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Light blue hair, black clothes, gold/yellow eyes, the weapon design same. That is my suggestion but i dont know much about character design but it is a suggestion

I just realized ive been forgetting to update days on my day couter (day 4 of asking...) si imma restart so day one of asking riifu to add me into the game

PALE PINK!! or Verdant Green my top 2 favorite hair colors XD

4:25 Dude looks like Levi from Fear and Hunger Termina

I think changing the characters hair into a nice Pastel pink like your avatars hair would suit her alot, not just in the sense of her hiding her true character, and the glowing purple in her eyes, but also in a sense that she's from a noble family that used to be merchants, I don't know, I just 5hink that would be cool!!

Nice video.

day 4 of asking riifu to add me to her game\

AHHH RIIFUSHIII UPLOADED ❤❤❤❤

Your drawing are so nice it inspired me to learn to draw

I would love to hear the ost after it’s made or during it’s makeing

SEVERE FUDDERY BELOW the ergonomics and recoil control of the rifle wouldnt be very optimal as the stock would be too skeleton to be able to pad the recoil well yet it cant be used as a thumbhole stock such as on L96, VSS, SVD and such. the "trigger guard" below the trigger would be suboptimal as it is too bulky for its own good. the handguard is fine except for it being quite short and only covering one half of the barrel as well as the fact that loading/unloading magazines would be hell since space between the magwell and handguard is real small. in conclusion, cool design, hellish to use in combat.

I vastly prefer red, but i dont think red streaks on green hair would be a good compromise. Green is too soft and mature for an immature war criminal.

I nearly forgot day 3 of asking riifu to add me into her game

DAMN RIIFU TWISTING BALLS

"I designed a war criminal" Me: *criminals

I like the singing

I love RUclipsrs documenting their fangames work that’s why I love Dani ( where ever he is 😢) And why do you look like Monica from ddlc ( maybe it’s the bow 😂😂😂)

I really like how you talk about your thoughts when designing the character and showing all of the concepts you did, the process of making these concepts seems really interesting!! I can't fathom how much work this takes, because they're so detailed

I can't wait to play this game♡ 🎮

I don't know how far the progress is on the game since the video is two month old, but as a firearm autist that stumbled on this video, it is my duty to throw some ideas around : Design: Your weapon design while very fantasy like looks nearly functional. I say nearly because the magazine is not in line with the action. Center it up with the ejection port and its bang on! I like that there's an angular roughness that is en-chased by those elegant curves in the design (and the plant on the front barrel band!). "Beautiful aggressiveness" is what comes to mind. It almost has a techno art deco quality to it, reminding me of the Techtronika SPT32 Grad from Cyberpunk 2077. The thing that makes it a fantasy design is the volume some of the accoutrements give to the longarm (I will tell why I didn't use the term "rifle" in the next part). Even very ornate, to the point of baroque, firearms in our reality very often lack volume. Most of the decoration comes from the use of noble and rare material or engraving ; or both in the case of techniques like gold damascene (just for the pictures here's an article about the process applied to firearms: www.americanrifleman.org/content/the-art-of-gold-damascening/). The reason is that adding decorative parts to a gun could make the piece unwieldy, fragile (those piece could break off under recoil) or straight up not work reliably. I have some reserve about that wire coming from the upper part of the semi-pistol grip of the stock to the back of the handguard because it would get damaged easily. Looks cool tho. The exception to the rule of volume is Schutzen (also written Schuetzen) target rifles which some of the elements of your design reminds me heavily of, especially the toe of the stock and the trigger guard. You should do a google search about those rifles if you want to modify the design (or just glaze at them, they are gorgeous). One thing I would add is bottom sling swivels for Natalija to attach a sling to her longarm. Slings are a mandatory item for military longarms, has they help you carry the gun over long periods of time and are still standard issue with every military rifles to this day in 99% of armies. They are also used by hunters and target shooters alike, because it can also be used to stabilize your weapon if you have no support. Slings can be finely decorated leather articles, and even some military style slings are pretty to look at (US 1907 shooting sling with brass buckles my beloved). The swivels can be very discrete and a mount soldered to the barrel, so placement is pretty much to the user's discretion. Function: I'll try to be more brief in this section, because firearm mechanisms and functions is a depthless topic: -A rifle can be called as such because of the elliptical grooves bored inside the barrel. Since her weapon is smoothbore, either rifle is a marketing term (she's a merchant afterall) used to describe the pattern of the weapon or it needs to be changed. I used longarm but other terms can be used. -Is the gun using regular ammunition or is she also using her wind magic to launch the projectile? If that's the case the casing of the cartridge is of no use and the magazine needs to be shortened. Air rifles were used in very small quantities by some militaries of the world at the of the 18th and the beginning of the 19th century. The most well known being the Girardoni Air Rifle used in the Lewis and Clark expedition ( www.rockislandauction.com/riac-blog/girardoni-air-rifle ; warfarehistorynetwork.com/article/lewis-and-clarks-girandoni-air-rifle/). If it is using regular ammunition, how does she get said ammo? Is she buying it? Reloading it (ie making it herself using components and tools)? Or does she have a supply generated by magic (pocket dimension stuff)? -Is the magazine detachable or fixed? If it is detachable, is it just for cleaning or does she have spares? if she has spares, how many and can she just discard them or does she have to keep them? How many rounds does the magazine holds? if it is fixed, or no spares, does she load the rounds individually or using a stripper clip? Here's all I could think off. Sorry for the info dump, couldn't help myself. Love the design of the character too and I prefer green like the council haha. Makes me think of forestry and freedom, which clashes harmoniously with the aggressive shape of her weapon ! Cheers!

7:45 i literally thought you should use violet evergarden as the inspiration, when u were talking about the clothes and the hairstyle as well, im happy you used her hairstyle!

W do you mean Noones gonna be sad if you dont upload, I am :sob:

day 2 of asking riifu to add me in her game

i can fix her fr

When i read “War criminal” my initial thought was a character with maybe some visible scars, dark personality traits. Though the colourful and cutsie vibe is so nice, i think it’d be nice to see her with at least something that would make the audience say “oh yea she is definitely a war criminal”

AWESOMeee

I like the green hair better. Seeing the process you went through is really interesting and you took feedback from Rita really well. Many hobby artists dont deal with harsher feedback very well, so I am impressed you two make it work.

is it ok to know the name of the game if it’s on mobile i might try to play it

I always liked the idea that magic flows through the blood vessels/nerves. So i thought it would be interesting if Sara had burn scars on her legs that trace her nerves/veins. Would also add to why she wears long skirts. Also based on Rita's description of Sara, she sounds like the type of person to not wait around to be helped. Maybe its the depression.

I asked about that thing in 10:13 and had no credit lmao

There are cheap wheelchairs, and the one you drew first was a hospital wheelchair (which is very suboptimal). I googled the cost and they’re 64 dollars, which the siblings probably should be able to save up for unless wheelchairs are unavailable in their region. And even then, they could just make a chair or modify a cart.

When you mentioned the gun being experimental in nature, my mind immediately went to something like the Mondragon rifle. Of course you've already designed her weapon, but given you have plans on them being modular, designing something that takes cues from it could be quite interesting. The Mondragon is a rifle that was designed by a general of the Mexican military in the late 19th century and is interesting because it's a "straight-pull", which means that unlike typical bolt-action rifles where you rotate the bolt when cycling, you simply pulled the bolt back. It was later also modified to become a self-feeding, therefore semi automatic rifle. I can see there being an upgrade to Natalija's weapon that improves some sort of speed-adjacent stat for her where she modifies her weapon to have a straight-pull bolt; and then perhaps even an upgrade to that which transforms it into an early semi-automatic rifle like the mondragon was. I personally find the Mondragon to be a really neat, under-known rifle so I figured I'd throw out the suggestion. Link to the Wikipedia article on the rifle: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mondrag%C3%B3n_rifle

Adorbial art and GUNS. this is a must where do i invest

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