Paid Review: Solid Potential, Bad Start!

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[@aka_zenko]

Reference, reference, reference. Using references for your drawings will help tremendously . The entire internet is open to you, or use your phone to take reference photos.
Also, show don't tell - this is a visual medium.
Don't give up, keep up the hard work Ope.

[@redzeroo6068]

I don't usually comment on stuff but I want to say to the author/artist. I like the premise of the story, very interesting and different from what I've been seeing. The idea of ending the world because of cycles having a problem with a touch of christianity in there is pretty unique to me, I love it. I say focus on a little more time on your art to carry the story a bit more. When i say that I don't necessarily mean change your style but more like making it cohesive or flow correctly. Watch movies and look at all the shots and angles used. Look at manga and look at the different scenes and pick out what's your favorite and ask why it's your favorite panel. Keep it up. I'll keep my eye out for you Opeokuis!

[@siddharthpatil2683]

This guy's art style is good in that their backgrounds are hand drawn, and use basic anime style cell shading. The only problem is anatomy, once the artist improves that they will be at a proficient level.

[@ramadan7900]

the artist needs a lot of improvement... right now, he/she may think this is a great work, but as he/she keeps on drawing, making stories, coloring, etc, he/she will come up with better work. hopefully the artist takes the criticism to power up and come back with an even better story.

[@bxbyxbrxd3105]

paying 25usd to get cooked XD

[@WoahMan1917]

I’d swear people, at least practice your art skills and style for at least about a couple of years before posting your work online or you will get roasted instead. 😒

[@somerandomfatguy.3384]

People always like to hide from criticism by pointing "it's just my art style" . Meanwhile Japanese did moe characters and no one can criticise it's style because even if the characters have inflated proportion but still maintain structure language and maintain harmoney.

[@somerandomfatguy.3384]

@@JAF200-ut6gi so? I already there is difference between style and lack of skill didn't i ? Also the op posted online and ask for criticism so why are you butthurt about it.

[@somerandomfatguy.3384]

@@JAF200-ut6gi yeah stop assuming. I don't specifically said the op is trying to hide behind the excuse of "art style". I only mentioned that a lot of people are like this in internet art community.

[@viyusavery248]

Glad for these cooler intros made me rewatch this scene and realise how amazing that movie was

[@dark_nightwing_xl2797]

Facts

[@WoahMan1917]

35:54 funny that you mentioned that because I’ve heard Brandon Chen is planning on making one lmao

[@Da4th4000]

This person may either need to try to improve his art or find an artist that's willing to draw for him while he focuses on the writing. Looking at the art for this web comic. It kinda reminds me of the creator of One Punch Man "One". He has great writing skills, but his drawing skills were really lacking though.

[@somerandomfatguy.3384]

Really ? OPM has great writting ? Lol.

[@aotissax2878]

@@somerandomfatguy.3384 have you watched Mob psycho? One's story telling is exceptional

[@somerandomfatguy.3384]

@@aotissax2878 we are talking about OPM my guy, focus.

[@somerandomfatguy.3384]

@@JAF200-ut6gi I watched the the anime so yeah there wasn't anything spectacular in story department.

[@ImmoLtg]

I don’t like webtoons there’s a lot of weirdo like it’s basically written by 14 old girls