What has your sexual orientation got to do with anything? I'm a white female and you don't see me crying about representation because I'm mature enough to know that not every story has to be about me.
AMAZING WORK! Seriously everyone on this project did a wonderful job. Im so honored I got to be a small part of the Spider-Verse thanks to you. Let's do another project soon!
a superhero film that talks about the real issues that plagues the real world and it was miles morales spider-man no less so thanks for making this and hope theirs more to come in the future 😀
Man you knocked it out the park with this, was watching another video and this one came up as the ad! crazy where you find some real gems eh! keep up the good work with the RUclips your doing great man
First of all, great job on this. The storytelling is great and a lot of the visuals are really good in this. For some critique: -I noticed a little bit of audio sounding like it was recorded in a studio rather than on location (I'm sure this was due to you having to rerecord audio ADR style). This also added to the fact that some audio didn't seem perfectly synced with the video. Mostly just a few dialogue bits here and there. -I also noticed a slight choreography/continuity error with that first fight scene. The mugger rushes Miles with the knife and stands up, and after Miles rolls, the mugger is closer to the metal poles and bent over waiting for Miles to flip over him. Maybe jsut a slight bit of adjusting on the cut there or make sure to mark out where the actors are so that continuity stays during scenes like this. -The last thing I would mention is the VFX of miles on the rooftops and swinging towards the end. A little bit of additional color correction and key framing would help make those moments look a little better so that he actually feels like part of the environment. I'm sure you guys are a small team, so I understand these things happen. Again, this is all constructive criticism from a Spidey fan and film student, and these did not take away from the experience. I thoroughly enjoyed this short fan film and I hope to see even bigger and better things from you guys in the future. Keep swinging!
Really good man loved it. I liked how it paid homage to Peter but also made miles his own hero and how him showing his face to the man showing he was black was the moment Miles became his own hero and himself instead of Peters shadow
@@mguphynn ala madre,. No pense que me respondieran,. Y menos en mi idioma xD, Y si,. No se preocupen,. Lo compartiré ojala en el futuro crezcan mas y puedan mejorar,. Suerte
As a gay black man I have to say that this film did nothing for me. Love the representation tho. Stay black.
What has your sexual orientation got to do with anything?
I'm a white female and you don't see me crying about representation because I'm mature enough to know that not every story has to be about me.
Rpc studio suit? Nice
AMAZING WORK! Seriously everyone on this project did a wonderful job. Im so honored I got to be a small part of the Spider-Verse thanks to you. Let's do another project soon!
The emotional intelligence of this fan film is so important as the idea of how Miles develops his own story, a second part would be greatly welcomed.
thank you very much. Please share around
@@mguphynn yeah I hope that there's a part 2 being made or sequel that continues miles is journey I paid to see that
@@bensupersaiyangodbrony71 thanks! Please share around it really helps us justify making more
@@mguphynn it would be funny if peter became electro afterwards
@@kohis. Not a bad idea!
a superhero film that talks about the real issues that plagues the real world and it was miles morales spider-man no less so thanks for making this and hope theirs more to come in the future 😀
Thank you. Please share around
Hope part 2 is coming
Please share around as we would love to make more.
Just amazing work guys, love to see talent put together for this and showing an important message! ♥️ So good.
thank you. please share around!
That Roxxon logo at 4:22 though :)
Glad you caught that!! Please share around
@@mguphynn Will do! Great work to the Team!
Man you knocked it out the park with this, was watching another video and this one came up as the ad! crazy where you find some real gems eh! keep up the good work with the RUclips your doing great man
First of all, great job on this. The storytelling is great and a lot of the visuals are really good in this.
For some critique:
-I noticed a little bit of audio sounding like it was recorded in a studio rather than on location (I'm sure this was due to you having to rerecord audio ADR style). This also added to the fact that some audio didn't seem perfectly synced with the video. Mostly just a few dialogue bits here and there.
-I also noticed a slight choreography/continuity error with that first fight scene. The mugger rushes Miles with the knife and stands up, and after Miles rolls, the mugger is closer to the metal poles and bent over waiting for Miles to flip over him. Maybe jsut a slight bit of adjusting on the cut there or make sure to mark out where the actors are so that continuity stays during scenes like this.
-The last thing I would mention is the VFX of miles on the rooftops and swinging towards the end. A little bit of additional color correction and key framing would help make those moments look a little better so that he actually feels like part of the environment. I'm sure you guys are a small team, so I understand these things happen.
Again, this is all constructive criticism from a Spidey fan and film student, and these did not take away from the experience. I thoroughly enjoyed this short fan film and I hope to see even bigger and better things from you guys in the future.
Keep swinging!
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@@thebasketplace3798 Alright, cool. You do you man
Everyone's a critic 😆
@@simonehaynes1217 but he's not wrong.
Constructive criticism is always valuable.
Great message, a lot of heart. Proud of you all, congrats.
Thanks so much! We missed you on this one!
Yo you got the PS5 costume miles that cool
Thank you 🙏
This is soooo good
Thank you!! we hope you share it around!
GREAT WORK GUYS! Loved all the Nerdvana Easter eggs in this!
Ok Ralphyy
This is now in my Top 10 favorite Spider-man Fan-Films now
Thanks so much! that really means a lot. Would appreciate a share!
Hey I found this at fanexpo today and scanned it I’ll watch it Tommorow but it look really good with the poster u should sell it
Great job Ralph keep up the great work. I can’t wait to see part 2. I loved it, keep up the great work.
this is really good writting man.
Thanks so much. Would appreciate a share on socials!
This is some amazing and has such a strong message I love this
Thanks so much! please share around
This was an awesome fan film great work guys!!!
Thanks so much. Sharing it around really helps us out!
Esta chingon el fan film
Gracias, por favor comparte!
@@mguphynn ya lo hice Bro
@@Superior-Spider 🙏
Awesome work on this y’all! The way you mixed political commentary in with Miles was well done and very relevant! Thanks for sharing this!
Really appreciate it! Looking forward to Miles 2!!
Great work guys! I loved it. Great video editing and story telling on a relevant issue
Thanks for all your work on this!
Awesome work on this! Very cool
Thanks so much. Appreciate it being shared around!
You should have a million of subscribers, i just saw your master piece, hope that Disney & Sony Pictures take a look at this
Thank you SO MUCH! That means the world. Please share around. We appreciate the support!
Awesome work guys ... the story is really relatable... loved it! There is a spider man in every one of us!
Thank you!! Really happy you enjoyed! Please share around.
Excellent just edit the 403 garbage bin when Charlie’s Payne and spider man are taking to the two in the back lane.
Great job, I loved the short and approach to racial guidelines with Miles will always be necessary
Excellent job to everyone involved!
Looking forward to see your newest project!
Thanks Eric! 11am tomorrow!
Loved it.
Thank you so much! Please share around
Really good man loved it. I liked how it paid homage to Peter but also made miles his own hero and how him showing his face to the man showing he was black was the moment Miles became his own hero and himself instead of Peters shadow
Thank you so very much. Would appreciate a share!
@@mguphynn yeah ofc man anytime!
@@mguphynn I actually did have one question, what camera did you use to film this? It looks pretty high quality
@@smokythedogtn1508 We shot on the Black Magic Pocket Cinema 6K
@@mguphynn awesome thanks man
That TASM 2 ringtone! 😚🤌
Great catch! Would love a share!
Amazing!!
Really looking forward to this huge Event.
Excelente trabajo chicos,. Soy mexicano y es genial que su cortometraje haya llegado,. Ojala hagan otra parte
Gracias! agradecemos su apoyo. Por favor comparte el video!
@@mguphynn ala madre,. No pense que me respondieran,. Y menos en mi idioma xD,
Y si,. No se preocupen,. Lo compartiré ojala en el futuro crezcan mas y puedan mejorar,. Suerte
Incredible 🤟🏾🤟🏾
Thank you! please share around!
Let's do this!
Yo this is so freaking good 🤟🏿
Thanks so much!! Please share around. It would be appreciated!
👨🕷🤟🤟🤟🤟🕷🕸
Miracle on da beat 🔥🔥
Totally! Please share around!
whats that song at tje end tho
“Cocky” by Miracle. You can find it on imusic and Spotify. He also plays Peter 😁
GREAT JOB CHARLES PAYNE!
PART 2!?!!? I LOVED IT OMGG
So creative; well done!
Thank you! please share
Dude, this movie was totally awesome! I could find kinda real feelings on the scenes... This should be canon
Thanks so much! Means the world. Would appreciate it being shared!
@@mguphynn Count on it friend!
Loved this!!!
Thanks! Would appreciate a share!
zzz
post malone aint in it. Disliked.
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