Okay, first off [ no hate btw] you should really put subtitles in the first 20s of the vid. everyone is just going to click off and get bored next you should really try to sum up what you're saying also at 20s-32s try to add there pfp's or Roblox avatars and add some pop sounds. next add more cuts and try to sound like every yt kids channel lol there's a lot more I have to say but I think you can just learn that stuff last thing though HOLY BRO CHANGE THE THUMBNAIL okok I can show you what i mean but [no hate] in short the vid is really basic and it's not great anyways have a good day!
Yooo epic gameplay! *releases sigma sauce all over the screen*
Bro ur sense of hearing is very good
@@susxi3102 sarcasm right?
WAIT
UR THAT GUY THAT DONATED 50
@@FumblingDoritoyup
@@FumblingDoritonot sarcasm because even I couldn’t hear it
Okay, first off [ no hate btw] you should really put subtitles in the first 20s of the vid. everyone is just going to click off and get bored next you should really try to sum up what you're saying also at 20s-32s try to add there pfp's or Roblox avatars and add some pop sounds. next add more cuts and try to sound like every yt kids channel lol there's a lot more I have to say but I think you can just learn that stuff last thing though HOLY BRO CHANGE THE THUMBNAIL okok I can show you what i mean but [no hate] in short the vid is really basic and it's not great anyways have a good day!
thx for the tips!
@@FumblingDorito ofc [this is my main btw]
@@FumblingDorito also srry for being a bit toxic lol, there's a lot of easy things you could do to make it better so i just wanted to say it
@@FumblingDorito oh i mad 2 videos tell me what you think