(2021 May) How to get an A for your TOK Essay in 4 hours?

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  • Опубликовано: 3 янв 2025

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  • @rosiya189
    @rosiya189 4 года назад +247

    I love how we are all collectively (and eternally) confused over wth TOK is and what we are supposed to be doing 😂

    • @benivory3761
      @benivory3761 3 года назад +6

      for real like i literally talked to my classmates and we all agreed we did and learned nothing except that i think therfore i am stuff we did at the beginning of y11

  • @fyasserr
    @fyasserr 4 года назад +177

    2:53 Rubric
    5:18 Structure of the essay
    8:34 Introduction
    12:05 AOK 1
    12:58 Knowledge claim 1
    15:18 Example
    18:29 Counterclaim 1
    19:42 Example
    21:46 Mini conclusion
    22:44 AOK 2
    23:25 Knowledge claim 2
    25:06 Example
    27:44 Counterclaim 2
    30:21 Example
    32:27 Mini conclusion
    33:05 Conclusion

    • @daniellee.8344
      @daniellee.8344 4 года назад +2

      thank you for this!!

    • @Ghost-hy1tl
      @Ghost-hy1tl 3 года назад +6

      You sir just did what my stupid TOK teacher couldn’t...... thank you!!!!!

    • @fyasserr
      @fyasserr 3 года назад

      @@Ghost-hy1tl HAHAHAHA my pleasure

    • @fyasserr
      @fyasserr 3 года назад

      @@daniellee.8344 no need

    • @claudiacha2536
      @claudiacha2536 3 года назад

      i love and appreciate you

  • @cankucuk1850
    @cankucuk1850 4 года назад +197

    Guys appreciate what he is doing, and stop complaining. He is putting his effort and time for all of you, so you can evantually be satisfied with your results.

    • @kadabrar
      @kadabrar 4 года назад +26

      exactly. chinese jesus deserves our utmost respect

    • @Hustler628
      @Hustler628 4 года назад +6

      plus, he didnt even monetize it

    • @Manima108
      @Manima108 4 года назад +16

      whos complaining?

    • @gyuro7988
      @gyuro7988 Год назад +1

      uh who complained (no one in the comments)??

  • @ariisair
    @ariisair 3 года назад +47

    as someone with no clue where to start with any TOK essay, I'd like to say thank you for making such a detailed, concise video. So helpful.

  • @jackmoffatt8647
    @jackmoffatt8647 3 года назад +93

    My Tok essay is due in 4 and a half hours- time to start.

    • @randomguy8115
      @randomguy8115 3 года назад +2

      Yo did u do it in tine?

    • @jackmoffatt8647
      @jackmoffatt8647 3 года назад +16

      @@randomguy8115 somehow yes. It actually seemed pretty decent too

    • @NA-lu5wr
      @NA-lu5wr 3 года назад

      Wow 😀😀😀😀

    • @micahaas
      @micahaas 2 года назад

      @@jackmoffatt8647 how much did you get?

    • @micahaas
      @micahaas 2 года назад +2

      mine is due in 3 hours 😍

  • @maksxperia02
    @maksxperia02 4 года назад +11

    man... i can not paraphrase how much i appreciate this guy!

  • @Parmie_03
    @Parmie_03 4 года назад +117

    i'm so close to paying someone to write it for me

    • @kim-qr6ek
      @kim-qr6ek 3 года назад +4

      BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA MOOD

    • @krishkumar4081
      @krishkumar4081 3 года назад +25

      The essays are easy if you follow this dude's method. I would rather write three of these instead of the EE :(

    • @Parmie_03
      @Parmie_03 3 года назад +2

      @@krishkumar4081 fr

    • @veronicaadellan4037
      @veronicaadellan4037 3 года назад +6

      Same, i have to send my final work in like 1 week so im dying

    • @noellebuttgereit228
      @noellebuttgereit228 3 года назад +6

      @@veronicaadellan4037 I have to submit mine in 12 hours and I'm not even half way done. Lmao I'm dying 😂

  • @shafimishtiaq3587
    @shafimishtiaq3587 4 года назад +18

    Ryan thank you so much for this video!!! it has given me the outline and what to look for in your essay!! ill read the guide once more and start my essay soon!! i feel like this title was hard but since i understood this i can easily do it on other titles! thnx lov u

  • @aleenaasohail418
    @aleenaasohail418 3 года назад +4

    This dude single handedly carrying my EE, TOK and Econ grade

  • @s.gmoney6983
    @s.gmoney6983 4 года назад +29

    Thank you for your videos! My essay is due this friday, wish me luck!

    • @AgentCharles522002
      @AgentCharles522002 4 года назад +3

      why so early

    • @rigdby
      @rigdby 3 года назад +2

      @@AgentCharles522002 probably to make sure they have it done

    • @claudiacha2536
      @claudiacha2536 3 года назад

      good luck girly !! hope all is well

    • @rigdby
      @rigdby 3 года назад

      @@claudiacha2536 thank you!!!

  • @soooslaaal8204
    @soooslaaal8204 3 года назад +4

    oh yes, it's about 24 hours before my deadline and I'm watching this

  • @pineapple9732
    @pineapple9732 4 года назад +12

    Guys do not plagiarise this!!! my friend just got caught in plagerizing this whole video in his document..... my friend's turnitin score went upto 88% and now his parents were called upon the school and his diploma is going away now!!!..... I just wanted to aware you guys that who ever plagiarises this, Will 100% GET CAUGHT

  • @user-hf6bi3ml3i
    @user-hf6bi3ml3i 4 года назад +7

    can you do this with the rest of the titles please as its very helpful

  • @Neovrtuos
    @Neovrtuos 4 года назад +4

    Amazing video, thank you so much for the help!

  • @shereenbatra3317
    @shereenbatra3317 4 года назад +21

    Hi could you also please do the other tok titles too? Please do QUESTION 3 FIRSTTT

  • @milagroschirinos4492
    @milagroschirinos4492 4 года назад +46

    Could you create videos about TOK titles?

  • @tylerspovv
    @tylerspovv 3 года назад +6

    my essay is due tonight at 11:59 lets see if i can do this😌

    • @fluffyunicorn9688
      @fluffyunicorn9688 3 года назад +1

      did u finish yours? mine is due today at 11:59 as well lol

    • @tylerspovv
      @tylerspovv 3 года назад

      @@fluffyunicorn9688 yea i did, waiting for my teacher to give feedback.

  • @cmoh437
    @cmoh437 2 года назад +2

    Is there a video that is for the current curriculum in TOK? Alas, this is no longer valid.

  • @legeo3504
    @legeo3504 4 года назад +9

    i oficially have a new god, thank you

  • @lsk4091
    @lsk4091 3 года назад +1

    Its basically writting tok with 4hours and 33mins in lncluding your video length and youtube ads

  • @janetlekoba6890
    @janetlekoba6890 4 года назад +10

    Man I wish I saw this earlier

  • @Maria-rw7ek
    @Maria-rw7ek 4 года назад +12

    Hello this video is very helpfull but will you do the other questions?

  • @MingKeatSng
    @MingKeatSng 4 года назад +5

    Thank you so much. This video has been really helpful. Appreciate your effort. Could I also ask if you do have something Biology-related? Thank you so much.

  • @jennyzhang2810
    @jennyzhang2810 4 года назад +3

    u r a legend

  • @smartrabbitvideos9384
    @smartrabbitvideos9384 2 года назад

    Your videos have helped me a lot!! Do you have a video for November 2022?

  • @pahellalani6651
    @pahellalani6651 4 года назад +2

    can you create a video for unpacking the essay titles and also make a video of a exemplar essay?

  • @gtucker5424
    @gtucker5424 4 года назад

    Thanks. This does provide a good roadmap.

  • @vikisentainment8269
    @vikisentainment8269 4 года назад +2

    This is very helpful but one of my friends copied 50 percent of this video and his presentation was banned. so just take the idea, the video helps a lot and gives a better outline.

    • @kim-qr6ek
      @kim-qr6ek 3 года назад +1

      @@jaibachani hows life J. Are you safe now?

  • @namanagrawal6110
    @namanagrawal6110 4 года назад +6

    Hey! Where does your research team gets these real-life examples from.

    • @amingaybulloev5853
      @amingaybulloev5853 3 года назад

      Can u pls help me to come with a RLS for the same topic? :)

    • @eem.vtim21
      @eem.vtim21 3 года назад

      They probably just do some research on things being connected to the AOK.

  • @Qjdb23l_kjv
    @Qjdb23l_kjv 3 года назад

    School teachers are always same lol 😸😸 not just your school teacher. 고마워요~

  • @QM027
    @QM027 3 года назад +1

    Is there a “complete essay” for the example?

  • @analaura-bz8fy
    @analaura-bz8fy 3 года назад

    what an amazing job

  • @XanaChihiro
    @XanaChihiro 4 года назад +1

    The link to the math questionbank is not working. Gives a 404 error. Also the emails do not have the links to the free resources especially the chemistry questionbank one.

  • @rebaljerdi1122
    @rebaljerdi1122 4 года назад +5

    very helpful video thank you, but the link to the TOK sample essay link is not working where enter my email and everything and it says that it sends the essay but it doesn't, I tried this a few times too, and with different emails. Please help!

  • @EyehatePersona5
    @EyehatePersona5 4 года назад +4

    Do you have any tok presentation tips

  • @sunneyjim6186
    @sunneyjim6186 3 года назад

    PLEASE, TOK NOVEMBER TITLE 5!!! I NEED A GUIDEEEEEEEE ASAP

  • @aryanshah1938
    @aryanshah1938 2 года назад

    Please make one for may 22

  • @pratikshanikam1463
    @pratikshanikam1463 3 года назад

    Not received the mail from you for IAs,TOK essay and EE

  • @sophiacho5149
    @sophiacho5149 3 года назад +1

    does this count for M22 and M23 as welll?

  • @salahkhayyat8173
    @salahkhayyat8173 2 года назад

    Thank you sooo much !!!

  • @hugoquetglas6143
    @hugoquetglas6143 3 года назад

    do you have an example with this structure ?

  • @urmudder8867
    @urmudder8867 3 года назад

    can you do november 2021 please?

  • @megansim8727
    @megansim8727 3 года назад +1

    will be trying this for Nov 2021 its due in 2 days wish me luck 😭

  • @klaeparchment2938
    @klaeparchment2938 2 года назад

    I feel like the hardest part is finding examples to support your points. Do you have any tips?

    • @tk006
      @tk006 Год назад

      Hi firstly pick a question you feel you have a good idea on how you should approach. Then ask yourself questions under the main question like why is this necessary? Then, find an example where it was necessary. Basically, break down the main question with smaller questions, and then find examples that answer these "mini-questions". Hope that helps.

  • @zurella9962
    @zurella9962 3 года назад

    Sorry can someone explain what does essay prompt means? English is not my first language ;-; Btw I would love to have this youtube professor help me with the essay he explains everything so well!

  • @alyssatanchai
    @alyssatanchai 2 года назад

    Should you ever talk about your own personal real life experience in the TOK essay?

    • @tk006
      @tk006 Год назад

      You can in your introduction use it as a reason as to why you chose that question. Then, with your examples, if you personally have an instance where the thing in your example happened to you, you can bring it up, but try not to use just your personal experience as an example for your AOK

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 года назад

    Thank you very much

  • @tman160HTM
    @tman160HTM 4 года назад

    where can I get this ppt?

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 года назад

    Can I use religion as an AOK for this title? I am a bit confused about it because I think bias will be mixed with faith and certainty. Any thoughts??

  • @PETEKASHYAP
    @PETEKASHYAP 4 года назад

    any french ab initio or French b sample I A to score 7

  • @devansshshah4537
    @devansshshah4537 4 года назад

    can i get the tok essay file

  • @leviperez6440
    @leviperez6440 4 года назад +10

    Why are mostly all tok teachers bad😐😐

    • @tousifdewan659
      @tousifdewan659 4 года назад +6

      Because they don't even know by themselves what are they going to teach us? Instead, they pretend like they are the god of TOK. Just because of bad luck, they didn't get a chance to be an official IB TOK examiner.

    • @feikemanting5258
      @feikemanting5258 4 года назад +6

      cause who tf acc likes tok lol

    • @gregtheflyingwhale
      @gregtheflyingwhale 4 года назад +2

      because for us, TOK was taught by physics/biology/english teachers and there is no such TOK teacher specialization

  • @jakublazar206
    @jakublazar206 3 года назад +3

    Asian jesus saved my ass

    • @akarshanmishra2351
      @akarshanmishra2351 3 года назад +2

      fr my essay was due 3 weeks ago bruh and i'm starting now😄
      Edit : I’m done with this shit now, AFTER 2 WEEKS

  • @CCSuperC
    @CCSuperC 4 года назад +6

    7:44

  • @OLPlalogi
    @OLPlalogi 4 года назад +8

    It's due in 7 hours and it's 1:07 am😭

    • @skedos4498
      @skedos4498 3 года назад

      shiit mine's due at 31/01 and its 26/01 - thats still hella time but i still feel a bit of anxiety

    • @rigdby
      @rigdby 3 года назад

      how did it go dude

    • @kata7669
      @kata7669 3 года назад +1

      Lol. 2:51 am rough draft due at midnight (3 hours ago)

  • @franek9558
    @franek9558 3 года назад

    thanks

  • @AgentCharles522002
    @AgentCharles522002 4 года назад

    thanks sir

  • @lianghl2957
    @lianghl2957 4 года назад +2

    老师你愿意教我tok吗?(期待)

  • @gabrieljackson79
    @gabrieljackson79 4 года назад

    ty!!

  • @ronilkapopara1956
    @ronilkapopara1956 3 года назад +6

    I just find tok useless 😂

  • @iiiexillieplayz3256
    @iiiexillieplayz3256 4 года назад

    my teacher recommends we only use one WOK, what do you think?

    • @galexystarlight6285
      @galexystarlight6285 3 года назад

      I know I'm not the channel and this might be too late: but limiting your WOK will definitely depend on the prompt and I would disagree with your teachers' recommendation. Of course, if a title states "address this statement with reference to two WOK," then obviously you MUST use two WOK (and no more than two) or you will lose marks. As for when the title does not require them, applicable WOKs vary greatly from AOK to AOK. For example, the AOK of natural sciences may depend on Sense Perception or Language and little on Faith; so limiting your argument to say "one WOK" like Faith would greatly limit how you may discuss the natural sciences under one title. Though discussing faith within the natural sciences would be an excellent exploration of WOK, we have to make sure these discussions align with the title you chose.

  • @riaarora1346
    @riaarora1346 3 года назад

    I love you

  • @joshlee1305
    @joshlee1305 3 года назад

    due in 3 days :D

  • @suryas6279
    @suryas6279 3 года назад

    hi amaan

  • @rebaljerdi1122
    @rebaljerdi1122 4 года назад

    what kind of degenerate disliked this video, may he go to hell.

  • @rigdby
    @rigdby 3 года назад

    23:17

  • @anaulloa3282
    @anaulloa3282 2 года назад

    Me at 4:32 am

  • @rigdby
    @rigdby 3 года назад

    6:17 (don't mind me :-))

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 года назад +2

    My submission is tomorrow 😭😂😂😂😂😂 and I still didn't even finish a draft

  • @kyliec5418
    @kyliec5418 3 года назад +1

    Did anyone really use this method and got an A? Plsss replyyyyyyy would do great help🥲

    • @Peter-tr7gg
      @Peter-tr7gg 3 года назад +1

      I am interested as well

  • @riaarora1346
    @riaarora1346 3 года назад

    I love you

  • @riaarora1346
    @riaarora1346 3 года назад +2

    I love you