I can only imagine every failed attempt went like this: Kara: Please sleep with me mr marine, no strings attached. Marine: Sorry SIR. Weve been trained to respect women in the future SIR. I cannot sleep with you until we've been on at least four dates and are ready for commitment SIR. I respect you too much as a person SIR.
Seriously why are these people, including humans, overthinking this. A six pack and explaining the situation she’d have a line down the corridor outside her room. The odds are with her, at least.
I have heard women talk about their biological clock ticking before but this takes it to a whole new level. Her biological clock is hooked to a time bomb.
*gets on intercom* "Crew, I'm going to literally die if I don't get knocked up, my room number is ...." .... Sell raffle tickets... Problem solves itself.
good story he was a man of action and she was ready for that action. who ever came up with this story has a mind that is out of this world. T hanks. (Mississippi gulf Coast, USA).
A bit I guess, but I seem to recall Pon Farr essentially being like a period or perhaps more like a male elephants musth, happening multiple times in a Vulcans life. While this seems to be more of a once in a lifetime thing. Kind of like how human females tends to live longer if they feel useful (so if your kids have a grandmother you want to live long you might want to include them in the kids upbringing etc if you want to keep her alive)
Interesting thought experiment but any race that has these conditions for existence would have arranged marriage or some such thing. It wouldn’t do to have this kind of risk at depopulation
Hmm, despite the odd details added into the story - we skipped her getting permission to just leave seeking the merc, with her space fighter it seems - and the presumed probability of artificial insemination in a future society existing to much more easily solver her problem. And what seems like some type of space cop lady suddenly rushing off to do a crime.
On a warship and she has to leave it to find somebody who will mate with her? Was it manned by boy scouts? No one to think of England while doing their duty?
@@michaeldemarillac9992 I was wondering that as well, thought either they'd joined really late, or had been demoted.. but nothing in the story fit the second one.
Well depends on the structure of their military. If it’s like old time military structured around nobility so officers are posted based of social rank and often promotions are not given unless the one above you dies or is promoted because someone else dies.
a good story but missing many crucial details that creates a cohesive story-line. written by an amateur who make assumptions that the reader will fill in the necessary details. To write how a person felt is entertaining but doesn't replace how it traveled from A to b. For example. How the alien girl arrived less than a week from being killed without doing anything about it. the idea is stupid for anyone intelligent unless there are extenuating circumstances that prevented her from doing something about it. It should have been the very beginning of the story to explain why the character is in its current situation. To assume she was just being busy with her job is offensive to the readers intelligence. There are many such clarification details that let the reader to wonder or assume which devalues the integrity of the story. You can't write "i have a few tricks up my sleeve" & then fail to show how that makes the story work. It is amateurish & nonsensical.
@@sdragut I was of the same mindset. Hearing that the species dies at 30 I'd they don't conceive, you'd think there were preparations in place to prevent your untimely demise. There's no way she was so busy she forgot that she was going to die.
@@diaperjoeisaped1723 The character did come off that way, but I can understand why she'd be so desperate, it's hard to believe she'd wait until 2 weeks before dieing before asking random people to "help".
@@diaperjoeisaped1723 getting offended only proves my point. the story is written by someone who doesn't cover his basis to create a cohesive story. getting a few compliments doesn't change the facts. Even Hitler had fans. your time would be better spent in checking the stories before posting if you expect to increase your subscribers database thus increasing your income. if you don't care about that keep going as you are
I can only imagine every failed attempt went like this:
Kara: Please sleep with me mr marine, no strings attached.
Marine: Sorry SIR. Weve been trained to respect women in the future SIR. I cannot sleep with you until we've been on at least four dates and are ready for commitment SIR. I respect you too much as a person SIR.
Seriously why are these people, including humans, overthinking this. A six pack and explaining the situation she’d have a line down the corridor outside her room. The odds are with her, at least.
LMFAO! No six pack. Video camera. Ain't too many guys I know who would turn down the chance to make a porno.🤣🤣
There are 400 marines on this ship.... you're familiar with lotteries yes?
LMFAO 🤣
I have heard women talk about their biological clock ticking before but this takes it to a whole new level. Her biological clock is hooked to a time bomb.
*gets on intercom*
"Crew, I'm going to literally die if I don't get knocked up, my room number is ...."
....
Sell raffle tickets...
Problem solves itself.
Yep, I'd pay heck pronouncing Kxorgan also. Especially consistently. Good job Sgt!
I like Rykk, he's a get her done kind a guy. Fun story Sarge.
Cant find someone on base that'll seal the deal? Oof.
How hard do you have to be screaming I don't need no man to get get the point of death before saying maybe i should consider this? 😂
Oh, she could find them but, they needed to all 6s. Plus, I’m sure child support still exists.
@@blaclux Space child support must be rough.
Great story, a real winner!
Call Captain Kirk !! He's got little bastards all through the galaxy !
good story he was a man of action and she was ready for that action. who ever came up with this story has a mind that is out of this world. T hanks. (Mississippi gulf Coast, USA).
Sooo, a Zethian female version of Pon Farr.
A bit I guess, but I seem to recall Pon Farr essentially being like a period or perhaps more like a male elephants musth, happening multiple times in a Vulcans life.
While this seems to be more of a once in a lifetime thing.
Kind of like how human females tends to live longer if they feel useful (so if your kids have a grandmother you want to live long you might want to include them in the kids upbringing etc if you want to keep her alive)
I'll help!!!👍👍👍
Hold my 🍺!
This is designed to combat the decline in population in the developed world. After reading this we will discard contraception and breed like mad.
A verry good story.
"Must get clapped ..." ; never heard that phrase before. Sounds like 'get the clap' which no-one would want!
😂😂 lol😂
Wouldn't want her to die
Good story.
Interesting thought experiment but any race that has these conditions for existence would have arranged marriage or some such thing. It wouldn’t do to have this kind of risk at depopulation
I've heard of "baby rabies" but this takes the cake!
Hmm, despite the odd details added into the story - we skipped her getting permission to just leave seeking the merc, with her space fighter it seems - and the presumed probability of artificial insemination in a future society existing to much more easily solver her problem. And what seems like some type of space cop lady suddenly rushing off to do a crime.
Nice!
Jax Ironheart - Hah! Such a melodramatic name.
Good video😇❤🇺🇸
i enjoyed this story, well done
any marines aboard?
You rang?
@@rancidmarmot1994Oh dam! There is a jarhead around. Now watch everything turn to 💩!
Kinda shallow story line... "Butt": made it through! Thanx, J
On a warship and she has to leave it to find somebody who will mate with her? Was it manned by boy scouts? No one to think of England while doing their duty?
Quality over quantity
She actually left her Fighter on planet???
Part of the story is missing at 15:00.
image, Where? Find?
this is a good story of love
Wasn't it a heist?? Why didn't they take anything?
Reminds me of the movie Crank
Torren is a sexy name, though.
Is his name Rykk? Or Obelix, the menhir delivery man?😊
If this was true irl, 80% of women would be gone. Probably 95% of men.
Lol. We can always find it.😅
I am ex military and a 30 year old Lieutenant is a fail in life in its own right, should be at least Lt Commander or Commander.
@@michaeldemarillac9992 I was wondering that as well, thought either they'd joined really late, or had been demoted.. but nothing in the story fit the second one.
Well depends on the structure of their military. If it’s like old time military structured around nobility so officers are posted based of social rank and often promotions are not given unless the one above you dies or is promoted because someone else dies.
That’s a Mortal Combat type of “Wall”. “Finish Her!”
a good story but missing many crucial details that creates a cohesive story-line. written by an amateur who make assumptions that the reader will fill in the necessary details. To write how a person felt is entertaining but doesn't replace how it traveled from A to b. For example. How the alien girl arrived less than a week from being killed without doing anything about it. the idea is stupid for anyone intelligent unless there are extenuating circumstances that prevented her from doing something about it. It should have been the very beginning of the story to explain why the character is in its current situation. To assume she was just being busy with her job is offensive to the readers intelligence. There are many such clarification details that let the reader to wonder or assume which devalues the integrity of the story. You can't write "i have a few tricks up my sleeve" & then fail to show how that makes the story work. It is amateurish & nonsensical.
@@sdragut I was of the same mindset. Hearing that the species dies at 30 I'd they don't conceive, you'd think there were preparations in place to prevent your untimely demise. There's no way she was so busy she forgot that she was going to die.
@sdragut. Sounds like a personal problem, yours! Everyone else enjoyed it. 👎👎👎👎👎 for you!
@@krowodom5719 Whining little girl.
@@diaperjoeisaped1723 The character did come off that way, but I can understand why she'd be so desperate, it's hard to believe she'd wait until 2 weeks before dieing before asking random people to "help".
@@diaperjoeisaped1723 getting offended only proves my point. the story is written by someone who doesn't cover his basis to create a cohesive story. getting a few compliments doesn't change the facts. Even Hitler had fans. your time would be better spent in checking the stories before posting if you expect to increase your subscribers database thus increasing your income. if you don't care about that keep going as you are