You need to work on the redundancy of your narratives. I lost track of how many times you said "I'm park ranger, an explorer and guardian of secrets, navigator of the unknown etc.". They're overly repetitious.
Overly flowery writing is a red flag of a fake story, invented by a writer. They can't help but to go too far in trying to be impressive with their elaborate poetic descriptions of things, from habit and also ego.
Bro i love your videos i always listen to them i need more videos i watch them all for the last 5 years your voice has changed so much bro keep it going never stop RUclips and good luck
What a beautiful and lovely, descriptive, immersive story. Would really love to send the author a few alternative words for “resolve” … “strengthen my resolve” …after the 3-5th time it sort of looses the power. See also “whispering pines”. Seriously tho, 98/100!!! Great Read!!! ❤️
It needed a tweak or two, but I have to admit it was an engaging story. Just had a few redundant phrases, no big deal, they were good phrases in and of themselves. I can tell they worked hard on it. This writer has a lot of potential. Usually ,when I wake up in the morning , I turn off my stories. I didn't turn this one off ! Had to keep listening to see how it ended. Well done! Honestly as a writer, at least you are writing! That is half the battle , just to write.
I cannot handle the phrase "little did i know" in a story. it destroys any and all tension. i turned off the last video because it kept happening so im turning off this one. youre my fave but whoever this author is isnt doing you any favors. im sorry.
Windego shows up. Eternally hungry for the flesh of man. Evil unbridled! It sees a park ranger. Waves, giggles and runs off into the forest like a playful pixie. 🙄
Fictional, you can tell by the overly flowery language. A good writer creates interesting sentences and descriptions. A great writer, instead, knows how a real person would speak.
Some channels say true stories but u never know anymore lol. I agree with the above comment about the writing style. If it helps you to think theyre real, tell yourself someone rewrote a real story to sound better by rewriting it with more descriptive language 😂I tell myself that sometimes
I wonder how the parks got chosen by the government. Why these places? I wouldn’t be surprised if these places hid anomalies that can’t be explained away. So they protect these areas.
Have to say this real quick because honestly enjoying this montage of so many different scary stories but there is a similar story to this that they captured this "alternate reality time-bending reindeer" !?!?!!??? They captured it in this and placed it in this facility and called it c&s 3-30 9p SpaceTime alternating reindeer😮😮😮😮 They captured it and then they placed in this housing unit now that is not exist in on our plane of existence and got traveled into the fourth dimension which it can never return unless it's one certain person can do the returning and fill in that time they have to be this one God and or wilden guy that got captured as well so this goes on deeper than just this once tear deer story so please keep digging!!!! I'm nothing special I'm nothing this time nothing that just know that these are actually real stories and I swear 20-25 is something going to happen really alive so just be ready stay ready and keep a healthy body mind and aspect because holyshit it's going to hit the fan!!!! I'm not surprised if Jesus Christ will be around here in 5 years or that he's been here the whole time 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯😳😳😳😳😳😳😳🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶😇😇😇😇🤠🤠🤠🤠🥲🥲🥲🥲😪🥳🥳🥳🥳🤨
Their stories varied? No shit, they are all different people why say that. Convinced myself what I saw I didn’t really see, that lined is used in too many stories
Many of the authors of these stories are too wordy, flowery, and redundant. It’s like they’re trying to show off their literary skills and it’s really irritating. I’m not listening to this crap anymore.
These are straight up gold...
They were nothing but a rambling mess😆
Volume up
Yes Messy .
Boring
Bro this is written by chat gpt. The redundancy in this story is crazy.
if so, doesnt even matter. they're still very entertaining and the story teller is somehow very calming
I love hearing these stories while I shower and get ready for bed. Makes me feel very cozy at home!
You need to work on the redundancy of your narratives. I lost track of how many times you said "I'm park ranger, an explorer and guardian of secrets, navigator of the unknown etc.". They're overly repetitious.
That's the thing that annoyed Me too!! It's just too much circling!
You need to shut up where's your stories
Agreed. Don't have time for that.
The 1st story was a rambling mess. It dragged on too long.
I may be wrong but I don't believe the owner of the channel/narrator is also the writer. I definitely understand what you mean though lol
I hold on to the late night hours just to wait for your uploads. They make my nights much better. Thank you again JC.
_My 1st time Listening, At Nite. And I Couldn’t Agree More!_
Overly flowery writing is a red flag of a fake story, invented by a writer. They can't help but to go too far in trying to be impressive with their elaborate poetic descriptions of things, from habit and also ego.
True... I like the ones that just tell the story without all the poetic imaginative descriptive language
It doesn’t say true story
Didn’t even make it to the 2nd story but the 1st story had me to rolling me eyes too much! That shit was ridiculous
Nothing in the title says anything about these storys being real
Yes yes yes!
Why is his content so addicting and voice so smooth? Dude. 😅
Bro i love your videos i always listen to them i need more videos i watch them all for the last 5 years your voice has changed so much bro keep it going never stop RUclips and good luck
🌲🌳🍃Into the woods + the Darkness
we g0. Tfsharing a little of every scary tale.
Good night.
YaaaasssssSSSSSS my favorite theme!!! TySM ....
From my favorite narrator!! Even better!! 😊❤
For the algorithm!!! ❤❤❤❤❤
What a beautiful and lovely, descriptive, immersive story.
Would really love to send the author a few alternative words for “resolve” … “strengthen my resolve” …after the 3-5th time it sort of looses the power.
See also “whispering pines”.
Seriously tho, 98/100!!!
Great Read!!! ❤️
It needed a tweak or two, but I have to admit it was an engaging story. Just had a few redundant phrases, no big deal, they were good phrases in and of themselves. I can tell they worked hard on it. This writer has a lot of potential. Usually ,when I wake up in the morning , I turn off my stories. I didn't turn this one off ! Had to keep listening to see how it ended.
Well done!
Honestly as a writer, at least you are writing! That is half the battle , just to write.
If they were true,the story wouldn’t be written as well,most people aren’t best selling authors.
I agree... I think that a paper back selling in the airport terminal would be more appealing LOL
Not bad, not bad at all. You just got a new sub.
_Story #1_ 00:10
_Story #2_ 35:25
That rambling story was something else...they had a huuuuuge ego at the very least. Like, chill out. You're just a park ranger.
Damn.. never knew that these types of stories would turn out to be my fav. I've got chills running down my spine at 2AM :D
Man i trusted you
Have a great week just creepy ty for another great video
You're one of the best readers in the world.
Good lord these stories were ridiculous😂
YESSSSS ANOTHER ONE
Amazing Story
I'VE SPENT A LOT OF TIME IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE, AND YES, IT'S EERY AND YES, YOU'RE BEING WATCHED
Good stories!!!!
Holy crap, you don't need an adjective with every noun...
First one was hilarious
You are so underrated dude keep it up these stories are great!
Love it ❤🎉
Another video to fall asleep to❤
All this fuel and there never be another gas shortage. Sheesh
I cannot handle the phrase "little did i know" in a story. it destroys any and all tension. i turned off the last video because it kept happening so im turning off this one. youre my fave but whoever this author is isnt doing you any favors. im sorry.
Amazing stories! Just need some rain noise maybe some crickets/frogs 😭
Forest sounds!? Some running water? I like the crickets/frog idea😂
Jokes huh
The sound of a cool fog.
If the narration in the first story where to apply to something as boring as dog food I would have rapt attention
Hello there ☺️
Time to sleep😌
Why are these written as park rangers being super heroes lol
A note about the natives. They would be Cherokee and live in the town of Cherokee North Carolina.
Windego shows up. Eternally hungry for the flesh of man. Evil unbridled!
It sees a park ranger. Waves, giggles and runs off into the forest like a playful pixie. 🙄
This was definetively written by AI
When you mentioned the deer at the start of the second story i got ptsd, u have a great voice tho
ENIGMATIC
Had to turn it off after 5 minutes. Endless description of the setting. Your voice is great for storytelling though.
You should just tell the story without all the unnecessary details.
Quick question, are these stories true or are they fictional?
Fictional, you can tell by the overly flowery language. A good writer creates interesting sentences and descriptions.
A great writer, instead, knows how a real person would speak.
Some channels say true stories but u never know anymore lol. I agree with the above comment about the writing style. If it helps you to think theyre real, tell yourself someone rewrote a real story to sound better by rewriting it with more descriptive language 😂I tell myself that sometimes
They are true if you believe them.
I wonder how the parks got chosen by the government. Why these places? I wouldn’t be surprised if these places hid anomalies that can’t be explained away. So they protect these areas.
Yea. I agree
So basically the ranger is a Batman 😂😂😂 the first story was corny af
Wait, he’s a park ranger that does what?
"As a park ranger", I make up a load of crap it would seem
A park ranger gonna range.
This is just kinda boring...😕
Eat up with stupp
Have to say this real quick because honestly enjoying this montage of so many different scary stories but there is a similar story to this that they captured this "alternate reality time-bending reindeer" !?!?!!???
They captured it in this and placed it in this facility and called it c&s 3-30 9p
SpaceTime alternating reindeer😮😮😮😮
They captured it and then they placed in this housing unit now that is not exist in on our plane of existence and got traveled into the fourth dimension which it can never return unless it's one certain person can do the returning and fill in that time they have to be this one God and or wilden guy that got captured as well so this goes on deeper than just this once tear deer story so please keep digging!!!!
I'm nothing special I'm nothing this time nothing that just know that these are actually real stories and I swear 20-25 is something going to happen really alive so just be ready stay ready and keep a healthy body mind and aspect because holyshit it's going to hit the fan!!!!
I'm not surprised if Jesus Christ will be around here in 5 years or that he's been here the whole time 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯😳😳😳😳😳😳😳🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶😇😇😇😇🤠🤠🤠🤠🥲🥲🥲🥲😪🥳🥳🥳🥳🤨
I got none of that
Jätkän pakko olla Suomesta😂
Drugs are bad
Ghey
The word "Uncanny" was overused last year 😒
Their stories varied? No shit, they are all different people why say that. Convinced myself what I saw I didn’t really see, that lined is used in too many stories
Iron bark lookout….
I was starting to get so frustrated with the first story. Wrap it up, cause this is going nowhere
Every video so far has started with descriptions of dudes wrinkles.
Many of the authors of these stories are too wordy, flowery, and redundant. It’s like they’re trying to show off their literary skills and it’s really irritating. I’m not listening to this crap anymore.
Try not just reading the script. It's too fast and there's no inflection. Pretent this is your story you're telling. Impossible to listen to
Lifeless narrative.
😂😂🤣
Wayyyy over the top with descriptions, 90% descriptives and 10% make-believe story 🤦🏻♂️
You got to chill out this guy thinks he’s the main character like no one cares
This is the most boring and convoluted story I’ve ever heard
Fake
What a crappy story
This smells like Ai story
You should reduce lagging
In the real world stories mostly means it's a lies