Birth By Sleep - Writing A RE:MAKE (Part 3)

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  • Опубликовано: 28 авг 2024
  • In this video I cover the events of my alternate Kingdom Hearts timeline through part one of Birth By Sleep. It's Terra's time to shine! :D
    ©Square Enix ©Disney

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  • @cryptonix02
    @cryptonix02 3 года назад +58

    Eli: "Birth by Sleep now takes place 100 years in the past."
    Me: 👁️👄👁️

  • @lightyearpig12
    @lightyearpig12 3 года назад +28

    The way you described how Keyblades choose their wielders and bring them to the Land of Departure kind of reminds me of the Lantern Corps from DC.

  • @josephjarosch8739
    @josephjarosch8739 3 года назад +34

    "I have big plans for Kairi down the line"
    DDD will be swaping between Sora and Kairi instead of RIku, Or maybe it will be a three-way rotation.

  • @jacobthompson4444
    @jacobthompson4444 3 года назад +34

    I love this! One of my biggest issues with original BBS was that Terra supposedly learns all of these lessons from the disney worlds, but then demonstrates no character growth at all. I love every single change you made to Terra's character arc, especially his reconciliation on Destiny Islands, and I love this version of him infinitely more than the original. Well done!

  • @GreenRequiem
    @GreenRequiem 3 года назад +20

    the way i got emotional at 25:45 with the description of Ends of the Earth becoming terra's lingering will

  • @KingdomHearts1678
    @KingdomHearts1678 2 года назад +8

    I think the characters put in charge of the mini games actually make sense, Donald for Ice Cream beat because it’s his nephews, Goofy for fruit ball because hitting giant fruit around is well goofy!

  • @MsKariYagami
    @MsKariYagami 2 года назад +6

    Sentient Keyblades?! Whoooo! Boy am I glad that i am not the only one that thinks like that.

  • @CheckeredX30
    @CheckeredX30 3 года назад +25

    I am so glad you touched the way that keyblades work! they talked briefly about this in KH1 then left us hanging. I love the fact that you wrote out everyone being super naïve to Xehanort's evil mind. Terra being obviously manipulated seemed better than him seeming to be dumb and believe that Xehanort was good. Can't wait to see all three stories come together! Also excited to see how the overall timeline works out for your AU. Great work as always!!

  • @ziongamer6905
    @ziongamer6905 3 года назад +12

    WOW
    So first things first, I love how you changed Terra from being the idiot he seemed to be in the canon. I love the guy but when an OBVIOUSLY evil old man shows up and encourages you to give in to the dangerous power your master advises you to avoid, it’s just painful to watch. Here he’s just a really big hearted guy and yes he’s gullible but it feels far more plausible with this set up.
    I REALLY love how you explain the key blades and how they work because it ties into the lore very well. I can’t tell you just how hyped I felt hearing you describe how exactly the lingering will came to be!!!
    And finally I appreciate the work you put into explaining why the Disney characters don’t age, this could be easily ignored but you working on it is just icing on the cake!

  • @JP-1990
    @JP-1990 3 года назад +11

    I had to mute my television whenever I was in Disney Town.
    I can't imagine being stuck in a time loop there.

  • @chrisfromcali6376
    @chrisfromcali6376 3 года назад +14

    Oh man excellent character work/development here!! Seriously hyped for the next 2 entries.

  • @joel1245
    @joel1245 Год назад +3

    The Ends of Earth as the Lingering Will. Such a loyal companion.

  • @BigBossMan538
    @BigBossMan538 3 года назад +11

    I wish that more side Disney characters were in Disney Town. Like, it'd make sense for Mr Toad to be in charge of Rumble Racing. In my ideal world, Roger Rabbit would be there, too.

  • @dekuisagreatmaincharacter
    @dekuisagreatmaincharacter 3 года назад +11

    "I have big plans for Kairi down the line"
    DO IT!!

  • @umbreonmaster8921
    @umbreonmaster8921 2 года назад +2

    When he talked about how a keyblade wielder needs to build a relationship with their keyblade, I immediately thought of the Zanpakuto from Bleach, with their Shikai and Bankai.

  • @Fluhhber
    @Fluhhber 2 года назад +2

    Xehanort and eraquas really do be the grindledore of KH

  • @burningeagle1298
    @burningeagle1298 2 года назад +4

    3:30 I mean he’s the richest duck alive I won’t have pass that he funded a way to become immortal

  • @TheJateke
    @TheJateke 3 года назад +9

    Another winner! I loved the nuances in this one. At least for Terra so far, he feels like he's more than a gullible meat head. Though I wish it was possible for Terra to still be the one to strike down Eraqus, let the fear that Xehanort was trying to plan shine through. The added lore for the keyblades was super interesting too. Very reminiscent of bleach. Keep up the great work, friend!

  • @eggsbenedickhead
    @eggsbenedickhead 3 года назад +6

    I got the notification at like midnight UK time. I had to get up and watch there and then!
    Keyblades being sentient was a brilliant addition and absolutely loved the ending with terras keyblade.
    Fantastic job as always!

  • @vkstudios9449
    @vkstudios9449 3 года назад +9

    I’m interested to see your changes considering how you changed Ansem’s story. I’m assuming it’s gonna have a big impact on Terra.

  • @thecoffeercornerwastaken
    @thecoffeercornerwastaken 3 года назад +6

    Eli, still confusing as KHBBS but you nailed it. I love how you manage to build your own universe with the pieces the game gave you, can't wait to see Aqua's and Ven's sides

  • @EmperorCorvinus
    @EmperorCorvinus 3 года назад +5

    This thing is like crack, I need more!!! I desire MORE!!!

  • @amaanmanzar1061
    @amaanmanzar1061 3 года назад +4

    i havent watched it yet but im exited

  • @carlosavila4291
    @carlosavila4291 3 года назад +5

    All the lore is excellent but I would love to see your ideas for game play/mechanics. Kinda like the small part of the first KH video

  • @DyxoXinoro
    @DyxoXinoro 3 года назад +11

    Out of curiosity, is there some Bleach influence going on with that Keyblade rework? Cause you described a system very similar to how Zanpakuto work in that series, but with an added forging process. And if a Keyblade is bonded to it's user and grows with them, how does that effect keychains? Would Sora just be special because he has access to those while other users would not, or would they simply exist as a game play mechanic independent of lore?
    Also I'm 100% stealing that interpretation of how keyblades function for a KH inspired D&D Campaign I'm running with my local group in the neat future.

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +8

      There’s definitely some Bleach inspiration! :D
      Although I didn’t want Keyblades in this story to be quite as expressive as Zanpakuto.
      Also keychains are more like equipment slots for Keyblades. They can change their appearance and stats, but they’re mostly cosmetic and don’t effect the personality of the specific Keyblade. The only exception is evolutions like Earthshaker to Ends of Earth. (That’d be like the equivalent of a Bankai in Bleach) 👍

    • @DyxoXinoro
      @DyxoXinoro 3 года назад +2

      @@KHREMAKE I am definitely curious how that'll tie into Vanitas's keyblade swarm. I understand if you can't talk about it because spoilers, but I'm curious if that'll be more like Muramasa's ability to influence/corrupt other Zanpakuto (what timing that I just finished that filler arc), or if it'll be more akin to keyblade necromancy.

  • @jangospencer3906
    @jangospencer3906 2 года назад +1

    I find the story taking place 100 years ago insane, but I respect your creativity. 😌

  • @jditty1604
    @jditty1604 3 года назад +1

    What you did to explain the origins of how keyblades work is phenomenal!! Fantastic Job!!!

  • @SuperAsianGeek
    @SuperAsianGeek 3 года назад +5

    Wait.. if Terra, Aqua, and Ven depart at the same time, isn’t it weird that in the first world Aqua visits she meets Terra who just completed an entire world as well as the Castle of Dreams?

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +6

      Kind of, in the original game they all left maybe a minute apart at max and Aqua still was a full two worlds behind Terra.
      In my story, I imagined that it takes Aqua a significant amount of time to clear the forest and make it to the castle. They also crash landed, so maybe Aqua takes a good while longer to regain consciousness than Terra. So that by the time she wakes up Terra has already finished two worlds.

  • @RadinV1
    @RadinV1 Год назад +1

    Was waiting to say that 10:45 hits VERY differently now....

  • @aliciaparker9142
    @aliciaparker9142 4 месяца назад

    I love terra through the only issue I had with him over him keep trusting shady people after being trick once or twice but you made his story more interesting plus love that you made their master rightfully resent xehnaort over his actions like I hated in og he just forgive him despite being the reason he got scar over his face over during their disagreement and allow him attend to cermneory like he did nothing wrong

  • @laststrike4411
    @laststrike4411 3 года назад +3

    I've got nothing. Nothing in the *bad* sense, I mean. This was fucking awesome! I've got to say again that I'm REALLY enjoying this refinement of the keyblade lore and magic system! And since Keyblade digivolution is now a thing, what's gonna happen to Sora's keyblade? Will he just find some strange freestyle rendition of that and gain drive forms that way?
    Will it become the Oathkeeper (It WOULD be the most thematically appropriate)? The decisions for the rest (bearing our latest additions to the keyblade crew) seem rather obvious so I guess there's no point wondering there...except for Riku, who could potentially gain Terra's keyblade depending on what you choose to do.
    Also, if the Lingering Will fight still exists, what would you think about it becoming some sort of silent mentor to Sora or perhaps a potential summon? If you read the manga for Fullmetal Alchemist, something similar happens for Ed and Al with that "Savage" around to push them physically and mentally while also making sure that they don't die. The latter thing is just me being crazy (if I had my way, Monstro would be a summon; I like to think an amped-up version of the big whale would be an interesting/comical counter to Sephiroth's supernova attack). It *would* be an interesting story development though, since Sora is the only character that explicitly has summoning spells (as far as I know, anyway) and giving that ability some sort of payoff would be nice.
    Lastly, if you're still considering having Ansem leave something behind, would it be information on these further secrets for the Keyblade?

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +2

      Normally I would answer your questions, but many of them are eerily close to spoiler territory. So... I guess you’ll have to just wait and see? I appreciate the feedback though! :D

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад +1

      @@KHREMAKE Ah, gotcha. Oh well. A month or so of wait's nothing compared to what we'll likely be waiting for the continuation of things in the franchise proper, so I'm more than willing to wait. Keep up the good work.

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад

      @@KHREMAKE I've been meaning to ask for a while now but kept forgetting. Do you think Roxas's status as a replica going to affect Riku's interactions with him at all?
      Also, it's kind of a shame Roxas and Ansem won't ever meet in this universe. I think they'd make an interesting pair of unlikely friends.

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад

      @@laststrike4411 I think you’ll enjoy the story of 358/2 Days and KH2 as it address the replicas and how the interact with others. I’ve just been sick the past few weeks so it’s taken me longer to get done than I had originally planned. 😅

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад

      @@KHREMAKE Oh, I see! Hope it was nothing too serious. Good to hear back from you.
      And as eager as I am for 358/2 and beyond, try not to push yourself too hard. The work isn't more important than your health. I think everyone will understand.

  • @Mcnerd213
    @Mcnerd213 3 года назад +2

    Your voice is so calming.

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +1

      Thank you! 😊

  • @motherfuckingenterprises7436
    @motherfuckingenterprises7436 3 года назад +4

    Question : How does the 100 years time-skip works? After a year in the Realm of Darkness you instantly jump to a hundred years in the Realm of Light? Or is it slow and progressive?

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +4

      I guess somewhat progressive. Pretty much it’s exactly like the hyperbolic time chamber in Dbz or the digital world in Digimon! 😄 That’s why most characters like Riku and Mickey never send more than a few hours there. As they can quickly lose weeks in the realm of light if not careful.

    • @motherfuckingenterprises7436
      @motherfuckingenterprises7436 3 года назад +1

      @@KHREMAKE Thanks. Btw: BY MY POWER! UUOHHHH! WUOOOOH! IT'S CLEAR TO ME!

  • @Totallynotsane
    @Totallynotsane 13 дней назад

    So I actually have an Idea for the personality of some of the mirage arena/supeboss keyblades.
    Void gear LR version: While still maintaining its sassiness it has developed a sort of overprotectiveness over their weilder due to a promise made with Vanitas' Lingering Remnant.
    Ultima Weapon: All Ultimas have different personalities with kh1s ultima being the most similar to kh1 Sora, this one consistently calls Terra out for his reckless fighting style saying "Would it hurt you to use that Renewal Guard Technique I taught you!" It means good though and is concerned about Ventus taking the MOM exam at 16.
    No Name: Incredibly wise it uses it's eye to alert it's weilder to attacks that would be fatal if not avoided or stopped, think like visions in Xenoblade chronicles IFYKYK.
    Royal Radiance: Very boisterous it commends the wayfinder trio for using their heads and rewards them for fighting how they want with a strength boost to their command styles. Instead of being a keychain when not in use it becomes a Golden Crown upon its weilders head. Its explanation is that it's initial forger came from a world where the best of the best wore crowns. He and his friends also apparently loved mushrooms. (Yes I have made the creator of RR and his 12 closest friends mushroom 13.)
    Darknaw: This one just wants to convince Terra to use his darkness more and even gives him advice on how to better control it.
    Edit since I have watched more: Specific keyblades have that much sentience they are either incredibly strong or were specifically made with that much sentience: Darknaw to help guide dark weilders to not succumbing, No Name and Gazing Eye because of the will of their creator, and Royal Radiance because of it's creators dreams. Ultima's are intelligent because of the materials that are used. But that's my headcanon.

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  13 дней назад +1

      @@Totallynotsane This is great! 😄

  • @rootedcorgi7742
    @rootedcorgi7742 3 года назад +3

    Oh no Kairi is turning into Haru in persona 5

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +2

      I feel like that’d be the opposite of big plans XD

    • @rootedcorgi7742
      @rootedcorgi7742 3 года назад +2

      @@KHREMAKE I thought of that right before you said it that's why I still put the comment

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад +1

      @@rootedcorgi7742 What does that mean (never played P5).

    • @rootedcorgi7742
      @rootedcorgi7742 3 года назад +1

      @@laststrike4411 Haru is a character in original P5 gets hardly any screentime

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад +1

      @@rootedcorgi7742 Ah. So business as usual?

  • @vkstudios9449
    @vkstudios9449 3 года назад +4

    I’m not sure if this will be covered in the future videos, but will Terranort still be Ansem or are they now two different entities entirely?

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +1

      Two different entities! :D

    • @vkstudios9449
      @vkstudios9449 3 года назад

      @@KHREMAKE probably for the better 😅

  • @motherfuckingenterprises7436
    @motherfuckingenterprises7436 3 года назад +4

    I love this version, but I also love the version of Cryptonix! Which one to choose?
    Maybe you two can interjoin your own changes to make a new version of Kingdom Hearts.

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад

      Please no.

    • @motherfuckingenterprises7436
      @motherfuckingenterprises7436 3 года назад

      @@laststrike4411 Why?

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад

      @@motherfuckingenterprises7436 His means of balancing light and darkness left something to be desired. Also, his Chain of Memories sucked.
      Besides that, they don't really seem like they'd mesh well.

    • @motherfuckingenterprises7436
      @motherfuckingenterprises7436 3 года назад

      @@laststrike4411 I respect your opinion, but please give a more elaborate argument about it.

    • @laststrike4411
      @laststrike4411 3 года назад +1

      @@motherfuckingenterprises7436 ...But it's not an argument? It's my two cents on the matter.

  • @isaiahrivers7117
    @isaiahrivers7117 3 месяца назад

    I wonder what Eraqus and Xehanort's relations with their keyblades are since the keyblades are sentient in this

  • @jedyoung767
    @jedyoung767 Год назад +1

    So, if Ends of the Earth is stuck in the Graveyard, does that mean that Terra is technically dead?

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  Год назад +1

      In a physical sense yes. He’s essentially a ghost living in someone else’s body. Xemnas is such a deviation from Terra’s original form it’s a new person.

    • @jedyoung767
      @jedyoung767 Год назад

      @@KHREMAKE So, does that mean he’ll never regain his body?

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  Год назад +1

      @@jedyoung767 guess you’ll have to wait and see 😄

  • @FormalGibble
    @FormalGibble 3 года назад +1

    Thank God ice cream beat is still here! I was going to have to dislike and unsubscribe if you removed it. All joking aside I always wondered if the three of them being apart all the time was because of psp limitations. Like you only get party members in big open areas a specific times, as if the psp can't render them all so write it so that their always apart. I really wish they would have been together so I could actually get some interactions with them.

  • @amaanmanzar1061
    @amaanmanzar1061 3 года назад +2

    U didnt mention stich how would that work because he is a summon in kh2 and even appears in some cutscenes. So how would that work?

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  3 года назад +2

      Good call! While never directly stated in his original series Stitch also shows no sign of aging. Likely due to his experimental origin.

  • @KaiboStudios
    @KaiboStudios 2 года назад

    Wait so if wait 1 year in the realm of darkness is 100 years in the realm of light, what's a day equal to?

    • @RadinV1
      @RadinV1 Год назад +1

      Ok so if 365 days in ROD are 36500 days in ROL, then it means each day in the realm of darkness is roughly 100 days or about 3 months 🙂

  • @Billyblue98
    @Billyblue98 2 года назад

    I mean to say this back when I first saw the video, but it appears I may not have watched the whole way through
    But making the time gap between Birth By Sleep and KH1 so long just makes you have to fix more than if you did basically anything but change the time gap. And I doubt it really adds. . . anything.

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  2 года назад

      In the original KH1 everyone treats the Keyblade like this super important weapon of legend despite multiple people running around with one only a decade ago. By increasing the time gap it makes one popping up an actual big deal! 👍

    • @Billyblue98
      @Billyblue98 2 года назад

      Giving Keyblades sentience, was very cool, however

    • @Billyblue98
      @Billyblue98 2 года назад

      20:05
      Yeah this is a little convoluted and unnecessary.

    • @KHREMAKE
      @KHREMAKE  2 года назад +1

      @@Billyblue98 is it anymore convoluted than Xehanort’s time travel, sleeping keyholes, the power of waking, or Roxas looking like Ven? I think it’s quite in-line with the KH universe.
      You could just remove the Disney Town characters all together, but that seems like more of cop out. The challenge and fun comes from trying to make the original pieces fit in new and interesting ways. It doesn’t always resonate with everyone, but that’s to be expected. 😅

    • @Billyblue98
      @Billyblue98 2 года назад

      ​@@KHREMAKE
      Well this is also time travel, and Xehanort's particular motivations and actions taken during time travel I'd honestly rather completely change altogether.
      The sleeping keyholes aren't too egregious at all, really
      The Power of Waking on the other hand you kinda have a point about, at least given how it's treated in KH3 (Was it ever mentioned before-hand? I don't think it actually was)
      As for Roxas looking like Ventus, the more I look into this the less it really matters. Roxas looks enough like Sora, is noted to just use an edited version of Sora's KH2 model, and Aqua remarks that Sora is "the spitting image of Ven", so the fact Roxas looks like Ventus kinda doesn't really do anything. What's more interesting, however, is Vanitas (in canon, I kinda forgot what you did with him here but I was gonna rewatch), because one can make the argument that Roxas's hair being blonde could have been a natural process (which I hear does happen, though in reverse), but Vanitas having black hair is just completely out of the blue. (His eyes too but that has an easy explanation. He's, like Xigbar, "already half Xehanort")