7 Pieces of Bad Writing Advice

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  • Опубликовано: 15 ноя 2024

Комментарии • 26

  • @alexiswolfe677
    @alexiswolfe677 Год назад +24

    once I learn how to read and write I will implement these ideas , thank you sir!

  • @joshuamininger7745
    @joshuamininger7745 Год назад +5

    Dude, love your insights and humor! Keep creating!

  • @highground5759
    @highground5759 Год назад +7

    Your videos always help me think a little better - thank you for making them!

  • @onemoreminute0543
    @onemoreminute0543 Год назад +2

    The 3 best lessons I've learnt while writing my novel:
    3) A characters purpose comes before their personality
    2) Study structure
    1) Actually write the story that YOU want to write

  • @Arnaere
    @Arnaere Месяц назад +1

    "Complete Chronicles of Conan" over his shoulder? Liked, subscribed.

  • @yayo3879
    @yayo3879 4 месяца назад +1

    You are right that flashbacks are so overused. That's why I think you should read Higurashi: When They Cry. Backstories are very important. But they're so much better when you learn things not immediately. When you learn things after the fact. When your perspective is shifted so you can now begin to understand somebody who, from your first assessment, doesn't deserve being understood at all...

  • @TheFBIorange
    @TheFBIorange Год назад +2

    Just letting you know, you've inspired me to try writing, even though I just clicked on your channel for that sweet, sweet star wars analysis

  • @HeyNimbus
    @HeyNimbus Год назад +8

    Can you make a Character Arc video about Harry Potter and Lord of The Rings movies just like Star Wars? :)

  • @georgiabullbrook4049
    @georgiabullbrook4049 Год назад +5

    What is that painting of the weird dog thing in the background?

    • @josh_from_xboxlive
      @josh_from_xboxlive  Год назад +8

      It's a painting of a weird dog thing in the background. Hope that clears it up!

  • @BoldAnBrash
    @BoldAnBrash Год назад +2

    Loving these videos, would love to hear you’re book recommendations for new aspiring writers

  • @gonaye1
    @gonaye1 Месяц назад +1

    “All words are made up.” Thor Odinson’s (surprisingly profound) response to Rocket Racoon in Avengers Infinity War
    In retrospect, this comment had almost nothing to do with the video, but I’d still like to leave it here, lol

  • @hian
    @hian Год назад +2

    FFX music. Now I know you're a true man of culture.

    • @josh_from_xboxlive
      @josh_from_xboxlive  Год назад +2

      One day I'll do a FFX video essay.

    • @hian
      @hian Год назад +1

      @@josh_from_xboxlive
      That would be amazing. JRPGs have been just as much of a treasure-trove of storytelling for me as LoTR and Star Wars was in my formative years - whether it be classics like the older FFs(especially 4-10), Xenogears, Chrono Trigger or the Suikoden series. There's a lot of resonant and visceral stories to grab a hold of in that space.

  • @thattroy
    @thattroy Год назад +2

    This (and your logline) video are great, especially the latter because I’m at that point in development and I HATE IT! I almost want to pay someone else to write that part. But your advice was really sound and helpful, so much appreciated! I liked and subscribed and you can’t stop me.

  • @yayo3879
    @yayo3879 4 месяца назад +1

    People should listen to Gene Wolfe, who said you should just sit down and write something to completion, it's easy to get bogged down in outlining and planning and so on.
    In addition, the medium you are writing within must be exploited. A lot of what I was writing in my youth, it reads like a screenplay, because I was so used to watching movies, anime, TV shows and so on. My natural storytelling flow leaned towards painting visual scenes within the reader's psychotheater.
    But if you're writing a novel, it's crucial to exploit the level of intimacy between reader and narrator - or protagonist - as you can't really be in someone's head as much as you could in, for example, a film.
    I am writing a visual novel now, from a first-person perspective, which will exploit the presence of both visual and audio elements played in relation to the text to the fullest I can envision.
    Sincerity is most important. Write with sincerity. Sincerity is the future.

  • @yayo3879
    @yayo3879 4 месяца назад +1

    You should read Higurashi: When They Cry.

  • @Parttimepoet22
    @Parttimepoet22 Год назад +2

    I can tell from your Annakin Skywalker video you know what you’re talking about

  • @kaineshigaraki5253
    @kaineshigaraki5253 Год назад +1

    With all due respect, I feel like your notes are basically expounding on the common misconceptions of the advice given.
    Example, write what you know does mean, write about things your familiar with, and write about things you researched.
    I’d say, always research what you write. Our minds easily misremembering things [>

  • @brookebrekke
    @brookebrekke Год назад

    'Promosm'