Really liked the video. My last novel incorporated a few of your suggestions as I got stuck along the way. I'm a pantser and when I get stuck, I usually step away for a while until I can come at the story from a different angle. Along the way, I changed the POV from third person to first person. I changed the genre from romance to dystopian (but kept the happy ending). i incorporated story elements from a previous novel that crashed and burned. Eventually, things fell into place.
one of my favourite things to do is use songs to create scenarios! then i can make playlists, arrange them into timelines, establish a vibe.. taylor swift is like the sole inspiration for the book i’m writing right now🤭
I like creating visual novels. And it is such a hard thing to come up with story ideas. Not only because you need a story itself. But because everything has to be thought about extra so that everything is connected and so that canon events and plots in a visual novel will be in context. It's even worse when you're doing prequels or sequels. And it's especially annoying when you have to change up a whole bunch of already existing text because one change you plan for the whole plot just needs so much changes from the earlier stuff... So I'm glad this helps a little!
The retelling part helped me a week ago for coming up with the story idea that I finally, truly loved. All this time, I've always struggled with being original so I wouldn't feel like a thief :,) but after rewatching one piece's skypiea arc, it shot me that I want to tell my own version of the arc itself for my middle grade novel. so to some writers out there who are still facing the same problem, u can still use the same idea that millions have already thought of but the way u execute the idea, how u tell the story is what matters.
This video is such a good resource. When I'm bored or stuck, I do a "what if" stream of consciousness writing session. This will help organize and add to those questions. I usually write fantasy. I think stories become boring when things aren't multi-faceted and three-dimensional, so I'll often add attributes and past experiences to characters, things that tie into the story. Another thing I like to do is worldbuilding groups of people - ie the government, a group of bandits, the working class villagers, etc and ask myself what are their collective goals, and how can that be tied into the plot? That way you have a more fleshed out world with more organic friction and obstacles that add texture to your story and make it more interesting.
I was wondering how would you make a list of your favourite tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up till the wee hours of the morning reading, could you please explain how to do this?
Here's something I usually do. If I feel burnt out, I do something else. I occasionally go on an "idea hunt" or "coolness hunt" on what I like. For example: -A hunt on myself. I am in love with custom made stuff. I have my own concept of style as a personal language you can proudly show off even if other people don't care, feeling you do have a space and are unique. Boom. It became the foundation for the power system, one obtains a power under certain conditions and it changes their appearance/clothing/etc. according to one's favorite stuff in a way that makes their uniqueness shine and be practical with their own weapons. -A hunt on a single idea, regardless if it's gonna end up with filler stuff. One of my many character came to mind, but I couldn't come up with a nickname for her. So I remembered an artist I follow asked 2 characters to be named on Instagram and she loved my suggestion so it stuck on the character. So I did the same. I asked her for some name ideas, and since I didn't think the name was so fitting for the way I name my characters, I gathered other two female characters, and since I want to get more comfortable with writing and developing female characters, I decided to challenge myself creating this trio called "the Urban Purples". Now I love them so much I want to commission a drawing of the group and hang it in my room. From that, a side idea stemmed as to make a rival crew. -a hunt on my favorite sport. Whenever I hear a cool-sounding nickname/technique/location or whatever, I take notes. I try to train my visual memory by triggering it, I memorize specific details to remember about entire spacial sections. I sometimes am conscious I'm gathering stimuli, sometimes I just happen to watch a video for fun and I automatically do it. Also I shifted my entire project. It began as a group of scientists hunting for monsters to kill them, so they can avoid them from threatening the city; to a completely different environment of a battle between two human factions. And here comes another idea. Pick up discarded ideas. Or original points, like the scientists one. I am working on a way to make the beginning of this project with time-traveling agents working for a better development by learning the active life in the past, they will also have to kill monsters and other shenanigans might happen. This was also an experiment for a new way to make stories I'm using, which is starting small and viable. Less characters, more focus on development. It's also easier to plan things out: I'm making various options on how the story can develop. Who knows, there might be a tragic ending. I hope this wall of text helps someone. Thanks!
All of the tropes you wrote down remind me of my favourite story called after school lessons for unripe apples. It’s an unfinished webtoon still receiving updates but it’s amazing and I think everyone should read it!
Abbie, can you make a video (Or if you already did just link it) about writing madness ? In my novel, my main character starts as a kind and cute child and becomes crazy through the story, but I'm no sure how to write this evolution. My idea is (since he is really kind and thinks so is the world) to make him suffer for his emotional decisions and make him too logical, and in the end even the logic betrays so he just goes crazy (And some perfectionism, suppressed love, revenge, social awkwardness and betrayal over here and there). 1 word, 4 letters : HELP
I FRICKIN LOVE THIS!!! I have been having writer’s block for the past like hour. I have a story idea now! I have no idea whether I will finish this story, but if I do, I will try to come back and tell you.
I think the POV of a given part of the story should be from someone who is experienced/has experienced the part of the story that we are dealing with. The most experienced in that part is the obvious choice, you can go with someone with slightly less idea about that part, but rarely can you go with someone who is not part of that part or has much less experience with it. Also, if in doubt, go with the Universal POV. I go with the Universal POV overall and then allot specific parts to some characters when we need to dig deep into their part of the story.
Hi, I appreciate a lot of your videos, and I agree with the ideas that you have expanded on like the importance of inner conflict, the reader/viewer experiencing the flashback/world-building with the MC, how there should be a proper build-up to emotional scenes, or how both characters' lives in a slow-burn romance should be explored individually before and after they get together. However, there are certain things that I don't agree with, and I don't agree with the insertion of tropes for the sake of it. If a trope comes in as part of the story naturally, well and good, but you can't insert a trope for the sake of it. Also, I focus on the theme the most - so I get ideas based on various themes, so combining ideas doesn't work, because they are all of different themes. The theme is the king for me, then come characters and plot. Tropes come last. If you are true to the theme, character, and plot building becomes easy. You don't even need to focus on tropes. Also, genre depends on how you want to express your theme. So, I would say, the theme defines the genre in a way. Also, I don't believe in retelling. I would like to tell stories of the themes that I believe are worth exploring and hope the audience identifies with them. And I want to explore and bring to the audience those themes in my way, with my characters and my understanding of the theme. But, in an already-established story, the original author would've had a theme in mind, and since the story has reached people, the job of the author is done and the theme has been fulfilled by the story. What is the purpose of a retelling then? If we change aspects of the original story, then we're changing its theme, so it's no longer a retelling. And, then the new theme has to appeal to me and then once I buy into it, I have to make the audience identify with it. There's more work in it than the satisfaction it brings to me in my humble opinion. Of course, if one is just writing for monetary expectations they might try this, but I believe many of us write because we love to, and in that case, is a retelling that rewarding? I'd rather go with an original theme that I personally believe the audience should get a taste of it and then work my way towards it.
You’ve done it again, my genius friend Abbie. Was feeling lackluster about my novel, then finished watching this segment, and I’ve been able to do something weird and awesome with my current story. I’m incorporating some of my other book ‘romance’ into my current book! So good, different almost divergent, I’m a more average thinker, but I like working hard and loveeee writing!!! Thanks so much, you got it going on beautiful lady.
Thank you for your videos! They are always so uplifting and helpful! I was feeling very stuck creatively, and your video was perfect for helping me get ideas going. I think I was caught up in these imaginary expectations of what I thought my novel should be, but I want to write what I like to read and what will keep me engaged and interested. Thank you so much for helping me figure out what that is!
Thank you so much for this! The reason I started writing was to make the stories I would have read as a kid, so this helped me remember that. You're amazing, Abbie! :)
Finally, something new and promising. I have two stories with great ideas, most of the conditions are met,, but they feel boring to finish writing now, especially that they have been on hold for months. Thanks. This has been most educative.
It’s kinda funny how many of these things I’m already doing with my WIP. But I’m definitely going to try asking my kids for ideas the next time I’m stuck - they’re 4 and 6 so right in that creative genius stage!
Omg, thank you SO MUCH! How do you do that? I feel like i were struck by a truck of motivation lol I have this story of mine since like 8 years old and of course I already changed a lot of it, but still I'm kinda scared to make huge changes like who's the main character and things like that (and i was starting to give up on it), but watching this video i simply stoped in my couch like "Wait. Wait, that's actually a REALLY GOOD idea!" Now I gotta brainstorm it all! TYSM again
This was great, thank you so much for helping to rewire my brain. Sadly, I've been doing so much convergent thinking and getting so frustrated that ideas always have problems and don't work. I'm going to try to do more divergent thinking. I wasn't even aware of these concepts, so thank you 😊
These are fantastic brainstorming questions, the tropes one really had my brain flooding with trope after trope, writing is gonna be so fun!!! Thank you a lot for helping me get my creativity flowing once again!
So far the only trope I can think of is I love the cheery, fun-loving male character who never seems to show any emotion besides happy/chill, but other emotions are subtly hinted at until something breaks them. Or even the other way around, the angry, grumpy character that only shows the emotion anger, and then later they break down in sadness and afterwards we see them happy. I LOVE characters like that! They're always my favorite, and a lot of the time I don't predict thay're going to have a dark moment or a dark past and it shocks me, and that makes me love them even more! Sans, Imp, Hunter TOH, Amethyst( she's a girl but I meant it's generally male characters but females sometimes pop up ^^ ) Branch, Uncle Iroh( not my favorite but I always anticipate his breaking point when I re-watch ) Just writing this I've realized on top of that, I love the oddball characters in general, and moments when sudden normalcy shines through they're oddness: Ice Bear, Sokka, Tigger etc
My best way to get idea for anything is to listen to songs. I LOVE songs. I have over 800 of them saved, so whenever I put my playlist on shuffle, I listen to these very random songs, and an idea strikes me. Oh, and I also realized that I like to write someone (usually a love interest or mc) dying or trying to commit.. Ehhh.. that could work, I mean.. One of my characters haves the fate of dying in his lover's arms.. He also may or may not be accidentally killed by his lover..
That research explains a lot to me. When I was 5 years old I was told I had the intelligence of a 10 year old. When I was 10 I was told I had the intelligence of a 10 year old. Thirty years on, I still have the intelligence of a 10 year old. Some things never change...
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Me too. When I was young I could think of the most awsome and original ideas. It's time for me to tap into that mindset and go for it.
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I’m currently still living in my childish tendencies and I don’t know how. 😂 Love how other people also do that too. It makes everything so fun.
One brainstorming technique I’ve been using my whole life is “20 Answers.” You basically pose a question and then brainstorm around 10 answers to start. They can range from straightforward and logical to utterly silly and ridiculous. (If you easily get over 10 without breaking a sweat, then maybe the question is too open-ended. OTOH, if you find it impossible to come up with 5-6, even after sleeping on it, then the question might be too specific.) Once you get to around 10, review those answers and twist/distort them to make new answers, even to the point of being completely contrarian. Somewhere along the line, the perfect answer is bound to jump out. This has gotten me out of many a jam, from debugging computer code, to social relationships, to writing.
Here’s a recent question I posed to myself: “To illustrate just how evil the Big Bad Enchantress is, an early scene could show her torturing a good guy. Why?”
1. He done her wrong in the past and she wants revenge, torturing him to death.
2. Actually, killing is too good for him; she means to break him, instead.
3. It’s an interrogation for strategic or tactical info.
4. She thinks he’s an impostor, a shapeshifter, or some other kind of doppelganger, and she is trying to get him to reveal himself.
5. She respects him in a creepy sort of way and she desperately needs confirmation of his approval to justify her actions.
6. Committing torture is just to prove a point to her associates (peers or underlings) to keep them in line.
7. She wants to test his resolve, and perhaps turn him to the dark side.
8. It’s a ritual sacrifice to a demon.
9. No reason at all, just a purely random act of violence. It’s what evil enchantresses do.
And then the permutations kick in…
10. He done her wrong in the past, but it was by proxy and he is unaware that it happened.
11. She mistakenly believes that he done her wrong in the past, but it wasn’t him at all.
12. She’s committing the torture reluctantly. A partner, peer, or superior is putting her up to it.
13. Her need to torture is the result of a self-inflicted curse.
14. Her need to torture is the only way she can release pent-up negative energies that would otherwise eat her alive.
15. Her need to torture is a Dorian Gray fountain-of-youth ritual.
16. It’s a reverse interrogation. She’s actually spilling the beans to the "victim" by the questions she asks. (Maybe this variation shows up in a future scene, once we’ve established her penchant for interrogation through torture.)
17. She needs to break him for a tactical reason other than intelligence gathering such as to brainwash him.
18. … or to ruin his psychic powers.
19. … or to burden his loved ones and take them out of the game.
I’m liking how that last one - taking his loved ones out of the game - might fit in to my story. The reverse interrogation also looks like fun, but that necessitates establishing the first scene as a standard interrogation. OTOH, the loved one aspect could be thrown in at the end of the first scene as an afterthought. Hmmm, definitely enough to work with.
I first learned of this technique as a software engineering student. I was helping a family friend generate some reports for his photography business. He wanted a summary on page one, but the report generator program I had available couldn’t do two passes. It could only print a summary at the end. So I posed my question, “How do I print the summary page first?” I brainstormed a good 15 possible answers, all of which seemed inelegant and overkill. Then I got contrarian and my 16th answer was “I don’t.” My ultimate solution, therefore, was to print the summary page at the end as usual and tell my friend to simply move the last sheet to the front before mailing it off. Doh! Sometimes that blinding flash of the obvious takes a while to arrive.
This is so awesome, I’m definitely gonna use this
Abbie!! I know everyone says this but HOW do you have the most perfect timing??? 😭 I’ve been so frustrated with writing lately because I’m just so bored with all the old ideas I had. I’ve been a subscriber for years and you have been one of my main inspirations and teachers all along! I recommend you to every writer I talk with. You’re a blessing, and a lovely soul. Thank you! 🥹💕 (btw I love your background! always so clean, tidy, and colorful.)
You're right
@elizabethgracw9092 when that happens step away and turn off your mind and just let it come. You may end up trashing lot of it but you getting words down.
Oh my god. Same. Saw this video just days after I was trying figure out why I couldn't write this one specific story.
Your so right, I've been just throwing away and keeping ideas😅😮
Having a child-like mindset is so beneficial in so many creative practices. When I'm feeling like this, I love listening to music that reminds me of my story or characters and just thinking deeply about it to get some ideas out. The music helps me to be less judgemental of my ideas and lets my mind truly wander (and I allow myself to get distracted) because it feels like I'm just having fun rather than strictly writing - not that the writing isn't fun, rather it adds an extra layer of excitement.
I’m finding music is a huge benefit to my thought process but only certain music. For instance I listened to Abbie’s immersive writing video with the cottage by the sea setting. The music instantly became the soundtrack for a scene in my sequence list.
As I listened to the music the scene I envisioned changed to one in which the male protagonist is composing a song inspired by the woman he is falling in love with. She walks in and hears it
It starts a conversation that leads to a specific revelation about the male protagonist that proves to be something the female protagonist can connect with. She’s being wooed but is fighting it per her internal conflict’s orders 😂. But the events of this scene get another chunk of that wall to crumble away.
I will of course have the immersive video on when I write that scene! It’s just one more reason for me to thank Abbie 😉💯
True, I made a playlist for each one of them, it's a habit
I was wondering, what does landscaping my day mean?
At the risk of George Lucas coming after me, I now refer to you as Abbie-Wan! You truly are that mentor that beginners like me need! Thank you for all you do. Your success is much deserved.
Something I’ve been exploring recently is “summoning” my story the very second I start to wake up in the morning. I find that for about half an hour while in that barely awake state, my creativity feeds me ideas, solutions to plotting and even dialogue.
It’s tricky to remember it all without coming awake enough to write it down. But as I inevitably shift more and more into the waking brain wave state, I go ahead and reach for my pad and pen.
I’m happy to say I’m nowhere near bored. This is all still so brand new and exciting for me. Your guidance and the way you approach story has made a huge impression on me. I’ve always loved writing but never actually tried to write a comprehensive work before - only random “pants-ed” stand- alone scenes 😂😂
I’m not sure if I’ll ever try to publish. I’m writing for ME first. Then we’ll see. I lost my Dad a year and almost five months ago. Maybe I’m writing now a little for him too. It will be the realization of a long neglected dream to complete a novel. He was always my biggest cheerleader for anything I did.
It’s amazing how I’ll write something for my protagonist but then I’ll realize a parallel with my own life’s journey. I’ve found that the ability to write creatively is the gift that keeps on giving every time I sit down to unwrap it and put fingertips to keys.
Focusing on writing a full blown “proper” novel has been a healing process. The structure along with the detailed explanations you give made it all suddenly seem possible for ME to achieve! I guess the saying is true that when the student is ready, the master will appear. That would be you, Abbie-Wan 😂.
Please don’t ever stop sharing yourself with the world. YOU MATTER to a whole lot of people like me who needed that inspirational spark to get them off the sidelines and realize it’s never too late to humor your dreams.
Continued success to you AND your sister! You both rock!
Some other things I think sometimes that could help:
⭐ "Remember that story you enjoyed so much but that specific part could've been so much better?" Do it for your story;
⭐ Think of a character you love, the best things about them and how fun it would be if you could put this character in your story. Change the character's name and appearance and now you can put them in your story;
⭐ Brainstorm for something outside of your story and then imagine bringing it to your story. Ex: As a Pokémon fan I made a creativity exercise of creating titles for Pokémon movies for not so special pokémon. There are Pokémon movies called "Zoroark: Master of Illusions" and "Volcanion and the Mechanical Marvel". There's a pokémon family that seems to be kinda slow-thinking and oblivious, they're not considered special enough for a movie, but if they were, there could be a movie called "Slowbro and the Oblivion Island". If I ever bring the concept of an oblivion island to my story, part of my joy for pokémon would come along.
Perfect, just what I needed.
I’m gonna screenshot this
Is it bad that the first thing that jumped into my head for the first prompt was “50 shades of Hannibal Lecter and Clarice Starling, here we go”? xD
How to find my genre
I love your guideline, it is very wise and cool. Maybe this could help me, what other tips do you have? I am struggling with my story because I am confused about the part where Abbie said to make a list of our addictive, attractive qualities that we see in our favourite stories. Would you mind explaining it to me please? It would be much appreciated.
Yes! Release your inner child. We've been taught to lock up the child inside. It also helps with self healing, releasing that inner child. It reminds us to stop and look at the world with wonder; ya know, instead of focusing on all the negative and problems all the time.
Interesting research and it makes so much sense. When I was 10 years old, I could write a whole story without much thought. Now at 41, I struggle just writing a story outline. Therefore, great advice Abbie. So basically, I should go back (mentally) about 30-35 years! 😂😂
My granddaughter came up with a sequel to Snow White when she was 6 that I wrote down for her because if Disney ever stops being stupid she can sell it to them for millions
In seconds grade we had to write a story about something that happened to us, I forgot what the story I wrote was about but I know that my teacher thought it was amazing and told the whole class. I’m in sixth now and that story was better written than anything I could do now
My favorite "5-year-old" thinkers who knew how to be truly unique and out-of-the-box:
-- L. Frank Baum (The Oz Books)
-- Sid Krofft (various really wildly imaginative children's TV shows)
-- Roald Dahl (Willy Wonka, Matilda, et. al.)
-- Lee Minoff and Al Brodax (Chief Screenwriters for "Yellow Submarine")
-- Norton Juster (The Phantom Tollbooth)
What wouldn't I give to be as free and uninhibited in my creativity as they are!
My favorite why to brainstorm ideas is to watch shows and movies. Sometimes when I watch a show or movie and I love the trip or plot point so much I get a spark of Genius asking myself, “What if I put something like that into my story?”
Abbie once again thanks for your help! Due to life and college I felt a bit unmoderated and down to write my fan-fiction. I always think of ideas but noticed myself say, “That been done before that not original!!!” And it make me feel kinda down. But thanks to you and your writing genius I go it back! I Hugh of ideas I never though before and plots i never even concerned.
Thanks for your help! I hope you have a great day writing friend! 😁
For me, sometimes a story idea can come about by messing with words and their meanings.
Example: I got stuck on the word "origins" so much that "oranges" didn't sound normal anymore.
I ended up with a poem 😊
I am all for fairytale retellings, and I have good ideas:
-A retelling of Little Red Riding Hood in which the female protagonist is the huntress older sister of Little Red, and the ‘Big Bad Wolf’ is actually a shapeshifter.
-A Cinderella story set after the happily ever after and told in the POV of the older stepsister, who finds her own true love.
-A Snow White retelling where Snow White actually dies and her younger half-sister suddenly becomes the heir to the throne.
-A dark fantasy thriller anime rendition of Snow White, and the story begins at its climax: the crown princess falls into a coma after being poisoned; the evil queen is betrayed by her own son, the grand duke; the grand duke becomes the regent, taking advantage of his older sister’s out-of-commission state. The grand duke actually brings the female MC into his world via the magic mirror, and the story cuts to hours before this happens.
-A Cinderella story where Cinderella is secretly a super rich duchess, the fairy godmother is her witty, sassy great-grandmother, and her Prince Charming is actually her personal gardener and her secret arranged fiancé who owns a horticultural empire.
-A crossover of Little Red Riding Hood and The Old Woman in the Woods. Little Red is a young baroness who inherits the old wagon of her deceased grandmother, who she discovers has been practicing eldritch magic.
-A Cinderella story in which the Cinderella character goes to the ball and avoids the prince only to catch the eye of the villain.
The spinoff idea is excellent, and something that I decided to do around two years ago. It resulted in a trilogy. The first book (prequel) ended up being from the POV of my original protagonist's mother. The 2nd and 3rd books are the original series. Turning out really interesting that way.
I'm a teen writer and I have been having trouble with my writing. I'm just not feeling the spark when I write it, but I have recently subscribed to your channel and I have been improving a lot! You are the best Abbie! Thank you so much!
Hey what's your age
I once mixed an idea of a fantasy world from middle ages with scenes from a draft I've written that took place in the modern world, and boom it couldn't be better, they fitted together way more than I could have imagined and each one of them became essential for the progress of the other one, this was one of my favorite story ideas that I've came up with
Hold up- that actually sounds interesting 👀👀👀 what is it about?
Abbie, thank you for everything you have taught us over the years
Some of these points are things I'm trying right now, (Combining story Ideas, add different characters). One thing I love to do to get ideas is listen to music from my favorite movies and games that I grew up with and use them to think of scenarios that would happen in my story and when I was younger I could come up with some crazy things while doing that. (I.e. I came up with a disasterous battle/planetary invasion sequence that takes place in my story with music from the soundtrack from Titanic of all things.) I really miss those days sometimes.
I was wondering, how can I landscape my day by writing down everything I do and the times I do them for progress?
I've another video suggestion.
But firstly, Abbie this was really helpful. Thank you so much for going beyond conventional video ideas and helping us with questions we can't really describe.
So, the suggestion is, please make a video regarding how to stay organized in the initial process. I've had many ideas come to me as I start working, sometimes it's a scene, sometimes a charcter, sometimes I think I want to add another POV.
As I move ahead in process. I start rewriting these scenes. Changing the dialogues and settings etc. And sometimes I'll have 4 versions of the same scene. And then it gets overwhelming. The thing is I can't think linearly for a story, and I've observed most writers don't. And so, I don't use one document to write but use notes to write bits and pieces of ideas as they come to me. The problem is I can't find a way to organize them.
I know you're a master organizer. Please guide us how we can stay organised with just systems, like tagging or labeling on Google Notes. Something that everyone can use and not just a software like Scrivener. Something purely on strategic planning and management that can save our lives.
Hope you'll make a video on it. And thanks always for making us Rock on.🤘
I've brainstormed ideas and scenes inspirations with chatGPT for the last few days and it probably saved me weeks if not months of work at the library. Such a useful tool. (Not planning on copy/pasting AI descriptions; it's not great prose; you still have to write the story. But as an inspiration for ideas, it works very well. Not flawless (in a long chat, it can confuse characters and plotlines), but overall, so useful to find inspiration. Basically, you tell chat GPT your story ideas and ask it to help you come up with more ideas for scenes or ways to develop them, and to brainstorm backstories and personalities for the characters.
I'm vehemently against AI, due to the possibilities of it stealing the arts away from us, so when I tried using ChatGPT to brainstorm some ideas for a scene I admit I felt conflicted. I got weird, cringy scenes first time I used it, safe to say I did not take on any of those ideas. Today I tried it for a short speech since I truly had no idea how to start one, and surprisingly I got good results I could get inspired by. I'm still wary of this new technology, if it wasn't hurting artists by money-hungry sharks I wouldn't have such opinion about it, AI Can be used for inspiration, but only ethically, I don't want future humans to become soulless robots while the actual machines are creating fulfilling works.
i’m so excited to get back into my book, this is gonna be so helpful!
My suggestions:
Before writing, drink water and walk around a bit. It will help trust me.
Make something random up! Just draw a sweet potato with a face and a dark past or something and you may begin to add its elements to your story
Don’t be afraid to write relaxed scenes. If you can’t think of any crazy things to do with your book then maybe that’s because you should make a quiet scene, a scene that may add a new detail to your characters.
I was wondering, how do you make a list of tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up to the wee hours of the morning reading. Can you please explain how to do that?
Omg yasss that would work so well
It's nice that she speaks so clearly so I can watch in 3X speed with no issue
THANK YOU!
Abbie, this was amazing! I love seeing how this all plays out. I can get way too critical of my ideas and scold myself "Don't do it, it's a trope" "You can't have the MC be in pain, ppl won't like it" "No one likes reading a sensitive character voice" etc. This opened my eyes to see that I can actually ENJOY my story. I can write the parts that I would want to read over and over again just for the sensation of reading them!
Thanks! I used these ideas to actually start with creating a story idea, and I am STOKED for this project! I've fallen in love with the ideas I have! You're a lifesaver!!!
I'm a new writer. Didn't know it was okay to do a retelling. What a relief.
Can't wait to use all these tips! Btw, NO, 100DOS without Weston POV's is unthinkable. I am SO glad it's got both
Every time I feel like I'm in a writing rut, watching any of your videos motivates me. You are my inspiration, Abbie. The professional quality of your videos, your photos, and your books--I aspire to be just as good as you on all these fronts. Thank you for being amazing
Back when I was a kid, I used to write stories in literal paper, like you cannot edit or anything but from start to end my book looks amazing even though my wrist would hurt from writing for hours. Now that I am typing I still can' find that joy and satisfaction my younger self had. I mean my younger self was really good at writing theological thrillers and amazing genuine characters with actual flaws. Just a few grammar and spelling mistakes and now! I feel like I had disappointed my childhoodself and became an awful writer. Thank You, Abbie! You are such a lifesaver❤❤❤❤
I'm jealous of the way you think and can articulate your thoughts. I have an entire reference page from your videos. Having ADHD and severe processing issues due to a brain injury, my memory has me questioning all that I do. I will finish my novel even it takes a year! I hope the crying, quitting, restarting, and screaming in the mirror pays off. Having these tropes as a reference point has really helped - off course written down or they would be forgotten minutes later. -
Excellent advice. I've used a technique related to this for a while. I've always called it "twisting," and what it involves in coming up with a story, plain or extravagant, and then once I've figured out most of the details I take one detail and change it in a significant way. Not like changing the main character's hair color, but often it's switching a heroic character to a villain, although it doesn't have to be that and shouldn't always be the same thing. Maybe instead of a character losing their mother at a young age they instead are involved in a horrific accident. The main point of it is to change that one detail and nothing else. What this does is make a story that isn't pre-planned or that fits nicely, and it raises a bunch of questions that I have to figure out the answers to. It takes me out of my box of comfort and makes me think about the story in a very different way. More details may change as I go along, but it's important to start with just one detail, and it may take a few attempts to find the right detail.
This began after I had discovery written a couple of chapters for a novel. My heroes were brothers, and they were tasked with helping stop some mysterious creatures who had been invading the kingdom. One of the brothers immediately volunteered but the other did not and asked what was in it for them. Then the creatures attacked and the second brother came around, but as I analyzed that sequence I couldn't figure out why the second brother refused at first. I thought of him as equally heroic to the first brother, but my subconscious had brought about the refusal, as mild as it may have been. Then it hit me: he wasn't supposed to be a hero, but rather a villain. I kept the sequence of events the same, at least at first, and tried to figure out why he would do these things if he were the bad guy (the creatures were separate villains from him) and that led to a remarkable mental exercise that became a much richer and less cliched story for me.
Lately I have discovered a writing prompt aid called the Story Engine, a set of cards with various prompts in various categories that a person can combine to formulate the basis of a plotline. While I wouldn't say this is essential since the decks cost money, it's a very useful tool. More interesting to me is that each square shaped card has multiple entries, either two or four depending on the type of card it is, that can be rotated if you don't like the one that's right-side up upon dealing. Of course, you can draw new cards if you can't make those fit, but I follow a different method. I draw what comes out of the shuffled decks, randomly determine the rotation, and go with it. This leads to some rather ridiculous combinations, especially if you use the various booster packs for different genres, but I try to make it work anyway. If something doesn't fit the genre, I replace it with something that would be roughly equivalent but that would actually work in the genre (a golem instead of a robot, for example), or if I've drawn a rather underwhelming sequence I change the boring prompts to something that's basically the same but not as dull as the original in order to spice it up a bit, or draw additional cards to add to it. I feel it is important to keep the prompt random so it's not conforming to my pre-conceived ideas and tastes but forces me into a mindset of figuring out how to make it work. It may be radically different from what I had in mind at first, but like the discovery writing example above it is likely to vastly improve the idea. It can also, of course, be used to augment an existing idea.
I blame the public schools for killing creativity.
Hahahh so true man😂
Creativity, individuality, critical thinking, competence-they have murdered much.
Private schools do it, too. "Forget about creating anything yourself. Just shut that part of you off and learn to analyze what others have created." Took me almostv40 years to get back to that part of myself.
Hi from Tasmania, Australia. I LOVE you Abbie. I know that sounds creepy - what I mean is I love your content. I see you as my own writing coach. Your videos are (in my opinion) the BEST on the net. Thank you for your warm, encouraging style and for being so generous with your tools and tips. Watching your content makes me feel happy and inspired. Thank you, lovely human.
Abbie I can't believe it!
I never knew I could do this, thank you so much!
My brainstorming comes from journaling my life, both retrospective and current. I love this week's video. I should be proud of myself for thinking of some of these same concepts. One thing that rebooted my writing (besides your amazing energy!) was thinking "how would I make this a movie?" A friend helping edit the first draft of my first book told me it read like a diary. I thought, of course it does. It's a story. I decided a screenplay would start the story in the middle and flashback to critical earlier scenes. I'm currently re-writing it with that perspective. It's a challenge to work old scenes into flashbacks and I will drop some earlier scenes, which will help cut some weight. But then I'm already thinking about new scenes to write. My energy is sparked!
Just watch lots of movies, TV shows and video games. That always works for me
I borrowed a lot of my story ideas from Assassin's Creed
So it wasn’t my imagination! I really did come up with more stories when I was younger! Thanks for the great advice Abbie. Not just in this video, but in all of them. You’re a lifesaver!!!
Abbie, I can't tell you how much this video means to me. The book I've been trying writing for 3 years now is just sorta getting.... eh. I'm not excited about it anymore. I feel like I've lost a part of my identity because I'm not writing anymore.
This has finally made my creative wheels turn again! Thank you.
How’s it going a year later?
*Change/add a POV:* My book I'm writing started off with 53 named characters chasing one demon, and I've added POVs from all of them (some much more than others). Currently, 22 are still alive, three of which definitely won't make it to the end.
*Spin-off:* I am hoping that I can make a spin-off with the surviving characters (both good and bad).
*Turn it upside-down:* The MC dies and the villain lives.
*Make it a retelling:* I have future plans to do that with a story or two by the Brothers Grimm.
*Changing the genre:* I have had ideas for that with 'Disney Classic' stories.
*Combining stories:* I would like to; however, my current story is a division of the story I originally wanted to tell. (A world & pantheon origins, a Romanesque civilization collapse, and pursing a demon. The demon was originally going to be involved in all three aspects.)
*Changing the theme:* The current book's theme is 'Actions have Consequences,' both good and bad.
*Favorite brainstorming:* Reading older books (Phantom of the Opera, The Three Musketeers, Great Expectations, H.P. Lovecraft, Elric of Melnibone) and historical books (military history, slavery world-wide, tribal and individuals).
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First of all, great video Abbie✨️ As always, you make my Wednesdays that much brighter😊
Second, it sucks because I have so many ideas and stories. There's hardly a day that goes by where I haven't written or edited something, but I have NO ONE to share any of it with!
Something I'm passionate about that no one in my life cares for.
I'm not joking.
My mother only reads/believes in only one book and strongly dislikes anything fantasy or sci-fi (which I enjoy most)
(She's told me multiple times that she's waiting for the day I toss all my books in a fire, but whatever)
My father, siblings, cousins, aunts and uncles, and grandparents (minus my Ouma, but she only reads Afrikaans books) would all rather do anything else BUT READ!
I am the artistic black sheep in a family filled with business and numbers people, gamers and social media crazies, sporty people, cooking and baking enthusiasts, and simple living folk.
(That last one is my grandparents, and I really enjoy when I get a whole week to visit them. Surrounded by nature. Being woken up by Cocky-Boy the rooster and the hens, and having to fetch the eggs. Sighing in relief that the dogs haven't caught and killed any of the dassies.
Coffee and tea ANY TIME of the day. Nearly completely cut off from the digital world. Sitting by the fire, knitting or reading, playing board or card games - my Oupa always says the funniest and often crude things when he's losing... or winning. Hiking, going down to the dam. Adding new additions to the house by hand. The gardening. The fresh air and the sounds of birds and goats and cows and chickens and dogs and the odd horse and sometimes frogs and of course you don't hear the cats but they're there. It's all just... an absolute delight.)
Anyway, I also have no friends, but even the social circles I occasionally interact with share the same opinions on fiction as my mother.
So... 🥲
Once again, Abbie, thank you so much for the advice🙏🏼✨️
Hello Abbie! I started watching almost all of your videos a few days ago. Thank you so much on inspiring me to become a better writer. It’s so hard to find advice without a teacher(bc I’m homeschooled lol). So everytime I do my LA, I watch one of your videos as if you are my teacher. Thank you for helping be a better writer
I have been stuck with my story for ages, never too happy with how it went even if I liked it. Watching your video gave me ideas and I started writing on it again after years. I changed where the story starts, made it a bit darker and now ideas are flowing and I am finally excited about my story again!
I am half way through this video and one of my favorites so far! Sooooo much confirmation, I want to cry for joy! I am traveling through airport from a funeral right now and I want to prepare myself to get out of a slump! Thank you so much! When you cannot put a name on something and you been having these feelings, turn on an Abbie video! #rockon
I’m not sure how you manage to solve my problems with such simple solutions. These videos are literally a lifesaver
I often notice that when I get bored with a story, it's because the characters and the plot don't fit. I once abandoned completely a novel because I got so frustrated with it: I was cramming too much into it, writing too many contrived coincidences, etc. Then I saw that the characters were fine, I was just trying too hard to give them a plot to act in. When I took them outside the story, thought a bit about what they'd do and what would happen to them in other circumstances, I wrote far more easily.
I love the concept of "What if" questions. Forces your brain to think in questions
my entire book changed because of this video. I put the last chapter in the beginning and it turned out amazing. Thank you Abbie
*Watching this as an autistic person who's special interest in writing*
There's a lot of characters I made when I was younger I'm starting to tap back into since they've gone all over the place in terms of development, it's interesting using my kid ideas back then and trying to mould and shape them to fit with what I have now.
13:37 I’ve used this technique a lot. I call it recycling story bits. Like how I wanted to write Disney retellings in the contemporary genre, but later switched to fantasy. Or more recently, where I used an old idea of characters and their arcs (but with no plot)+ two beloved side characters and a theme (but still no overarching plot)= a loved cast of main characters and arcs but still no plot….(hopefully I can come up with something using these tips!). Loved the vid, Abbie!
My fav tropes
- Epic fantasy
- Dragons
- Mentor death
- Family issues
- Found family
- Sunshine character with tragic past
- Political intrigue
- Heist plots
- Medieval balls with drama
- Moral ambiguity
- Enemies-to-friends arc
- Comic relief sassy duo
The perfect trigger for brainstorming and getting rid of writers block. Best of all its free. Thanks a lot. Adding it to my walktime playlist to hear repeatedly ,for inspiration.
I have never written anything anything not even at school. But if I were to brainstorm I would use a a3 size paper filled with ideas in bubbles lists
and doodles.
My brainstorming method is soaking in my environment and imagining the possible fictional stories I could tell in it, this helps if you're not yet experienced with world building as the world comes pre-built and you can change it to your taste
Talk about niche favorite troupes...
I live in the world of fanfiction, as many who have read through my comments may know. So mine are probably different than others:
- Sick fics. All of them. Anything soft. Sick character not wanting help? Comforter over doing it? Comforter asserting themself? Sick character being overly needy or worried about being a burden? There's like so many forms of angst. It's such a stupid lil troupe, but it's one of my favorites.
- Overworking troupe. Where the character overworks so they have something to be proud of, or so that others can be proud of them. The character overworks because they want to be strong. They don't want people to perceive them as weak. Maybe there's actual physical danger if they take a break, so they push themself to the limit. Again, I've done this one too many times to count.
- Sleep deprivation... very similar to overworking. Also very fun if the character values sleep, but just physically cannot sleep (due to anxiety or something similar). Another one, is overworking to sleep deprivation, to which Comforter must come save the day for their sleepy friend.
- Sibling-like dynamics.
- Guy and girls being JUST FRIENDS.
- Angst where a character feels all alone and misunderstood. Bonus points if they actually are treated poorly and aren't just overreacting and petty.
- Banter, that sometimes is there just to dance around a topic. Deep, difficult, awkward conversations that are lightened up by banter because none of the characters in the conversation want to address the situation.
So many more I could mention if I thought about it enough. These are just the cliffnotes. Now to add them all to one single story... :)
I'm squealing at the idea of inserting all these into one story ngl. It's just so fluffy
How do you make a dynamic pairing of a relationship you love to write about and putting their personalities into a trope?
My main book series that I’m working on is going to be from separate points of view of other important figures in the story.
My planned books are
“The Mage”
“The Healer”
“The King”
And “The Thief”
And they’re from the respective POVs in each book.
“The Mage” is from the POV of Yuen Vigil, the Mage.
I like to lay in a hot tub, hopefully alone where it's quiet, close my eyes and pretend I'm in a theater. I imagine seeing the perfect movie I would love to see and the ideas start to come to me. It always seems to work.
OKAY, I'm just gonna spill it. YOU'RE SO BEAUTIFUL. I REALLY LOVE YOUR CONTENT, ESPECIALLY THE WAY YOU HELPED ME EVER SINCE THE START!! GOD BLESS YOU, ABBIE!!!
Oooo! I feel this topic. I've started books that I eventually decided I didn't want to write. I don't mind scrapping it all and going back to the drawing board to brainstorm the ideas that I DO want to write. My latest book came out of this process. Too good. Thank you, Abbie!
I was wondering, how do I landscape my day by writing down everything I do and the times I do them in to monitor my growth?
This was so awesome! I resonated with all of it!
A way I brainstorm is to listen to music and movies in my favorite genre's or trying a new song or tv show/movie
...then insparation just falls to me💕
you always amaze me! the way you always link psychology to writing is immensely mesmerizing. You are a genius, Abbie. I consider you, my official Writing coach, you saved my writing life when I just entered this fantastic world. always Rock on!!!
Abbie, you are the best!!! Thanks so much for this video! It helped me amazingly and I couldn't stop the ideas from flowing in my head after watching your video, thanks again!!!
ABBIE! You don't know how much this has helped me oh my god. Like- Literally just had breakthroughs with two of my stories which had left me in a rut for so many years now. They're the ones most precious to me because I started them when I was way younger. They've evolved a lot over the years, and most of that evolution is thanks to all of your great writing advices. I have followed you for a quite long while now, but this video in particular worked wonders for me. Reminds me of that documentary we watched in our art class about the importance of bringing out our inner child in the pursuit of something creative. I think everything's coming together now 😭 Thank you so much! All the love 💛
Practice change: my favourite way is simply to change up my walking route to my favourite café, or to go shopping or to visit a friend on a regular basis. I can deliberately zig zag up and down the Supermarket aisles as I shop - never tracing the same route each visit. Sometimes, as I set out, a random house or resident cat or sunny street pops up in my thoughts so I detour to go past them on my way - that very often results in unexpected but delightful and fruitful meetings with people.
When I brain storm I go to the park with at least one notebook and sit on the swings. I close my eyes and just act like I'm in my book watching diffrent things happen. Every time without fail for me I get this new and crazy Idea! ❤
I was wondering, how would you make a list of your favourite tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up till the wee hours of the morning reading, can you please explain how to do this?
What I find hilarious is that I've done most of these prompts on my own before. ^^ One of my recent problem stories was resolved by changing it from third to first person. The story just flowed after that. :) My 20+ year struggle of trying to make two hot tempered, independent and stubborn characters fall in love was resolved last year by tweaking the MC's perspective just a little. She made an allowance to accept help, therefore making an ally and... need I say more? ;)
I was wondering, how do you make a list of your favourite tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up till the wee hours of the morning reading, can you please explain how to do this please?
Dude, I had literally given up on my most recent story ages ago and this video brought my motivation back out of nowhere and made me realize just how many more things are on the table than I had ever realized. Tysm for this!!! Also, the part about almost all of people losing their creative genius by the time they were thirty literally had me in tears 😭
Thank you for making writing fun. ❤
I’ve always wanted to write a book, but would freeze up once I got to the laptop. Your videos have truly helped. Your course on Scrivener was amazing too.
This video was perfect for me. I'm writing three different stories right now. One of them, I've been writing for five years and I love it beyond belief and the other two are kind of in the background and I don't care about them as much. When I saw this video, I realized that I had done ALL of these things for the story that I've been writing for five years. (I started writing that story when I was only eight years old!) And so I realized that all I have to do is do that again for my two other stories to make them exciting and fun!
Thank you Abbie! You are a life saver! 😄
I am writing a new book but the most challenging thing is these characters have a rare condition. I've researched it and there is not too much information to find on the internet about this condition. There isn't too much information on how to treat this condition. Why do you think I should do to continue writing about this condition? I know a person who has this condition that's what gave me the idea to write this book.
That's a good motivating encouragements to tell yourself to write!:)
And you can also think about these rare conditions that doesn't have any treatments, but treat the characters as human. Imagine the time when some people who suffered in depression had a few supportive family members and friends/lover when the whole world turned against them after knowing what illness they were suffering from. Neglected from society and scrutinized, saying they are problematic. How did the family who constantly deal with people with rare conditions, treat them? Obviously some days were frustrating and felt guilty of burdening others or behaving poor to that person who is suffering mentally or physically. It's the growth of the relationship and understanding that would make the relationship between these two people worthy and beautiful. I think you can gain some more information about the relationship between Van Gogh with his older brother and sister-in-law.
What is this rare condition?
You possibly have _written yourself into a corner_ ( 😉) if it's so extremely rare that you cannot find information on it. On the flip side, you could emphasize the 'mystery of the unknown.' Is the cough/vomiting/fever/etc. related to the condition or just a cough/food poisoning/24-bug/etc.? I'm presuming you're using instances from this person's own life as well, but you could find stories of other people who had rare conditions (mental or physical) and look at all the misdiagnoses that came up on the journey. (Simple example, but I watched a story about a woman who had like a 40-80 pound tumor growing in her stomach and her doctors initially thought she was simply obese and needed to eat less.)
Really liked the video. My last novel incorporated a few of your suggestions as I got stuck along the way. I'm a pantser and when I get stuck, I usually step away for a while until I can come at the story from a different angle. Along the way, I changed the POV from third person to first person. I changed the genre from romance to dystopian (but kept the happy ending). i incorporated story elements from a previous novel that crashed and burned. Eventually, things fell into place.
one of my favourite things to do is use songs to create scenarios! then i can make playlists, arrange them into timelines, establish a vibe.. taylor swift is like the sole inspiration for the book i’m writing right now🤭
I like creating visual novels. And it is such a hard thing to come up with story ideas. Not only because you need a story itself. But because everything has to be thought about extra so that everything is connected and so that canon events and plots in a visual novel will be in context. It's even worse when you're doing prequels or sequels.
And it's especially annoying when you have to change up a whole bunch of already existing text because one change you plan for the whole plot just needs so much changes from the earlier stuff... So I'm glad this helps a little!
The retelling part helped me a week ago for coming up with the story idea that I finally, truly loved. All this time, I've always struggled with being original so I wouldn't feel like a thief :,) but after rewatching one piece's skypiea arc, it shot me that I want to tell my own version of the arc itself for my middle grade novel. so to some writers out there who are still facing the same problem, u can still use the same idea that millions have already thought of but the way u execute the idea, how u tell the story is what matters.
This video is such a good resource. When I'm bored or stuck, I do a "what if" stream of consciousness writing session. This will help organize and add to those questions.
I usually write fantasy. I think stories become boring when things aren't multi-faceted and three-dimensional, so I'll often add attributes and past experiences to characters, things that tie into the story. Another thing I like to do is worldbuilding groups of people - ie the government, a group of bandits, the working class villagers, etc and ask myself what are their collective goals, and how can that be tied into the plot? That way you have a more fleshed out world with more organic friction and obstacles that add texture to your story and make it more interesting.
I was wondering, what does landscaping my day mean?
Just in time, Abbie!! It's really interesting that our trope lists actually kinda match.... :)
I was wondering how would you make a list of your favourite tropes or story elements that make you laugh, swoon, annotate and stay up till the wee hours of the morning reading, could you please explain how to do this?
Here's something I usually do.
If I feel burnt out, I do something else. I occasionally go on an "idea hunt" or "coolness hunt" on what I like. For example:
-A hunt on myself.
I am in love with custom made stuff. I have my own concept of style as a personal language you can proudly show off even if other people don't care, feeling you do have a space and are unique. Boom. It became the foundation for the power system, one obtains a power under certain conditions and it changes their appearance/clothing/etc. according to one's favorite stuff in a way that makes their uniqueness shine and be practical with their own weapons.
-A hunt on a single idea, regardless if it's gonna end up with filler stuff. One of my many character came to mind, but I couldn't come up with a nickname for her. So I remembered an artist I follow asked 2 characters to be named on Instagram and she loved my suggestion so it stuck on the character. So I did the same. I asked her for some name ideas, and since I didn't think the name was so fitting for the way I name my characters, I gathered other two female characters, and since I want to get more comfortable with writing and developing female characters, I decided to challenge myself creating this trio called "the Urban Purples". Now I love them so much I want to commission a drawing of the group and hang it in my room. From that, a side idea stemmed as to make a rival crew.
-a hunt on my favorite sport. Whenever I hear a cool-sounding nickname/technique/location or whatever, I take notes. I try to train my visual memory by triggering it, I memorize specific details to remember about entire spacial sections. I sometimes am conscious I'm gathering stimuli, sometimes I just happen to watch a video for fun and I automatically do it.
Also I shifted my entire project. It began as a group of scientists hunting for monsters to kill them, so they can avoid them from threatening the city; to a completely different environment of a battle between two human factions. And here comes another idea.
Pick up discarded ideas. Or original points, like the scientists one. I am working on a way to make the beginning of this project with time-traveling agents working for a better development by learning the active life in the past, they will also have to kill monsters and other shenanigans might happen. This was also an experiment for a new way to make stories I'm using, which is starting small and viable. Less characters, more focus on development. It's also easier to plan things out: I'm making various options on how the story can develop. Who knows, there might be a tragic ending.
I hope this wall of text helps someone. Thanks!
All of the tropes you wrote down remind me of my favourite story called after school lessons for unripe apples. It’s an unfinished webtoon still receiving updates but it’s amazing and I think everyone should read it!
Thank you, Abbie! This video is a gem. I am stuck, with zero inspiration. I trust these ideas will help me a lot!
Abbie, can you make a video (Or if you already did just link it) about writing madness ? In my novel, my main character starts as a kind and cute child and becomes crazy through the story, but I'm no sure how to write this evolution. My idea is (since he is really kind and thinks so is the world) to make him suffer for his emotional decisions and make him too logical, and in the end even the logic betrays so he just goes crazy (And some perfectionism, suppressed love, revenge, social awkwardness and betrayal over here and there). 1 word, 4 letters : HELP
Thank you so much for this vlog, Abbie! Your advice has helped me decide how to move forward with my second novel. You rock!!!
Oooh! This is what I’ve been needing! Gonna sit down with this video when I have my lunch break!
I FRICKIN LOVE THIS!!!
I have been having writer’s block for the past like hour. I have a story idea now! I have no idea whether I will finish this story, but if I do, I will try to come back and tell you.
When I need inspiration, I always flip back through my favorite books and find the chapters that make my heat stutter.
I was taught that the POV should be from the one that has the most to win or most to lose in a scene, which has helped me.
I think the POV of a given part of the story should be from someone who is experienced/has experienced the part of the story that we are dealing with. The most experienced in that part is the obvious choice, you can go with someone with slightly less idea about that part, but rarely can you go with someone who is not part of that part or has much less experience with it. Also, if in doubt, go with the Universal POV. I go with the Universal POV overall and then allot specific parts to some characters when we need to dig deep into their part of the story.
Hi, I appreciate a lot of your videos, and I agree with the ideas that you have expanded on like the importance of inner conflict, the reader/viewer experiencing the flashback/world-building with the MC, how there should be a proper build-up to emotional scenes, or how both characters' lives in a slow-burn romance should be explored individually before and after they get together. However, there are certain things that I don't agree with, and I don't agree with the insertion of tropes for the sake of it. If a trope comes in as part of the story naturally, well and good, but you can't insert a trope for the sake of it. Also, I focus on the theme the most - so I get ideas based on various themes, so combining ideas doesn't work, because they are all of different themes. The theme is the king for me, then come characters and plot. Tropes come last. If you are true to the theme, character, and plot building becomes easy. You don't even need to focus on tropes. Also, genre depends on how you want to express your theme. So, I would say, the theme defines the genre in a way.
Also, I don't believe in retelling. I would like to tell stories of the themes that I believe are worth exploring and hope the audience identifies with them. And I want to explore and bring to the audience those themes in my way, with my characters and my understanding of the theme. But, in an already-established story, the original author would've had a theme in mind, and since the story has reached people, the job of the author is done and the theme has been fulfilled by the story. What is the purpose of a retelling then? If we change aspects of the original story, then we're changing its theme, so it's no longer a retelling. And, then the new theme has to appeal to me and then once I buy into it, I have to make the audience identify with it. There's more work in it than the satisfaction it brings to me in my humble opinion. Of course, if one is just writing for monetary expectations they might try this, but I believe many of us write because we love to, and in that case, is a retelling that rewarding? I'd rather go with an original theme that I personally believe the audience should get a taste of it and then work my way towards it.
Abbie thank you for what you do for us, your videos have definitely helped me get better at my writing. You're awesome!!!
You’ve done it again, my genius friend Abbie. Was feeling lackluster about my novel, then finished watching this segment, and I’ve been able to do something weird and awesome with my current story. I’m incorporating some of my other book ‘romance’ into my current book! So good, different almost divergent, I’m a more average thinker, but I like working hard and loveeee writing!!! Thanks so much, you got it going on beautiful lady.
Abbie I have to admit you are good the ideas are flowing through me!
Thank you for your videos! They are always so uplifting and helpful! I was feeling very stuck creatively, and your video was perfect for helping me get ideas going. I think I was caught up in these imaginary expectations of what I thought my novel should be, but I want to write what I like to read and what will keep me engaged and interested. Thank you so much for helping me figure out what that is!
Thank you so much for this! The reason I started writing was to make the stories I would have read as a kid, so this helped me remember that. You're amazing, Abbie! :)
Finally, something new and promising.
I have two stories with great ideas, most of the conditions are met,, but they feel boring to finish writing now, especially that they have been on hold for months.
Thanks. This has been most educative.
It’s kinda funny how many of these things I’m already doing with my WIP. But I’m definitely going to try asking my kids for ideas the next time I’m stuck - they’re 4 and 6 so right in that creative genius stage!
Your tips on how to come up with new and unique story ideas helped me a lot, thank you very much Abbie!
Omg, thank you SO MUCH! How do you do that? I feel like i were struck by a truck of motivation lol I have this story of mine since like 8 years old and of course I already changed a lot of it, but still I'm kinda scared to make huge changes like who's the main character and things like that (and i was starting to give up on it), but watching this video i simply stoped in my couch like "Wait. Wait, that's actually a REALLY GOOD idea!" Now I gotta brainstorm it all! TYSM again
So, so, so helpful - thank you Abbie ❤❤
Oh my God! It's a pleasure to watch one new video of yours!
This was great, thank you so much for helping to rewire my brain. Sadly, I've been doing so much convergent thinking and getting so frustrated that ideas always have problems and don't work. I'm going to try to do more divergent thinking. I wasn't even aware of these concepts, so thank you 😊
There's this new story I'm coming up with, and I love watching your videos and your ideas there so much help!❤ thank you Abbie❤🙏.
These are fantastic brainstorming questions, the tropes one really had my brain flooding with trope after trope, writing is gonna be so fun!!!
Thank you a lot for helping me get my creativity flowing once again!
This occurs often, I get unmotivated after writing the first chapter or so. Thank you Abbie, I'll try it out!
So far the only trope I can think of is I love the cheery, fun-loving male character who never seems to show any emotion besides happy/chill, but other emotions are subtly hinted at until something breaks them. Or even the other way around, the angry, grumpy character that only shows the emotion anger, and then later they break down in sadness and afterwards we see them happy. I LOVE characters like that! They're always my favorite, and a lot of the time I don't predict thay're going to have a dark moment or a dark past and it shocks me, and that makes me love them even more!
Sans, Imp, Hunter TOH, Amethyst( she's a girl but I meant it's generally male characters but females sometimes pop up ^^ ) Branch, Uncle Iroh( not my favorite but I always anticipate his breaking point when I re-watch )
Just writing this I've realized on top of that, I love the oddball characters in general, and moments when sudden normalcy shines through they're oddness: Ice Bear, Sokka, Tigger etc
My best way to get idea for anything is to listen to songs.
I LOVE songs. I have over 800 of them saved, so whenever I put my playlist on shuffle, I listen to these very random songs, and an idea strikes me.
Oh, and I also realized that I like to write someone (usually a love interest or mc) dying or trying to commit.. Ehhh.. that could work, I mean.. One of my characters haves the fate of dying in his lover's arms.. He also may or may not be accidentally killed by his lover..