that was confusing, overacted, awkwardly cut and out of rythm and unimmersive Keep making short films and watch more films and learn from both the good and the bad ones.. i do not intend to talk down to you, good luck pal.. the only good thing i can say for sure is that I can tell you have the guts to do this, and thats the key to good film making.. Though i thought this one was quite poor in the technical aspect, i do not doubt that if you are willing to learn.. you'll make something great in the future you may not agree with me now, but i hope you get the right takeaways from my comment. Good luck
@MightyEFX Yeah dude I agree with everything you said. This was just a school group project for an elective class that I felt like sharing, we only filmed footage 2 nights so I was mostly working with what I had for editing. I'm definitely planning on making some other short films later on for fun so I'll definitely take your criticism into consideration.
Inspiring stuff, makes me want to create my own short films
"it's RICHARD." 😂
Good short film man
this is deep story writing
Sick
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that was confusing, overacted, awkwardly cut and out of rythm and unimmersive
Keep making short films and watch more films and learn from both the good and the bad ones.. i do not intend to talk down to you, good luck pal.. the only good thing i can say for sure is that I can tell you have the guts to do this, and thats the key to good film making..
Though i thought this one was quite poor in the technical aspect, i do not doubt that if you are willing to learn.. you'll make something great in the future
you may not agree with me now, but i hope you get the right takeaways from my comment. Good luck
@MightyEFX Yeah dude I agree with everything you said. This was just a school group project for an elective class that I felt like sharing, we only filmed footage 2 nights so I was mostly working with what I had for editing. I'm definitely planning on making some other short films later on for fun so I'll definitely take your criticism into consideration.
Do you live in Highlands Ranch? That king soopers looks familiar