At 13:40: "We need your light to navigate through the mines safely." WTF, they don't have flashlights? And again at 20:33: "...with Siri's light guiding them..." I hope only an AI would think we're that stupid.
A gun light isn't always the best in certain environments; nor are headlamps. They would have likely used infrared and the distance is extremely less than a white light. If not infrared, I'd let SIRI pave the way because her blue light washed completely through the cavern. SIRI's use is magnified when she could temporarily blind them. Personally, the last thing I'd use is a MK1 Flashlight.
Ciri the abandoned alien, had a very odd blue glow. And when the others saw it, feared her and let her know. All of the other Alien's. Used to run and cry and scream. And Ciri couldn't know, the real value of her being. Then one human soldier, came to her and asked her help. Ciri with your glow so bright, won't you guide our ship tonight. Then all the humans loved her, As they shouted out with glee! Ciri the glowing alien, you'll go down in history!
Good story! Thanks! 😊
At 13:40: "We need your light to navigate through the mines safely." WTF, they don't have flashlights? And again at 20:33: "...with Siri's light guiding them..." I hope only an AI would think we're that stupid.
I came to the comments to say just this.
A gun light isn't always the best in certain environments; nor are headlamps. They would have likely used infrared and the distance is extremely less than a white light. If not infrared, I'd let SIRI pave the way because her blue light washed completely through the cavern. SIRI's use is magnified when she could temporarily blind them. Personally, the last thing I'd use is a MK1 Flashlight.
Ciri the abandoned alien, had a very odd blue glow.
And when the others saw it, feared her and let her know.
All of the other Alien's. Used to run and cry and scream.
And Ciri couldn't know, the real value of her being.
Then one human soldier,
came to her and asked her help.
Ciri with your glow so bright,
won't you guide our ship tonight.
Then all the humans loved her,
As they shouted out with glee!
Ciri the glowing alien,
you'll go down in history!
😂😂😂😂 they saw her in a new light... Yes in blue that she is glowing away😂😂😂😂😂
Good story, but your CC needs alot of work. I'd ditch it all together. And maybe change the scenes to match the narrative.
Liked the story was good
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Rudolph ain't got nuttin on Siri !!
What about finding about her family's status? Nice to have a family to present their heroine crewwoman daughter to!