Pendulums Book 1 Chapter 6 Part 2 Remastered B

This is the first book in a four part series by a new unpublished Canadian author who needs your feedback. I have completed drafts of Book One and Book Two for your perusal and would like to solicit your feedback before submitting them to the Canadian Writer's Association for their professional opinion.
I have remastered the first several chapters and posted them for you to listen to.
Book Three is in development with a release date planned for 2024
Book Four to follow.
The world will change, the question is who has the power to change it? What will they need to know?
What is the best way to change the world?
Surely, you have an opinion, don't you?
All Feedback is a gift. Please listen to my book and let me know if you find:
character flaws
continuity errors
plot issues
science issues
anything else you feel would improve the final output before I take the leap and submitted it for evaluation.
Thanks in advance.
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