An intergalactic odd couple..lol.! Though I thought it would have added a little more, to particularly identify..casually...what gender, thinking and indeed smart dragon happened to be. Nothing salacious about it. Just..I don't like people..even nonhuman ones.."IT". HIM, HER, HERM.. but not, "IT". Still a good story, nonetheless..but still need to explain a creature can flap it wings... and fly in space. Hidden organic thusters, that mimic airborne flight dynamics..somehow..or something like that.
So, at 19:40 there are some contradictory statements made about the enemy scout ship. Interesting idea but very weak in execution. With a whole lot of rewriting and proofreading this tale ( er, tail ) might reach up and become an easily forgetable mediocre rant. But heck this could be a bit if paying the dues. The writer could end up crafting a story that would make PLAN NINE FROM OUTER SPACE almost loo, good😊 SISU
Great story thank you, keep them coming please ❤❤❤❤❤❤.
Awesome story. Great narration. Keep it going.
Really enjoyed this story. Thanks
Well it was going great until the dragon flying in space bit...then it was a hard HUuuuuh!??
Well it's a space dragon so.......
rofl
How could the dragon, fly in space?
Good story. Need to decide if the dragon is they/ them /him etc. id prefer him or her. The woke crap is getting rediculous
I listen to these while I am at work
This sounds like there is more to the story. Good job.
I think you needed to put 'precision' in a few more times.
Their/they can't we just have him her? This woke b/s is annoying. You say the dragon is a them /their a him etc. make your mind up. Ai again 🤬
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An intergalactic odd couple..lol.! Though I thought it would have added a little more, to particularly identify..casually...what gender, thinking and indeed smart dragon happened to be. Nothing salacious about it. Just..I don't like people..even nonhuman ones.."IT". HIM, HER, HERM.. but not, "IT". Still a good story, nonetheless..but still need to explain a creature can flap it wings... and fly in space. Hidden organic thusters, that mimic airborne flight dynamics..somehow..or something like that.
So, at 19:40 there are some contradictory statements made about the enemy scout ship. Interesting idea but very weak in execution. With a whole lot of rewriting and proofreading this tale ( er, tail ) might reach up and become an easily forgetable mediocre rant. But heck this could be a bit if paying the dues. The writer could end up crafting a story that would make PLAN NINE FROM OUTER SPACE almost loo, good😊 SISU
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