Fixing RWBY | Volume 1 Remastered

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  • Опубликовано: 4 дек 2024

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  • @FlufLord
    @FlufLord 7 месяцев назад +208

    My favorite part is that you didn't change THAT much. You corrected a few mistakes, you embellished some scenes that needed it, you trimmed the fat where it was unneeded, and brought it all together to run more smoothly. It still FEELS like the show did, but better. This is really excellent, thank you for your hard work.

  • @Yojack872
    @Yojack872 9 месяцев назад +644

    Wait a second you gave ruby and blake scenes together
    That's illegal 😂

    • @arnowisp6244
      @arnowisp6244 6 месяцев назад +12

      ✂️

    • @VAspooky.
      @VAspooky. 4 месяца назад +8

      @@arnowisp6244 That's funny as hell lmaoo

    • @oreo-postraphe
      @oreo-postraphe 3 месяца назад

      ​@@arnowisp6244👤

    • @snoww3771
      @snoww3771 Месяц назад +3

      Maybe illegal, but good for team building :) And for expanding on their friendship.

    • @BookWyrmOnAString
      @BookWyrmOnAString Месяц назад +4

      "i love books"

  • @bromo8874
    @bromo8874 9 месяцев назад +316

    Lmao at Roman dodging Ruby's scythe with the Michael Jackson lean

    • @arnowisp6244
      @arnowisp6244 6 месяцев назад +26

      Doesn't really work if he's able to beat Ruby. Roman was always shown to be a Smarter Criminal. Preferring to Evade and escape rather than Fight. If anything he's never seen fighting a Full Huntsmen. Only Students and even then, while capable of keeping up, he's still pushed back.

    • @MommyKhaos
      @MommyKhaos 5 месяцев назад +16

      ​@@arnowisp6244TBF he still IS winning. Never letting an opponent land a hit is still winning

    • @arnowisp6244
      @arnowisp6244 5 месяцев назад +7

      @@MommyKhaos It's not winning unless your goal is to escape. And if you are trapped we know Roman ain't winning as Freshmen Students are already a Challenge for him.

    • @Smithers-xp2dc
      @Smithers-xp2dc 5 месяцев назад +11

      Ruby: Stand still!! *Swings Crescent Rose*
      Roman: *does the lean* He-He!!!

    • @quest9905
      @quest9905 3 месяца назад +2

      ​@@arnowisp6244tbf, for a guy without aura thats still super impressive.

  • @zeroconnect5910
    @zeroconnect5910 9 месяцев назад +324

    The one thing that makes me like Fixing RWBY?
    I really like how you expanded on Yang's insecurities relating to leaving Ruby Rose alone.

    • @Thatonedud-i8n
      @Thatonedud-i8n 7 месяцев назад +2

      Oh shut up

    • @personwitharat9039
      @personwitharat9039 6 месяцев назад

      ​@jameslawrence8007 nah u shut yo ass up and go watch ur freaky ass Playlist

    • @Eterco
      @Eterco 5 месяцев назад +18

      @@Thatonedud-i8n I'm going to assume there was some bot or something?

    • @DogeickBateman
      @DogeickBateman 2 месяца назад

      @@Eterco More like a Yangophile

  • @zaragachizanparo4948
    @zaragachizanparo4948 9 месяцев назад +669

    Who's here after the news of Rooster Teeth's shut down?

    • @peanutmuttplays104
      @peanutmuttplays104 9 месяцев назад +23

      Yeah.

    • @V2011F
      @V2011F 8 месяцев назад +47

      Got a recommendation, and i realise that this and every other fan work would have been far better than most of what RWBY actually gave us.

    • @gfditto3390
      @gfditto3390 8 месяцев назад +25

      I am. And I’m truly happy with what RT gave us, but I love these rewrites as a sort of fanfic

    • @electroburstx3093
      @electroburstx3093 8 месяцев назад

      Good For Rooster Teeth, or as I called it Rotten Teeth.
      Rooster Teeth done Monty Oum dirty, of all Monty Oum's work, lesson, friendship and, Creativity are all for nothing, when Rooster Teeth use Monty Oum's name as a tool and throw all Monty's work in the trash.
      Who Rooster Teeth are such good friends.
      No FUCK THAT, ROOSTER TEETH ARE ROTTEN PEOPLE. Especially running people's dreams like the creator of Nomad of Nowhere and Vic Mignogna work on Dragon ball z and maybe the Dragon Soul soul, and then Rooster Teeth framed these guys of a lie that Vic and Nomad creator never did.
      Rooster Teeth Are Rotten😡
      Let Rooster Teeth DIE!

    • @themystic115demon6
      @themystic115demon6 8 месяцев назад +9

      I now cam only get my rwby fix from rewrites like this.

  • @skyslasher2297
    @skyslasher2297 8 месяцев назад +71

    I can't believe I hadn't mentioned this before but I do really like the contrast this Volume where Team JNPR started vibeing must faster than team RWBY did.

  • @WhyAllTheGoodNamesTaken
    @WhyAllTheGoodNamesTaken 9 месяцев назад +162

    You know this feels like a solid fanfiction in audiobook form and I really appreciate that.

  • @Brutalyte616
    @Brutalyte616 9 месяцев назад +322

    If I had to guess, the in-universe justification as to why Ursa are attracted to the smell of honey and sap is probably because they've learned that humans like the stuff and that if they hang around it they're more likely to find humans. By that token, Ursa are also probably attracted to the smell of food and garbage, not because they actually want to eat it, but because of the aforementioned human association.
    So Ursa are basically the raccoons of the Grimm world.

    • @shadowclaw7210
      @shadowclaw7210 8 месяцев назад +37

      Honestly actually nice explanation.

    • @theredhood7879
      @theredhood7879 4 месяца назад +12

      Great, now I'm picturing little raccoons but instead of their usual bandit masks, they have Grimm masks. That would be the cutest thing ever 🤣🤣

    • @undeathghost5627
      @undeathghost5627 4 месяца назад +10

      I acknowledge that this was a plot hole technically. But Rooster Teeth kind of already implemented the fix without talking about it. It's that Ursa, like all grimm, are attracted to negative emotion. Cardin is an angry asshole the entire scene. Thats what draws the Ursa in to start. When it arrives and he cowers, its the fear drawing it attack Cardin as opposed to Jaune who is nervous but not outright fearing for his life (as much as Cardin). Like yeah... the sap thing is still there. But like... the scene is easily reinterpreted with the lore we have now.

    • @Brutalyte616
      @Brutalyte616 4 месяца назад +10

      @@undeathghost5627 Yes, but then it could be any Grimm. Establishing that Ursa are drawn to the smell of sap and honey gives them more character, much like Beowolves hunting in packs or Nevermores avoiding combat unless they are large enough or have numbers on their side is further characterization of specific Grimm species and sub-species.
      In other words, it makes their animal forms more than just random window-dressing for pseudo-biological killing machines.

  • @Ccthesergal
    @Ccthesergal 9 месяцев назад +76

    oz "ive made more mistakes then any man woman and child on this planet" i absolutly love that line

    • @quest9905
      @quest9905 3 месяца назад +1

      Oz in general is a very interesting character to play with. RWBY actually has a ton of characters that have alot of potential that isn't always fully realized.

    • @XFizzlepop-Berrytwist
      @XFizzlepop-Berrytwist 2 месяца назад +1

      @@quest9905
      Sienna….

    • @quest9905
      @quest9905 2 месяца назад +1

      @@XFizzlepop-Berrytwist OH yeah most definitely. Honestly the White Famg in general git done a bad hand by the show.

    • @XFizzlepop-Berrytwist
      @XFizzlepop-Berrytwist 2 месяца назад +1

      @@quest9905
      Sure, I mean I wish we had gotten more of it, but understandably it wasnt exactly going to be a main focus.
      I can fill in some gaps on things, and I can sympathize with Sienna and some of those attracted to the Fang, hoping to make a difference.
      For example in the Adam short, I dont have a problem with Adam killing, they kinda make it out to be a bad thing, but those humans would have had zero problem killing them.
      Its a kind of Problem I do feel like they wrote Ghira and Blake as being too peaceful in my opinion, that pacifism is somehow going to fix things?
      Maybe its just my personal opinion but I’d have liked to see a bit more on the subject of course, just wasnt going to happen. I’m the type that does think sometimes violence is needed.
      As the saying goes, speak softly, but carry a big stick.

  • @BobBob-up8fz
    @BobBob-up8fz 8 месяцев назад +78

    As a casual viewer of both, Red vs. blue and Rwby. I was sad at the news about RT.
    But being honest. The writing was on the wall for a while.
    I hope the Fixing Rwby continues. As it holds the passion and potential, Rwby proper once had.
    Monty would be pleased to see the strongest part of his creation. Is the love from the fan base.
    So to Celtic and all those who helped on Fixing Rwby.
    Thank you. You're all legends. 😊

    • @Thatonedud-i8n
      @Thatonedud-i8n 7 месяцев назад

      Wrong

    • @BobBob-up8fz
      @BobBob-up8fz 7 месяцев назад +4

      @@Thatonedud-i8n do some research.

    • @harbour2118
      @harbour2118 3 месяца назад

      ​@@BobBob-up8fz its either a bot, a troll, or a diehard fan

  • @skyrogue1977
    @skyrogue1977 9 месяцев назад +230

    In anticipation of the Volume 7 redo, let’s start some rumors about the AceOps.
    I say, Marrow has several unpaid parking tickets.
    Harriet is super into Boy Bands.
    Vine is a kleptomaniac, Elm worships John Cena religiously, and Clover switches peoples mail at the office as a goof.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +64

      Those are good
      I had one where Clover was banned from every casino in the kingdom.

    • @francisyan542
      @francisyan542 9 месяцев назад +25

      @@EthanIlchertThat works much better, I was thinking Harriet’s been involved in at the very least 5 Hit-and-Runs and Elm’s totaled at least one warship

    • @story_appreciator6666
      @story_appreciator6666 8 месяцев назад +2

      Could put Drax in there with John Cena.

    • @sunjour
      @sunjour 7 месяцев назад +1

      Vine's also homophobic... He once threw a molten honey bun at my head when I was going to see my friends up in Atlas. 😔🤕

  • @NoHandle44
    @NoHandle44 8 месяцев назад +85

    I totally thought that Ruby was gonna have the emotionless type personality when I first saw the trailer after the season 10 finale of RvB.

    • @karissamacgregor7449
      @karissamacgregor7449 7 месяцев назад +14

      I'm glad I'm not the only one!
      In fact. I actually really don't like Ruby's canon personality.
      I always thought she would do better as a shy quiet girl who let all her fighting do the talking. Still could be totally awkward with others, but with alot less of the rambunctiousness. Always thought it would work better that way.
      And I always wanted blake to be a more snarkt sarcasti

  • @powerofanime1
    @powerofanime1 9 месяцев назад +134

    Orange hair is called red in real life all the time, since an actual, crimson red is all but impossible. Honestly, Pyrrha's hair is weirder than Nora's.

    • @JohnMasterCheif
      @JohnMasterCheif 7 месяцев назад +18

      I’d say Ruby’s is the weirdest. It goes from black to red

    • @Thatonedud-i8n
      @Thatonedud-i8n 7 месяцев назад

      No jackass orange hair is either called a carrot top or a ginger

    • @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl
      @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl 5 месяцев назад +4

      ​@@Thatonedud-i8n Calm down it's called all of those and red

    • @chickenmaster0636
      @chickenmaster0636 4 месяца назад +4

      Doesn’t Ren have a streak of pink?

    • @powerofanime1
      @powerofanime1 4 месяца назад +3

      @@chickenmaster0636 Yup

  • @leoncritiques
    @leoncritiques 9 месяцев назад +143

    One thing I greatly appreciate about Fixing RWBY is that you made sure to keep all of the well written stuff that Kerry and Miles had written in Volume 1, with only minor recontextualizations here and there to smooth out the rough edges. It’s a great sign of your own writing and editing abilities. You know what needs improvement and what doesn’t, and you let the good writing of the Volume shine through. Also, the art looks amazing, every artist knocked it out of the park with this one. Great work all around from you and the Sketchy Huntsmen!
    I’m very interested to see what changes you make in FRWBY Volume 7, since that Volume is, comparatively, pretty solid in terms of writing. It’s really Ruby’s decisions early in the Volume, as well as the finale where things begin rolling downhill. And changing the decisions Team RWBY make early in the Volume could drastically change the rest of the Atlas Arc. Can’t wait to see it happen!

    • @clarehidalgo
      @clarehidalgo 8 месяцев назад +11

      Miles and Kerry write fairly good material under proper supervision, too bad the less oversight they had the more messy their work got

    • @olserknam
      @olserknam 8 месяцев назад +1

      I was agreeing with you about V7 having decent writing but then you mention the "decision early in", by which you likely mean RWBY not telling the truth to Ironwood. And then you mention it "affecting the rest of the Atlas arc". Are you one of those people who believe that their eventual argument was caused by this? This is objectively wrong because they told him the truth several episodes before the argument happened. This entire chain of events before V8 is pretty well-written, but it's probably the most misconstrued part of the entire series because the discourse is taken over by mad Ironwood fans who are angry at any notion of their favorite character being treated with any scrutiny and not as the holy Jesus who is never in the wrong.
      Going by your post, I am going to assume you probably think RWBY not telling Ironwood the truth is hypocritical after being angry at Oz in V6. But do you remember the reason they didn't trust Ironwood? The fact that Ironwood himself was withholding the truth from his populace and willing to neglect their opinion of him, which was a slippery slope and eventually led to him making the decisions he did? Tell me: would it not have been hypocritical if RWBY were mad at Ozpin for withholding the truth, but then gave Ironwood a pass on that?

    • @thatonejoey1847
      @thatonejoey1847 6 месяцев назад +2

      ​@@clarehidalgo all artist and creatives need a smidge of supervision and editorial intervention to be really bring out the best in them.
      The chunin exams in naruto is an example of editorial oversight making a better piece of work, of course the opposite can happen

  • @usonohoshi6165
    @usonohoshi6165 9 месяцев назад +50

    It's honestly fun seeing so many people loving RWBY so much they are all making stuff like this. And everyone has their different take on it.
    But this one is my favorite just because it's the first one I encountered.🥰

  • @shelbybayer200
    @shelbybayer200 9 месяцев назад +92

    At the very least, The Ice Queendom anime made Weiss's trailer more into the actual story making it a thing her father made her do to prove herself

    • @quest9905
      @quest9905 3 месяца назад +6

      Honestly that's been the general fannon interpretation that I've seen for years. (It was so prevalent that I was super surprised to find it wasn't stated in the show)

  • @tudoraragornofgreyscot8482
    @tudoraragornofgreyscot8482 10 месяцев назад +146

    Can’t wait for Volume 7

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +16

      Same I really hope we get to see more of Atlas and see this version of Ironwood done better than in the show.

    • @matthewharner1744
      @matthewharner1744 9 месяцев назад +11

      After seeing the absolute fix up that vol 5 got, I am absolutely hyped for it

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +2

      @@matthewharner1744 Anything specific your anticipating to see in FRWBY?

    • @jonahwilliams1331
      @jonahwilliams1331 9 месяцев назад +10

      @@EthanIlchertwhat I’m most looking forward too (aside from the Atlas redesigns) is what will be done with Blake. FRWBY clearly hasn’t been against giving her original plot lines (the majority of her arc in Fixing V5), and she doesn’t really get to do much in canon V7. Although I could understand them having Blake take a bit of a backseat given she’s been a major point of focus in the last few Fixing Volumes, more so that she even was in canon. But if she does take a backseat, I’d be curious to see how her relationship with the whole cast develops, especially with Ruby and Yang.
      And obviously I’m extremely excited to see more hopefully being done with Weiss and her family, since in canon it felt like we barely scratched the surface.

    • @EthanIlchert
      @EthanIlchert 9 месяцев назад +6

      @@jonahwilliams1331 I can definitely see Blake having some moments like with Marrow and the Faunus in Mantle. But I definitely can see this as a Weiss focused arc where she has to deal with her family and Jacques being a more important antagonist.
      And I also home to see more of the elitist and ultra nationalist side of Atlas and how Ironwood deals with that.

  • @devilmayrise4963
    @devilmayrise4963 8 месяцев назад +19

    24:33 Can we talk about the OG FF7 Graphic designs of all the characters here? It's kinda hilarious to see.
    45:52 Weiss is an Elf now. 😂

  • @LightingbladeShen
    @LightingbladeShen 9 месяцев назад +51

    The endevour that kickstarted my return for a series i once loved.
    You might get tired of hearing it over and over again, Raymond, but I just can't thank you enough.
    And once more give you a thanks for giving me the push to do my own take on this 'what if' rwby content, which you also helped inspire.

  • @Sgthalo
    @Sgthalo 9 месяцев назад +18

    Said this in the live stream when it premiered but the use of coffe as a mentor squad rather than a one off feels a better use of them and lets us get to know them more. And it makes the drop off scene when the grim are attacking the city before tournament cooler in my head. Can imagine coffe going "Well crap....looks like they need our help again. Lets get going boys and girls." then the rest of the scene goes out as normal. Having some banter between the teams as coffe gives them some pointers while both teams and Jaunes team deal with the grim.

  • @themanoverheaven9711
    @themanoverheaven9711 3 месяца назад +5

    I love how red trailer is literally unchanged, because it perfectly describes ruby.

  • @estavel117
    @estavel117 8 месяцев назад +20

    I feel like if DillonGoo does manage to acquire RWBY from Rooster Teeth (still haven’t heard any developments on that) y’all should work together and make the show 100% better… project would take forever, sure, but then RWBY could get the love & sincerity it deserves as a franchise

    • @dc7981
      @dc7981 6 месяцев назад

      I hope he does.
      I hope he buys it, gets it funded, and runs it into the ground. I want to see the obnoxious, cancerous fandom come to hate this dreck - not as much as I do, but close. Only when the series reaches suck levels heretofore never witnessed, leading to it getting cancelled a second time, and its fans become physically ill at the mere thought of RWBY, will I truly be satisfied.

    • @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl
      @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl 5 месяцев назад +1

      ​@@dc7981you can just not watch the show mate. I only watched Celtic phoenix's videos so I'm not even a fan btw.

  • @Jane_8319
    @Jane_8319 9 месяцев назад +70

    I know this was remastered, but some of the changes Ice Queendom did to episode I, where we see Tai and other adults earlier on, we real improvements.

  • @snoww3771
    @snoww3771 Месяц назад +3

    After more thought, a few comments:
    1. When Coco orders Weiss to do push-ups, Weiss should be able to do them easily. Same with all the students. They are supposed to be strong, yes?
    2. In the Forever Fall Forest, when Ruby takes charge of counter-attacking the Ursa, she should have asked Jaune to be theone to body slam the Ursa. Because: (a) delegation, (b) not showing off and (c) Jauna is much bigger, heavier than she and has a shield. Also, this will provide some of the victory he had in the original (though Ruby doesn't know he needs the victory).
    3. I would think that Weiss would have had the sense to clam down before storming into Ospin's office and exploding at him. After all, she's already faced discipline from him, before. Ospin could reply about Blake as he did, then mention he has noticed that Weiss is still having problems with Ruby, then continue on about Ruby's improvement and Weiss' attitude causing friction.

  • @jonahwilliams1331
    @jonahwilliams1331 9 месяцев назад +20

    This was a great evolution of the original Fixing Volume 1. Not only was the art amazing to see, but it was also great to see the elaboration on lots of plot beats and characterization. Can’t wait for whatever comes next.

  • @Yojack872
    @Yojack872 8 месяцев назад +80

    I nearly forgot that Sun was cut out lullll - almost like his screentime wasn't needed.

    • @ervinfalcon2728
      @ervinfalcon2728 7 месяцев назад +2

      dang i remember

    • @keona5560
      @keona5560 7 месяцев назад +16

      I actually like Sun though :(

    • @Greenst4rX
      @Greenst4rX 6 месяцев назад +3

      ​@@keona5560 probably be in vol.2 or smh

    • @lordcooler1687
      @lordcooler1687 4 месяца назад +4

      Yeah his introduction is moved to season 2

    • @marcusclark1339
      @marcusclark1339 4 месяца назад +2

      it was, far more than bumblebee's for sure

  • @Chaosconetic
    @Chaosconetic 9 месяцев назад +18

    I enjoyed this quite a lot. It keeps fairly faithful to the originals but makes it flow a lot more smoothly.
    I commend your efforts, Lord Phoenix. The artists too produced some very good work.

  • @ToonBoom788
    @ToonBoom788 3 месяца назад +3

    1:24:22 That has to be the funniest introduction to a character I have ever seen. Like imagine you met you best friend literally in pieces and they still bring in a cheery greeting as just a head and then puts themself back together

  • @r.babylon2885
    @r.babylon2885 7 месяцев назад +16

    I think Blake's weapon is modeled after the kusurigama. It's a small scythe with a weighted chain at the end. So, I guess they took that base outline, swapped the chain out for an elastic ribbon, and made the scythe a short sword that is also a gun.

  • @faebees5793
    @faebees5793 8 месяцев назад +18

    I find it a bit weird that the animals in the initiation forest would attack students if this isnt the first initiation *in* the forest, considering that they'd probably learn to equate humans with danger, so I'd personally replace them with maskless young grimm. Otherwise a very solid rewrite though!

  • @jonyzauro5546
    @jonyzauro5546 3 месяца назад +5

    Cardin: *Bullies Velvet*
    Yatsuhashi: *Appears*
    Cardin: 💀

  • @Vassalago
    @Vassalago 7 месяцев назад +7

    im not sure how i feel about taking away jaunes win against the ursa but at the same time things worked themselves out

  • @osmanthuswinetastethesameasire
    @osmanthuswinetastethesameasire 6 месяцев назад +39

    i love how the tension between weiss and the team wasnt fixed fast like in the orig and how blake opens up to yang instead of sun

    • @nbewarwe
      @nbewarwe 6 месяцев назад +13

      1: better builds up the main character's relationship together
      2: actually makes Bumblebee look planned ahead rather than a last minute change

    • @marcusclark1339
      @marcusclark1339 4 месяца назад +3

      should of kept the sun one honestly

    • @osmanthuswinetastethesameasire
      @osmanthuswinetastethesameasire 4 месяца назад +4

      @@marcusclark1339 i think its better if their interaction is on the one where they went to blakes home. I'll be honest I like the original but since bumblebee is canon, I think in this reworks's version is more appropriate for the chemistry building part

    • @snoww3771
      @snoww3771 Месяц назад

      I agree that Blake opening up to Yang (and Yang suspecting the kitty ears) is better. While Sun is a fun character, he's really not needed. And I loved how Sun's line was given to Yang.
      As for Bumblebee being planned, the voice actresses for Blake and Yang certainly thought it was planned (as they said in an interview). Their performances had a nice build up of the chemistry between Blake and Yang. This new scene between them improves the start of their slow burn romance.

  • @Grag235
    @Grag235 8 месяцев назад +6

    This felt like I actually went on a journey, like a movie that I didn’t want to see end, this was so… AWESOME! I can’t wait to see if other Volume fixes get remastered to have the same style of polish as this one! I genuinely love watching this!

    • @Thatonedud-i8n
      @Thatonedud-i8n 7 месяцев назад

      Could you imagine if they had actually done any movies based on rwby, that would be a disaster

  • @robinng9326
    @robinng9326 5 месяцев назад +10

    23:11 so I guess Pomni made it out of the Circus and return back to become a Huntress. Am I the only one who notice that??? I’m cool with it btw

  • @sandvicheatfresh
    @sandvicheatfresh 9 месяцев назад +29

    I would love it if we could make a full animated series based off of the fixing rwby series

    • @story_appreciator6666
      @story_appreciator6666 8 месяцев назад +3

      Yes please
      Something like what Team four star did with their abridged series.

  • @NektisNoir
    @NektisNoir 9 месяцев назад +10

    Ok finally got around to watching this the other night and yo this is fucking phenomenal, Raymond
    Your writing along with the amazing art talent of the Sketchy Huntsmen breathed so much new life into Volume 1 and made this project such a joy to watch
    Sarias animatic of the White Rose fight especially made my jaw drop
    Great stuff. I initially fell off FRWBY around the time FRWBY Volume 3 came out. Just sorta forgot to get around to it. Definitely will now lmao.

  • @Amanda-zn7ox
    @Amanda-zn7ox 3 месяца назад +2

    I love it when there's a moment of softness to villains if their companions aren't well, and there's genuine care. It's definitely a good way to show why Neo hasn't been in the fights from the start.

  • @blueredlover1060
    @blueredlover1060 9 месяцев назад +10

    The Get Along shirt is gold.

  • @sunjour
    @sunjour 7 месяцев назад +5

    54:12 "Fuck it we ball! 🗣🗣🗣"

  • @peanutmuttplays104
    @peanutmuttplays104 9 месяцев назад +34

    Just here to cope.

    • @CelticPhoenix
      @CelticPhoenix  9 месяцев назад +26

      We're all grieving, we can all do it together.

    • @peanutmuttplays104
      @peanutmuttplays104 9 месяцев назад +16

      @@CelticPhoenix
      For what it’s worth, this is a great retelling.

  • @williambarnes5023
    @williambarnes5023 4 месяца назад +3

    In the scene where the instructor is talking about faunus senses, in the original version it's stated they can see in the dark. But this is a place where Blake actually has a second advantage as well. She points out that faunus with animal ear manifestations have quadraphonic hearing. Better than either animals and humans combined. Without admitting this early to being a faunus, Blake can point out that four-ear faunus can pinpoint someone's location and shape accurately just by their effect on ambient acoustics, even if they are holding their breath or their heart has stopped, by wiggling their animal ears to take in the different angles while they tilt their head and human ears for a baseline comparison.

  • @shadowhell8378
    @shadowhell8378 2 месяца назад +3

    Honestly, this is great it doesn't change the story. it's just cleans up the pacing and introductions.
    Having Cinder introduced in episode 1 but not play a part until the festival was weird here, it makes far more sense to have Roman be the big bad that then gets recruited by her and sets up Salem without saying it her as the "queen has pawns" line right before introducing Cinder could be referring to her.
    Not rushing the blake and weiss conflict makes it hit harder, and having yang find her and comfort her works better, then Sun, a random boy, she just meet that just happens to be a faunus as blake just had her trust broken a few months ago so she wouldn't trust someone she just meet and yang has been there with her for months slowly earning her trust.

  • @ark2532
    @ark2532 6 месяцев назад +3

    ospin being portraid as having wings and horns is briliant here even if maybe not intended 1:14:08

  • @KINGREXTDK
    @KINGREXTDK 4 месяца назад +5

    Ima be honest that does that wonders for the story

  • @TheUberAdventurer02
    @TheUberAdventurer02 3 месяца назад +3

    A friend told me that this exists, and as an ex-fan of the original RWBY, this is absolutely amazing! I'm a little disappointed that Coco wasn't replaced, but the Pomni cameo and too many improvements to summarize more than made up for it!

  • @tristtrist8549
    @tristtrist8549 7 месяцев назад +10

    Weiss is showing her inner Bakugo in this remaster.
    And Yang's a drunk...?

  • @frakspikes2619
    @frakspikes2619 9 месяцев назад +16

    your fixes are what i take as THE BEST way to try and write a RWBY Remaster
    although
    i'd still try to focus on helping the chars not fall down the "same character" rabbithole they did after Monty Oum died
    we need to remember the characters of team RWBY should follow their base architypes and traights, to some degree on to the later seasons
    and we must also recollect, that in the world of remnant, is a world where negative emotions summon REALLY dangerous monsters
    so this should be used as a character/personality guiding rule for the world and it's hunters
    "you can't be too negative all the time, least you threaten your teamate's and client's lives"
    (so this becomes the reason most teachers suspect why Ruby is the head of the protag team)
    still
    the chars of team RWBY should be kept as close to the base line characteristics of:
    º Ruby - Leader/Team Heart/Speedster (Archtype)
    - "Chaotic Prodigy" - Joy battery - Battle maniac (Personality)
    - Mecha-Chimera(mixed weapons) Expert (Added traight)
    º Yang - Muscle/Team Flirt/Streetwise (Architype)
    - Social butterfly (which would involve her friend groupe shoing up as often as possible, yet possibly becoming nothing more than C to D tier characters) - Chaotic Hero (Personality)
    - Thinks with Right Brain above all else (added traight)
    º Weiss - Lancer/Mage/Heir (Architype)
    - Princess - Highstrung (Personality)
    - Personal worth tied to how her familly vews her (added traight)
    º Blake - Brains/Rogue (Architype)
    - Bookworm - Catlike - Downner Debby(Personality)
    - Ex-Terrorist (with a racismXclassism focus) - Morally dubious, and stubborn about her stances and beleafs (added traights)
    figuring out how to write the characters to keep with these architypes, while still being true to these traights, AND remembering the setting in which they exist
    might prove to be dificult
    BUT
    would help them feel more real and stable
    while also, providing clear base guidelines for the writers to figure out how to work on developing the chars in a REASONABLE and BELEAVEBLE fashion
    or at least
    that's how i see it
    personally i feel that following these base rules and traights might get us a better "absorving" story
    mostly since the fun of fantasy and sci fi worlds lies in the immersion to this alternate reality
    and what helps there is a realistically written world and characters
    so
    keeping focus on that, might keep the story satisfying even in later seasons

    • @frakspikes2619
      @frakspikes2619 9 месяцев назад +5

      Also
      the "super powers"/grimm need a better explanation
      cuz rn: Semblance = bootleg Nen
      Grimm = Meanigless "Oh NO! A BIGGER MONSTER" type threat

    • @Thatonedud-i8n
      @Thatonedud-i8n 7 месяцев назад

      Goddamn dude shut up

    • @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl
      @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl 5 месяцев назад +2

      ​@jameslawrence8007 you can just not read the comment

  • @sofiadanesi2372
    @sofiadanesi2372 5 месяцев назад +7

    I've been a fan of RWBY since 2013. I watched volume 9 only out of commitment and have never seen other people's opinion on the series.
    I know it has major flaws, but it still brings back memories of happy times for me, so just like LoL lore it's a bit annoying to see such gorgeous worlds with so much potential just being ignored and poorly written (Arcane is good, but it retcon some things) so I'm still on the lookout with all the updates on both.
    But this video is a light of hope to see what the good part of the fandom thinks and would change to have the perfect story, I do this all the time especially with rwby.
    I hope this gives me a good time while I knit some projects!

  • @Ganjec
    @Ganjec 8 месяцев назад +12

    people get mad at the Jaune arc? Why? Monty had big plans for him. (although those plans never came to fruition)
    Also maybe the Ursa was drawn to the negative emotions that were surrounding Jaune and Cardin? Idk...

  • @brandito5480
    @brandito5480 4 месяца назад +2

    1:45:14 if Grimm are attracted to negative emotions you could argue it came because of Cardin’s teams anger towards jaune

  • @k9ready690
    @k9ready690 9 месяцев назад +6

    I always enjoy your story telling. It is looking like it will be up to people like you to give the Fandom a satisfactory conclusion to our beloved story. Thank you.

  • @ScottE-2
    @ScottE-2 9 месяцев назад +11

    Congratulations on remastering this one. I will have to give it and the rest of the stuff life has gotten in the way for a proper visit later. I can't wait to give a comparison between this and the original and what I personally wouldn't mind suggesting if at most are just some tweaks. I hope you and the crew are well Raymond, I can tell this was no easy feat and took quite a bit just to fine tune it.

  • @orangesoda4535
    @orangesoda4535 7 месяцев назад +7

    Holy shit. You actually made Weiss win a fight? Thats actually unheard of!

  • @mysteryxio9957
    @mysteryxio9957 9 месяцев назад +9

    Love getting the exposition for torchwick and neo

  • @binglee8000
    @binglee8000 9 месяцев назад +16

    Sweet the full movie version of FRWBY V1 remastered time to sort my fixing RWBY crack addiction woot woot! Here to the next one V2 remastered people yes!

  • @jonyzauro5546
    @jonyzauro5546 3 месяца назад +2

    43:22
    "Let them cook"

  • @TheH4LOChief
    @TheH4LOChief 7 месяцев назад +3

    It’s INSANE how much better this is than what we got

  • @CromwellEdonis
    @CromwellEdonis 8 месяцев назад +6

    As a rookie author. I can see a lot of things we could improve on RWBY, and especially add some relevance to the story lore, which RT avoided a lot. It's a pity that they didn't create a bigger power system and the potential stories on the fallen cities' backstories, like making more episodes for sub-arcs for those missions.
    I am fairly good when it comes to making action stories, and it's a pity that RWBY didn't expand the power system to make the fights more interesting.

  • @EMIYA_23
    @EMIYA_23 9 месяцев назад +4

    45:32 Hold up... Gambol shroud's a sword and also a glock with a Kusarigama mode, but instead of a chain it's a ribbon. I think that shouild be simple enough.

    • @CelticPhoenix
      @CelticPhoenix  9 месяцев назад +7

      Because that's _totally_ not as much a mouthful as
      Scythe Sniper Rifle
      Revolver Rapier
      Shotgun Cestus
      XD

    • @EMIYA_23
      @EMIYA_23 8 месяцев назад +2

      So... Glock Ninja tool?

  • @MysteryKar
    @MysteryKar 9 месяцев назад +15

    the emerald forest should just have weak juvenile grimm like those in the red trailer instead of regular animals

  • @zaandarbrow
    @zaandarbrow 7 месяцев назад +4

    i low key wanna make a rwby fan film one day , ozpin has so much depth in volume 1 more than we realize

  • @jeroenbok7892
    @jeroenbok7892 9 месяцев назад +5

    The passion that everyone puts into this project is always such a joy to watch ^_^

  • @akmon3490
    @akmon3490 3 дня назад +1

    14:18 yep, it's a wonder why evryone thought she broke that arm at the end of the tournament intentionally .
    A deviant that leveled a club and it's staff and SA the club owner has broken someone's arm in cold blood after she defeted them.
    Rly funny spin 🤣🤣

  • @Yojack872
    @Yojack872 9 месяцев назад +5

    I burst out laughing ep 13
    😂😂😂
    Yang is slapped away and lost her keys

  • @Ccthesergal
    @Ccthesergal 9 месяцев назад +5

    the ursa could be the agitation from cardnel and jaun and the negative emotions they have there

  • @LordEyepatch
    @LordEyepatch 9 месяцев назад +5

    When you guys do volume 7, will be waiting for the whole thing to drop so I can watch the entire volume

  • @arkauthor
    @arkauthor 9 месяцев назад +8

    I like to think Ice Queendom first 3 episodes helps with the set up of RWBY, but that just me.

    • @JBlank-n6i
      @JBlank-n6i 3 месяца назад

      No I think that too

  • @bachilles3285
    @bachilles3285 9 месяцев назад +2

    1:44:48-1:45:11 I think if you just headcanon that the sap that attracts the rapier wasps acts as the Grim equivalent of real-world honey, you should be able to get away with the ursa attack.

  • @girlsmode
    @girlsmode 6 месяцев назад +1

    I loved the production of this! The commissioned artwork was great and the used of hnk ost was hype. Ive been listening to a lot of rewrite type videos lately and most of them dont add visuals or music they way you have, and it makes the video rlly immersive

  • @hansolav5924
    @hansolav5924 8 месяцев назад +5

    A fantasy-world is not a world if it does not contain things that do not feature in the story. so the Dust-stuff is WORLDBUILDING. VERY important for any work of their intended scale.

    • @Awesome_Pichu
      @Awesome_Pichu 7 месяцев назад +4

      But in the end, it doesn't really amount to anything since they drop the idea and start focusing on the weird mythology and magic of the old world

    • @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl
      @lalalalalalalalalala-js5xl 5 месяцев назад +1

      ​@@Awesome_Pichuit adds to fights

    • @bestaround3323
      @bestaround3323 4 месяца назад +1

      I mean, I guess, but all elements in the story should serve at least some kind of function. Be it character development, plot progression, tone setting, or so on. If you include a bunch of stuff with no purpose, then you end up with bloat and wasted potential.
      Yes, a cohesive world will things not directly covered by the story, such as the specifics of the economy, ecosystems, history, myths, and geography. If you use the story to explain any of that, though, it should have relevance. With the importance of it in the story being correlated with how much time is spent on it. A passing mention of a city's main export can just be simple world building, but an entire conversion lasting several pages talking about the financial situation of said export requires that it be relevant later.
      Anyway the short of it is that RWBY does fumble with dust a bit and could have had it be a little more relevant.

    • @snoww3771
      @snoww3771 Месяц назад +1

      I think that showing classes that talk about the history and about dust are a better idea than the opening monologue. It's stuff the characters need to learn, so why not show them learning. Especially if that can be done without bogging down the story.

  • @matthewschoen9827
    @matthewschoen9827 7 месяцев назад +4

    The jaune/cardon change is a little clunky and removes some of the agency it gave jaune in the original. I think a better way would have been to just have Blake help him pick up the box of bees and get some kind of proof that cardon was not only purchasing and transporting contraband, but actively planning to injure another student and have that be the leverage.

  • @JBlank-n6i
    @JBlank-n6i 3 месяца назад +1

    I like how Cardin took on the white snake

  • @AEsir_Goji
    @AEsir_Goji 5 месяцев назад

    After all these years, finally going to start fully watching these.

  • @c.ml.i6894
    @c.ml.i6894 8 дней назад

    23:23 I didn't know that Pomni was a Hustress XD
    Also i love the Caine bag.

  • @dataweaver
    @dataweaver 4 месяца назад +2

    The main problem I have with this is that you only have half of CRDL involved. There should be twelve students who get sorted into three teams of four each.

  • @agentcazu
    @agentcazu 4 месяца назад +1

    I love this and enjoyed every minute of it. I love RWBY for all it's flaws, ups and downs. I kept hearing all the comments of Vol 1 - 3 stans in my head that would find this to be an abomination.
    "Omg how dare you say Vol 1 - 3 needed fixing?!? Don't you know that is the true RWBY as RWBY became trash after Monty's passing?!?!?"
    I think it retrospect it's nice seeing how it could be if properly planned out and not sporadically put together with cool fight scenes. I look forward to watching the other videos.
    Edit: Grammar corrections

  • @hansolav5924
    @hansolav5924 8 месяцев назад +1

    1:35:20 He gets a free ticket to catch up faster and dismisses it. it plainly makes absolutely no sense at all. I cannot think of a part of the saga more in need of a serious fix.

  • @zeroconnect5910
    @zeroconnect5910 10 месяцев назад +9

    The Wild Kings sounds like something related to some truly horrid thing beyond a uncharted land. Lovecraft but fantasy?

  • @joshuaottley7902
    @joshuaottley7902 10 месяцев назад +2

    Yo... this sounds really good! The Wild Kings... I'll remember that.

  • @lemoncitrine7023
    @lemoncitrine7023 5 месяцев назад

    1:44:50 Jaune is experiencing quite a lot of negative emotion right now. That combined with a lucky nearby Ursa (it'd have to have been close to show up so fast anyway) and the strong smell of sap could be a good reason for it to show up

  • @aronanikushin6480
    @aronanikushin6480 8 месяцев назад +2

    On the moment when you sad that rooster can produce 20 episodes of 10 minutes i giggled.

  • @Capt.Thunder
    @Capt.Thunder 4 месяца назад +5

    I think that you generally handled the Weiss-Blake split very well, but the resolution is a bit too quick, but if it was an actual show you'd need to wrap the arc by the end of volume 1.
    I think that a better way of handling it is dialing back Weiss' hardcore racism a bit to make it feel like less of a jump - she's just having no sympathy for Velvet and saying that Faunus cause trouble wherever they go, that they shouldn't be here because any of them could be terrorist sympathisers, and frame them as the aggressors who deserve what's coming to them.
    Also have Ozpin give more information to Weiss about Blake to show just how thorough his vetting process is to reassure her that Blake isn't an assassin out to get her or her family, as her point that Blake could be trying to use her to get close to her family hasn't been fully debunked. It would smooth it out just a little more.
    Otherwise, genuinely very good.

    • @snoww3771
      @snoww3771 Месяц назад +1

      Also, I think that Weiss would have the sense to calm down and report that she discovered that there is a terrorist in the school, instead of storming in and exploding at Ospin. After all, she had already faced discipline from Ospin.

  • @NobodyDungeons
    @NobodyDungeons 4 месяца назад +1

    I personally like to think that the ursa was attracted to the growing tensions between them.

  • @greyworld6242
    @greyworld6242 9 месяцев назад +10

    Good stuff my dude!
    Say celtic have you seen the rwby dust queen AU trailer?

    • @CelticPhoenix
      @CelticPhoenix  9 месяцев назад +10

      I’ll give you a little hint.
      _Check the Dust Queen Trailer credits_
      ;)

    • @greyworld6242
      @greyworld6242 9 месяцев назад +3

      @@CelticPhoenix nice! It be cool to see your reaction to it.

    • @tropichawk850
      @tropichawk850 9 месяцев назад +7

      ​@@greyworld6242
      Sorry if I'm misinterpreting what you're trying to say, but he's actually a part of the team working on it. I won't spoil how so, but that's why he was saying to check the credits of the video.

    • @greyworld6242
      @greyworld6242 9 месяцев назад +3

      @@tropichawk850 oh fuck really? Awesome I’ll have to look back on that.

    • @usonohoshi6165
      @usonohoshi6165 9 месяцев назад +1

      ​@@CelticPhoenixOh sweet! It's nice to see RWBY fans helping each other out in all these fan fixes.

  • @domonique1122de
    @domonique1122de 8 месяцев назад +2

    Honestly Blake Trailer is why I watched

  • @QuantumNova
    @QuantumNova 4 месяца назад +1

    I love Weiss in this version. Rich mean bratty. She stayed 'evil just long enough and won a fight. The original turned her nice too quickly. Also, more Glynda is always a plus. I enjoyed that too.

  • @reapingjoker4198
    @reapingjoker4198 5 месяцев назад +1

    You know what, I wouldn't mind a RWBY reboot.

  • @senttiee
    @senttiee 9 месяцев назад +2

    Really appreciate this.

  • @williambarnes5023
    @williambarnes5023 4 месяца назад +5

    I think you should alter the soundtrack for the Yellow trailer. Recapping the previous songs like the original does seems wrong, since none of the other trailers do that. And I Burn is such a banger. Just use that and some rave mix through the whole thing.

  • @Step43099
    @Step43099 9 месяцев назад +4

    Am I crazy did he not upload this? Oh wait he uploaded the remastered in episode bunches I forgot. Oh well no matter I’ll be watching this when I get back to my hotel room anyway

  • @Floweroftheburningwoods
    @Floweroftheburningwoods 3 месяца назад +1

    The absolute manic joy I felt at the konosuba ref 😂

  • @xryuran
    @xryuran 5 месяцев назад

    I love the vast amounts of animal slaughter this version adds. Makes certain traits like that of Nora's a little more characterizing, really shows her experience with violent when she is only mock disappointed when she presumably breaks the bear... permanently.

  • @unknown20005
    @unknown20005 3 месяца назад +6

    if rooster teeth actually shut down then anything they created is pretty much open to replicate cause what will a non existent company do about it sue us with what money 🤣

  • @alexkorinth6459
    @alexkorinth6459 5 месяцев назад +1

    My favourite part of the whole RWBY franchise was that interaction in the first episode.
    Ruby: "Are you...robbing me?"
    Henchman: (exasperated) "YES"
    Ruby: "ohhhhhhhh..."
    Ruby: *launches him out of the window*

  • @1OO984
    @1OO984 4 месяца назад +1

    @vizmedia I personally wasn’t a fan getting rid of the Blake reveal but after considering how much more it explains her actions and the dramatic irony I would absolutely love to see this in RWBY

  • @absolutemadlad5662
    @absolutemadlad5662 8 месяцев назад +3

    2:26:49 I'll hold you to that

  • @FelixVyra
    @FelixVyra 7 месяцев назад +1

    At around 1:50:30 why does Blake need Jaune to "use his leverage" on Cardin? She knows about the documents too.
    Cardin: What right does ...(she)...even have to attend Beacon?
    Blake: More than you from what I've heard.
    Done... ?

    • @CelticPhoenix
      @CelticPhoenix  7 месяцев назад

      It’d be a tenuous play on her part, because Cardin still had blackmail on Jaune. Invoking it risks both of them getting expelled and Blake probably doesn’t feel like she has the right to risk Jaune’s place in the school when she’d potentially be unconnected to anything involving either of their transcripts.

    • @FelixVyra
      @FelixVyra 7 месяцев назад

      @@CelticPhoenix I guess what I mean is that she could have used it as threat because although yes if Cardin got expelled he would take Jaune down with him and Blake knows that, but Cardin wouldn't think that Blake cares so much about Jaune to not let him be collateral damage. All that she would have revaled is that she knows that Cardin "got in fraudulently".
      If Cardin made the argument to Ozpin that those papers were replaced but couldn't prove it, Jaune could make the same argument, but Ozpin wouldn't have believed either of them.
      Am I missing something?

    • @Flashboy284
      @Flashboy284 4 месяца назад

      @@FelixVyra A bit late for a reply, but I'll do so anyway. A big risk with implying she knows about the transcripts and her sticking up for Jaune would be that it gives Cardin the all the information he needs to figure out who messed with his transcripts. Cardin could be able to point to a specific person and motive for how and why his transcripts were replaced, but Jaune would have nothing to defend himself. Suddenly the pact of mutually assured expulsion could instead result in Jaune and Blake getting expelled and Cardin staying.

    • @FelixVyra
      @FelixVyra 4 месяца назад

      @@Flashboy284 All Cardin would find out is that Blake knows about the papers, not who did it. He also still has no evidence to prove who did it. Also Jaune could point at Carding replacing his papers and site "the ability to be exploited" as the motive. So both of them would be able to make something up and site motive but noone would have any proof.
      The other big problem with this script that I forgot to mention is if you remember how Ozpin responded to Weis going to him complaining about "leting a terrorist in the school", and Ozpin making the conversation about how Weis is racist which could get her expelled.
      There you have all the leverage you need on Cardin. The fake papers stuff was for nothing. How come noone in the school thought maybe painting Cardin not just as a dick but a racist dick might be over a line for Oz? Because the script clearly sais it is.

  • @karlhyetravelerofworlds
    @karlhyetravelerofworlds 6 месяцев назад +2

    23:07 I swear to god I have seen the black and blue haired boy before but I cannot for the life of me remember where

    • @CelticPhoenix
      @CelticPhoenix  6 месяцев назад +2

      That would be an OC named Obsidious, by the artist Keith. He's pretty prolific with the character around the fandom.

  • @TJCID22
    @TJCID22 9 месяцев назад +5

    Shouldn't there be 4 silhouetted characters in the white trailer? Weiss' siblings, father AND mother? I could imagine her putting down the bottle occasionally for public appearances.
    Not ganna lie, I like the ball-grabbing in the yellow trailer.

    • @Thefirefan15
      @Thefirefan15 3 месяца назад

      She’s not there because she didn’t agree to the test or she is drunk.