just some bullshit critique, if u dont appreciate i wont do this again: 1. the pacing is generally pretty slow. this is a vital issue since the main source of humor in a classic style ytp is the element of surprise. the more brisk your pacing is, the less time people have to guess ur next joke. when u leave the same joke going for too long, it can ruin it, even if u find the joke funny (unless the intent is for the joke to go on too long on purpose). another good thing about a quick pace is if someone doesnt like the joke, it quickly moves on to the next one so u dont have as much time to groan at it. 2. the jokes dont play off of eachother enough. the dad's head is shown multiple times as a horse, and yet no one makes any sort of reference or horse based joke around it. the neighbor is shown as michael jackson, but you didnt bother to sentence mix mj to say something funny or even just dub him in with the tenacious d "I WANNA F U" 3. predictability. many of the jokes are very surface level and dont really go past what anyone would initially come up with. if u want to maintain the element of surprise u need to take your first two ideas and obscure them by a degree or two. for example 3:45 "microwavable DINNER" is the most obvious joke ever, so if u want to take people off guard u should make it say something people wouldnt expect. 4. sentence mixing. this one is a bit of a personal take since idk what exactly your intent was with sentence mixing. i can only assume you were trying to make it sound as clear as possible but i could be wrong so i apologize if that's so. anyway, u left large gaps of dead air some of the sentence mixing that step on the pacing pretty harshly. again if this was your intent i apologize for bringing it up, but it did feel like it stuck out. 5. unedited content. u have a general thing u do where u leave one character's line unedited, and its only the next line from another character thats edited. why not edit both parts? 6:04 "be a good little fella and open the door". you could have easily edited that in some way instead of leaving it in unedited. if its just there for context then that amount of context isnt really necessary. u could have even cut the line and went straight to the gunshots if u couldnt think of anything. there is also too much dead air in between some lines that you coulda cut that woulda helped with pacing. i apologize if this comes off as rude or demeaning, that's not my intent i promise. im not trying to discourage u from making stuff, these are just suggestions. i could be totally wrong, you do you
How is Kevin going to give them more of what he doesn't even have yet? And if Dad's a horse, who the hell was mom in bed with? And she cheats on a HORSE with like a regular, out of shape white guy?! I'm sorry, I just have SO many problems with this...
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KEVIN!!
K E V I N !
K E V I N
K E V IN
I’m literally wheezing with laughter with this video.😂
The horse was hilarious😂
🐴
This was phenomenal 😂 incredible work as always man, you never disappoint ❤
Glad you liked it mate, you requested it so.. 👍
Nice video, and thanks for the cameo ;)!
The moment where he does crack and goes crazy is fucking hilarious!😂
6:40 That was perfect
1:54 Same Here Kevin
3:31………. (michael jackson) ….Run
It’s been a while, good to see you still going strong Bob
Yep, still going 👍
1:07 had me 💀🤣🤣🤣
The kevin army
Never ask Kevin where he was in 1939...
@@TheStickGuyYT fr
2:20 5:54
Once again, its good to have you back
This was one of the funniest YTPs I've ever seen, man 😂
Oh my gosh. This was awesome. Excellent job
Can't wait for Kevin 2 😂
Kevin lost in New York!? 😂
@@TwoBobBit Kevin in New York.
@@TwoBobBit anytime it's your idea to created again Kevin in New York also take your time and merry Christmas🎄🤭
It happened
Why
I can really relate to you Kevin, memes have more substance than a toxic family.
Excellent work!
hi two bob bit its great to see your New YTP for christmas
6:40
Merry Xmas to our favorite poopster!
Merry Christmas
@@TwoBobBitmerry Christmas to you Bobby🎄
I'm so excited for this ytp
If I were to watch a YTP over and over again, l would choose this one
If you like this watch the second one that was released yesterday 👍
@@TwoBobBit ok I’ll try
0:38 Hi Parker!!!
2:22 COOL, CRACK! I’LL SAVE THIS FOR LATER😂
Yo bob its been a while since you made a YTP. Glad to see you again :)
Yeah IRL gets in the way. But I’m normally always making something it’s just a case of when it get completed 👍
@@TwoBobBit it's ok
Man, this is awesome!
Biggest laugh at 1:09
Gaston is everywhere
This is funny I like home alone YTP
6:12 Sh sh sh
7:13 AAH AAH *Deep scream*
Got me 😂
The horse 😂
1:22: Im am upstairs dummy!! *OPENS DOOR* Kevins twin on the stairs
2:36💀💀💀💀
6:06 Activision when they release Modern Warfare 3 (2023)
"SANTY DON'T VISIT THE FUNERAL HOMES LITTLE BUTT BUDDY"
😭😭😭😭🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂
Best Xmas gift ever!
This was great! XD
Thanks 🙏
7:20 Harry: Marv? 😨
7:21 Marv: AAIIII!! 😡 *Flatten Harry face with a crowbar*
This part always made me laugh 😂😂😂😂😂😂
Merry Christmas Mr. Bit.
Merry Christmas 👍
Good ytp 😂
fanf 4 jumpscared 2:31
Withered chica to be exact
@@Goleafsgo1414-t7e that true
3:35 really 💀
it is dec 2024
7:01 erm....
What the sigma?
Merry Christmas 🎄 Two bob bit! Pizza Time! 🍕
Merry Christmas 🎄
@@TwoBobBit ❤️ 🫶🎅
Did you see that “Charmx” is back with a different alias?
I did not.
@@TwoBobBit look up Fresh Cut Slim
@@TwoBobBitwhat is he called now?
i love 1:05 and 1:10
Love a good Xmas poop!
The Micheal j fox ending was fantastic
0:56 LOLLLL
6:38 I lost all my shit here. xD
3:38 When you stumble the werewolf
Had to use my asthma pump from laughing too much 🤣🤣🤣
BoJack Horseman has joined the chat of the McCallister's
😂 merry Christmas
Merry Christmas
6:39 got me in tears
1:06 pizza pizza
5:32Ha Ha, Cantina!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
3.52 part of dumber and dumber whahaha😅 enoying sound of the world lol!.
I got a good laugh LOL😭
5:43
3:34 The actor for Kevin was actually great friends with Micheal Jackson
Too great.. they slept together
Geez how many Kevin did they have???
6:50 who is this guy?
Freakin' sweet!
hehehehehehehehe
I hope it has charmx in it
7:01 ayo💀💀💀
The fact that buzz puked and Kevin got in trouble
3:06Someone stop Johnny from pumping someone's keys
Johnny stop Pumping Sneeze Keisters
"KEVIN!!!!"
😭😭😭😭🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂
just some bullshit critique, if u dont appreciate i wont do this again:
1. the pacing is generally pretty slow. this is a vital issue since the main source of humor in a classic style ytp is the element of surprise. the more brisk your pacing is, the less time people have to guess ur next joke. when u leave the same joke going for too long, it can ruin it, even if u find the joke funny (unless the intent is for the joke to go on too long on purpose). another good thing about a quick pace is if someone doesnt like the joke, it quickly moves on to the next one so u dont have as much time to groan at it.
2. the jokes dont play off of eachother enough. the dad's head is shown multiple times as a horse, and yet no one makes any sort of reference or horse based joke around it. the neighbor is shown as michael jackson, but you didnt bother to sentence mix mj to say something funny or even just dub him in with the tenacious d "I WANNA F U"
3. predictability. many of the jokes are very surface level and dont really go past what anyone would initially come up with. if u want to maintain the element of surprise u need to take your first two ideas and obscure them by a degree or two. for example 3:45 "microwavable DINNER" is the most obvious joke ever, so if u want to take people off guard u should make it say something people wouldnt expect.
4. sentence mixing. this one is a bit of a personal take since idk what exactly your intent was with sentence mixing. i can only assume you were trying to make it sound as clear as possible but i could be wrong so i apologize if that's so. anyway, u left large gaps of dead air some of the sentence mixing that step on the pacing pretty harshly. again if this was your intent i apologize for bringing it up, but it did feel like it stuck out.
5. unedited content. u have a general thing u do where u leave one character's line unedited, and its only the next line from another character thats edited. why not edit both parts? 6:04 "be a good little fella and open the door". you could have easily edited that in some way instead of leaving it in unedited. if its just there for context then that amount of context isnt really necessary. u could have even cut the line and went straight to the gunshots if u couldnt think of anything. there is also too much dead air in between some lines that you coulda cut that woulda helped with pacing.
i apologize if this comes off as rude or demeaning, that's not my intent i promise. im not trying to discourage u from making stuff, these are just suggestions. i could be totally wrong, you do you
Some valid critiques here, and some I do by design.
I really like memes. LMAO LMFAO
bro ate multiple cups 1:17
How is Kevin going to give them more of what he doesn't even have yet?
And if Dad's a horse, who the hell was mom in bed with?
And she cheats on a HORSE with like a regular, out of shape white guy?!
I'm sorry, I just have SO many problems with this...
😂
where can i find this video to search? 6:49
Name is aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
5:44 - DUDE
HAHa!!!
So silly 😂😂
Heil kevin 1:10
Hi Toby 🕷️ 🍕
Ytp kevin😂😂😂😂😂
This video is so funny 😂😂🤣🤣
0:03
Pumping is actually jingle Pumping jingle bells jingle bells jingle all the way
I would scream too if I saw MJ
and 2:31
He's horse
Promo*SM
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