They really have to proof read because 1 second their in space in the next second they're outside in the battle, then they're on the ship again. It's like they blended 3 stories together in random bullsh*t. THUMBS DOWN !!!
How many flahships ate there, and how did the traitor escape. The story had a bad ending. The Alliance was never put on blast with all of earth. Not satisfactory make a better ending or is there a part 2.
They really have to proof read because 1 second their in space in the next second they're outside in the battle, then they're on the ship again. It's like they blended 3 stories together in random bullsh*t. THUMBS DOWN !!!
Chloe, the reeking perfume named after the perverted actress from Smallville.
Tostitos, I would like to get to the good stuff but your ad is in the way.
Poor enunciation.
E V A+ Extra Vehicular Activity Suit. Not Eve.
Um...when did Mercer change genders?
Um...when did Hale swap genders?
and as with all of this persons stories, the storytelling at the end is disjointed at best.
How many flahships ate there, and how did the traitor escape. The story had a bad ending. The Alliance was never put on blast with all of earth. Not satisfactory make a better ending or is there a part 2.
This one's really bad