So constructively bro, its all just s bit all over the place. There is some decent content but no focus. One minute your talking about how evil u are, then ya talking bout humanity & love for ya kids. It comes across like you are just rhyming words and using whatever comes to mind in the moment. Try focus on a particular topic and stick to it throughout. Also clearly its just a long rap verse & not actually a song (no real structure or hook etc). Also you say rap saved you. If you believe that my advice would be to keep searching cos rap can't save anyone bro, its just an activity & a hobbie. If you play it forward what ya gonna do if you do when its all over? Are you suddenly unsaved then? Keep going brother, I have been in addiction & oalso on a long journey with hip hop. It can help you but it ain't nobody's savior. Especially addicts! God bless
Some bars there bro 🤝🏼🔥
This is actually fire 👏🔥
Sign me to latent records and I'll hammer em out. 👊
So constructively bro, its all just s bit all over the place. There is some decent content but no focus. One minute your talking about how evil u are, then ya talking bout humanity & love for ya kids. It comes across like you are just rhyming words and using whatever comes to mind in the moment. Try focus on a particular topic and stick to it throughout. Also clearly its just a long rap verse & not actually a song (no real structure or hook etc). Also you say rap saved you. If you believe that my advice would be to keep searching cos rap can't save anyone bro, its just an activity & a hobbie. If you play it forward what ya gonna do if you do when its all over? Are you suddenly unsaved then?
Keep going brother, I have been in addiction & oalso on a long journey with hip hop. It can help you but it ain't nobody's savior. Especially addicts! God bless
I actually appreciate this. I definitely need to choose a theme and stick with it.
YEAH
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