"I Explored An Abandoned Mine And Found Something Terrifying" | Creepypasta | Scary Story
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- Опубликовано: 19 сен 2024
- You won't believe what I found...
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“Sliver mine…too bad they weren’t mining glod….then maybe they could’ve afforded an education “……omg why did I laugh so hard at that🤣
lol I liked that line too hah
Lol, glad you liked it
@@topmindofr3ddit378 Awesome story, truly unsettling. You have potentially a great movie deal on your hands. I would definitely head to the movies to check it out. All the very best with it. Thanks for the slivers and moments of pure glod! Cheers. Lee.
@@leekendall7155 Haha, I don't don't know about movie deal, I'd be happy just being published in a horror anthology. Thanks for encouraging words!
@@topmindofr3ddit378 Yeah you did a great job writing this. Out of curiosity, were you inspired by the film The Descent?
O.M.G! I absolutely loved it when the creature repeated “Jim Jim Jim is that you? “ Perfect voice for it. 👍🏽😀
That actually kinda scared me a little. Almost too realistic 😅
Yeah, it's really difficult to "get under my skin," but THAT definitely did! 😁😆
It’s rare that the main characters death is actually revealed in these stories!! This was a dark one for sure!!
That's because it's a creepypasta. Not a /r/nosleep story. A kind of reformed version of creepypasta. CreepyPastas can be terrifying but at the same time... That fear can be rationalized away as fake because of the story telling. Especially if the story is told from the first person perspective and the main character dies. It would be impossible to get a story from someone who died. The NoSleep subreddit has a specific rule (2) about the stories posted there.
2. Stories must be plausible.
This means that the narrator must be physically and mentally capable of posting and that the events of the story cannot be proven to be false on a large scale. Stories posted in 2nd person or third person omniscient must have a clearly stated believable reason for being written as such.
So due to the nature of the realistic story telling, most horror narrators on RUclips pull from NoSleep. Because the best way to scare an audience is to give them something that could possibly be real. That's why a majority of their stories told are told by people that survive their encounter
Since what happened to Jim is never clear and the main character describes himself being dragged back into the Sliver Mine… this story is open for a second part to clarify how the story got out.
Spoilers!
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It’s called: waiting to read the comments until AFTER you listen.
Especially when they are the ones telling you it.
Hey everyone thanks for listening and I hope you enjoy this one! 👻
Just started it and I'm sure I'll love it! So glad you posted today, this wretched day will at least end on a positive note.
Thanks Babe! You always deliver❤
@@kittymama6317 I hope you enjoy this one & have a better day tomorrow!
@@nancyM1313 Hey Nancy! This one's a good one
You bettet bet a million we do ! You know it hit when you PRAY for a fictional character....as an hardcore atheist.
Great narration. I can actually see this taking place. I’m not even halfway through yet.
“Jim,Jim is that you Jim?” My jaw literally dropped.
Thank you.
Beautiful comment..... hello faye how are you doing 👋👋👋👋👋
No invaders, no dragons, no trolls, no giants, no heights and now no underground caves has been added to my list of things that aren’t allowed in my life. I’m the biggest Barnaby’s fan to date and I’m an overall fan of your narration voice. So descriptive and full of emotion and character. Exactly what you need to convey any story especially horror. Antagonist or protagonist, creole walking dead and their zombie flunky you hit the mark each time. I’m an avid reader and I’ve never listened to anything or watched a movie that didn’t leave anything me needing to read the book for confirmation. You wrap it all up in a neat bow and you leave the listeners wanting more when you are doing a sequel. Great Job 💜👏🏾
thank you Queen!
What about adventure type board games? He has a video with those I believe too. Check it out.
Agreed!
Pssst: It's called "the LHH magic".
Unfortunately, consider yourself an addict now, BUT fortunately for you, to one of the healthiest substances out there ever !
The most severe side effects are spitting out your drink all over your screen,choking on your own spit in surprise and a severe craving for more. 🙃🖐
@@damonlee242 A whole lot of these....
Oh you mean my unnatural fear of underground spaces is justified? Oh thanks for that Stephen I feel much better knowing I was right to be terrified of being lost underground . Just needed a sliver induced nightmare sequence to ram it home. How super, nightmares for bedtime. Super well narrated man, the mine owners voice will likely stay with me for sometime. Cheers Stephen. Lee.
This was the most intense and horrifying story that I have ever heard. The narration was so on point. My heart was absolutely pumping incredibly hard.
Me too
what do you people actually when you say these things? like comeon..
@@user-oz5xb9ed3w I don’t even understand what you are trying say
In my opinion this is the best creepypasta channel out there. His vioce and narration are so captivating yet calm and relaxing, very nicely done. I am very surprised that he doesnt have millions of sucsribers.
Dayummm!!! 😮
When you said….”Jim Jim Jim is that you?!?” That would be the creepiest thing I ever heard you say. Spot on man you gave me the chills and I even stopped to look around! 🤦🏻♀️🤣🙏🏻❤️✌🏻
Oh my goodness.
yes ..... terrifying 😂😅 I loved it!
There's a lesson to be learned from this story: stay out of places like caves and abandoned mines. You'll live longer.
Yeah, and always tell someone where you're going :P
It's always fun tho. I've got a few abandoned Ore mines in the hills behind where I live. Me and a couple of buddies explore the abandoned tunnels and crevices. Deep within the mountains. I do carry a 9mm taurus pistol with me. I carry subsonic ammo for it. It's one of those better to need it and not have it. Than need it and not have it kinda deals. If you ever want to hang out and explore some tunnels. Just give me a shout.
@@TheStuart-of-Cosby ok, so long as you have your 9mm with you...and a spare mag of subsonic ammo and a strong flashlight 🔦 That said, might be fun then 😄
I’ve heard hundreds of scary stories on you tube, this has to be one of the best I’ve ever heard. The “scary” voice actually creeped me out 👍👍
I will be listening to this one again
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Lighthouse did a great job bringing it to life.
@@topmindofr3ddit378
Did you write this story?
His creature voices always get me.
Yeah… this one was above and beyond creepy! And thoughtful - not just a bunch of predictable gore; the developments were well-spaced and suspenseful, with just enough left unexplained. Like, what exactly happened to Jim - and who exactly is Sliver, especially to the landowner?
Sliver was just as much of a smart a$$ as the protagonists, sending down Jim’s backpack followed by the rope itself. Every moment of hope was cut off immediately until the very end. Well done. 🎉
God being trapped like that it's like one of my biggest fears being trapped underground under ice that's terrifying. ☠️💀
You should watch Buried then lmao
Mine too. Tiny spaces, underground AND being hunted ? Sounds like one of my 3 most likely nightmares which occur 3 times a week .... at least 😖
☠😈👾👻👽🦁🐅🐺.....
I highly recommend that you watch the Descent lol.
@@KB-bh9hp I did, but after watching the .....what was it called ....."blooper reel" or something like that and the "behind scenes".....
I can relate to that... since I'm scared of heights and confined spaces, I can freak myself out by occasionally watching the Actionadventuretwins or Amazing Pennnsylvania...goosebumps! 😅
I am so paranoid about being trapped 'underground' it's in my will to be Cremated not buried after I die.🦉
Yeah but, after you're dead you won't know so, no worries right 😉
I think that's something of a primal fear....darkness, lack of space, oxygen ....all things that trigger our instincts....
I guess most people dislike these situations to say it lightly.
I'd rather scream:
"aaaahhh nooooo !" 🙃
cremated just to be stuffed into a tiny urn with absolutely no breathing room... makes sense.
now you're in tiny pieces to be shoved into an even smaller container.
@@kaycecoplen4287 nope scattered in our garden
Me too but as an Occultist I'll have to be buried
I was a little sad by the outcome but knew it had to happen. Fabulous as always! Thank you!!
Your welcome,Hello dawn how are you doing
Thank you Lighthouse for another great narration! You have such a great style, the way you inflect your voice, that adds so much to every story you narrate. You're one of the best narrators on RUclips! Thank you!
thanks Will!
The different voices in this one were so creepy!!! Amazing job and what a scary story!
Why is his headlamp dying? He literally just started exploring. It should last for hours, and he should really have backup batteries on his person. And he should really have a weapon on him, like a hunting knife, a pistol, and tools, and climbing gear. You never know what kind of animals might be in an abandoned mineshaft, not to mention all the other hazards.
This could be titled "Final moments of an unprepared adventurer."
Edit: Ok, so they also started in the evening.
The music when he finds the bodies is the best.
yeah I like that one too!
I dunno how many times i kept telling him, "to shut up!" 1st calling Jim (after wanting to strangle Jim) and then the rope drops to his feet, 2nd wen he called out to Jim and Sliver answered him, "Jim is that you?", and finally wen that damn stranger asked him, "what are u doing on my property?" Or something to that effect...and still he wouldnt shut up! Like the wise narrarator said, "Curiosity, killed the cat!" Awesome story! 👌
What ? I have been blessed with a true crime Video AND A 35 minute LIGHTHOUSE HORROR VIDEO? No way. Have I already died and is there a form of heaven I never imagined? 😳
No way would I ever go into a abandoned mine. That's just looking for trouble. Thank you Lighthouse, I always love listening to you read.
Yep I hear ya hah I'd be afraid to go down there. Thanks for listening Manning!
I'm not even worried about evil creatures, cave ins and gas pockets are what I'm thinking about!
@@LighthouseHorror you're pretty good bro! Keep up the good work.
Oh my the pure hopelessness, that was scary. Thanks as always for your storytelling Stephen xxx
Was not expecting an ending like that. Wow that sucks. Great story, gave me the Willie's
I didn't like the ending, felt like the big reveal was "it wasn't actually a typo" which felt kinda lame meanwhile there's still a bunch of lose ends hanging around and a bunch of questions left in the air
@@jmbec62
Seriously. Who is the old guy, why does he tolerate/know man-eating troglodytes are living on his land, and why did he let one of them drag off a random stranger to his death in front of him? I can understand being annoyed with trespassers, _but not that pissed!_
@@Xbalanque84 Big monster doggo's hungry
What a story, and what an ending! Sheer horror! You're amazing! I'll definitely keep my lights on
tonight. Thanks for your great work! They ought to seal off these places so that no animals can
fall in...or anything else for that matter.
Part 346 of thanking the lighthouse horror for their constant uploads
Another one im early to, and another one just in time for bed
Dude my town has a bunch of caves and abandoned mineshafts and I swear on my life when I turned of my light in a collapsed mine that killed a bunch of people a ghostly miner stared into my soul. Turned the light on and he was gone. 200 miles of tunnels beneath my town
Gypsum mines under my town used for cold storage nowadays.
@@itsjustme7487 that's cool
Ok, this one gave me goose bumps!😎🍺 It was a shame that he came all the way out of the mine broken and bleeding only to be taken back into the mine to feed "Sliver."😨
Giving that vibe off like the movie “the descent”. Freaking scary 😎
Stephen, this story reminded me of another memory & what i found in a cave when i was a kid. I found a strange picture. Later I realized it was a dirty adult picture. One can find scary, strange stuff in a cave. Then i heard strange noises. I got the mess out of their.
My friend thank you for your marvelous videos & the incredible experience of each one. 🔥👊😎
Cute story
If you want spooky stuff in caves, I suggest researching ancient Mesoamerican cultures. They considered caves sacred, entrances to the underworld, and did all kinds of rituals inside them.
@@dylanmcwhirter9844 ✌️😄
@@Xbalanque84 I’ll look that up. Thank you for the recommendation! 😄👍
@@TENZEN._.
I highly recommend _In the Maw of the Earth Monster_ by Brady and Prufer (available on Amazon). You can also start by looking up lore related to Xibalba (Maya) or Mictlan (Aztec).
No no no. The scariest book I ever read was "Perelandra" by C.S. Lewis. This story is definitely a recreation of a scene in it. It terrified me. It's been over 20 years since I read that book but the noise behind him, it all came back. Thanks I think.
I'm looking forward to this one! Lighthouse horror on point as always. Thank you ❤
I'm happy you enjoyed the story.
@@topmindofr3ddit378 HERE YOU ARE ! Thank you for bringing lots of my worst fears to live, at least I don't have to experience them first hand. 😖
👌
This gives me close to the same level of unease I had when a friend of mine was facetiming me. She'd just parked her van to camp in the woods somewhere for the night. A few minutes into talking while she's taking a look around, we both (me through her camera) see there were lots animal bones on the ground. Like mounds of them. I was like, "You should probably get out of there." She of course agreed, quickly turned around and then kicked a pile of previously unseen beer cans. She sprinted to her van and got the hell out of there. Nothing happened/she didn't hear or see anything but still, really tense few minutes there. I was about that uneasy for the entire narration, fantastic work!
This terrifies me! You are an amazing narrator! Well done sir, well done
I got chills at the "Jim? Jim? Is that you Jim?" Not to mention the overall ending was very heartbreaking. My man endured so much only to die in such a way. Of course there's always some lunatic helping the monstrous entity smh.
Reminds me of the abandoned mineshafts and cabins in the woods where I lived in Montana. Spooky for sure. Thanks once again LH! 💚
This is one of the few stories where the protagonist does not survive, good one!
The characters of my stories are often killed or left in debilitating madness at the end. I feel that in this age of internet horror stories, there is a constant push to stick to nosleep or creepy pasta rules (i.e., the narrator can't die, and if he/she/they do, the story has to be told through a journal or something). The idea is that it enhances immersion and believability, which it does, but sometimes people just want a story that can do anything and go anywhere - nobody's safe.
It is a nice change because if the protagonist of every story survived then the sense of danger Will become nonexistent. Every protagonist surviving will become a cliché
@@shay4068 Problem is, how are they recollecting it?
Yep can't always be a happy ending that's Life
@@topmindofr3ddit378 true like an HBO show
Dude I love underground stories. I'm beyond stoked for this one, Lighthouse your freakin awesome. I just cannot get enough of your stories man! You spoil us!!
Underground stories are the best! Oh, urbex stories are the best too 😄
@@bassblaster162 I feel it, as far as fiction goes one of favorites is "Be Careful With Rural Exploration" it's so freakin creepy
@@Nyctonaut Hmm...don't think I've heard that one yet, I'll look it up, thanks!
@@bassblaster162 Kingspooks version was the best... but recently he deleted ALL his videos cuz "He doesn't like doing creepypastas anymore... "🤔
But Dr. Creepen has a good one.
I agree! Caving and exploration stories always have an extra level of fear for me! This one is awesome!
I’ve explored a lot of mines in the Mojave Desert. The detail about the mine in this story was so good it brought me back to those days. I love this story.
Listening to this story on earbuds at work in my office and usually never get freaked out, but this one's giving me shudders! Great job, Top Mind & Lighthouse! These are the stories I crave.
Yes! A great story to end the day! Thank you!
Omg yay!!! I caught this 7 mins after upload while searching you up to binge watch you again tonight haha
Yeah.....Thank you for shooting my anxiety through the roof and my deepest fears ,I guess.....But it's better than following my own demons that are waaaaaaaayyyy worse. So thank you.
omg, OMG ! It's 4 :18 am here but you took the time to answer? Thank you !
My fam JUST got back from Carlsbad caverns.....they loved it
I love Carlsbad! I've been 4 times and it's always a new experience.
Yay!!!😘😘😘😘 a new LHH! Perfect timing along with Godly talent!!! Love you my boy!!!
I love me some lighthouse horror stories
Who doesn't!? 🙃
Oh HEEELLLLL NO!
Ok....this one creeped me the F out!
Just in time for a drive
I didnt get trapped, but went into a tunnel that was only big enough to crouch through. It was pitch black and super cramped. Water flowed and i have this weird fear of seeing something farrr off in the tunnel just sprinting towards me. Literally crouch walked about 300 feet. My legs were dead after that
Why did you put yourself through that 😭😭
Stay out of my tunnel
@@djrydell i had to investigate a water leak. We speculated it had to be comming from under a storm drain culvert. So we wanted to double check before ripping up someones yard and doing it at the wrong spot. I ended up finding the leak 😅 my hands hurt like hell after
@@esprix4817 I'm glad you found it but oh my GOD the stress TT_TT
i did something like this while hiking with a scouts troop. it was fun
This is one of the best I’ve heard in a while!
Caves like that scares me to death, I would never go into something like that.
damn 5 minutes and this many comments lighthouse bro ur getting a bigger following.
"Jim is that you?" Yaknow what, I don't think that was Jim after all
This was a really good scary story - that even got me telling the characters what NOT to do & so forth!! 12/10😀
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😎✌️
Oh my god, bro. So far, I've loved every single one of your narrations and have come to the point where I just like your videos before they even start lmao ilysm
prediction: a pair of funny skeleton men with height a difference
lol I wish hah. Those two fellas were nice
What happend to jim tho? Was he captured by sliver??
Imma have nightmares of the voice saying Jim is that you.
So scary. Thanks for the latest story, Stephen.
Glad you enjoyed it Rosslinda!
Lighthouse has become my favorite go to horror narrator since dark somnium’s uploads became so infrequent. Thank you for all the hard work
In my opinion this is the best creepypasta channel out there. His vioce and narration are so captivating yet calm and relaxing, very nicely done. I am very surprised that he doesnt have millions of sucsribers.
Yes
Thank you Stephen...hope your throats feeling better.
Thanks for listening Walk & the kind words! 👊
Terrifying story. I have a fear of confined spaces and this one chilled me to the bone.
They need to turn that story into a movie. That was actually pretty creepy
I guess The Decent is relatively close, more the second movie. Had highly thought about it.
I need to go get myself an ear trumpet. I heard 'Mahogany Phlegm Campground'. Listen to Merzbow with headphones and that's what you get.
Out of however many months or years I've been listening to Lighthouse that was maybe the grimmest ending to a story I've heard yet. To say nothing of a very dark surprise. Great work like always !
I absolutely love your voice, let me tell you. You always add so much emotion, and really immerses me in the story. Thank you, man.
Yessssss!!!!
The moment the necklace was founds, FUCKIN LEAVE. Bring it into town, get ahold of local authorities, give them the necklace and the info. Then wash your hands of it. If she's down there, the authorities will find her. Touching the body will only destroy evidence.
But let's be real. This is not likely the work of a human, and the townsfolk already know. That's how these stories go 🤷♀️
Thank you!
Nail biting.. teeth clenched thru the whole damned story !! Wow! Love it!!
Nice comment hello Brenda how are you doing
I love realistic Creepypastas, they just add terror to realism, it's so amazing 🤩🤩🤩
Amazing job, my friend. Best narrator on RUclips. Appreciate your continued phenomenal work.
Almost 12 mins in & I’m on edge with anticipation!!
Omg how terrifying, great narration and story, thank you 🌹😊
Oh what a surprise ending. I can almost picture your stories being played out on a stage! It's been a long time since I've listened to one so good. I can see now I'm going to have to binge watch the rest of your work.
Wow, that one gave me serious goosebumps!
One of the most hopeless CPs I’ve ever heard. Brilliant Mr. LH.
U take me places that I've never been. 🔥
I wrote the story and I haven't even been to these places haha
It’s so rare I hear a story this engaging and intense, incredible job on the narration.
Your monster voice was so perfect! Good story and great narration!
How’s he telling the story ?
Was looking for this comment lol maybe its his ghost, or he wrote it all as he experienced it, or we are a figment of his imagination... Only aspect of the story I dislike is this hole.
I’m hoping there’s a part 2 that explains that...., like he gets away. Lol
I don't like following the r/nosleep or creepy pasta rules. Sometimes I just want a story that can go anywhere or do anything. A story where nobody is safe.
@@niki4013 with a broken arm, leg, and sliver has him? How?
Jim? Is that you Jim precious? Who else thought of Gollum? That ending was so gut wrenching. Great story
My biggest fear is heights my legs go weak and I’m useless after a certain point. My sons and husband talked me into climbing up a look out tower I forgot which one but it looks out over the tree tops idk how I got up as far as I did but the wind started to blow and the look out tower swayed and I’m was like nope I’m going back down and I turn around to go down my legs turned to jello! My husband and eldest son had to carry me down 😩😔🤷🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️🤣✌🏻
LOL. I can relate.
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great AUTHOR !
Thank you so much!
YES, more monster voices! Man, i know you have an amazing range
Wow wasn’t expecting that ending 🤦🏻♀️🤦🏻♀️
HUHHHHHHHHH! ?.... I KNOW THIS STORY FROM 3/4YRS AGO .....
CRAZYSTRANGE !
I wrote this story less than a year ago.
Good story crazy family
Hello 👋
I lived in tonopah, nv for a while and there was alot of abandoned mines in the area
My only problem with this story is that it's told from the first person.
I wrote it this way because I was planning on posting to r/Nosleep. About half way, I decided against it.
I JUST THINK OF (* song from france":- TRISOMIE 21- no search for us !)))*": ..also because your voices have something simmilair
I got to wonder :0 How did he write the story if the creature took him?
That's the thing about internet horror stories; they are expected to stick to r/nosleep or creepy pasta rules, but sometimes people just want a story that can go anywhere or do anything. A story where nobody is safe.
- The author
That’s what I was thinking, looking for this comment. Usually they record a video, write a letter or survive in order to tell the story but not this one. Kind off a unsatisfying ending for me.
That was a good one. I highly recommend watching some of the mine exploration videos on RUclips to see what some of the stuff like a manway and the left over artifacts look like.
Ohhhh that was a good one! If you're reading this before listening, you're gonna enjoy this one 😉
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Lighthouse did a wonderful job bringing the story to life.
Now I'm left wondering if his friend was attacked/killed, or if he was in on it lol. I was half expecting him to find pics of his friends body on the camera.
Great stuff
I love it when stories end like that
i love your videos! i really enjoy listening to them while going to take a nap after school. keep up the great work! :)