Great work man! If I can offer some constructive feedback: Action scenes are a little slow; quicker cuts and just a tad bit of shakycam might help get the adrenaline flowing. Music usage could be improved; songs slipping in and out and being replaced by other songs quickly is somewhat distracting. That might just be me though. But your camera work is good, there were some impressive shots in this episode, and voice acting is fairly solid across the board! Can’t wait to see where this goes!
Chronicler177 Thank you for the criticism! I’ll definitely implement your ideas and suggestions for future episodes! The shaky cam effect might just be exactly what I need lol I honestly didn’t even think of that lol Thank you!
Lazy Bunch Just don’t go overboard! Too heavy shaky cam with the camera flying all over the place will disorient the audience! It’s all about striking a balance; subtlety is best. Took me a while to learn that one lol
Thank you so much!!! Hey better late than never lol And we’re still making more machinimas that take place in this universe, so these characters will be making more appearances in the future! We’re currently planning the final film in this Phase of machinimas!
Tf stop motion That is actually a really good question. To which I have no answer for lol I’d like to think that the suits have the capabilities to recycle certain nutrients, just like a Spartan’s suit can. If that answer isn’t good enough then well...as Maz Kanata said in The Force Awakens, “A good question for another time.” Lol
Noah Rylander It was a bit difficult to condense the beginning down to a reasonable length, you’re not the only one wanting more out of the beginning! Lol We actually brought it down to a 30 minute video at one point and realized that it took too much away from the main plot of the overall show
Cyril Smith VA Thank you! Yeah we’d love to have more people available for auditions! Unfortunately we don’t have any open spots now, but keep checking our Discord page to see if anything opens up! :)
I'm not going to lie my guy, this is actually an enjoyable Halo Machinima that I haven't seen like this for many years. Keep up the good work fam.
BADGER1997 Thank you so much! Appreciate the comment! 😁
Solid story so far, loving the characters and cant wait to see the rest!
Zrmbe Thank you!
Slid on over from Hobo's channel, looking good so far 👌🏼 Halo 4 Machinima is pretty rare, so I'm quite excited
What a great first episode! Bring on the rest of them 😁
Megaproductions302 Thank you!
Good work solid camera angles great narration good story I'm very impressed good work!!!
Kv_the_real Durr Thank you so much!
@@LazyBunch no prob man you guys are actually putting effort and time into your craft keep it up man!!
Woah! How did I not found this sooner?? This episode was incredible!
SoulWolfx Gaming lol Thank you!
Great work man! If I can offer some constructive feedback:
Action scenes are a little slow; quicker cuts and just a tad bit of shakycam might help get the adrenaline flowing.
Music usage could be improved; songs slipping in and out and being replaced by other songs quickly is somewhat distracting. That might just be me though.
But your camera work is good, there were some impressive shots in this episode, and voice acting is fairly solid across the board! Can’t wait to see where this goes!
Chronicler177 Thank you for the criticism! I’ll definitely implement your ideas and suggestions for future episodes! The shaky cam effect might just be exactly what I need lol I honestly didn’t even think of that lol Thank you!
Lazy Bunch Just don’t go overboard! Too heavy shaky cam with the camera flying all over the place will disorient the audience! It’s all about striking a balance; subtlety is best. Took me a while to learn that one lol
This is awesome I wish I found this when it first came out
Thank you so much!!! Hey better late than never lol And we’re still making more machinimas that take place in this universe, so these characters will be making more appearances in the future! We’re currently planning the final film in this Phase of machinimas!
Dude thank god more machinmas
This is awsome! Found yourself a subscriber!
Life of Chad Thank you!!
Hella awsome
so... this is how it began
Yessss! 😁
Nice job.
SmellyPolice // Speedie Productions Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed the first episode!
Lazy Bunch I’ll make sure to watch more!
Rip chronicler
Apocalypse One Haha
Great video
Thank you!
If you need any other actors hmu!! Im very impressed by this machinima so great job!
Tomiyoku Gaming Thank you so much! Join our Lazy Bunch Discord server and keep an eye out for any cast calls we may have! Thank you!
@@LazyBunch how would i go about joining?
Tomiyoku Gaming We should have a link to our server in the description above :)
I like it 🤯
Grim Reaper Thanks!
Noice 👌
I would like to know what they ate unless you use the in universe halo solution
Tf stop motion That is actually a really good question. To which I have no answer for lol I’d like to think that the suits have the capabilities to recycle certain nutrients, just like a Spartan’s suit can. If that answer isn’t good enough then well...as Maz Kanata said in The Force Awakens, “A good question for another time.” Lol
@@LazyBunch so basically like the cannon version in halo
Tf stop motion Sure, let’s go with the Halo canon! :)
Everything is great but I wish that the story wouldn't go so fast like the mutiny just 7 minutes in
Noah Rylander It was a bit difficult to condense the beginning down to a reasonable length, you’re not the only one wanting more out of the beginning! Lol We actually brought it down to a 30 minute video at one point and realized that it took too much away from the main plot of the overall show
You should check out halofollers movie version of lone wolves
I have! The Lost Wolves is real good! Unfortunately their story and our story don’t have any relation to each other lol 😁
How do I audition for these? Would love to be part of these
Cyril Smith VA Thank you! Yeah we’d love to have more people available for auditions! Unfortunately we don’t have any open spots now, but keep checking our Discord page to see if anything opens up! :)
First comment!!!!😎