Absolutely love your narration. Its been putting me to sleep almost nightly for 10 years give or take. I don't know exactly when I started listening but I know it was within the first year of your narration and it just gets better!!!
i usually hate that word in creepy pastas cuz it’s corny as hell but i kinda liked how he repeated it with “david fucking king” once everything went to shit
This was one of the first creepypastas I got obsessed with. New uploads were exciting days. Now I'm stuck on "tales from the gas station" waiting on MrCreepyPasta's vol. 4 audio book
Yeah I’m ngl I found the gas station series just a BIT too silly. It was trying to be Mr_Outlaw too hard but it didn’t have that Mr_Outlaw PUNCH! You know? Yeah I basically idolize Mr_Outlaw now and consider him the patron saint of nosleep 🤣 So now I’m moving on to all these timeless classics (That I LOVE) and just fantasizing about a new 6 hour long Mr_Outlaw story appearing on my feed 😂 I feel like this is how some affairs begin…Ig I might need to divorce…with stories?…maybe? But I ain’t leaving til Big Brother tries to stop me! So lets listen to this story about this dude’s friend suddenly going PSYCHO at the drop of a pin lol I can relate :/
"David... fucking... King" I absolutely love this creepypasta. This one and PenPal are what started my love for them. Its hard to find them written like this these days. If anyone has more suggestion, please do share!
@@cyberfox7249In my opinion, stories with monsters or religious or supernatural elements aren't very scary because I don't think any of that stuff is real. Stuff like this where the monster is just an evil person are the most terrifying because they're rooted in reality.
Borrasca. It is, quite literally, the best creepypasta ever written. And it’s possibly the most disturbing. If you haven’t heard about it yet, it’s similar to this and PenPals and I recommend it wholeheartedly if you can stomach the material
This is my first time listening to this story...I absolutely love it. *spoiler alert *......... when Clark came in and tackled David toward the end, I was literally cheering out loud.
Question: Did this video inspire you to selfimprove and challenge yourself? Because i unironically got some things to tell you and ways to expose if you do !!
This is fantastic. This writer is wonderfully articulate and paints with great detail and leaves nothing to the imagination. I can see this as a movie easily. ty MCP for taking the time to narrate it.
I've listened to over 200 creepypastas over the last few months ever since I got a job that allows listening to earbuds at work. This is the absolute best I've heard so far!
I remember listening to this maybe 4 years ago? I was in a huge creepypasta storytelling phase and you were my favorite one to listen to. When I heard this one, I was ENTHRALLED. It's been my absolute favorite from the VERY MOMENT I read the title. I searched for it again just now so that I could relisten to it with my girlfriend this weekend. I love not only the story, but the way you narrate it is just so perfect. I'm stoked to see that you went back to this one and reuploaded it! I am SO EXCITED to listen to it again! Thank you for creating content and giving your beautiful voice and passion into these stories and videos. Cheers🫶
I remember watching the complete edition back in the day. I only ever found out about this story through the original complete version, So it kind of feels nice for nostalgic reasons to re listen to the story after all these years
I love this story so much. I orriginally listened to it years ago, when I was little, and since then it'll pop into my mind occasionally. I could listen to it over & over. The background (the one with the pencil specifically) is so nostalgic for me, and so is the voice reading it.
Those who say 'I want a movie of this story' clearly have a lot of misplaced faith in Hollywood. (This was basically the top comment of the original upload, thanks MCP for reuploading it where the chapter doesn't loop)
Inspirational Story, huh? Question: Did this video inspire you to selfimprove and challenge yourself? Because i unironically got some things to tell you and ways to expose if you do
i absolutely love this, series, it is by far one of the best creepy pastas ive ever heard, i always end up coming back to it when i get bored of watching other videos
This story is truly terrifying. I almost had to stop listening about half way through b/c it was just so real. No demons or supernatural things going on- that's why this is the scariest!
At one point this amazing trippy background graphic starts up in the video and its hypnotizing me lol I can’t look away…It’s showing me secrets humanity isn’t ready for…
I love the people who talk about listening to this for the first time only a few years ago, i remember having to wait for MCP to upload waiting day by day by far one of the best storys hes done and will always be my favorite narrator. MCP ive been listening to you since you pretty much made your account, i use to be to young to be a join the Patreon page or buy your wifes tea when i came out but now i just have too much bills. As long as you post i will always listen. I dont thinks ive missed a story yet, ive never been fond of music but i can damn sure listen to you all day. Thank you for all of the years and dedication and stay spooky.
Yooooo no way you revamped this that’s freakin awesome ima give it a listen later but it immediately gets a like, it’s a classic and one of my favorite stories!
I've listed to your version of this more times than I can count! One of my favourites next to tales from the gas station, my property isn't normal, borrasca and stolen tongues.
I just wanna say, I was there when you started reading these in individual parts and it was the most exciting thing to be there with everyone cheering the protag on and hating on David effing King, it's one of my favourite memories I have of when I was a teenager, thank you for bringing us this story ^u^
I've had the original completed series video on my sleep/long drive playlist for years, and I know where the error is but I still love it. Guess this new version will be put into rotation for the playlist of creepypastas I share with friends!
This was one of the first stories that I listened to from you and it’s on my top 5. I was hooked from the beginning. I love all the stories but I especially love the really long ones.
What are your other favorites? I want to see if I've already listened to them. Thanks. Already listened to Gastion, Broadcast station, my house isn't normal, Borrasca.
happy to see this get cleaned up. this is by far my favorite creepy pasta or story as a whole. i also like the bar that serves drinks for stories, lonely broadcast, tales of the gas station, my property isnt normal, and the thing in the basement is getting better at mimicking people for anyone else that wants some good ones
There was a movie years ago (1990) with a very similar idea. It's called "Bad Influence", with Rob Lowe and James Spader. I highly recommend it! It's crazy
For me, i feel like it fits more if the Main character will be played by jake gylenhal (sorry if my spelling is incorrect) and the best friend be played by dude who played pennywise lmao
Anyone else suspicious that Katie was in on it? The SSN number and what not? He killed anyone, including his own mother but not her & he had her for over a year? The fact he'd been working on this for years etc. I definitely think he had more than that one goon for help.
It’s weird, I’ve been listening to this story constantly for the past few days and when I searched for this story today to listen to it again, I see this improved re-upload.
Hhhoooolyyyyy, this was a good one. I woke up to it when it got the the part when Zan was wonder and why someone would do this and decided to keep liatening. Thats how you tell a dang story. And, of course, thats how you READ a dang story. Thanks, and keep up the good work.
1:46:26 right, also I hope that we remember that cop cars typically have dash cams that would show everything that happened in and out of the car, and most likely catch some if not all of this little plan David is hatching. Also, do armored trucks not also have cameras? Does David own the company now or something? And omg there are no door handles inside the backseat of a cop car, I'm so annoyed 😅
I've been in the back of a cop car. Some of them do, in fact, have handles on the inside of the back doors. I wouldn't be surprised if it was the majority of them. They just only open from the outside.
@@who_the_fuck_is_riley5813 I live in Houston. Our cop cars don't have handles 🤣 maybe older ones (like, really old) but the SUVs, the trucks, the Chevy's? Naw.
This is a classic and a thriller , David F**king King truly made me hate him . I heard there was a sequel dunno where they could have taken a sequel considering unless David F**king King somehow survived
Clever... Bravo.....my friend..... drop a plausable idea, True or false, is no matter, just getting them stirred up is enough.. PS now that I've stroked your ego and feigned sufficiently thar I'm impressed by your brilliant intelligence....is there really a sequel? I mean I don't give a shlt ... uh...im asking for a friend... yeah, You know whatever.................................................please tell me I'm dying here...... that wasn't me ... I swear
Again like in the description, this is a reupload. Just fixing the errors in the original compilation video
Absolutely love your narration. Its been putting me to sleep almost nightly for 10 years give or take. I don't know exactly when I started listening but I know it was within the first year of your narration and it just gets better!!!
Any chance you’ll narrate the sequel? This is definitely one of my all time favorites, love the work ❤️
You have uhhhh one more error in your description I think…. 😅 corry, didn’t want to be that guy.
Corry 😂
Awesome story. I've heard it before but tgis is by far the absolute best
"Its just a prank bro"
The prank:
Drink whenever he says "David Fucking King".
I'm bout to vomit 🤢
i usually hate that word in creepy pastas cuz it’s corny as hell but i kinda liked how he repeated it with “david fucking king” once everything went to shit
Like other comment on Borrasca David fucking King Jimmy Fucking Prescott classic.
My exact thoughts
Man I just woke up in the hospital from a serious case of alcohol poisoning. Why did you tell me to do that? Why did I listen to you?
Why is this not a movie? It would make an incredible thriller
because it would make too much money. itd be too successful. the world would implode
@@LieutenantLeatherNuts so true
The Game starring Michael Douglas.
Someone did & it was trash. Katie got replaced with a new character who is Zander’s sister meanwhile Clark completely nonexistent
@@makotohan166 what was it called???
I like how the intro is like "boredom is dangerous", as if everyone has that one friend who would go full sociopath on a dare.
Uh oh…….I think it might be Me 😂
@@DivineAdversity777 🤓
believe it or not, everyone has that friend.. if you don't...
well...
i hate to be the one to tell you...
@@maurovinicius5226I have no friends
@@DaniBummle wanna be mine?
This is such a classic and amazing story
its still incomplete if he just used the same story from the original video, the author made alot of updates.
@@seif9923 no this series is complete. that's the second series.
@@seif9923 I assume the original post was on reddit? Do you know the username so I can read the updates?
@@Manic_Memory u/Zandsand90
This was one of the first creepypastas I got obsessed with. New uploads were exciting days. Now I'm stuck on "tales from the gas station" waiting on MrCreepyPasta's vol. 4 audio book
FACTS
@@livvan1058 it's finally out and it's soo good!!
Yeah I’m ngl I found the gas station series just a BIT too silly. It was trying to be Mr_Outlaw too hard but it didn’t have that Mr_Outlaw PUNCH! You know?
Yeah I basically idolize Mr_Outlaw now and consider him the patron saint of nosleep 🤣 So now I’m moving on to all these timeless classics (That I LOVE) and just fantasizing about a new 6 hour long Mr_Outlaw story appearing on my feed 😂
I feel like this is how some affairs begin…Ig I might need to divorce…with stories?…maybe? But I ain’t leaving til Big Brother tries to stop me!
So lets listen to this story about this dude’s friend suddenly going PSYCHO at the drop of a pin lol I can relate :/
"David... fucking... King" I absolutely love this creepypasta. This one and PenPal are what started my love for them. Its hard to find them written like this these days. If anyone has more suggestion, please do share!
For me it was the cabin in the woods or something like that the main monster was a skin walker there was a cult too
@@cyberfox7249In my opinion, stories with monsters or religious or supernatural elements aren't very scary because I don't think any of that stuff is real. Stuff like this where the monster is just an evil person are the most terrifying because they're rooted in reality.
Borrasca
are there anymore like this & penpal? penpal was amazing
Borrasca. It is, quite literally, the best creepypasta ever written. And it’s possibly the most disturbing. If you haven’t heard about it yet, it’s similar to this and PenPals and I recommend it wholeheartedly if you can stomach the material
This is my first time listening to this story...I absolutely love it. *spoiler alert *......... when Clark came in and tackled David toward the end, I was literally cheering out loud.
I STARTED SMACKING MY PAINTBRUSH ON THE TABLE AND CHEERING😂😂😂
I was loosing my mind I was so happy
I started screaming BEAT HIS ASS
How are you gonna put the spoiler alert less than a literal inch from the spoiler itself? You got pin head vision bruh
@@santbothonestly who does this, ruin the ending for everyone who reads this
Hands down one of the best suspense filled works you ever narrated
ever since I first found this, I find myself listening to this every other month for a week straight back to back 😭 it’s my comfort story
I'm barely halfway through and this gave me so much anxiety. I love it. Normally I'm into paranormal stuff, but this is RIVETING.
Question: Did this video inspire you to selfimprove and challenge yourself?
Because i unironically got some things to tell you and ways to expose if you do
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@@slevinchannel7589tell us pls
This is fantastic. This writer is wonderfully articulate and paints with great detail and leaves nothing to the imagination. I can see this as a movie easily. ty MCP for taking the time to narrate it.
This is the story that got me into creepypasta in the first place. such an amazing story
Borasca and Tales From The Gas Station. Both fkn GREAT
Edit: along with this one. I've listened multiple times
“Remember me, bitch?!” I screamed!!!!! That’s iconic!!!!
I can still remember listening to this story years ago and finally to listen to its entirety is just amazing
my favourite part is how zander was pushed into becoming a more driven and ambitious person by his best friend
I keep coming back to this. It's one of my favorites
I've listened to over 200 creepypastas over the last few months ever since I got a job that allows listening to earbuds at work. This is the absolute best I've heard so far!
What job is that?
It’s like a mix of the animes monster and death note. One of the best creepypastas I’ve ever heard!!!
Exactly what I thought lmaob
Classic story. This and Borrasca got me into creepypastas.
Same! Along with Tales From The Gas Station.
SAME.
@@sportsfanjw559BORASCA, TALES AT A GAS STATION AND THIS WERE MY FAV
@@Mattlak all three are gold. Along with "Accounts From A Lonely Broadcast Station"
Edit: which I think is slept on
This is the of my favourite old creepy pastas, can’t wait to re listen
I remember listening to this maybe 4 years ago? I was in a huge creepypasta storytelling phase and you were my favorite one to listen to. When I heard this one, I was ENTHRALLED. It's been my absolute favorite from the VERY MOMENT I read the title. I searched for it again just now so that I could relisten to it with my girlfriend this weekend. I love not only the story, but the way you narrate it is just so perfect. I'm stoked to see that you went back to this one and reuploaded it! I am SO EXCITED to listen to it again! Thank you for creating content and giving your beautiful voice and passion into these stories and videos. Cheers🫶
I can't sit through a one and a half hour movie, but you can bet I sat through this whole thing in one sitting.
Cringe
@@Penguinzero1you’re username is literally a moist critical fan account ya goofball grow up
I remember watching the complete edition back in the day. I only ever found out about this story through the original complete version, So it kind of feels nice for nostalgic reasons to re listen to the story after all these years
This was the very first story I listened to from you years and years ago. Definitely worth a relisten.
I cannot tell you how many times i came back to this story, definitely one of my favorites.
I love this story so much. I orriginally listened to it years ago, when I was little, and since then it'll pop into my mind occasionally. I could listen to it over & over.
The background (the one with the pencil specifically) is so nostalgic for me, and so is the voice reading it.
One of the best narrations I've heard. You sir have become my favorite.
Those who say 'I want a movie of this story' clearly have a lot of misplaced faith in Hollywood. (This was basically the top comment of the original upload, thanks MCP for reuploading it where the chapter doesn't loop)
Inspirational Story, huh?
Question: Did this video inspire you to selfimprove and challenge yourself?
Because i unironically got some things to tell you and ways to expose if you do
finnish, russian or german studios could 100% make a killer movie based on this. not hollywood tho
i absolutely love this, series, it is by far one of the best creepy pastas ive ever heard, i always end up coming back to it when i get bored of watching other videos
wow, i remember listening to this a couple years ago. such an amazing production and story
Love going back to this from time to time 💤
the story has been continued, i love this story more than any other story ive ever heard and i would love for you to finish the story!
This was insanely good! Holy crap, I was not expecting that level of intensity at all!
"David, f***ing, King."
I haven't actually seen this one before so I'm happy I got to see it! Thanks for the reupload!
This story is truly terrifying. I almost had to stop listening about half way through b/c it was just so real. No demons or supernatural things going on- that's why this is the scariest!
At one point this amazing trippy background graphic starts up in the video and its hypnotizing me lol I can’t look away…It’s showing me secrets humanity isn’t ready for…
Classic. I was listening to this last week, looking forward to the upload!
I love the people who talk about listening to this for the first time only a few years ago, i remember having to wait for MCP to upload waiting day by day by far one of the best storys hes done and will always be my favorite narrator. MCP ive been listening to you since you pretty much made your account, i use to be to young to be a join the Patreon page or buy your wifes tea when i came out but now i just have too much bills. As long as you post i will always listen. I dont thinks ive missed a story yet, ive never been fond of music but i can damn sure listen to you all day. Thank you for all of the years and dedication and stay spooky.
I love this story, one of the classics. Shout out to No End House
Such a good story. Ya know listening to these stories are the best for getting to sleep. Hope for more multi part series.
Alot of u say that but I don't think I COULD!! I get SOOO hung up on it id have to hear the end of every single story I start!! Lol
@@jessicaklosek9849 He's got such a soothing voice. It's hard not to fall asleep to him.
this is the first creepypasta I ever heard. I'm so excited to hear a new version.
Yooooo no way you revamped this that’s freakin awesome ima give it a listen later but it immediately gets a like, it’s a classic and one of my favorite stories!
I love this story. It’s one of the first I listened to in YT that really “stuck” with me, ya know? Great job!
Clark is the friend we all need
hands down the best story you've ever narrated imo
David King vs Light Yagami would be one hell of a battle
Can’t exactly explain why, but Xander and David’s dynamic reminds me of Light Yagami and L’s.
I haven't heard this creepypasta in easily 7 years. It's good to come back and listen to older pastas again
I've listed to your version of this more times than I can count! One of my favourites next to tales from the gas station, my property isn't normal, borrasca and stolen tongues.
Man
Creepy has the best stories to listen to at work
I just wanna say, I was there when you started reading these in individual parts and it was the most exciting thing to be there with everyone cheering the protag on and hating on David effing King, it's one of my favourite memories I have of when I was a teenager, thank you for bringing us this story ^u^
This is some real nostalgic stuff since this was one of my first creepypastas i listened to, so good
God this is one of my favorite stories. MrCreepypasta, you single-handedly got me back into creepy pastas. Thanks you endlessly for your content.
I remember listening to this and the friend living in an alternate world while grinding darksouls. Good times.
I've had the original completed series video on my sleep/long drive playlist for years, and I know where the error is but I still love it. Guess this new version will be put into rotation for the playlist of creepypastas I share with friends!
Where is it?
@@fauna5328 the playlist, or the error? The error is like 2/3 through the video if I remember right, I'm a bit foggy from a concussion right now
This has been hands down my favorite video Mr CP has ever done
My favorite CreepyPasta of all time. I come back to it at least once a year 😅
This is the first story I heard and I’ve been hooked ever since ❤
absolute classic, this is like the fourth or fifth time i'm hearing this and it hasn't gotten old
I think I have listened at least 10 times…you are so great at telling a story!
I remember listening to this one when it first came out, it’s still one of my favorites :3
This was one of the first stories that I listened to from you and it’s on my top 5. I was hooked from the beginning. I love all the stories but I especially love the really long ones.
What are your other favorites? I want to see if I've already listened to them. Thanks. Already listened to Gastion, Broadcast station, my house isn't normal, Borrasca.
@@brenda33181bs the thing in my basement is getting better at mimicking people, stolen tongues, and the showers are some of my favorites
What’s your top 5?
I have been listening to Mr.Creepypasta for a very long time and I have to say hands down this story is my new favorite. Holy fuck. Amazing.
happy to see this get cleaned up. this is by far my favorite creepy pasta or story as a whole. i also like the bar that serves drinks for stories, lonely broadcast, tales of the gas station, my property isnt normal, and the thing in the basement is getting better at mimicking people for anyone else that wants some good ones
Can you like my comment so I can come back to this please !
Thanks for sharing!!
Love all you've mentioned!
This would be great as a movie! David played by Ryan Reynolds and Xander played by Joseph Gordon-Levitt.
There was a movie years ago (1990) with a very similar idea. It's called "Bad Influence", with Rob Lowe and James Spader. I highly recommend it! It's crazy
I agree it would be a scary movie
For me, i feel like it fits more if the Main character will be played by jake gylenhal (sorry if my spelling is incorrect) and the best friend be played by dude who played pennywise lmao
@@Elizabeth-si6bdahhhh yessss the pennywise actor would be a GREAT bad guy in this story!!! Bill Skarsgard!
Much too old for both. They are supposed to be just out of high school.
This is my all time favorite creepy pasta. I love the voice acting, and the story itself is a great one.
I remember hearing this story years ago, it’s so good
GREAT STORY!!!!! This NEEDS to be a movie
Yea boys and girls this here one is haha funny and finely spun into an all time favorite I love. " David Fuckin' King! "
This is honestly one of my favorite stories!! Thank you for fixing it
Great story!! Had to listen to the whole thing in one shot.
I remember loving the heck out of this one, it's one of those stories that just stuck with me~
I haven't heard this in like years it brought back some nice memories
This is my third time listening to this and Im still shocked as much as before
That "Remember me bitch" line, in the greatest fucking way, gave me chills
This is my third time listening to this video and I love the story from start to finish every time
its a classiccc
This story rules. It's riveting. Well done to writer and narrator.
This is a classic!! Love this story.
ty for this. i think this story was what really got me into creepypasta readings. thank u mcp
Most revolutionary Creepypasta ever written.
This is Handa down on of my favorites, amazing story .
This is the first ever creepy pasta that I listened to and I’m so excited to listen again!
Great story I am glad to hear it again
David's not insane. He's *pure evil*
Anyone else suspicious that Katie was in on it? The SSN number and what not? He killed anyone, including his own mother but not her & he had her for over a year? The fact he'd been working on this for years etc. I definitely think he had more than that one goon for help.
2:16:15 CLARKK IM LOSING MY MIND my reaction to this was amazing the joy i feel rn
Question: Did this video inspire you to selfimprove and challenge yourself?
Because i unironically got some things to tell you if you do
Holy sh-t I’m not even half way done with this story and I’m already hooked
It’s weird, I’ve been listening to this story constantly for the past few days and when I searched for this story today to listen to it again, I see this improved re-upload.
Hhhoooolyyyyy, this was a good one. I woke up to it when it got the the part when Zan was wonder and why someone would do this and decided to keep liatening. Thats how you tell a dang story. And, of course, thats how you READ a dang story. Thanks, and keep up the good work.
Wow. Just wow. Had me from beginning to end every word.
hahaha the errors are FIXED! regardless mcp, you are a legend and this is one of my fave stories narrated by you!!
1:46:26 right, also I hope that we remember that cop cars typically have dash cams that would show everything that happened in and out of the car, and most likely catch some if not all of this little plan David is hatching. Also, do armored trucks not also have cameras? Does David own the company now or something? And omg there are no door handles inside the backseat of a cop car, I'm so annoyed 😅
I've been in the back of a cop car. Some of them do, in fact, have handles on the inside of the back doors. I wouldn't be surprised if it was the majority of them. They just only open from the outside.
@@who_the_fuck_is_riley5813 I live in Houston. Our cop cars don't have handles 🤣 maybe older ones (like, really old) but the SUVs, the trucks, the Chevy's? Naw.
@@breeexmortis that could definitely be a factor. I live in a small town in Appalachia
This is a classic and a thriller , David F**king King truly made me hate him . I heard there was a sequel dunno where they could have taken a sequel considering unless David F**king King somehow survived
Pretty sure it's the same story from Clark's perspective. Not 100% sure on that though
Man, this is certainly up there in my top 5. Up there with the Barroska series, Tales From the Gas Station, and My Property Isn't Normal.
The return of the myth, the legend David "Fucking" King
I really wish someone would narrate the sequel.
Wait there's a sequel?
There’s a SEQUEL?!?!?!?
Clever... Bravo.....my friend..... drop a plausable idea, True or false, is no matter, just getting them stirred up is enough.. PS now that I've stroked your ego and feigned sufficiently thar I'm impressed by your brilliant intelligence....is there really a sequel? I mean I don't give a shlt ... uh...im asking for a friend... yeah, You know whatever.................................................please tell me I'm dying here...... that wasn't me ... I swear
Is there really a sequel!?
“I don’t need friends. They disappoint me.”