WRITE BETTER RAP LYRICS

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  • Опубликовано: 26 окт 2024

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  • @magicmarker6933
    @magicmarker6933 4 года назад +282

    You know you have founded the right rap coach, when you see biggie on the shirt and 2pac in the background.

  • @INBGMBeats
    @INBGMBeats 2 года назад +22

    for those who aspire to be an artist, Im wishing you luck every step of the way. keep grinding and eventually you'll be so good nobody can ignore you any longer. I'll see ya'll at the top💜

  • @Gotothelui
    @Gotothelui 2 года назад +7

    I learned more in the span of 3 minutes and sixteen seconds than I have learned in the span of months of watching videos
    "Rap has been around for you, and there's not a lot you can say that hasn't been already. So you need to say it in a new, doper, and fresher way"
    And
    "Make an image, paint an image"
    Which in my head turned into
    "Paint a Picture differently"
    I like to draw as well, so this definitely simplified it for me considering my knowledge on Physical Art. I came out of this learning more than I ever have before

  • @drillgirl718
    @drillgirl718 4 года назад +85

    damn man.. thats exactly what i think as far as lyricism.. too many people claim they lyrical but they just saying big words and not much with it.. too abstract... no concrete

    • @Danielfelipe6
      @Danielfelipe6 4 года назад +3

      Exactly

    • @noir269
      @noir269 3 года назад +1

      Lyricism is supposed to be somewhat abstract. You're literally painting an image in your head that's meant to be a metaphor.

    • @drillgirl718
      @drillgirl718 3 года назад +2

      @@noir269 yeah i like lyricism to an extent, but i like storytelling rappers which is different than lyrical rappers, most lyrical rappers saying a bunch of nothing, tupac was a storyteller, nas was a lyrical rapper, both goats, but one is a better poet and screenwriter and visualizer

    • @noir269
      @noir269 3 года назад

      @@drillgirl718 Storytelling is lyricism tho. There's no right or wrong way of being a lyricist

    • @drillgirl718
      @drillgirl718 3 года назад

      @@noir269 yeah there isnt no right or wrong way, its up to the 'poet' how they SAY it, so thats why 'mumble' rap is big right now cause they are saying the same thing but more catchy and using the right words that please the ear, they focus on melodic, what im saying is that all lyrical rap is not good, but storytelling is better than just simply just being lyrical, the soul expression has to be heard, thats why i prefer pac over nas, cause nas had a more boring tone, and yeah very lyrical but with pac he used the right words lyrically and put his soul to give it a stronger meaning, music is about the feel, anybody can be lyrical, lol my bad for the long paragraph homie

  • @2ndperspective418
    @2ndperspective418 4 года назад +32

    YOU THE GOAT FOR THIS CHANNEL!!!

  • @LundosArtStudio
    @LundosArtStudio 4 года назад +54

    Whats crazy is i can freestyle rap better than my written somehow I come up with doper lines off the top rather than writing because I think too hard about it I need advice on how to beat the writers block and really write lyrics to my full potential all I listen to is conscience rap and I have dope lyrics its just sometimes its hard to put it to paper. I've been making an album it just seems like I keep getting to a halting point with my lyrics after the first verse. I got the flow and I got the message I just need to find a better way to put my message on the paper to let the audience see the picture im painting. This video helped inspire me to finish a few of my songs today good shit bro! I appreciate it i still need to push past this block that I hit every once in awhile.

    • @Cross_Culture_Media
      @Cross_Culture_Media 3 года назад +22

      If your like freestyling do it. Record it. Write your song. Refer to the freestyle and pick out a line. That'll spark a whole new strain of creativity. Rinse and repeat as needed

    • @marsh5944
      @marsh5944 3 года назад +4

      omg I'm going through literally the same thing

    • @__-xf4rf
      @__-xf4rf 3 года назад +8

      I’m the opposite. I can’t freestyle but when I write I feel I make good tracks

    • @joshmakkin7167
      @joshmakkin7167 2 года назад

      That’s crazy yo because I’m the opposite I feel I can write better than I can freestyle

    • @leftcross_mma12
      @leftcross_mma12 6 месяцев назад

      Your problem is that you listen to 1 type of rap only, you need to expand on what you listen, could give you more creativity.

  • @JB-mp9nb
    @JB-mp9nb 3 года назад +7

    I trust you , you literally gave the simplest tip to right hooks 🪝 go more in-depth each sentence and I wrote a raw hook from that tip💯

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  3 года назад +2

      That’s what I like to hear bro

  • @LonerBecause
    @LonerBecause 3 года назад +5

    Paint a picture in a listeners mind!
    Got it! Good Advice 🔥🔥🔥

  • @Looksordeath
    @Looksordeath 2 года назад +3

    Great video! Best rap coach out there. No gimmicks, just pure love for the art and wanting to help

  • @SofoniBeats
    @SofoniBeats 4 года назад +8

    The tips you said was good like me spitting a verse "My hood take beef out the Ravioli ..........serving gravy with dough and no biscuits. "

  • @n8thegreat445
    @n8thegreat445 2 года назад +8

    We’ve gotten to a point in hip hop that there have been so many metaphors and imagery in rap that it’s possible too have a full song out of lines that are clever but have already been said. Make sure to speak what feels right to YOU and not try to come up with metaphors that just sound cool. It hits harder when it comes from home.

    • @IyuaOG
      @IyuaOG Год назад

      🙏🏿

    • @Playboimatrix200
      @Playboimatrix200 Год назад

      Fr but I always be feeling like I gotta rap with the OGs like Pac Cool J Nas Big Mf Doom Jadakiss etc. Because all the old heads complain about rappers not using wordplay or allat

  • @derrickwayne4627
    @derrickwayne4627 4 года назад +2

    you are a mad genius, you are the first i've seen who painted a picture about painting a picture, my mind is completely blown, you have my sub, like and a new student, thanks man 👍

  • @yveswave
    @yveswave 2 года назад

    Beat for writing : ruclips.net/video/3vu4B1a0ilU/видео.html&ab_channel=ProdBySebastian

  • @kojik4271
    @kojik4271 3 года назад +2

    your saying wise shit that al these proper looking people don't even preach about. i can see your passion and i love it. thnx

  • @geethefreshprince8836
    @geethefreshprince8836 4 года назад +3

    I've been going through so many videos I finally got one that I needed. Thanks I wish I found this a year ago 💔

  • @fukoff9703
    @fukoff9703 3 года назад +6

    You spit the true bro
    Yo simplify it better than anyone else
    My respect coach
    🔥Keep grinding bro 🔥

  • @ayetae
    @ayetae 3 года назад +3

    Been binge watching all of your videos since I stumbled upon them an hour ago.

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  3 года назад

      Hope you got something!

    • @ayetae
      @ayetae 3 года назад

      @@THERAPCOACH got a lot and instantly applied it in the next song I recorded the other day

  • @AvveNestor
    @AvveNestor 3 года назад +4

    Yo this was a great vid, subscribed

  • @juanpastore3187
    @juanpastore3187 Год назад +2

    Gracias por el contenido hermano, bendiciones desde Buenos Aires Argentina

  • @longdistanceslumberparty499
    @longdistanceslumberparty499 3 года назад +6

    Gunplay killed it it was what you get with putting to cats on one and I agree on this song soul comes from gunplay. Much love appreciate your work

  • @boldjeetkunedmo3782
    @boldjeetkunedmo3782 3 года назад +4

    I appreciate this video. You helped me realize what I was looking for in a short and simple explanation

  • @shridhar5265
    @shridhar5265 4 года назад +3

    This channel doesnt deserve that dislike button..
    Dropping Gems.

  • @Dorii1005
    @Dorii1005 3 года назад +4

    Great advice. Just subcribed for all notifications bro. You definitely enlightened me thank you🙇🏽‍♂️

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  3 года назад +1

      You gotta watch em all like Pokémon

  • @aLr_boosh
    @aLr_boosh 4 года назад +3

    That was a great video! Painting the imagery with words! Boosh!

  • @adamsalchenberg779
    @adamsalchenberg779 4 года назад +8

    “A great rapper can paint a picture” -me thinking about Picasso by Hopsin

  • @xzavierburkhart9784
    @xzavierburkhart9784 Год назад

    Was a great refresher 🤙

  • @IISpiikeII
    @IISpiikeII 4 года назад +4

    Greatest coach ever 🤘 for real just what I needed and some Inspiration too write lyrics again, I've been kinda stuck but now I feel like I'm gonna be writing alot of verses 🤴🙏

  • @zerrepontaoeste
    @zerrepontaoeste 4 месяца назад

    Great content bro. A big shout out str8 from Brasil 🇧🇷

  • @Jah06100
    @Jah06100 2 месяца назад

    This was super helpful🤞🏾📈

  • @ryderwilson8605
    @ryderwilson8605 4 года назад +9

    This video is so fucking helpful. You got any tips on flow techniques? Its like all starting rappers including me sound boring and the same when it comes to flow also

  • @reecespeace9109
    @reecespeace9109 3 года назад +7

    2 minutes in, I knew I was in the right place 📌

  • @ifuckinghatemyself2498
    @ifuckinghatemyself2498 4 года назад +3

    this rly helped me understand lyrics thank u brother

  • @anybody4802
    @anybody4802 4 года назад +1

    thank you, the best rap coach out there, exactly what I needed

  • @ibrahimba1755
    @ibrahimba1755 3 года назад +4

    This video rlly helped

  • @cjthechosen777
    @cjthechosen777 5 лет назад +9

    Great video man I just sub to ur channel. I think u should make a video on how to make melodies hooks and chorus etc

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  5 лет назад +2

      CJ The Goat Official coming up next!

  • @AceArty23
    @AceArty23 3 года назад +2

    dope bro, great job

  • @therealnodeezeee5487
    @therealnodeezeee5487 3 года назад +4

    For someone who’s became depressed cause I’ve been doing this for four years and feel like no matter what I say is trash this the video I need

  • @1swaudae
    @1swaudae 2 года назад

    when i reach the top, let them know you taught me alot 🙏🏾

  • @scream99times62
    @scream99times62 3 года назад

    Honestly, here to get better at writing nonrap songs and I think these are super good tips for that too awesome vid man thanks

  • @EKhalilP
    @EKhalilP 2 года назад +2

    I’m just trying to figure how was this released 4 years ago and has Kendrick New Album pic for the thumbnail🤔

  • @NayeemA.28
    @NayeemA.28 4 года назад +10

    Man i rlly need more lyrical skills

  • @marioreyes8776
    @marioreyes8776 3 года назад +1

    THIS IS AMAZING! Such great explanations and examples - make some videos without cussing and I would love to use your videos as classroom examples of thorough explanations and thinking!

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  2 года назад +1

      I’m from the streets this is how I communicate. I think your kids would listen to me before you.

    • @marioreyes8776
      @marioreyes8776 2 года назад

      @@THERAPCOACH You are right! I was thinking of what's allowed in a school setting. Real talk is better, but educators always have fine lines to walk --- parents, principals, etc. I wasn't commenting on how you talk but instead was commenting on the restrictions educators face in trying to give students authentic lessons such as the one you provided in this video. It's all love man!

  • @SewYourOwn
    @SewYourOwn 3 года назад +7

    This video is so damn good. Thank you for enlightening me.

  • @LewisJackson
    @LewisJackson 4 года назад

    Felt this bro. About to go rewrite my verses!

  • @ifuckinghatemyself2498
    @ifuckinghatemyself2498 4 года назад

    subscribed the second i saw u! man u awesome

  • @Adam-ty7vo
    @Adam-ty7vo 4 года назад

    Keep the great work up!

  • @niccolonatali9672
    @niccolonatali9672 3 года назад +1

    on point

  • @apocalypsegaming9640
    @apocalypsegaming9640 4 года назад

    Keep up the good work bro

  • @thebossman1944
    @thebossman1944 3 года назад +3

    I got pipe dreams of clean granite floors
    I got enemies putting me in Mausoleum doors

  • @sibling8596
    @sibling8596 3 года назад +1

    I was the 19000th view and for some reason I’m proud of myself

  • @ryrez4478
    @ryrez4478 2 года назад

    I feel like benny the butcher is another exceptional example of makin the same old raps sound like golden bars. Conway the machine as well.

  • @music-wg2xf
    @music-wg2xf 2 года назад

    Facts.

  • @philmomslim526
    @philmomslim526 3 года назад

    great video

  • @michaelgladney9657
    @michaelgladney9657 3 года назад

    This helped

  • @lawrencemathews9129
    @lawrencemathews9129 3 года назад +1

    so teach could you tell me were to go to learn i hope you can help me out

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  2 года назад

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  • @jvalid2759
    @jvalid2759 3 года назад +5

    basically turn simplicity into complexity

  • @ericbennett1931
    @ericbennett1931 2 года назад

    I just had to watch 4 mins of it nd im 👍

  • @bobsmokey2604
    @bobsmokey2604 3 года назад

    Subbed

  • @sneakerstalkin
    @sneakerstalkin 4 года назад +1

    🔥🔥🔥

  • @sxdtune9086
    @sxdtune9086 4 года назад +5

    Your teeth are white as hell, fresh

  • @Toptehn
    @Toptehn 3 года назад +3

    god damn u have some bright teeth

  • @dimitris_souloupoglou
    @dimitris_souloupoglou 4 года назад +3

    Man im feeling that you know your shit really well im trynna write my own lyrics but i keep thinking the metaphor game is really difficult for me

    • @THERAPCOACH
      @THERAPCOACH  4 года назад +3

      Go watch the Uzi wordplay video

  • @clumsyj1611
    @clumsyj1611 4 года назад +1

    I feel damn shitty untalented after watching this
    Imma just hear more rap hoping to improve

  • @Nas-sg3yr
    @Nas-sg3yr 2 года назад

    Analyze old gucci mane

  • @santiagogarcia5724
    @santiagogarcia5724 3 года назад

    Underrated bruh hope u blow up 💯💢mad respect foh u for the background and the shirt doe💯 btw can u couch me on insta?? Plz bro I'm tryna be a rapper in the future

  • @hopeformemez6280
    @hopeformemez6280 3 года назад

    mmmhhh b1tch

  • @kyspyrox
    @kyspyrox 4 года назад +3

    0:00 LOL