I'm sorry but I don't want to sound negative but in the middle of the story when they're talking about Is discovering a potential painkiller.It's suddenly jumped stumbling at camp.Talking about a mass discovery and how someone knew and then it made no sense
35:13 I'm sorry this is a good story up until they repeated an entire section almost exactly Word for Word. To me that's the sign of a weak writer who has little Conference in they ability. Also someone Who a Limited imagination and thus tries to get past the inability to think of something new to write By repeating what they've already written.
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I'm sorry but I don't want to sound negative but in the middle of the story when they're talking about Is discovering a potential painkiller.It's suddenly jumped stumbling at camp.Talking about a mass discovery and how someone knew and then it made no sense
Yes ur8. There sems to be missing a big part of the story. So it doesn't make sensen anymore.
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35:13 I'm sorry this is a good story up until they repeated an entire section almost exactly Word for Word. To me that's the sign of a weak writer who has little Conference in they ability. Also someone Who a Limited imagination and thus tries to get past the inability to think of something new to write By repeating what they've already written.
to many repeats !!
poorly made