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I find it really clever that the song you're using - Breakin' The Law - is most audible around this specific line; 'I've had every promise broken, there's anger in my heart/ You don't know what it's like-'. If we take both this line and that ending shot with Bee resting against the wall, he's not pissed off that Mirage disobeyed orders; Dude's had to leave his only human friend behind for seven years, while ordered to contact them. No, what makes him choose violence today is the idea Mirage would KILL a civilian. Something Bee would've never let happen if Mirage had been a Decepticon.
There's also the implication that Bee's not happy with those orders, either, but he takes far more issue with Mirage essentially threatening to kill a human civilian. Since, well, he's had to leave Charlie behind in order to keep her safe.
@@isuruFO i like that, bee basically pulling a tfp soundwave on mirage and managing to get across how utterly pissed he is at the guy even though he isnt able to use his actual voice
Same here because one hand I like the mirage we got, but on the other hand of this mirage was the one we got them 1) bumblbee would’ve gotten a meaningful scene here 2) I hate how rude Optimus is to the humans in this movie. Having another character fulfill that role until their redemption would mean that they wouldn’t have tried to make Optimus an asshole to the humans because someone else already fits that role.
@@YourMC_AnEMAtion yes but the fact that Optimus didn't really give a fuck wether the humans died or not dosen't feel like Optimus not to menchen that it kinda go's ageinst the reason the Matrix chosen him in the first place because the Matrix chose Optimus because he careed and valued all life
This honestly feels pretty accurate to the Mirage I grew up knowing (namely the IDW one). While this was pretty dark and I prefer the Mirage RotB gave us, I anticipate seeing more from this AU and how it compares.
Yeah as much as this version of Mirage seems interesting and fits the whole "stranded on Earth" and stuff, this Mirage feels a lot more insufferable than the one from the movie, I still prefer the one we got. Obviously, no offence to you, awesome animatics and outstanding voice work, but he just feels more like IDW Sunstreaker? And well, I guess iykyk.
Yeah, I liked that we got a very friendly and funny Mirage. This version is more realistic to how the other cynical Autobots act like Ironhide or Crosshair, but I love how refreshing it was to see another Autobot other than Bee who is chill with humans.
You have a point, he DOES feel like IDW's version of Sunstreaker (which honestly, after what happened to him, does anyone actually blame him for what he tried to do to the humans?) But at the same time, this version of Mirage feels very similar to one of the original character traits about him: the fact that some of his fellow Autobots questioned if he was really on-par with the Autobot cause. In his original bio, it was explained that he joined the Autobots reluctantly, not wanting to leave behind his luxurious life on Cybertron, which caused some of them to doubt his loyalty or motivation. Personally I think this AU fits that idea: a stuck-up Mirage who was done with the humans, and wanted nothing more than to get off Earth and return to his previous comfortable life on Cybertron.
Personally would've preferred something like this, yeah he's more insufferable but that could just be him before he comes around to humans like the rest, makes the situation much more entertaining as a story than another action blockbuster with the semi likable comic relief.
Honestly. I kinda wish this is how it actually played out. Mirage as the kid appeal character was cool and all but this almost feels like it would fit better. This was really well done dude keep it up! I hope to see this fully animated eventually
Really good job on this! Really interesting to see a more G1 accurate personality of Mirage interact with Noah. I also love the Sector Seven and Agent Burns callback
Yo this fucks. like actually. this would've made Bumblebee's death impactful, and Mirage would have to step in for him for that half of the movie. kinda mirage's story of trusting humans, a complete foil to bumblebee's story. This would've kicked so much more ass than quirked up davidson-bot.
I love this so much, it’s impossible to describe! I also love the references to the Bumblebee movie, like Agent Jack Burns & Sector 7. Knightverse continuity forever!
I wish Transformers One should be like, “What Rise Of The Beasts movie? I wasn’t attached to this movie at all. It’s just some other movie that thinks it watched the Bumblebee movie.”
Bro they shoulda stuck with this, mirage not only felt more like mirage, but his design here looked way better too! At least you could tell that was mirage instead of the “jazz” we ended up with in the end
Wow… not that I didn’t like what we got instead, but ngl if they had developed the story from this kind of angle, the impact of Bumblebee’s death would have been greater. Mirage and Noah could have had a bigger motivation in working together, because Mirage would have experienced a great loss for another dear person from his kind, and Noah would feel more indebted to avenge the one Autobot that tried to connect to him in friendly ties from the first meet. If there ends up being more of this kind of direction, I’d love to see it. Especially with one of my nitpicks from ROTB being that the Maximals (asides from Airazor and Optimus Primal) did not talk enough 🙃 Also that sweet throwback to the Bumblebee movie was just *chef’s kiss
U get the impression you've watched a lot of Beast Wars "Inferno" clued me into that. Not to mention it echos aspects of the character bios written by Bob Budianski back in 84. I'd call this superior to the actual movie scene. Great work bro.
Unlike the movie version, your version is a more serious Mirage and what makes it much less painful than the movie Mirage automatically makes it better.
I wonder if you'll decide to give Bumblebee's voice back at some point, Bayformers created the trend of Bumblebee losing his voice and him having to use the radio to communicate and he hasn't really broken away from that curse in the live action
This works a lot better in my opinion than what they did to Mirage in the movie. In the movie, they just gave Mirage Jazz’s personality rather than have his own
I'm going to say it. But this is better then the actual movie. Mirage is more like is original version, he's a lot more reckless and does not like humans. Bee tries to help Noah and starts a little bond. So when Bumblebee is knocked out Mirage and Noah start form a friendship that leads to Mirage to be more at home on Earth. That's a really interesting character arc to explore. I'm excited to see where this AU goes.
This was very good! Plus I love how you made this version of Mirage look in style & behave in character slightly closer to his G1 counterpart which is great, Pete Davidson just doesn't fit the character at all. Also seeing Bee bond with another human years after Charlie is so nice.
@@Samuel_Loegan Pete Davidson just got on my nerves as Mirage. Anyone, literally ANYONE better with a degree of likeability as a voice actor could have played him better.
@@Samuel_Loegan It's beyond ridiculous why we should ignore an industry full of talent that sounds youthful and full of range over some comedian from SNL.
Him being a straight up asshole doesn't jive well imo, he'd be annoyed and then warm up to Noah in the Warehouse scene realising he may as well make the best of his situation and then explain his resentment towards earth, that being he's extremely homesick.
I like this mainly because it feels more in line with g1 mirage with how he was this high class guy back on cybertron and doesn't care for the war and he does not get along with his peers
Tbh, this is actually better because, like, Mirage in G1 wasnt always all friendly and bumblebee has experience communicating with humans so it will make sense to make bumblebee the friend but, yea they gotta give it to someone else
ngl i think bee should've been the one bonding with humans instead of mirage. cuz well g1 mirage is homesick. and g1 bee is the one whos open to humans so yeee
I love the fact that the moment bee shows up he emidietly punches mirage in the face when he was pointing a blaster at marko (sorry if i forgot the name)
honestly since this movie is the sequel to the bbmv i would still love to see bee as a protagonist and when he gets killed we can have mirage replace bee for awhile getting his trust on noah and humans arc, kinda similar to prime in the real version. oh also just have a cameo of charlie too
Fits better than the one in the movie giving how the one in the movie basically killed an innocent person and nobody noticed it, nobody survives an impact from a truck at that angle and that speed.
Thanks for the reminder because when I saw the movie even I was thinking “wait didn’t mirage just murder 2 humans” during the drive away scene after Noah breaks into the car. Out of all of the parts that they cut from this movie, idk why they kept that part of mirage killing innocent humans due to Noah pretty much doing a crime.
@@anotherrandomguy8871 the movie is overall really bad when you pay attention to things like that, its dissapointing because bumblebee was really decent.
The ROTB Mirage really isnt like the Mirage we know and love from G1 He's not from a classy and rich background He never disagrees with orders or wants to go back to Cybertron And doesnt complain as much as his G1 self
A scenes like last frames is what I'm hungry for in TF if we keep not to refrain from including humans. A scenes like that between bots would be welcomed too.
You guys should fix nightbird to. Cause the moment I saw a short about her, I instantly knew that they got her wrong. Why didn't they do somthing like, ' We finaly understand your code, so now we made our own super soldier. We call her nightbird.'. And yes you can make a, " Did you base her off of anime?" Joke. Then later due to her simply being a machine with no personality programed, it's easy for the Decepticons to reprogram her to be one of them.
@@alphaprime1000 chances are that in this timeline, they probably saw the distinction of the general morality between the Autobots and Decepticons, and were willing to help the Autobots. I do like how Bumblebee has shown some authority which goes to show that Bee can show some type of second in command-like role even with his radio voice box.
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You should do more it a amazing concept
It really is man. I’d love to see how you’re version of the story continues. 👍🚚🦍🚙🐀
I find it really clever that the song you're using - Breakin' The Law - is most audible around this specific line; 'I've had every promise broken, there's anger in my heart/ You don't know what it's like-'.
If we take both this line and that ending shot with Bee resting against the wall, he's not pissed off that Mirage disobeyed orders; Dude's had to leave his only human friend behind for seven years, while ordered to contact them. No, what makes him choose violence today is the idea Mirage would KILL a civilian. Something Bee would've never let happen if Mirage had been a Decepticon.
Rise of the Beasts if Mirage had that same sense of homesickness that he had in G1
Yeah but toned up with racism against organic life like animated sentinel prime
Honestly i like this scene
@@Autobot.Whirl.
*speciesism
@@kevinp.h157 I couldn't think of the right word thank you
For real 😂
Bee using Charlie’s voice to say his own name tugged on a heartstring that I didn’t know could be tugged
it was taken directly from the end credits actually
@@isuruFO oh, yeah! Well, still it is very effectively used, even better knowing Bumblebee and RoTB are in the same continuity
thank you!
this feels like an world where they kept Bumblebee as the human friend instead of giving it to mirage
Or maybe create an arc for Mirage where he learns to accept and imbrace Noah
@@johnjackson8327 That's Optimus arc, kinda
@adsdsds6190 Yeah, but I felt that wasn't really a lesson he needed to learn.
Feels like a universe where everyone's in character tbh.
Prime doesn't hate humans and bees the friendly one
I feel like works cause it links to the bumblebee film
The idea of Bumblebee beign the responsible big brother of the autobots this time
I love how Bee sounds like Prime when he’s scolding Mirage.
prerecorded orders actually, thank you though
There's also the implication that Bee's not happy with those orders, either, but he takes far more issue with Mirage essentially threatening to kill a human civilian. Since, well, he's had to leave Charlie behind in order to keep her safe.
Bro he recorded Optimus voice and said it
Hey prime come on that ain’t cool!
@@isuruFO i like that, bee basically pulling a tfp soundwave on mirage and managing to get across how utterly pissed he is at the guy even though he isnt able to use his actual voice
I kinda dig this version, I really loved Mirage in the movie, but this one is quite interesting
Same. Both are good.
Could’ve gave him a redemption ark in the movie
Same here because one hand I like the mirage we got, but on the other hand of this mirage was the one we got them
1) bumblbee would’ve gotten a meaningful scene here
2) I hate how rude Optimus is to the humans in this movie. Having another character fulfill that role until their redemption would mean that they wouldn’t have tried to make Optimus an asshole to the humans because someone else already fits that role.
@@anotherrandomguy8871 You do realize he has been through so much? He's not bad, he's had enough.
@@YourMC_AnEMAtion yes but the fact that Optimus didn't really give a fuck wether the humans died or not dosen't feel like Optimus not to menchen that it kinda go's ageinst the reason the Matrix chosen him in the first place because the Matrix chose Optimus because he careed and valued all life
TEARS NOW! WHEN BUMBLEBEE SAID HIS NAME AND ALREADY KNOWING NOAH WAS STILL THERE 😭💛💛💛💛
This honestly feels pretty accurate to the Mirage I grew up knowing (namely the IDW one). While this was pretty dark and I prefer the Mirage RotB gave us, I anticipate seeing more from this AU and how it compares.
Nah the mirage we got was cringe n odd was
Yeah as much as this version of Mirage seems interesting and fits the whole "stranded on Earth" and stuff, this Mirage feels a lot more insufferable than the one from the movie, I still prefer the one we got.
Obviously, no offence to you, awesome animatics and outstanding voice work, but he just feels more like IDW Sunstreaker? And well, I guess iykyk.
Yeah, I liked that we got a very friendly and funny Mirage. This version is more realistic to how the other cynical Autobots act like Ironhide or Crosshair, but I love how refreshing it was to see another Autobot other than Bee who is chill with humans.
You have a point, he DOES feel like IDW's version of Sunstreaker (which honestly, after what happened to him, does anyone actually blame him for what he tried to do to the humans?) But at the same time, this version of Mirage feels very similar to one of the original character traits about him: the fact that some of his fellow Autobots questioned if he was really on-par with the Autobot cause. In his original bio, it was explained that he joined the Autobots reluctantly, not wanting to leave behind his luxurious life on Cybertron, which caused some of them to doubt his loyalty or motivation. Personally I think this AU fits that idea: a stuck-up Mirage who was done with the humans, and wanted nothing more than to get off Earth and return to his previous comfortable life on Cybertron.
Well, it reminds me of the Bayverse version of Mirage.
Personally would've preferred something like this, yeah he's more insufferable but that could just be him before he comes around to humans like the rest, makes the situation much more entertaining as a story than another action blockbuster with the semi likable comic relief.
I like this idea that mirage is homesick and hates humans which would be a nice twist
I was really hopping they’d work in his homesickness
The Noah and Bumblebee moment was kinda cute. I like that bumblebee said, "My, name, is, Bumblebee" using the different channels on the radio.
Your voice acting is always so good. Nice animatic. Keep em' coming.
thank you big d!
@@isuruFO😳
Honestly. I kinda wish this is how it actually played out. Mirage as the kid appeal character was cool and all but this almost feels like it would fit better. This was really well done dude keep it up! I hope to see this fully animated eventually
Ok this was definitely great, like, the cinematography, the drawings themselves, the voice acting, keep it up. Hyped to see the next project
thank you!
Really good job on this! Really interesting to see a more G1 accurate personality of Mirage interact with Noah.
I also love the Sector Seven and Agent Burns callback
You know, in that moment where Mirage threatened, it almost looked like he was holding a knife. But a rocket? Now that's overkill😅
ROTB Movie Mirage: Ayyy buddies friends ^^
ROTB AU Mirage here:humans...you digust me
Yo this fucks. like actually. this would've made Bumblebee's death impactful, and Mirage would have to step in for him for that half of the movie. kinda mirage's story of trusting humans, a complete foil to bumblebee's story. This would've kicked so much more ass than quirked up davidson-bot.
Man, I am making my animated version of this is this is amazing. Great job man.
I love this so much, it’s impossible to describe! I also love the references to the Bumblebee movie, like Agent Jack Burns & Sector 7. Knightverse continuity forever!
I wish Transformers One should be like, “What Rise Of The Beasts movie? I wasn’t attached to this movie at all. It’s just some other movie that thinks it watched the Bumblebee movie.”
Bro they shoulda stuck with this, mirage not only felt more like mirage, but his design here looked way better too! At least you could tell that was mirage instead of the “jazz” we ended up with in the end
Wow… not that I didn’t like what we got instead, but ngl if they had developed the story from this kind of angle, the impact of Bumblebee’s death would have been greater. Mirage and Noah could have had a bigger motivation in working together, because Mirage would have experienced a great loss for another dear person from his kind, and Noah would feel more indebted to avenge the one Autobot that tried to connect to him in friendly ties from the first meet.
If there ends up being more of this kind of direction, I’d love to see it. Especially with one of my nitpicks from ROTB being that the Maximals (asides from Airazor and Optimus Primal) did not talk enough 🙃
Also that sweet throwback to the Bumblebee movie was just *chef’s kiss
U get the impression you've watched a lot of Beast Wars "Inferno" clued me into that.
Not to mention it echos aspects of the character bios written by Bob Budianski back in 84. I'd call this superior to the actual movie scene.
Great work bro.
proud to be a beast wars fan
The rise of the beasts we never got, but this one is what we want
It’s not just better, it’s canonically better.
More accurate Mirage than the one we got in the movie. They tried so hard to make him like Bee… wish they’d use Tracks or Jazz instead
Might have Tracks be triple changing Gilderoy Lockhart, and have him voiced by Brendan Fraser.
They should’ve used jazz tbh
Or Blaster
Unlike the movie version, your version is a more serious Mirage and what makes it much less painful than the movie Mirage automatically makes it better.
I liked Mirage in the actual movie, but this is a really cool take
Nah he was cringe
And just like that brother you have made something with more sauce, character, and peakness than the entirety of the actual movie, 10/10 keep cooking
Wonderful work I dare say that this is better than what was seen in the movie 🔥 The mirage design even more faithful to g1
And that’s how bb became the main character again
Wow....i feel like this is the Mirage we all expected when the new movie came out
At last, mirage back in mirage’s body.
I wonder if you'll decide to give Bumblebee's voice back at some point, Bayformers created the trend of Bumblebee losing his voice and him having to use the radio to communicate and he hasn't really broken away from that curse in the live action
have a skit planned for that
@@isuruFO ooh I'd also love to see what your ROTB au is like. Is there like, a new lineup Transformers?
This works a lot better in my opinion than what they did to Mirage in the movie. In the movie, they just gave Mirage Jazz’s personality rather than have his own
If only bee had more screen time like he should’ve 🤦♂️
Such an interesting AU! I’m looking forward to more! Keep up the great work! 👏
Man, this made me realize why Mirage is my favorite character.
I'm going to say it. But this is better then the actual movie.
Mirage is more like is original version, he's a lot more reckless and does not like humans. Bee tries to help Noah and starts a little bond. So when Bumblebee is knocked out Mirage and Noah start form a friendship that leads to Mirage to be more at home on Earth. That's a really interesting character arc to explore. I'm excited to see where this AU goes.
While the Mirage that we got is not bad, I prefer this version much more. Which is more in line with the G1 Bio.
I like how in rotb bumblebee wasn't the humans' best friend.
Mirage if he was in the same situation as Hound, Drift, and Crosshairs in AoE Bayverse.
This is better than just movie.
I like seeing this as a what if timeline where bee became the friend (again) instead of Mirage also I watched rotb, it was awesome.
This was very good! Plus I love how you made this version of Mirage look in style & behave in character slightly closer to his G1 counterpart which is great, Pete Davidson just doesn't fit the character at all. Also seeing Bee bond with another human years after Charlie is so nice.
I thought Pete Davidson was good. But I understand where you're coming from
@@Samuel_Loegan Pete Davidson just got on my nerves as Mirage. Anyone, literally ANYONE better with a degree of likeability as a voice actor could have played him better.
@@Skullgrin140 aaaah, I see then *nods*
@@Samuel_Loegan It's beyond ridiculous why we should ignore an industry full of talent that sounds youthful and full of range over some comedian from SNL.
@@Skullgrin140 hmm, I think you got a point. They should give a voice actress that doesn't have a big name to them to shine
bro this is amazing, we should make like a alternate cut of the movie, keep doing more, i will help of you want
thank you! i'mmvery interested as I have a lot of ideas i want to do but i've got quite a bit on my plate right now
Him being a straight up asshole doesn't jive well imo, he'd be annoyed and then warm up to Noah in the Warehouse scene realising he may as well make the best of his situation and then explain his resentment towards earth, that being he's extremely homesick.
Awesome! Bee is just like Optimus! Like father like son I guess.
Please make more of these. Such an interesting take and honestly better than what we got.
there are in fact more of these!
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Alternate timeline? I'm no stranger to those.
Thats some good timing, I just watched the movie today.
ayeee
This clip is 100x better than the mid movie we received
holy this shit is awesome the voice acting is 10/10 for a fan content🔥
I like this mainly because it feels more in line with g1 mirage with how he was this high class guy back on cybertron and doesn't care for the war and he does not get along with his peers
This hits different after watching rotb seeing how mirage is different in this. Good video mate!
Ikr
Tbh, this is actually better because, like, Mirage in G1 wasnt always all friendly and bumblebee has experience communicating with humans so it will make sense to make bumblebee the friend but, yea they gotta give it to someone else
Bumblebee just pulled a will smith on mirage sent him back to the planet of the apes
I laughed when bee sounded like prime when scolding Mirage!
I love the end where they just right next to each other
ngl i think bee should've been the one bonding with humans instead of mirage. cuz well g1 mirage is homesick. and g1 bee is the one whos open to humans so yeee
mayhaps keep watching the series for more :>
Yep, Mirage in the film is nothing like his snobby G1 counterpart
I love the fact that the moment bee shows up he emidietly punches mirage in the face when he was pointing a blaster at marko (sorry if i forgot the name)
Fua men que épico video adoro tu trabajo :D
What was the song Bumblebee was playing on the radio when he was about to punch mirage.
breaking the law by judas priest
By the looks of it this isn't the first time bee had to put Mirage in his place
Hot DAMN I love the writing in this one scene alone.
I love this idea 😊 but i still love the noah bff mirage 😊
honestly since this movie is the sequel to the bbmv i would still love to see bee as a protagonist and when he gets killed we can have mirage replace bee for awhile getting his trust on noah and humans arc, kinda similar to prime in the real version. oh also just have a cameo of charlie too
I enjoyed ROTB as my guilty pleasure, but imo this animatic is pretty cool, I like it :)
don't have to feel guilty for liking something
Put "Everybody wants to rule the world" on Bumblebee's fight against Mirage.
Reference to the Speekerman and Titan Speekerman from "Skibidi toilet".
Brilliant animatic.
Fits better than the one in the movie giving how the one in the movie basically killed an innocent person and nobody noticed it, nobody survives an impact from a truck at that angle and that speed.
Thanks for the reminder because when I saw the movie even I was thinking “wait didn’t mirage just murder 2 humans” during the drive away scene after Noah breaks into the car. Out of all of the parts that they cut from this movie, idk why they kept that part of mirage killing innocent humans due to Noah pretty much doing a crime.
@@anotherrandomguy8871 the movie is overall really bad when you pay attention to things like that, its dissapointing because bumblebee was really decent.
Please make another one of these.
LOVE IT!
0:29 Bestie get the camera our drama show is on
So If Mirage was actually serious- NOICE :DD
The ROTB Mirage really isnt like the Mirage we know and love from G1
He's not from a classy and rich background
He never disagrees with orders or wants to go back to Cybertron
And doesnt complain as much as his G1 self
OK why the actual f### do I like this more?!?? I just saw the film!!!
i feel like this works better then it does with optimus with mirage being younger and such
A scenes like last frames is what I'm hungry for in TF if we keep not to refrain from including humans.
A scenes like that between bots would be welcomed too.
“Our people are truly finished”
Good job
You guys should fix nightbird to. Cause the moment I saw a short about her, I instantly knew that they got her wrong.
Why didn't they do somthing like, ' We finaly understand your code, so now we made our own super soldier. We call her nightbird.'. And yes you can make a, " Did you base her off of anime?" Joke. Then later due to her simply being a machine with no personality programed, it's easy for the Decepticons to reprogram her to be one of them.
so awesome
Mirage acts like Sunstreaker
Nah that's just g1 mirage
Can u do one with the aftermath of this situation with bee and noah
I agree continue with this beauty
I like how Mirage looks like his G1 design
Bee punching mirage was satisfying...
I loved movie mirage don’t get me wrong
But this is really cool
If mirage was a adult
Would have been interesting to see him warm up to noah.
Did Bee just socked Mirage like that? 💀
So, in this AU, the Autobots and Sector 7 are allies here?
mhm mhm
@@isuruFO So were they fine with it after what happened with Shatter and Dropkick?
@@alphaprime1000 chances are that in this timeline, they probably saw the distinction of the general morality between the Autobots and Decepticons, and were willing to help the Autobots.
I do like how Bumblebee has shown some authority which goes to show that Bee can show some type of second in command-like role even with his radio voice box.
I like your version of Mirage
If mirage had an anger issue personality
this is so much better
Bumblebee fr said
"EAT SHIT"
I CURRENTLY LOVE MIRAGE AFTER THIS AND THE REAL RISE OF BEAST MOVIE 💖💖💖
Edit✨: BTW NEW SUB THO!! 11!! 1
.... I... Genuinely just wanna say hi and talk to him
Holy shit your stuff is awsome