Bahut hi jabardast. Javed sir told very true. What a poetry. And poet is from Pakistan Even god will not believe this. Javed sir told very right. Only good human being will do such kind of shayari. God bless you. Thanks
Reminds one of the famous song ( lyrics by Sahir Ludhianvi ) of the film “Pyaasa” ( Gurudutt’s ) …. Jinhen Naaz hai Hind par wo kahan hain ?!😢Women in India or Pakistan or any other third world nation can identify with this nazm . . God bless the young poet
Kuch likhney sey pehley mey ney apna qalam tor dia 🤔🤐 Bebas aurton ki sachhi tarjumani aap ney ki hai 👌👏 Agey ab meray paas kuch likhney ko nahi hai filhal ❤😢🙂🙂
Hayaat eay julm si waffa ki talash vee tumhi se tthee" meri apnin shohrat ki kharid daar , be waffa ki taalash ki aash tumhi se tthee" tere apni hashraton ki bekhudi men eakk aash hamhi se tthee"
Alfaaz ni mil rahy ksy apki or kin alfaaz main hosla afzaee krun Allah Pak ap k Zor e qalm main bepnah izafa farmaey, sada salamat rahyn Ameen Summa Ameen 🤲
Sach hi kaha h ki masiha bhi wahi janm leta h jaha zulm ho…… who can expect this from Pakistan. Hats off to this mentality. Ab bhi sadiyan lagengi waqt badle or aurat ko bhi insan smjha Jane me.
*immodests* We're the one Who shall ensounce That who has the right over their bodies We're the one Who shall choose With whom shall they wed With whom shall they bed Who shall sharpen his lips (enhance his lust) with their bodies Though love couldn't be established on someones else's will, Through out the history But, we shall choose That whom shall they keep in affection We are their masters, We have the authority to take them in the beds And embed our tooth in their souls When They will acquire motherhood We shall decide How many children will be forged by their bodies To fill the bellies of our off-springs Even if, they are to sit in a brothel, We shall determine To whom and to what extent they can lash themselves We have right to plunder all the sum From their habitues (though it's we) We have right to use their eyes, Lovely faces, fair feet, Beaming thighs, far-reaching hair And warm lips for selling cream, soap, white cloth and mangoes Run the shop and earn profits We are the one who shall decide Which verse of which scripture is to be read by them Who are they! To wear colour of their own choice To go to school, To lecture us and tell us, That we and they are creations of same God, Who are they to teach us the chapters of equality They are our slaves and disposable shoes of our feet How dare they to live in their own way! Our elder had left us by telling Those who disobey their rulers Who demand their hereditary Who deny their husbands' divinity Who ask challenging questions Who ask for the rewards of their labour Who argue with the masters Who want their own choice over their bodies They are immodests!
'Behaya' has broken silence that reverberates, pounding hearts, minds, and souls that vouchsafe disbelief and pander through walls for safe passage. Go louder for some haya, at least.
Sir, Kya likh diya aapne, Aaj apne mayeshre pe sharminda ho gaya, Munawwar Rana shaab ki ek line hai, Humari berukhi ki den hai bazar ki zeenat, Jo humme wafa hoti to ye kotha nahi hota.....
But it all happens now in some particular areas and cults otherwise in the western culture the fair sex enjoying their life full fledged So far I have seen
My advice is to do what your CREATOR has advised. On one extreme are those which are denying the rights of daughters and sisters and committing sin. On the other hand are others who are not following the wirasat laws of shariyat and committing sin perhaps not intentionally....but ignorance is not an excuse for educated people
Jawaid sahib koi akhri Paimana nahi hai, janab ke Jo woh Keh deye Yaa fir Tareef kar deye to buss ho giya aur Kisi ki Pasand Yaa na-pasand Yaa fir Kisi AUR ki sanad jarurat nahi hai, jawaid sahib kis mind-setup ke Urdu shayer hai yeh Ahle-URDU..E...Hind aur Ahle AdaB..E..URDU sab janti hai, aur thori bahut mujhe v pata hai.....???
Yeh poem tamacha hai Islam mein aurato ke halat par....bhai waah..waah waah waah waah waah... Main hamesha se muslim women rights ke baare mein aawaz uthata raha hu...ek poori jamat hai jo nahi chahti ki yeh mohtarmayein apne haqq ko jaane, yeh uucha uthe, nazre milaein... Yeh inko paida kar sakti hain par yeh khud ko chhupa kar rakhe aur yeh teen teen sauharein rakhein inhe haqq hai par woh kisi ke saamne bhi na jayein... Bhai waah waah waah mian waah.
Ap k compliment ka shukria. Ye Kisi ek mazhab ya ilaqay ka masla nahin orat har mazhab or ilaqay main exploit ho Rahi hai Kisi na Kisi shakal main. Shukria
@@shoaibkianiofficial Yeh ghazal nahi hai aaina hai , jismein sachchai is kadar nangi hai ki us se nazar milana bhi bahut mushkil hai. Yeh kisi ek samaj ki baat nahi na hi ek kaal ki baat hai . Balki Aaj ke tathakathit modern samay mein yeh aur bhi numaya hai
Bhai aapne galat matlab nikal liya is nazm ka. Baat ko pakadne aur baat ko samajhne main fark hota hai, aapne pakad liya hai samjha nahi. Khair creator ne bhi clarify kar Diya hai apna stance.
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Kya gehrai se nazm likhi hai..
Bahut khoob
Qabil e tarif ye hai ki ek Mard ne Aurat ki zindagi ka Dard bakhubi samjha hai...
Shukria bhai
Sooo true jawaid sahib yeh nazam likh kr shoib aap ne dil jeet lea allah aap ko bht kamyabi ata fermae ameen
❤️❤️
کیا کہنے شعیب کیانی صاحب ۔۔۔۔بہت خوب
Bohat shukria
Wah ❤ Dil Ko Chhu Gyi Ye Nazm
Agar Har Ladka Aise Hi sochne Lag Jaaye To Ye Dharti Jannat Ho Jayegi Aurton Ke Liye
Thank you so much Shweta I saw your channel.
you are creating quality content.
@@shoaibkianiofficial ThanK You So Much ❣️
This Means A Lot😇
@@Shwetapandeyvlog
Stay blessed and keep up the good work.
Ye shayari, ye himmat aur ye jazba. kya baat hai. Kamal. Love from India
Thank you manmohan ji stay blessed
साहब अंतरात्मा को झकझोर दिया आपने।सदियां गुज़र गईं।लेकिन लगता है जैसे वक्त वहीं का वहीं ठहरा हुआ है।
बिल्कुल
Bahut hi jabardast.
Javed sir told very true.
What a poetry.
And poet is from Pakistan
Even god will not believe this.
Javed sir told very right.
Only good human being will do such kind of shayari.
God bless you.
Thanks
Thank you so much
Ankhon mein ansoo aa gaye apki nazm sunkar....Dil se shukriya
Ap salamat rahen
U spoke my whole life story in form of this poem .
Thanks
Ufffff Jo apne jismo par haq jataye woh Be-haya hain… yaar kya likha hai bhai
یقیناً ایک سنجیدہ مزاج شخص ہی ایسی نظم کہہ سکتا ہے
بہت بہت مبارکباد جناب بہت بہت مبارکباد
Shukria
What a bold poet … such honest poetry . My salute to him from India 🫡
Shukria
Soooo true jawaid sahab yeh nazam likh ker shoaib aap ne hamara dil jeet lia khuda aapko bht izzat de
شکریہ
It is such a liberating and emancipating poetry from Pakistan. Great work.
Thank you so much
Mr javed akhtar is a truly wise and humble man
Yes
Zabardast kab ye baaten mardon ko samajh me aayegi Kam az Kam ek mard ne ise samjha mehsoos kiya thanks
Stay blessed 💐🙏
یار بہت بہت مبارک میری جان۔۔۔خوشی ہوئی
Bahut khoob bhai…..ਸ਼ੀਸ਼ਾ ਦਿਖਾਉਣ ਲਈ❤
Ap Khush rahen
بلاشبہ جاوید اختر صاحب نے سچ کہا ہے۔۔ بہترین نظم ہے
شکریہ ❤️
One of the my most favorite poetry 👌👌👌👌 salute sir shoaib kiani
Thanks faryal
Speechless speechless 😢😢💔💔,,,..
Thank you
Speechless......remembers me of Sahir ludhiyanavi
Thank you
Zberdast sir g mashaAllah Allah or taraki dy
Shukria
बहुत अच्छी ग़ज़ल। जावेद जी के अंदाज़ से मेल खाती ❤️🩹
शुक्रिया सलामत रहिए
بہت ارفع نظم ہے جناب۔ واہ
Bohat shukria 🎉
Reminds one of the famous song ( lyrics by Sahir Ludhianvi ) of the film “Pyaasa” ( Gurudutt’s ) …. Jinhen Naaz hai Hind par wo kahan hain ?!😢Women in India or Pakistan or any other third world nation can identify with this nazm . . God bless the young poet
Thank you
Yesssssss 👌🙏
ਵਾਹਿਗੁਰੂ ਮੇਹਰ ਕਰਨ 🙏
Bilkull, I thought the same, it reminded of Sahir Ludhianvi, very similar poetry on woman's feelings, khuda khair kare.
@@dawoodk103 ਜਿਓੰਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਖੁਸ਼ ਰਹੋ 🙏🙏
Kiyun duniya aap ke jaisa nahi sochti
Isi Liye nazm likh di hai ta k Dunia sochay❤
Ap Khush rahaen❤
Umda nazm ❤
Thank you
جاوید صاحب کی تعریف بہت بڑی بات ہے ۔ تاریخی الفاظ ہیں ۔ بے حد اچھا لگا 💝
Love you my friend
Made me cry and goosebumps
❤️❤️
Jeo kyani bhae jeo.... Waah ❤️❤️
Thank you
Behad umdaa shoaib sahab 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Thank you
Rula diya saheb
Jai ho apki 🙏
Thanks
Allah kare zore qalam aur zyada ,👏 bahut khoob 👌
Ameen . Stay blessed ❤
वाह वाह! अद्भुत
تھینکس
Waha bahot ala g
شکریہ سر آپ کیسے ہیں
Very nice, Shoaib saab. 👏🏼👏🏼
Thank you
👏 So 👏 proud 👏 of 👏 you 👏
💐
Good compliment
Thanks
Istakbal buland ho bhai ka ❤
❤❤
ماشاءاللہ ❤️ ماشاءاللہ
Waah sir ji❤
Ap Khush rahiye
Kuch likhney sey pehley mey ney apna qalam tor dia 🤔🤐
Bebas aurton ki sachhi tarjumani aap ney ki hai 👌👏
Agey ab meray paas kuch likhney ko nahi hai filhal ❤😢🙂🙂
Thank you
Heart touching shayari
شکریہ
پسماندہ طبقہ ہو یا نفیس آج بھی لڑکیاں اس قہر سے جوجھ رہی ہیں۔۔
بہہہت خوب۔۔۔۔💐
Thank you so much
Wah sahib zabardast ❤
Kitni khubsoorat
Stay blessed
Kia baat hay sir
Thank you Waseem bhai
Speechless 😶
Thanks
❤ بہت خوب جناب مبارک ہو
Undeniable harsh realities in this poem but at extreme level a bit .
❤❤
Excellent excellent excellent
Thanks
Most talented boy
Stay blessed
Speechless. 👌👌👌👌
Thank you
Honest poet in front of hippocratic society
Stay blessed
Thoughtful.
Thank you
Hayaat eay julm si waffa ki talash vee tumhi se tthee" meri apnin shohrat ki kharid daar , be waffa ki taalash ki aash tumhi se tthee" tere apni hashraton ki bekhudi men eakk aash hamhi se tthee"
Thanks
Speechless ❤
Stay blessed
Wonderful........
Thank you
بہت خوب
Alfaaz ni mil rahy ksy apki or kin alfaaz main hosla afzaee krun Allah Pak ap k Zor e qalm main bepnah izafa farmaey, sada salamat rahyn Ameen Summa Ameen 🤲
Thanks
Sach hi kaha h ki masiha bhi wahi janm leta h jaha zulm ho…… who can expect this from Pakistan. Hats off to this mentality. Ab bhi sadiyan lagengi waqt badle or aurat ko bhi insan smjha Jane me.
Waah
Thank you
@@shoaibkianiofficial Thank you sir aapko bhi
Excellent , koi shabd nahi tareef Karne ke liye. Mayank
Thank you
Waa..
Thank you
बिल्कुल हक़िकत बयां कर
रही है आपकी नज़्म
आपको मुबारकबाद 💐
Bohat Shukria ap salamat rahye ❤
Shoaib you're great poet
Thank you
Bsst wishesss shoai kiani.keep it up
Mashallah
Thanks you
I hope some one translates it in English.
I did not get the last punch line.😢
*immodests*
We're the one
Who shall ensounce
That who has the right over their bodies
We're the one
Who shall choose
With whom shall they wed
With whom shall they bed
Who shall sharpen
his lips (enhance his lust) with their bodies
Though love couldn't be established on someones else's will,
Through out the history
But, we shall choose
That whom shall they keep in affection
We are their masters,
We have the authority to take them in the beds
And embed our tooth in their souls
When They will acquire motherhood
We shall decide
How many children will be forged by their bodies
To fill the bellies of our off-springs
Even if, they are to sit in a brothel,
We shall determine
To whom and to what extent they can lash themselves
We have right to plunder all the sum
From their habitues (though it's we)
We have right to use their eyes,
Lovely faces, fair feet,
Beaming thighs, far-reaching hair
And warm lips for selling cream, soap, white cloth and mangoes
Run the shop and earn profits
We are the one who shall decide
Which verse of which scripture is to be read by them
Who are they!
To wear colour of their own choice
To go to school,
To lecture us and tell us,
That we and they are creations of same God,
Who are they to teach us the chapters of equality
They are our slaves and disposable shoes of our feet
How dare they to live in their own way!
Our elder had left us by telling
Those who disobey their rulers
Who demand their hereditary
Who deny their husbands' divinity
Who ask challenging questions
Who ask for the rewards of their labour
Who argue with the masters
Who want their own choice over their bodies
They are immodests!
'Behaya' has broken silence that reverberates, pounding hearts, minds, and souls that vouchsafe disbelief and pander through walls for safe passage. Go louder for some haya, at least.
Grateful to you for this compliment
Bohat shandar bhai shahab.... bohat samay baad kisi ne kuchh kam ka likha hai ...
Shukria
@Shoaib Kiani how can i read u more bhai... i dont understand urdu script... is there anything in roman script or devnagri
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@Shoaib Kiani thanks for reply bhai 🙏
Brave man
Thank you
Aha...... Sakht naraz hoon ap se k yeh nazm ap ne kyu likhi ❤
❤️❤️
یہ نظم واقعی لاجواب ہے
آپ نے بہت پہلے مجھے کہا تھا کہ میں اچھا شاعر ہوں میں پوری کوشش کرتا ہوں کہ آپ کی رائے نہ بدلے
@@shoaibkianiofficial
اچھے نہیں ، بہت اچھے شاعر ہیں
ماشاءاللہ
❤
Sir,
Kya likh diya aapne, Aaj apne mayeshre pe sharminda ho gaya,
Munawwar Rana shaab ki ek line hai,
Humari berukhi ki den hai bazar ki zeenat, Jo humme wafa hoti to ye kotha nahi hota.....
Salamat rahain
Javaid akhtar tum ko Allah pak hidayat de
Ok
👌👌👌👌👌🥺
❤️
But it all happens now in some particular areas and cults otherwise in the western culture the fair sex enjoying their life full fledged
So far I have seen
🎉
Good
shukria bhai
Aaj bhi aisi nazme likhni pad rahi hain.. ise bdi dukh ki bat kya hain..
Ap ne bohat aham bat ki. Kash Kuch badal jae
شاباش شعیب صاحب
Irresistible shayari
🎉❤
Baraberi ke sabaq sikhayein ...
❤️
SPEECHLESS
Thanks
Baraberi ke sabaq sikhayein ...l
Thank you so much
یار یہ نظم لڑ گئی ہے ۔ بہت جیئں
سلامت رہیں
InshaAllah apne beti aur beta dono ko barabar hissa dunga property mein, the only way to suppress patriarchy is the property rights for women.
Infaradi Tor per ye ek acha qadam hai lekin pooray samaj k liye hamain political struggle bhi Karni ho ge
My advice is to do what your CREATOR has advised. On one extreme are those which are denying the rights of daughters and sisters and committing sin. On the other hand are others who are not following the wirasat laws of shariyat and committing sin perhaps not intentionally....but ignorance is not an excuse for educated people
Purushvaadi samaj ki asaliyat bayan kar di
Shukria bhai
Sw
❤
Jawaid sahib koi akhri Paimana nahi hai, janab ke Jo woh Keh deye Yaa fir Tareef kar deye to buss ho giya aur Kisi ki Pasand Yaa na-pasand Yaa fir Kisi AUR ki sanad jarurat nahi hai, jawaid sahib kis mind-setup ke Urdu shayer hai yeh Ahle-URDU..E...Hind aur Ahle AdaB..E..URDU sab janti hai, aur thori bahut mujhe v pata hai.....???
Ji AP ko Pasand nahi tow bhi shukria k AP ne waqt nikala
جاوید صاحب کے الفاظ کے بعد کچھ کہنے کی ضرورت نہیں
💐💐
Yeh poem tamacha hai Islam mein aurato ke halat par....bhai waah..waah waah waah waah waah... Main hamesha se muslim women rights ke baare mein aawaz uthata raha hu...ek poori jamat hai jo nahi chahti ki yeh mohtarmayein apne haqq ko jaane, yeh uucha uthe, nazre milaein... Yeh inko paida kar sakti hain par yeh khud ko chhupa kar rakhe aur yeh teen teen sauharein rakhein inhe haqq hai par woh kisi ke saamne bhi na jayein... Bhai waah waah waah mian waah.
Ap k compliment ka shukria. Ye Kisi ek mazhab ya ilaqay ka masla nahin orat har mazhab or ilaqay main exploit ho Rahi hai Kisi na Kisi shakal main. Shukria
@@shoaibkianiofficialI agree with u.
Ulta chasma lagaakar mat dekho padho Quran budhu ye tumpar tamacha hai islam ne huquq diya hai Aurto ko us ka ilm nahi hai Nastiko ke baap ko
@@shoaibkianiofficial
Yeh ghazal nahi hai aaina hai , jismein sachchai is kadar nangi hai ki us se nazar milana bhi bahut mushkil hai.
Yeh kisi ek samaj ki baat nahi na hi ek kaal ki baat hai .
Balki Aaj ke tathakathit modern samay mein yeh aur bhi numaya hai
Bhai aapne galat matlab nikal liya is nazm ka.
Baat ko pakadne aur baat ko samajhne main fark hota hai, aapne pakad liya hai samjha nahi. Khair creator ne bhi clarify kar Diya hai apna stance.
Bah kya likha yeh giya Apne molvi mullo ko date to badiya tha
Hamara Kam likhna hai Bhai
LAJWAB LAJWAB LAJWAB
Thank you
Bakwasssss
one sided poem.. may be women will praise him...vahiyat ...
Your comment seconds it.
Too much feminism
❤️
The poet has used unnecessary vulgar words and the point he is trying to prove is not universal
In fact, he is propagating vulgarity
Ok
😢its vulgarity
How?
@@shoaibkianiofficial imaandaaree se kahun to achha likha hai lekin kaafi kadwa(bitter) likha hai